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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

NOTE

yo wats up guyz ... thanx for such a beautiful

comments n likes i noe chapter 12 is more confusing

than others chapter thanx for liking it ...i told u

something about chapter 12 after 10 days wat

happened with manyta/aarohi its about chapter

12 now this story became past n present both in this

chapter some new charectors come out ... now read

the chapter n enjoy it ...


chahu mai ya na

chapter 13.1


past ...


manyta got up in few second ...she sit on her bed she

looked left n right but none there in her room


manyta(its just a dream ? wat the hell i m dreaming

about uday )


she rember his words


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS ..😳😳😳


manyta:how can i fall in love with u?...


in breakfast table

brijraj : good morning maa shab !!


ds: good morning ... brijraj !!!


ds looked at the servent n asked ... where is manyta n j servent looked

at her n said they both r not wake up ...


suddenly one voice come


good morning ds ... !!!


ds: aap ithni jaldi uth gayi ?


j huged ds n said ha aaj ke K ka b'day so ...


ds: its kk beta ... !!


j: vese ds jiji kha hai ?


ds wid shocking expression


ds: hume khushi hai j kal ki ladai ke badh apne fir

bhi aapne manyta ke baare pucha!!!


j thought( puchu gi kyu nhi akhir jo uski life jo hell

bnani hai )


j: ds vo humari baadi bhen HAI so hume respect deni chaiye ... jo ek

badI bhen milni chaiye ...


afcouse j tumhe manyta ko respect deni chaiye akir vo

tumhari badi bhen hai


every one looked at who was saying this ...


he was none other than uday


brijraj: UDAY !!!


uday: gani khamma dadi shaab ... !!


he bent down n take her ashirwaad

ds: jite rahiye !!!


uday looked at j with smrick


uday : tumhe manyta ki respect karni chaiye j

akhir vo devghar ki hone wali yuvrani n jaighar Ki

hone wali mhari hai !!! RESPECT THO KARNI

CHAIYE


j: thanks for remind me uday


n she looked at him ... with angry look...


j: ds hum soch rhe manyta jiji ke anE ki khushi

mai party kyu na throw kare wat say


brijarj: its a great idea .. !!!


ds: its good idea ... doc shab party ki taiyaari aap

kariyega !!


j: thanx ds ... !!!


n she huged her again


j:manyta jiji ye party apke liye bhoth especial

hone wali hai i hope u like it with evil smrick


uday thought ( some thing diff ... j manyta ke liye

party throw karna chati hai but question IS why ? )


hi everyone


every one looked at stairs its none other than

manyta she wear a green color suit with blue dupta

sleeve less kurta n in her right hand she wear a

watch ...


uday thought (wow ... she is beautiful her eyez her smile ) uday was bisy to recognise her n sherya who was look at him continusly wid evil smile


sherya : hey look who is coming ... MISS.PRINCESS


everyone look at shreya with confusing look i mean miss princess manyta n look she is luking like a true princess !!!(she say princess a bit louder)

everyone smile at her ...

uday looking at shreya wid dead full luk


n shreya just giggled looking at uday's reaction she wink at him ...

ds: good morning beta

manyta sit on her chair she didn't looked at uday

manyta nodded wid smile...

uday thought ( it is wired she didn't look at ... me

she try to ignore me ? or j say something to her )

manyta mind was just stuck on that word


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS ..😳😳


manyta thought (hell why he was looking at me today's

dream was so ... scary i m not fall on u uday how

can i fall on u ... when i love HIM?)


she was bizy in her thoughts when shreya said


HEY PRINCESS WHERE R U LOST IN PRINCE DREAM (when she say prince she look at uday )


who was bizy looking at shreya wid dead full luk n in other side j was fuming in anger


she back in her real life ...


manyta: kya ? nhi tho dadi shaab ... (she just changed the topic )


ds: ha manyta beta ...


manyta : app sab kya baat kar rhe the ...


rahul : actually tumhari choti bhen tumhare liye party organised karna chati hai

manyta luk at j wid r u srs luk 😕😕


j give her a cute smile


manyta thought (wats wrong with everyone first uday dream n now that j ... she organised a party for me aaj sab ke sab pagal ho gaye kya ... uthale uthale mujhe nhi in dono ko utha le haa nhi tho )


...


present ...


manyta was hell crying ... !!!


plz leave me ...


i can't ... my love i can't ...how can u forget me ? aarohi ...


aaditye plz leave me i never forget u I LOVE YOU !!! she just brust out crying her tears fall down on her chicks


u love me ?(he giggled)


so tell me who r u? aarhi or manyta ?

if i say manyta


THAN ... ?


