***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 62

Originally posted by: rkchandni

<font size="6">Part 3</font>

<font size="6">Omg omg omg</font>

<font size="6">Bechari ladki</font>

<font size="6">Yar yeh sab kyun hota hai</font>

<font size="6">Is huda ki to use pata h ki us ladkus ladki k sath galat hua hai</font>

<font size="6">Use samajhne ki jagah use pagal keh raha h</font>

<font size="6">Actually galat nhi bahut galat hua h</font>

<font size="6">Drugs bhi</font>

<font size="6">Overall nice part but sad</font>

thanks chandni
yr galat toh ho he raha hhumari society me sab kuch bas wahi show kiya h

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Haan toh mai v dost wala hi Bol rahi
Mai ekdum straight hu
Samjhi
Hurrr
Waise update kaha h
Aaj Tuesday Ho gya madam

sorry yr i will update soon

Originally posted by: rkchandni

<font size="5">Part 5</font>

<font size="5">Awsm update yar</font>

<font size="5">Dhaashu tha</font>

<font size="5">Happy for Naina n Naveen</font>

<font size="5">Raj Naina ne ek dusre ki ankhon me dekha. Kuchh to h in dono k darmiyaan ek ajnabi ehsaas jo jald hi sach hoga</font>

<font size="5">Shalini Naveen k cute fight aur usme Raj abhi k comments too good</font>

<font size="5">I love trio of Raj Naveen n abhi</font>

<font size="5">Great work</font>

<font size="5">Chandni</font>

thanks chandni 😃

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Part 6

Great part yar awsmm

Naina ab theek ho rahi h sab achha ho raha h

M happy k Naina ab sab se baat kar rahi h

U know I always used to like the bond btw aalekh n Naina

Aur aaj b wo bond dikha

Too good

But ab Raj Naina k b ek aad scene dalo yr missing them

Chandni

thank u ji
wait wait RN sceen aane wala h

Originally posted by: rkchandni

I part 7

Kth wala rishi h kya

Wow Raj is always right

Naina kya bindas thi yr

Too good I can actually imagine what u wrote

Overall great dictation by Naina

Looking forward for more

thanks chandni ji 😃

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Part 8

Omg finally I read it full

Great yr u r doing well

Overall nice part

Naina ka past kafi cool tha to horrible b

Rishi kameena h

M.sure rishi k baap ne uski maut ka badla lene k liye Naina k sath bura kiya hoga

Cont soonnn yr can't wait to read further

Chandni

thank u ji 😳
yr aj ya kal tak update kar dugi

** Ek Ajnabi Rishta*****


Special warring plz koi padhne ke baad mjhe gali mat dena yr jo dil me aaya lekh diya nhi pata acha h ya bura par agar kisi ko pasad na aaye toh phele he sorry jah rahi hu m


Part 9


Room me pin drop silence tha sab shocked the naina ki baat sunn kar koi kuch nahi bol raha tha...




Pooja was the first one who recovered first...



Pooja : (shocked) tune mar diya usse...




Naina pooja ki baat sunn kar dar gayi ...pooja bhi wahi kah rahi thi usse jo sari duniya ne kaha tha ...naina ki aakho me aasu the ek dar tha shayad usse laga ki ab yaha bhi sab wahi kahe gay aur kare gay jo uske saath hota aaya hain ...ab yaha bhi sab usse muh mood le gay...


Naina : (sacred) maine nahi mara...

Naina umeed bhari nazro se Naveen ko dekh rahi thi ki woh kuch bolega ...par Naveen toh apne he soch me gumm tha...


Raj naina ko he dekh raha tha ...uski bhi aakhe num thi...
wo samjh raha tha ki shayad inhi sawalo se bachne ke liye naina apne ateet se bhag rahi thi ...


Raj : cadet ghai ...please kabhi toh bolne se phele soch liya kijeyi ...it was just an accident... Naina khud ko bacha rahi thi ..isse murder nahi self defence kahe gay...




Naveen coming out of this thought...



Naveen : (angrily) haa woh sirf ek accident he tha par agar aaj woh zinda hota toh main usse mar deta ...how dare he touch my sister...


Naveen itne gusse me tha ki usse aakhe lal hone lagi thi ...




