DevAkshi OS: Sona Shattered and Dev's 1st Step 2wards Realization

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Guys,

This is my 2nd OS... I have once again tried to write something and portray Sona and Dev's emotions. I know its not perfect, but wanted to share with you all. Didn't proof read..!!! I know its a sad OS... Hope you all like it:

Dev has accepted Natasha's marriage proposal for the sake of his business deal. Tina looked a bit upset though.

She knew Dev has feelings for Sona, but is still not realizing it. She wanted Dev to marry someone he loves and not to marry for a business deal.

By now, Tina understands Dev very well. She was aware that he doesn't share his feelings with anyone. He's always into his business. And have never thought of love. He has never ever thought about himself. About his own happiness. His only concern have always been the happiness of people around him.

And Tina was the only one who have realized that Dev is now over protective for Dr. Bose... There was not even a single day that he has not talked about Dr. Bose with her.

He always had something or the other to say about Dr. Bose. But now she's confused. Why Dev sir accepted the proposal? But there was nothing in her hand. The only thing she could do was, when Mr.Gujral left Tina with a confused expression said: Sir are you sure you want to do dis?

Dev (in a confused mind): Yes Tina. This is important for Ishwari Enterprise.😭

Tina: Think about it once again sir. Don't make a decision in a hurry, which you will regret afterwards. (this is not the first time Tina said this.. When Dev made Sona's profile on Jodi.com, these were the same words tina told him... And this time that moment immediately flashed in Dev's mind).

Tina left Dev's cabin and Dev was engrossed in his thoughts. Why the hell am i thinking about Ms. Bose. He diverted his mind to the business deal and started reading the contract.

Hear at Ishwari Mansion... Radha Rani is all praises for Natasha. And even Ishwari liked the girl. She is a well educated and very well behaved girl. Ishwari too liked her. Sona was listening to all of their talks and was upset. She told Ishwari that she is done with the day's work and is leaving.

At the entrance, Dev and Sona met. They exchanged hellos and were lost in an eyelock. Dev has never before felt this way. And Sona was looking with a question in her eyes. As if she was asking her Mr. Dixit whether he too likes Natasha. She only knew that Mr. Gujral proposed her Duaghter's marriage with Dev... But whether Dev has accepted it or not was not known to her. And Dev was still confused that why he wanted to talk to her. Why he wanted to tell her, what he did today just for a business deal. They were about to talk when ishwari saw and called Dev and Sona with tears in her eyes said: Gudnite Mr. Dixit. Dev was about to say something, but Sona left in a hurry.

On her way to home, Sona cried a lot. She didn't had her dinner today and when the family asked she said she had it with ishwari aunty. But Elena sensed something.

Elena went to Sona's room and saw her crying she closed the door and asked her what happened. Sona told her everything and Elena made her understand that you didn't talk to Dev and heard only Auntyji praising Natasha. Have you ever heard Dev saying he like Natasha? Then why are you upset? It may be that Ishwari aunty was talking generally. And now please stop crying and the first thing you have to do tomorrow morning is to tell Dev about your feelings ok. Now i can't see you upset over this matter. Go to sleep now. Elena made Sona have milk and asked her to sleep. Sona felt a bit better now. Elena was right. Sona should talk to Dev first.

Here Dev is going restless thinking about his decision. He never thought twice about any of his decisions before. This was the first time he did that. Just then ishwari enters Dev's room.

Ishwari: Dev... What happened beta? You are looking tensed.

Dev: Nothing ma. Sit... I wanted to talk to you about something.

Ishwari: Ok. Tell me.

Dev: Ma. I have to sign the deal with Mr. Gujral. But he has kept one condition for that. He want me to get married to his daughter natasha and then only i can get the contract. (Ishwari was visibly upset on this). But i told him that i have to talk to ma before committing. I want you to take the decision.

Ishwari who was extremely upset asked Dev to sleep now and she will let him know about her decision in the morning. She went to her room and was really angry on Mr. Gujral. How can he keep such a condition. This deal is really important for Dev.

This is when Mami enters her room. What happened jiji. Ishwari tell everything to mami who is extremely happy. She says, its good na jiji. And Ishwari looks on surprised and angry.

Mami: Look jiji. We have seen Natasha. She is a well mannered, educated girl and is from a well to do family. She'll keep you and Dev happy. And one day you'll have to get Dev married then why not now. We have seen the girl atleast and she is a simple and sweet girl. There'll be no problem. I think you shod think about the proposal and say yes. Else it should not happen that afterwards Dev will fall in love with an ill mannered girl and we have to get him married to her as we'll not be left with any option that time. (mami left the room with a evil grin on her face). She was aware of Dev's concern for Sona and only wanted Sona out of the house by any mean. She has always tried to fill venom in ishwari's mind about Sona and was successful in doing so.