I WILL KILL U


PAST ..


some one pull her in a room ... she try to shout but suddenly he cover his hand on her mouth manyta luked at his choclatey brown eyez who was luking at her intentionaly manyta mummered tum


uday give her a chizy smile he go close to her n said


kyu kisi or ko expect kiya thi ...


manyta who is dumstuck nhi mai ... vo tum !!


she is confused her heatbeat beating like ...a jackpet


n one sentance was disturb ... her mind


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS !!!


she just pushed him n said NO !!!


n she leave that place uday was confused wats wrong wid her ?




PARI N KRITZ 😳😳😳

well well well everyone want to kill me right now 😆😆 u have many questions right ?like who was aaditya n why she say i love u to him as he is a bf of manyta or something well first i mention in notice that some new charectors come out in this story i can't reveal him so easlie but i told u who is he as a chrector sketch


aaditya : (firstly i told u guyz i m biggest fan of ian n i can't control it anymore)aditye sighaniya a bissness tycon a most handsome good looking guy of india every girl want him his (blue eyez hipnotize iski kardi hai menu i swear widout shirt ye banda hawt lagta menu😳) i noe i noe its a song but i can't control my self 😆😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
chahu mai ya na


( mystery of my life)


chapter 13.2



present

she was lay on the floor ... n crying for her life she want to go home ... but destiny made her here ...
her tears make a way to go out in her eyez ... she luk at the door ... she thought that some one save her soon but how ? they don't noe where she is ? n the best part is she also don't noe where she is !! now who will save her from this DEMON ... YES DEMON when i m in collage i never thought in my wildest dream that i call him this ... i rember our first meeting n that proposing night i never forget

5 years back in (CIITE)

she luk at herself in mirror n luk at her new dress who was gifted ...

WOW AARUOO WHERE U GET THIS ... ? ITS SO BEAUTIFUL

ya i noe ... actually ... (she luk at down )

ARUOO R U BLUSHING ?

ohh comon jiu i m not 19s heroine ... get back in reality ...

jiya luk at aarohi wid doubt full luk aarohi luk at her wid srs luk WAT ?

jiya laughed n said he really likes u ...

oh plz jiu ...if anyone gave me a gift thats not mean that he have a feeling for me HE IS JUST FRND NOTHING ELSE n she luk at another side as she don't want accept the fact ...

thak thak ... someone knock the door jiya open the gate n found a person who was standing front of her wid a bunch of flowers she didn't luk at his face as all flowers were cover his face he put down all flowers his face was visible n jiya luk at him shockingly YOU ?

someone open the gates manyta get back in reality ... he luk at the person who was standing front of her

the person luk at her wid so much love like some precious think he lost but now he found out


he bend down n seat beside her he take his hand on her chicks she closed her eyez n one drop come out in her eyez that drop of water make him realized how much she was in pain he didn't wait for next drop he just go closed to her n suck her tears ... she closed her eyez n feel his touch she bit smiled n said I NEED YOU that think make him realize how much she want him ...



tu hi mera ...
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai ...
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai ...(2 *times)
tuhi mera... (2*times)
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai ...
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai ... (male)
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai (female)
kahi tere dil ki panaho mai
maine paya tujhe meri chahon mai ..
jaise lobaan jalta ho har pal kahi ...
meri khwaish mai u tu jala hai ...
tu hi mera ... (5 *times)
she just huged him like no tommorrow ... manyta's head resting on his shoulder n she is continusly crying ... he just don't want to see her like this he just rubbed her back lightly n she is sobbing like a small child ... he was understand her fear ... couz he was also afraid to loose her R U OK PRINCESS ? manyta didn't said a word she just hugged him more tightly like if she leave him ... so he will be gonna disappear ...he understand her feeing very well n he break that
hug cup her face gentally n kissed her forehead make her realize now he is not gonna disappear .. PRINCESS I M HERE WID U ... as he said manyta again hugged him n said with the sobbing way u...uday i ... i wa.. nna g..go h..home .. ... that words was the first n last words for her n than she closed her eyez ... he just pick her up in his arms n take her out ... make her seat in a car ... he just luk at her eyez her eyez were teary n he just wiped her lightly n take hairs behind her ears ...she luked at him so lovingly he luk at her n said NOW R U KK ? she nodded like a child he just smile at her innocence ...