Abhimanyu : par agar woh mar gaye the toh phir naina iss halat me kase pohchi...aur bhi kuch hua tha kya...



Naina Naveen ko gussa dekh kar soch me pad gayi kya sara sach sunn aur bardash kar payega woh ...



Naveen : (cupped her face) kya hua baccha



Naina : (with tears) aap ko abhi itna gussa aa raha hain bhai ...toh aage ka sach kya bardash kar paye gay aap ...kyuki jitna mujhe batane me taklif nahi hogi usse kahi jada apko sunne me hogi ...




Naveen yeh sunte he naina ko apni gale se laga leta hain...dono he jante the ki yeh dard bardash ke bahar hain...chahe woh naina ke liye ho yaa Naveen ke liye ...



Naveen :(controlling his emotions) cupped her face)) raj ne bilkul sach kaha hain...aaj apne andar ka sara dard nikal de baccha ...kal ke liye kuch na rahe kal koi aasu nahi koi gam nahi koi dard nahi ...bas ek nayi kal ki shuruat jisme khushiya hogi zindagi jene ki nayi umang hogi ...



Naina : (with sad smile) shayad aap sahi kah rahe hain...


Alekh : phir kya hua ...



Naina : main waha se bhag gayi...ghar gayi toh baba ne mere halat dekh kar sawal pe sawal karne lage ...unhe rishi aur mere bare me kuch nahi pata tha ...wo toh yahi sochte the ki main sirf apni padhai kar rahi hu...
(Taking a deep breath) maine baba ko darte hue sab bata diya ...baba mujh par gussa bhi hue aur mere liye dar bhi gaye kyuki jo hua wo koi choti baat nahi thi ...



Baba ne turant fasla kar liya ki hum abhi ke abhi wo shaher chod kar chale jaye gay ...taki main insab se bach saku...


Humne fata faat packing ki aur nikalne lage tabhi humare yaha police aayi aur mujhe rishi ke murder ke charges me arrest kar ke le gayi ...
Baba ne bohat koshish ki police walo ko samjhane ki par kisi ne humare ek nahi sunni wo sab mujhe le gaye ...

Jab main police station gayi toh waha rishi ke dost phele se he the ...aur unka bayan likha gaya tha ...unsabne uss accident ko murder ka naam diya ..yeh kaha ki maine rishi ko mara hain...


Baba bhi mere peche peche aaye the police station ...

Phir rishi ke dad aaye ...unke aakho me khoon sawar tha aasa lag raha tha ki woh mujhe abhi mar de gay...unke haath me gun thi...


Police wale unhe rok rahe the par wo toh jase mere jaan lene pe he utaru the ..main bohat dar gayi thi mujhe laga tha ki yeh din aaj mere zindagi ka aakhiri din hain...


Par baba mujhe ase kase marne dete ...wo rishi ke dad ke pairo me gair gaye ...unse mere jaan ki bhekh magne lage ...baba ne unhe sab btaya ki aakhir hua kya tha ...



Jise sab murder kah rahe the asal me woh ek accident tha jisme galti rishi aur uske dosto ki thi...

Kitni galat harkat karne ki koshiah ki thi un logo ne


Baba ki baatein sunn kar rishi ke dad ko apne bete ki galti ka ehsass hua ...
Unhone jab rishi ke dosto se sach pucha toh unlogo ne sab sach sach bata diya ki aakhir hua kya tha ...



Rishi ke dad ne sach jan kar woh murder case file band kara diya ...unhone usse murder nahi ek accident kaha aur unke baat maan kar police walo ne bhi case close kar diya ...
Main apne ghar wapas aa gayi thi ...par bohat dari hue thi ..jo kuch bhi hua usne mere andar bohat kuch tutsa diya tha ...mera self confident toh jase khatam he ho gaya tha ...
In sab baato ko ...10 din beet gaye the par maine uss hasde ke baad khud ko apne he ghar me kad kar liya tha ...mere andar se rishi ka dar ja he nahi raha tha ...aur kahi na kahi man khud ko uski maut ka zimmedar manti thi ...

Baba ne mere halat dekh kar wo shaher chodne ka asla kiya ...



