sahil & sehaan ss struggles for happily ever after chap 3 update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends

This is Ramya here with a new story about sahil & sehaan

Missing them sooo much so thought i will write about them ,

Here is the prologue

The story starts with chand raat in episode 582

Rehaan and seher look lovingly at each other and hug each other obvious to tanveer's evil eyes.

she wanted ahil to come and see sanam(seher) and rehaan together and

make him think that they are having a affair and disown sanam and later forgive rehaan

On the other side sanam2 waits for ahil so that she can feed him the kheer

She was very tensed as to where her life is heading to, because she clearly knows that ahil does not love her

and loves sanam1 but is married to her because of fate .

In her tensed and nervous state she dropped the bowl of kheer and went inside to bring another bowl.

After sometime ahil comes to the backyard and sees the moon,but imagines sanam's face in it and closes his eyes

Sanam1 who came to backward to throw away the kheer she prepared for ahil saw him and knew he was thinking about her.

She nearly cried out thinking about the game that fate had played in their life's

Unable to stop herself , Sanam1 went near ahil and placed a hand on his shoulder . ahil who recognized her touch immediately turned to see a pair of brown orbs filled with love for him.

Both cried for each other ,looking at each other .

Both of them broke their eye lock to see the moon who was there in its full glory

Then Sanam fed a spoon of kheer to ahil who in return fed her spoon looking into her eyes.

Sanam and ahil hug each other and cried

Sanam2 who has returned saw them ran from there and sanam1 saw this and was feeling bad.

Tanveer who was a silent observer to all this was shocked to see 2 sanam's

Should i continue??

Pls let me know your reviews

INDEX

CHAPTER 1 -PG 1

CHAPTER 2 -PG 3

CHAPTER 3-PG 4


i have written a os on asya

this is the link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4588229/new-asya-os-a-normal-day

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Yes! Please continue!
There are barely any SaHil and SeHaan stories on the forum anymore, so I'm glad that someone decided to write one.
It's sounds interesting.
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaflower

Yes! Please continue!
There are barely any SaHil and SeHaan stories on the forum anymore, so I'm glad that someone decided to write one.
It's sounds interesting.
Continue soon 😊


glad that u liked the story
yeah sail and sehaan stories are very less now a days
will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was extremely nice to know that someone is wanting to write stories on sahil and sehan
There are barely a few on the forum
And an amazing start
Definitely looking forward to the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

It was extremely nice to know that someone is wanting to write stories on sahil and sehan
There are barely a few on the forum
And an amazing start
Definitely looking forward to the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊


thanks for your reviews
here is the first chapter hope u like it
waiting for your reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello friends here is the first chapter

hope u like it

pls tell me your reviews


Chapter 1

Rehaan and seher who broke their embrace looked into each others eyes

and said "I LOVE YOU" at the same time and laughed.

Rehaan looked the way seher was laughing and was fantasized

He went near her and touched her face with his fingers

Seher shivered in his intense stare and touch she closed her eyes and moved away from him

Seher tried to control her heartbeat which was running in a miles distance.

Rehaan went near her from back and nuzzled her neck

Seher gasped and turned and buried her face in his chest

Rehaan took her chin in his face and made her see him

Both of them saw raw passion and love for each other in their eyes

At that moment they knew what they wanted and taking her eye blink as conformation rehaan took her in his arms

and carried her to his room.

Sanam who was in ahil's arms jerked out when she saw sanam2 running inside.

Ahil looked puzzled as the perfect moment was disturbed.

Sanam thought ya allah what am i doing i know i love ahil but fate has played its game and now sanam2 is ahil's wife and

here i am hugging her husband in front of her' and ran away from there .

Ahil was devastated thinking that she had not forgiven him for what he did.

Ahil fell in his knees and cried.

Tanveer's head was spinning

oh god what is this there are 2 sanam's how is this even possible. Do they know each other? And are playing games with ahil and rehaan ?

Do they know who their parents are?

Do they know i killed them ya allah'

With these though she felt dizzy and sat on her bed catching her head.

Gazzalla and razak watch all this from the door with their stupid look.

Rehaan entered his room and closed the door with his legs.he gently lowered seher in his bed and

looked in her eyes as if asking permission to proceed

Seher blinked her eyes with a small smile and mouthed i love u'

Rehaan smiled at her and nuzzled her neck .seher closed her eyes in reflex and turned her face to other side giving him more access.

He looked up and stared at her face and kissed her .

Seher moaned and kissed him back .

What followed was union of two lovers in the most intimate way.

Sanam1 who ran from backyard went to there secret room and decided t take a shower

After sometime seher woke up in rehaan's arm and blushed she turned and saw the side table clock which said 12;30

she decided to go to the secret room as sanam1 will be worried for her.

She tried to move but gasped when rehaan pulled her back to him and pinned her below him.

rehaan what are you doing let me go sanam will be worried for me' seher reasoned

Rehaan said what to do sunheri u are irresistable'

Seher blushed and said rehaan' and buried her face in his chest

hey are u seriously blushing after what we did ' he asked indicating to their naked bodies covered with a comforter.

She turned bright red at his action

She now pushed him all her might and stood up,collected her clothes and rushed into the bathroom

Rehaan laughed out aloud and fell back into the bed reminsing about what happened between them .

Seher came out of the restroom fully clothed and saw rehaan checking his phone who was now clothed.

Seher said rehaan i have to go now otherwise sanam will be worried'

Rehaan pouted but said even though i wish u stay with me right now but i know u are right so u can go now'

Seher pecked him lips and said goodnight'

He wished her back and escorted her back to the secret room without anyone noticing them'

He then went to his room.

Seher came inside and saw that sanam was in shower so she slipped in the bed.

Sanam who came out saw seher sleeping and was relived as she was worried as to where was seher.

Sanam got in the bed but sleep was away for both the sisters as both of them were lost in thoughts of their love respectively.

Next morning

Sanam 1 was working in kitchen when ahil came inside and asked sanam i need a cup of coffee sanam replied 'ji' and started making coffee

and then just passed it to him without any words

Ahil was deeply hurt by her behavior and wanted to talk to her but knew she would not respond so just left from there.

After a while ahil was shouting for lateef asking for him his watch.

Sanam1 who was passing by with laundry saw all this from his doorstep and saw his watch in folds of the comforter.

She kept the laundry in the doorway and went inside the room and took the watch and saw ahil whose back was to her.

She went near him and kept his watch near his phone in the side table

And decided to leave but was startled when a hand pulled her and pinned her to the wardrobe door

Ahil and sanam stared at each other.

What happened after this??

Hahahahhahahah

Pls tell me your reviews

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Sehan romance was a treat to read
Hope tanveer is exposed soon
And the end was cliffy
Hope sanam and aahil clear all their misunderstandings
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon😊

P.S. whenever you update the story, do update the title so that everyone gets to know about the new update of the story😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update!
Very interesting.
Curious to see what happens next.
The ending was a cliffhanger.
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Sehan romance was a treat to read
Hope tanveer is exposed soon
And the end was cliffy
Hope sanam and aahil clear all their misunderstandings
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon😊

P.S. whenever you update the story, do update the title so that everyone gets to know about the new update of the story😛


glad u liked reading it
will update tomorrow
thank u so much for your advice i really forgot to update the tieele
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaflower

Great update!
Very interesting.
Curious to see what happens next.
The ending was a cliffhanger.
Continue soon 😊


glad u liked the story
will update tomorrow

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