EXCUSE ME MR. YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH

HE TURN HIS FACE N LUK AT THE PERSON WHO CALLING HIM


YES ...

we will search all over there ... we didn't find anyone

manyta take a relif sign ...

i don't noe take all ur force militry army watever u want but find out the person WHO TRY TO KIDNAPPED MY PRINCESS ... i swear i wana kill that person wid my own hands ...

uday luk at the police man wid blood shot eyez ...

n he just agreed ... uday turn his face n luk at manyta wid smile n said wid lovingly SHALL WE GO ?
she just nod for once

n he just take her out in this mess

past

that was great party I LOVE IT ...

afcouse babes this is royal party ... k luk at her n said wid smrick U WILL THROW A PARTY FOR MANYTA ? DID U REALLY LIKE HER?

j rolled her eyez wid ATTITUDE ...OH COMON DID U REALLY THINK ? I JUST THROW THIS PARTY COUZ I WANT TO REALIZE EVERYONE THAT CHEAP GIRL IS NOT A PRINCESS N SHE NEVER BECAME A PRINCESS ...

hmm .. its gonna be intresting

j luk at k n said wid full attitude it is intresting

l luk at her smile n said HEY BUT J R U SURE THE ADITYA SIGHANIYA IS COMING ? I NOE HE IS BUT HE IS NOT LIKE A PARTY MATERIAL ...

j luk at her wid smrick yes babes he will !!!

oh god i can't belive ... i m so excited ...

j luked at her n said wid smrick MEE TOO BUT FOR MY SO CALLED JIJI ...😈

KRITZ... 😳😳




ADITIYA SINGHANIYA :

he is the most handsome eligible bechlor of india n one side lover ... u can say that... he have same personality as uday but he have something upto which make manyta life hell or may be destroy ...
Edited by Twinkle_alisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
CHAHU MAI YA NA

[ mystery of my life ]


Chapter 14

She is sitting in a car looking at outside from the window ... silently not a single word escape from her mouth ... at last uday break the silence ... coz he don't want to look at her like this ..

PRINCESS???

manyta turn her face n look at him

DO U WANT TO EAT SOMETHING ? R U HUNGRY ?

manyta softly say

no !!

n again turn her face ... from window side


I NOE WHAT MY PRINCESS WANT YET ... !!! he said loudly

WHAT ? manyta look at him with confuse expression
uday smirk n stop the car in middle of the road look at her with romenticly n slowly slowly go close to her face manyta make a puupy face coz she got a bad intentions from uday ... 😳
uday come close to her he can feel her breath ... they both look into each other eyes ... there noise were touched by each other ... there lips were just inches a part suddenly manyta close her eyez waiting for the moment 😳

but nothing happens she open her eyes slowly and met with choclaty brown eyes.. who was looking at her so intentionally ...

WHY R U LOOKING AT ME ? LIKE THIS ? she asked

actually she want to noe why he didn't kiss her ?

U NOE PRINCESS WHEN I LOOK AT U FOR THE FIRST TIME REMEMBER THAT CAR FIGHT ?

manyta remember how she grap a stone n threw it on uday's car glass...

manyta nod with the smile on her face

uday said with softly

ON THAT TIME I REALISED I ACTUALLY SEE YOU SOMEWHERE BEFORE

manyta look at him with confused look

WHERE ???

IN A ZOO ... U SITTING BESIDE A MONKEY n uday brust out laugh...🤣

manyta who is shocked and angry in same time look at him with u r so dead look

WHAT ?? she shout out loud ya she is not expecting something like this

I M GONE A KILL YOU MR.YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH

she start hitting him on his chest uday don't mind it... actually he really enjoy her antiques ... n this is the best way to make her happy

...



thank god aroo is ok ...she hugged rahul titly

rahul is shocked n feeling bit shy coz that was there first hug... she is so happy after all her best frnd is safe now ...

rahul hugged her back softly n asked now r u happy ?

she break the hug n look at him ... they both just look at eachother..

suddenly third voice come

cough cough i didn't see anything ( he shouts )

they both just look at the person who is standing front door n they were shocked to see it was none other than vb .He covered his eyez with his hands and pretend he didn't see anything

...