Baba aur main ghar se jaa he rahe the ki tabhi achanak humare ghar ke samne bohat sare gadiya (car) aa kar ruki ...


Main aur baba dono he harain the ...itne sari gadiya apne ghar pe samne roke dekh kar ...



Phir unme se ek car me se rishi ke dad ...aur rishi ke sare dost bahar aaye ...


Main unhe dekh kar bohat jada dar gayi thi ki aakhir woh aaye kyu hain yaha ...rishi ke dosto ke chahre pe ek ajeeb se khushi thi mano woh mere har pe khush ho rahe ho ...




****Flashback****




R'dad : (to baba) kaha ja rahe hain aap log ...




Baba : (thoda ghabraye hue) jii woh hum log yeh shahre chod kar jaa rahe hain...jab se wo jadsa hua hain...mere bacchi bohat dar gayi hain ...



R'dad : main samajh sakta hu..par apko jana hain toh jaeyi par yeh (pointing toward naina) kahi nahi jayegi ...



R'dad ki baat sunn kar naina bohat ghabra gayi thi usne kas kar apne baba ka haath pakda tha ...




Baba : (ghabrate hue) kya matlab hain apka ...


Varun : (baba ko dhaka marte hue) budhe sunna nahi tumne ...yeh ladki yahi rahegi tujhe jana hain toh jaa ...



Naina : (angrily) varun yeh kya batamizi hain ...tum ase kase ...


Iske aage naina kuch bol pati usse phele he pankaj ne naina ko ek kas kar thapad mara ...
Naina zameen me giri ...naina ke hontho ke kono se khoon nikalne laga ...jab naina ke baba ne Naina ko samhalne ki koshish ki toh Rishi ke dad ke gundo ne unhe palad liya ...




R'dad : (naina ke pas ja kar kahte hain ) tune mera bete ko mara tha na ab dekh main tera kya haal karta hu...



Naina : (sacred) uncle baba ne btaya tha na woh sirf ek accident tha ...maine jnmuch kar kuch nahi kiya ...aur wase bhi galati rishi ki thi usne he mere saath batamizi karne ki koshish ki thi ...


R'dad : (mocking her) acha mere bete ki galti hain... Phele toh tum ladkiya ladko ko apne peche latu banati ho ...aur jab ladka kuch magta hain toh nakhre dekhati ho ...agar tumne mere bete ki baat maanli hoti aur uske saath soo gayi hoti toh na he rishi ko kuch asa karne ki jarurat padti aur na he uske jaan jati ...(back se uske baal pakad kar) tune mara hain mere bete ko ab uski maut ki kemat chuka ...


Naina dard me chila rahi thi ...



Baba : (struggling to free himself from gooms) aap yeh kya bakwas kar rahe hain ...mere beti koi khelona nahi hain jo jiska maan kare wase istamal karle ...aur apne he usse police station me choda tha yeh kah kar ki woh ek hadsa tha ...toh phir ab yeh kyu ...


R'dad : police station me maine asa isliye asa kaha tha kyuki main iss ladki ko khud saja dena chahta tha naki kanno ke hatho saza delana chahta tha ...


Manav : aap bilkul sahi kah rahe hain uncle ...iss ladki ko toh hum khud saza de gay aur asi saza de gay ki iski ruh kaap jaye ...isne rishi ko mara hain na hum iski zindagi maut se bhi batar bana de gay...



Varun : bilkul sahi kaha manav ne uncle aap kahe toh abhi iski izzat yahi utar du...jo kaam rishi band kamre me karna chahta tha ..woh kam main yaha sabke samne kar du taki yeh kisi ko muh dekhane ke layak na rahe ...




R'dad : Nahi iski izzat main khud utaruga ...mere bete ki khwaish thi na isse pana ab main uski wo khwaish puri karuga ...apne saath sula kar ...uske baad tumhe jo karna ho kar lena iske saath mujhe koi takleef nahi hain...



Varun manav pankaj teeno khush ho rahe the Rishi ke dad ki baat sunn kar...




Naina uske toh hosh he udd gaye...



Baba : (angrily) mere hote hue tum asa kuch nahi kar sakte ...mere beti ko haath bhi lagaya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...




R'dad : kyu kya kar lega tu ...marega marega mujhe aa mar...