Ishwari and mamaji also had a talk that night about Dev's marriage and mamji also advised ishwari that if Dev is ready and the girl is also good, she should agree.

Next morning Sona was happy and was getting ready in a hurry to go to Dev's house. She wanted to confess her feelings to Dev today anyhow.

She was very confused on what to wear... She wanted to wear something in blue today. As Blue is Dev's favorite color... Finally She found a beautiful blue kurti and wore it. She wanted to make sure, she looked perfect and was checking the mirror every minute. Elena saw her doing that and started teasing... Every time Elena teases Sona starts blushing and her face turns pink.
Suddenly Sona saw her watch and it was getting late. She hurriedly went outside to find a taxi and left for Dev's house. There were butterfiles in her stomach and as She was reaching Dev's place, she was getting nervous and was blushing too much. She thought how will i say i love you to Mr. Dixit, when i am so damn nervous, even before entering his house.

Finally She reached her destination. She came out of the taxi and started walking towards Dev's home. She tried to be calm and compose. She was thinking to herself: Please Sona.. Don't you dare behave like a love stuck teenager today. You have to confess your feelings to him now at any cost. and she walked past the main gate.
She saw Dev talking to Ishwari Auntyji and stopped. And entered only when Dev left from their. She was extremely nervous and couldn't gather the courage to face him. If he'll see her looking at him lost, he'll fire her with a lot of questions and she will not be able to answer any of them.

Ufff... Its getting more difficult for you Sona. She thought. But she has to do it today, before it gets too late. That day Sona and Dev didn't come face to face as Dev was avoiding facing Sona because of his inner turmoil. And here Sona was waiting to talk to Dev for once. Its night now and Sona was getting late but was waiting for Dev. Ishwari had her dinner and was sitting with Mami. Mami saw Sona and on purpose started talking about Natasha, just to let Sona know that Dev has accepted Natasha's marriage proposal. And yes She did that evilly.😡

Sona heard everything and her eyes were wide open in surprise and she just couldn't believe what she just hear. She just couldn't control her tears, she went running out of Dixit mansion with all her belongings. Nobody noticed her. As soon as she came out, she started crying at the gate vigorously ... She thought: I was mad to think he can love me... Whatever he did till date was just for a regular employee. He's the same with all his employee and i mistook his sympathy for love. You are mad Sona. How can you even think that The Dev Dixit can love you. You are mad. She wanted to be calm, but it was not possible for her for now.

She was about to leave and suddenly Dev's car entered. He saw her in tears and immediately got concerned. He came out looked at her and she looked at him with lots of questions.. As if she was asking why Dev? Is it true that all this while what i was thinking was wrong... You just had sympathy with me and i was stupid to think that you can fall in love with me.
And on the other hand Dev was thinking what happened to you Sona? Why is there immense pain in your eyes. Please tell me...!!
Trying to keep himself calm, he uttered: Sonakshi... And this was it. As soon as she heard her name from him, she just can't stop herself and ran out crying... leaving Dev confused and sad.

He tried calling her, but every time she cut the call, which made him more restless. He was not understanding her nor himself. Why was he getting restless... Why was he thinking of her the whole day. Why does she matters to him this much. What was the reason he can't see her cry... Why is he feeling her pain... Why did he want to talk to her at any cost... And why he wants her around him all the time...!!!

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krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really fantastic os dear.👏 keep writing more like this.
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It was beautiful😊
Keep writing more!!
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What a beautiful OS...truly emotional 😭 😭 ... I genuinely feel sona's pain 😭 .., oh sona doll, don't be upset at d end of day dev will love u...
Edited by Ferdous_69 - 9 years ago
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Awesome OS.
I think this could very well be tomorrow's episode track 😉
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Originally posted by: krystle123

its really fantastic os dear.👏 keep writing more like this.


Awww... Thank you..!!🤗
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was beautiful😊

Keep writing more!!


Thanks dear.😊
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

What a beautiful OS...truly emotional 😭 😭 ... I genuinely feel sona's pain 😭 .., oh sona doll, don't be upset at d end of day dev will love u...


Awww... Even i was imagining Dev and Sona while writing.😭 Thanks for the appreciation dear.
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Originally posted by: randommusings

Awesome OS.

I think this could very well be tomorrow's episode track 😉


Thanks dear.😊

And OMG, how i wish they incorporate this in the episode.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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An emotional update dear but Please give an happy ending for this OS I badly need it...Cant see our fresh luv birds like dis😭

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