I HATE THAT WITCH ... j threw everything what she have in her hands

HUM USE JITNE NHI DENGE ... SHE CAN'T WIN SO EASILY ... MANYTA JIJI NOW U GONE A PAY FOR THIS
she gave a evil smile


...

HOW COULD U MANYTA ? HOW COULD YOU ?

he look at her picture

NOW WHO WILL SAVE YOU FROM ME !! BE READY MANYTA ... I'LL BE BACK IN YOUR LIFE AGAIN ...

he burned her photograph n throw it on dustbin ...

evil smick appeared on his face

...

DON'T TALK TO ME !!!! DO I LOOK LIKE A MONKEY ?

no who said this ? he said confusingly

YOU SAID .. !!! she look at him with so much anger

NO SWEETIEE I SAID U SITTING BESIDE A MONKEY !!! WAIT A SEC !! IT MEANS YOU KNOW U R MONKEY ... OH YEHH CHOR KI DADI M THINKA ... he said with a chizzy smile

I HATE YOU she said loudly

I LOVE YOU ... N I REALLY DO !!!!


KRITZ ...
😳😳😳

SO THATS IT I M DONE WITH THIS CHAPPY N PLZ DO LIKE N COMMENT

PROMO

UDAY I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING ...I NOE ADITIYA FROM PAST 5 YEARS ... HE IS MY EX BOYFRND UDAY MAINE TUMSE JHOOT KHA THA PLZ PLZ MUJHE MAAF KAR DO UDAY ADITYA N HI MUJHE KIDNAPPED KIYA THA OR AB HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU!!! TUM SAMJH RHE HO NA WHAT I M TRYING TO SAY

he turn his face with smick

TUM !!!! she shouts 😲

love u all ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Chahu mai ya na

[ mystery of my life ]

Sneak Peak

they both were reached in palace when manyta were getting down but uday stopped her
princess !!!
manyta stopped looking back to uday he looked at her with doubtful look and asked her very softly
princess i know their is lot of problems between us but i want to know about adi how do you know him ?
manyta look at down nervously SHE SAID WITH BIT HESITATION i don't know him properly he is in my college but we never talked as he is very popular guy that's why i know him she complete her self

...

why don't you tell him aroo?

what should i tell jiya you know my past very well you know him very well he is a psychopath you know about that person because of him she is not here the past which i never want to open but now ... he is going to open it ...

...

she turn her face look at his dark blue eyes n asked straight forward
why did you came back ? what you want to know ?
he gave her evil smirk
THE TRUTH ...
...

listen to me uday i m not here because of you i m here because of dadi saabh ... so please leave me alone she went to go another side but stopped by him he grab her waist n pull her forcefully ... look into her light brown once ... angrily she looked at him with teary eyes ... leave me uday YOU HURTING ME!!
he barked loudly TELL ME THE TRUTH MANYTA ... !!!
...


HELLO BROTHER !!!
AFTER A LONG TIME WE MET ...
he offered his hand to him
uday looked at him with bit shocked & angrily ...
I NEVER THOUGHT WE MET AGAIN ... !!!
...

UDAY I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING ...I DON'T KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN she take adeep breath and continue I NOE ADITIYA FROM PAST 5 YEARS ... HE IS MY EX BOYFRND BUT I NEVER LOVED HIM UDAY MAINE TUMSE JHOOT KHA THA PLZ PLZ MUJHE MAAF KAR DO UDAY ADITYA N HI MUJHE KIDNAPPED KIYA THA OR AB HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU!!! TUM SAMJH RHE HO NA WHAT I M TRYING TO SAY

he turn his face with smick

TUM !!!! she shouts 😲

hey guys i m done with the sneek peak this is small promos of coming chapter so please enjoyed n do comment n like ...

kritz😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Thanks for updating.Actually I have all ready read it ,as it was posted in another site. I am waiting to know what happens next as it was not posted there.Then again thanks for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayeasha

Thanks for updating.Actually I have all ready read it ,as it was posted in another site. I am waiting to know what happens next as it was not posted there.Then again thanks for the update.


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