Rishi ke dad ne apne gundo ko ishara kiya aur unhone naina ke baba ko chod diya ...jase he naina ke baba ne apne kadam aage badhaye ...wase he rishi ke dad ne apni gun bahar nikali aur unhe shoot kar diya...




Naina toh jase budh(statue) he ban gayi thi...uski aakho ke samne uske baba ko goli mar di unlogo ne...


Rishi ke dad ne ek ek kar ke gun ki sare goliya naina ke baba ke seene me utar di...


Naina ke baba wahi zameen pe gir gay...
Naina ne jab apne baba ko girte dekha toh wo bhag kar uske pas gayi ...naina ke baba ka seena goliyo se chhalni tha apne aakhri saase le ahe the wo...


Naina : (crying) baba baba...please utho na aap mujhe ase chod kar nahi jaa sakte ...please baba uth jao...(aas pas ke logo se madad mante hue) please koi mere madat karo ...please mere baba ko hospital le kar chalo ...please koi toh madat karo please... (Continue crying)




Baba : (taking his last breath) mer...mera..aaakh..akhri waqttt..aaa...gayyyaaa...hainnn...beta...appp..apna...kha...kkhayalll...rakhnaaa...



Itna kah kar naina ke baba ki aakhe band ho gayi ...




Naina : (shouting... Crying) babaaa...



***** Flashback End******




Naina Naveen ke gale lag kar roye jaa rahi thi...
Room me baithe sabhi logo ke aakho me aasu the ...




Naveen : (consoling her) chup ho jaa baccha jo hona tha wo ho chuka ab aur kuch bura nahi hoga ...ab tera bhai hain na tere saath ...




Naina : (crying ) kyu bhai kyu ...kyu mara unlogo ne baba ko ...kya galti thi unki...sabki nazro me main gunegar thi na toh mujhe marte mujhe saza dete mere baba ki zindagi chine ka kya hak tha unhe ...mere wajah se mere baba ki jaan gayi thi ..main zimmedar hu unki maut ki...




Shalini : (naine ke pas baith kar) naina galti na tumhari thi aur na tumhare baba ki ...woh log galat the unlogo ne jo kiya woh galat tha...tum please khud ko zimmedar mat samjho insab ka...




Yudi : (angrily) i don't believe this jab usne khud tumhare khilaf sare charges wapas liye the toh ab kyu usne asa kiya ...tumhare baba ko marne ki kya jarurat thi...




Naina : (controlling her emotions) police station me unhone sirf isliye case close kara diya kyuki woh mujhe apni tarah se saza dena chahte the...


Abhimanyu : par yeh toh galat hain ...apse jo bhi hua woh ek accident tha ...aap apne aap ko bacha rahi thi ...par unhone jo kiya apke baba ke saath woh galt nahi gunah tha...



Naina : (silently crying) nahi sab mere he galti thi ...pyar karna he galat tha...na main rishi se pyaar karti aur ma yeh sab hota...mere baba ko mere gunha ku saza mili hain...pyaar karna he sabse badi galti thi mere...aur uss galti ki saza mujhe puri zindagi jhelni hogi...




Raj (naina ki aakho me dekhte hue) : pyaa kabhi galat nahi hota naina...bas halat galt hote hain ...log galat hoti hain ... Logo ka pyaar ki taraf dekhne ka nazariya galat hota hain ...tumhari galti bas yeh thi ki tumne ek galat insan ka haath thama ... ek bar sahi insaan ka haath tham kar dekho ...zindagi ki taraf tumhara nazariya he badal jayega ...pyaar pe se khoya hua vishwas laut aayega



Naina : (with lots of pain) haath tham kar dekha tha tabhi aaj yeh halat hain mera ...ab dubara asa kuch karne ki na mujhme himat h aur na takat ...




Pooja : oye naina kabhi har nahi mani chaheyi life me toh asa kuch na kuch hota rahta hain...mujhe he dekh lo mera rohit toh mujhe chod kar he chala gaya shaadi ke mandap me ...usse dhundhe he toh aayi hu main yaha itni dur ...mujhe bech raste chod gaya (with sad face) ab bata isse jada bhi kuch bura ho sakta hain kya kisi ladki ke saath...



Naina : (with sad smile) mujhse bhi jada bura hua hain kya tumhare saath...bolo ...



Naina ki baat sunn kar pooja aur baki sabke chahre utar gaye...kyuki sach he toh kaha tha naina ne isse jada kya bura ho sakta tha kisi ladki ke saath jo uske saath hua tha ...




Abhimanyu : phir kya hua



Naina : mere barbadi shure hue thi ...baba ko mar diya unlogo ne ...koi nahi aaya humare madad ke liye ...ulta sab yahi kah rahe the ki galti meri hain...mere wajah se he ho raha hain sab...woh log mujhe waha se ghasit kar le gayi ...mere baba ki lash wahi ghar ke aage he padi thi ...(crying) mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki mere baba ka antimsanskar hua tha bhi ya nahi ...


Ali : aapne kaha aap ghar ke bahar thi iska mtlab sabke samne apke baba ki hatya hue ...kisne kuch nahi kaha koi nahi aaya apki mada ke liye ...




Huda : (angrily) itna kuch ho raha tha waha aur kisne aawaz tak nahi uthai ...logo ne kya chodiya phenli thi jo ek janani ki izzat bachane ki koshish bhi nahi ki kisi ne




Naina : nahi nahi kisne mujhe bachane ki koshish ...sab bas yahi kah rahe the ..ki iss ladki ki galti hain ab bhukte ...woh log bohat powerful the kisi ki itni himmat nahi thi ki unke khilaf kuch bol saki ...

Woh lag mujhe apne saath le gaye...me car me he behosh ho gayi thi ...apne baba ki lash apne aakho ke samne dekh kar.. kuch bhi hosh nahi tha mujhe ...
Aur jab hosh aaya toh mujhe nahi pata tha ki main kaha hu ...kisi godown jasi jagah me band kar rakah tha mujhe ...
Maine bohat koshish ki waha se bahar nikalne ki apne baba ke pas jane ki par nahi jaa payi...mere charo taraf sakht pahra tha ...
Phir achanak...



**** Flashback*****




Naina godown ka drawaza pite hue...


Naina : (crying) koi drwaza kholo ..mujhe mere baba ke pas jana hain...please koi kholo darwaza...



Naina bohat der tak ase he darwaza petai rahi par kisi ne nahi khola...


Phir achanak darwaza khula Naina darwaze ke taraf bhagi par raste me he uske kadam ruk gaye... kyuki darwaze pe rishi ke dad aur uske dost khade the ...aur sabki shakal pe apni jeet ki khushi chalak rahi thi...


R'dad : (happily) arre kaha jaa rahi ho bhag ke ...hum toh waha tumhe khushkhabri sunani aaye the ..aur tum ho ki apni kadam peche khech rahi ho ...



Varun : koi baat nahi uncle hum tabhi suna dete hain naina ko khushkhabri ...yeh toh hume apna manti nahi hain par hum toh isse apna mante hain na...



Manav : bilkul sahi kaha tumne varun..toh naina sunno tumhe pata hain tumhate baba kaha hain



Naina apne baba ka zikar hote he tilmila jati hain...usse uske baba ke bare me kuch nahi pata tha ...



Pankaj : arre naina tumhare chahre pe mujhe bohat sare sawal nazar aa rahe hain apne baba ke liye ...chalo maine tumhe unke jawab de deta hu..
Tumhare baba ki lash ko municipality wale utha kar le gaye kachra samjh kar ...hope ab woh kuch janwaro ke pet (tummy) bharne ke kaam aaye...



Naina : (angrily) shut up... shut up...ek lafz aur bola mere baba ke liye toh jaan se mar dugi main tumhe ...


Varun : naina ...naina ...naina ...rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya ...tumhe andaza bhi ab tumhare saath yaha hone kya wala hain ...

R'dad : hahaha...rahne do varun bol kar nahi ab kar ke dekhaye gay hum iss do kaudi ki ladki ko...tu hume marogi...chal mar ke dekha hum bhi toh dekhe kitna dam hain tujh me ...tere baap ko tere aakho ke samne mar diya tab toh tu kuch kar nahi payi ab kya karegi...
Pata nahi kaha saad rahi hogi tere baap ki lash...


Naina rishi ke dad ki baatein sunn kar tut se rahi thi ...woh ache se janti thi ki woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakti unka ...aur uske baba ki maut...usse pure tarah tod chuki thi...




Naina : (haath jodte hue...buri tarah rote hue) please ek bar mujhe mere baba se milne do ...kamse kam unki chita ko aagne toh dene do ..asa mat karo unke saath please...



R'dad : (angrily) Yeh sab tujhe mere bete ko marne se phele sochna chaheyi tha ki kasi maut milegi tere baba ko iske badle ...ab tere baba toh gaya ...ab tere bari hain ab tu bhugat...




Manav : uncle hum baatein karne me time kyu waste kar rahe hain...jo karne aaye hain woh karte hain na...



Yeh kah kar manav Naina ki taraf apne kadam badane laga ...Naina manav ke irade samjh rahi thi woh khud ko jitna peche kar rahi thi manav khud ko utna uske kareeb le ja raha tha ...


R'dad : (angrily) wahi rok jao manav ek kadam bhi aage mat badana uski taraf ...



Manav dar ke apne kadam peche kar leta hain...



Varun : (tensed) kya baat hain uncle aapne manav ko kyu roka ...hum iss ladko ko yaha rishi ki maut ka badla lene he toh laye the na ...




R'dad naina ke pas ja kar ...uske baalo se kas ke usse pakad kar khada karte hain ...naina dard se chila rahi thi khud ko chudane ki koshish kar rahi thi par rishi ke dad par koi aasar nahi ho raha tha ...




R'dad : aaj pure terhra (13) din ho gaye mere bete ki maut ko ...aaj main usse shradhanjali duga ...(to varun) pata hain kis tarah ki shradhanjali duga ...

(Varun naa me ser hila deta hain)

R'dad : (naina ke baal aur zor se pakad kar khechte hain) iski izzar ki shradhanjali... Jo kaam adhura chod ke mera beta chal gaya ab wo kaam uska baap pura karega...aaj phele main iski izzat utaruga ...phir tum logo ko jo bhi karna ho karte rahna iske saath mujhe farak nahi padta ...



Naina : (crying in pain) please uncle asa mat kijeye...aap mere baba ki umar ke haa please...




Par rishi ke dad naina ke ek nahi sune ...aur woh usse uske baalo se pakad kar khechte hue ek kamre me legay ...aur darwaza band kar leya..


Andar se dard me chikhti chilate Naina ki aawaze aa rahi thi ...agar uss waqt koi bhi insan waha hota toh shayad uske dard ka andaza laga sakta tha ...uski madad karne ki koahish kar sakta tha ...par yaha toh sare hawan baithe thi ...woh sab naina ke chikhe sunn kar khush ho rahe the ...maze le rahe the...
Bohat der tak naina ki dard bhari chikhe sunai de rahi thi ...phir kuch der baad rishi ke dad kamre se bahar aaye ...




R'dad : (smiling ) mujhe jo karna tha maine kar liya ...ab ja kar mere bete ki aatma ko shanti mili hogi ...ab tum logo ko jo bhi karna hain karo iske saath ...mujhe ab iss ladki se koi mtlab nahi hain...




Yeh kah kar rishi ke dad waha se chale gaye...yaha yeh sare dost unhe jata dekh khush ho gaye aur sab ke sab ke saath he room me chale gaye aur darwaza band kar liya ...



Kuch he der me naina ki dard bhari chikhe phir se sunai dene lagi...bhagwan he jane ki naina kis dard se gujar rahi thi ...itna kuch ho gaya uske saath ki ab shayad dard he kam padne lage uske liye ...wo bechari toh apne baba ke maut ka shuk bhi nahi mana payi thi...




Kahte hain na dard ki bhi ek seema hoti hain...kuch waqt baad naina ki dard se chikne chilakne ki aawaze aana he band ho gayi ...yah yuh kahu ki shayad ab usne aur takat he nahi bachi thi apne dard ko apni chikho ke zariye baya karne ki...




Jab rishi ke dost kamre se bahar aaye toh naina aandar bistar pe behal padi thi...ek zinda lash ki tarah ...uske sare kapde zameen pe bikhre pade the ...sharer (body) pe zakhmo ke nishan the ...body pe ek bhi kapda nahi tha ...aur na khud naina me itni takat bachi thi ki wo khud ko dhak sake...bistar pe chato tarah khoon he khoon tha...

Behal besud ussi tarah padi thi naina ...
Rishi ke dosto ke jane ke baad rishi ke dad ke aadmio ne bhi moke ka fayada uthaya ...unhone bhi naina ki izzt ko tar tar karne me koi kami nahi chodi thi ...
Woh naina jo apne baba ke aakho ka tara thi wo naina jo zindagi se bhari hue thi woh naina jo dhuk ki parchai se bhi koso dor thi aaj woh ek ase kale bhawar me jaa fasi thi jaha se nikalna mumkin he nahi tha uske liye ...


Nazane kitne din mahine sal naina yuhi unki kaad me rahi ...nazane kis kis ne uski bebasi ka fayada uth tha...uski izzat kis kis ke haatho nilam hue thi...
Nazane kya kya saha tha usne ...


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Naina ne apna ateet bata toh diya tha ...par uska dard kisi se bardash nahi ho raha tha ...

Main yeh nahi kahugi ki kisi ki aakho me aasu the kyuki woh sirf aasu nahi thi ...room me baithe sabhi log roo rahe the chahe woh cadets ho ya unke favorite teachers ...
Abhimanyu aur shalini toh phir bhi kisi tarah khud ko samhale hue the par Naveen ...


Naveen ki aakhe uska dard baya kar rahi thi ...naina ne sab kuch batne ke baad Naveen ke gale lag kar roye jaa rahi thi aur Naveen woh toh gusse se pagal ho raha tha ...

Uski gudiya ki saath yeh sab hua itna kuch saha usne par Naveen uske liye kuch bhi nahi kar paya ek bhai ka farz nahi nibha paya ...usse toh pata bhi nahi tha ki uski behen kaha hain kis hal me hain ...uska bas chalta toh woh apni behen ke ek ek gungar ko dhundh ke nikalta aur jaan se mar deta ...
Naveen ke aakho me jase khoon utar aaya ho...
Par kahi na kahi woh kamzor bhi pad raha tha naina ko yuh tutta hua dekh kar ...usse pata tha ki usse khud ko shant rakhna hain kisi aur ke liye na sahi par apni behen ke liye ...


Par uss kamre me koi aur bhi tha jo Naveen ki tarah khoon ke aasu roo raha tha ...jiski aakho me Naina ka dard saaf nazar aa raha tha ...jisko naina ki chikhe uski tadap apne kaano me saaf sunai de rahi thi...aur woh tha Raj...



Naina ko uska ateet btane ke liye Raj ne he kaha tha ...par ab Raj se he uska ateet sahan nahi ho raha tha ...naina ka dard uski tadap ...kuch bhi nahi...




Naveen kisi tarah bas Naina ko samhalne me laga tha ...
naina aur Naveen dono gale lage roo rahe the...
Naveen ke bohat koshish karne ke baad Naina thoda shant hue...



Naina : (crying) mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki main aakhir thi kitne waqt unke pas...jab unka maan mjhse bhar gaya toh unlogo ne mujhe kisi aur ko bech diya ...(crying harder)ase he pata nahi kab kis kis ke hatho biki hu main...shayad ab bhagwan ko bhi mujhpar taras aa gaya tha bhai... tabhi toh uss din nazane kase mujhme itni takat aayi ki main waha se bhag gayi ...aur aapse mil gayi warna aaj bhi mere saath wahi sab ho raha hota ...


(Yeh kah kar naina Naveen ke gale lag kar bohat roti rahi ...)



Abhimanyu : (angrily) koi asa kase kar sakta hain...itni ghatiya harkat...unlogo ne ek bar bhi nahi socha ki Naina ke saath woh log kar kya rahe hain...unki zindagi narak se bhi batar bana rahe hain ...




Alekh : (gusse se pagal ho raha tha alekh) apun ko lagta tha ki log ke had tak he gir sakte hai...ek had tak janwar ban sakte hain ...par aaj aaj apun ko pata chala ki insaan ke roop me asli bhediya kasa hota hain...saala apne aap ko baap kahta hain...apne bete ki maut ka asa badla liya usne...apun ka bas chale toh jaan se mar de apun usko ...


Ali : woh log toh insan kahlane ke bhi layak nahi hain...woh sab asa kar bhi kase sakte hain ...allah unhe narak me bhi jagah nahi dega ...



Sab ase he kuch na kuch bole jaa rahe the par na toh Naveen na Naina aur na he Raj ne kuch bola tha ...



Jaha Naveen chup chap Naina ko thame ...apne gusse ko dabaye baitha tha

...par naina woh kisi ki aur dekh nahi rahi thi ...apna ateet bata kar ab wo khud ko chota mehsoos kar rahi thi...usse sharam aa rahi thi kisi se bhi nazre milane me ...

Raj woh toh bas ek tak naina ko he dekhe jaa raha tha ...woh Naina ki jhuki nazro se uske dil ki baat ko samjh raha tha ...

Usse pata tha ki Naina kya mehsoos kar rahi hain...Raj ka Naina se ""Ek Ajnabi Rishta"" jod gaya tha jise woh naina ka dard samjh raha tha ...




Raj naina ke samne gaya aur apne ghutno ke bal baith kar naina ka haath apne haatho me liya ...


Sab Raj ko dekh rahe the ...naina ka haath jase he Raj ne apne haatho me liya Naina ne ek pal ke liye Raj ko dekha ...(((naina ki aakhe roo roo kar lal ho gayi thi)))...aur jhut se apno aakhe neeche karle...



Raj : (with ful of love n care) tum kyu apni nazre chura rahi ho Naina ...nazre unhe churani chaheyi jinhone asa kam kiya hain...tumhari kahi bhi koi galti nahi thi...tumne pyaar kiya tha haa bas tumse yeh galti ho gayi ki tumne pyaar ek galat insaan se kar liya ...but trust me pyaar karna galt nahi hain...jo tumne kiya wo valat nahi hain ...tumne koi gunha nahi kiya ki apni nazre churao ...gunaha unhone kiya jinhone asi gir hue harkat ki hain tumhare saath ...ser jhuka ke nahi ser utha kar jeo naina kyuki tumne kuch galt nahi kiya aur jo hua usme tumhara koi kasur nahi tha ...



Naina Raj ki baatein sunn kar uski aakho me dekh rahi thi ...dono he jase kho gaye the ek dosre ki aakho me ki aas pas ka hosh he nahi tha ...


Naveen ki baat sunn kar dono jase ek dosre ki aakho se bahar aaye



Naveen : (naina ko side hug karte hue) bilkul sahi kaha raj ne baccha tere kahi koi galti nahi thi ...tumne bas pyaar kiya tha ...aur ab please yeh sab bhul jaa ek nayi shuruwat kar hum sab ke saath ...apni bhai ek saath ...



Naina Naveen ko hug kar leti hain...




End of part 9



Love Arti



Sorry guys mjhe pata h maine late update kiya but kya karu yr aj kal kafi busy hu isliye lekhne ka time he nhi milta...


N yes one more think aap sabki complain h ki main RN scene nhi show kar rahu hu ...par guys plz forgive me for that kyuki ab tak mera sara ka sara focus Naveen Naina pe tha unki bounding pe unke bhai behen ke unconditional love pe but ab se RN sceen start hone wali h naina ka past bhi clear ho gaya h hope ab raj ko jaldi he hari jhundi mil jayegi ...lol...

Hope ab aap sab khush hoga
Once again thank u

Well what to say...

I'm so sry fr naina they r animals koi ek ladki ke sath aise kaise kar saktha hai they r just disgusting i hope raj's love is cure fr naina yaar lrl sherni naina ko kab la rahe ho nice ud

itni takleeef.. Uff..
Har bar rulana zaroori hai kya..
I hate crying..
Oopr se meri eyes rondu achi nhi lagti :p

seriously paesa wasool update..
But but i want punishment to all culprits.. Main culprits jo hai..
Specialy Rishi k dad n his friends...
Aesi punishment jismai maut na miley bt zindagi maut se badtar lagey..
It's upto u kaese karogey bt insaaf chahye..
Waiting for RN..
Agree pyaar galat nhi.. Loug galat hotey hai..
Tk cr