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EPISODE 542

-Written by Shibani (scene 1 and 3) and Annie(scene 2)

*Scene 1*

*Next Day, Lakshya Academy*

Nisha walked in the academy, all tired and weak. She banged into Priyanka, who held her shoulders firmly, to make sure that she doesn't fall.

Priyanka- Aap thikh hai?

Nisha-(realizing what happened) Haan, just tired, that's it...

Priyanka-(worried) Toh apne leave kyun nhai li?

Nisha- nahi yaar, ghar pe bore ho jaati hoon, isiliye yahaan chali aayi...

Priyanka-(doubting) You sure you'll be fine?

Nisha nodded and the two went to the practicing arena.

Kaira- Woh Viraj todhi deri se aayenge, so he has asked you girls to practice till then...

Kaira left and Priyanka aimed. She was happy that she hit bull's eye, but to her shock, today Nisha's aim wasn't accurate. Nisha tried to aim, but couldn't concentrate and failed. All present there looked at her in shock.

She tried again, but felt as if she would faint and held onto Priyanka, who was standing next to her.

Priyanka panicked and helped her to the seats. She gave her water.

Priyanka- Humne kaha tha, ki mat rukiye, par aap nahi maani...Now please go home and rest, ok?

Nisha nodded. Priyanka offered to drop her home and held her shoulders as she stood up.

SCENE 2: GANGWAL HOUSE

They just reached the doorstep of gangwal house and rang the doorbell. It was early a morning, so Alisha came along sukku to the gangwal house and would go to nibir's house later. It was nearly seven in the morning when they reached though they could have reached earlier but due to the traffic that wasn't possible. Both of them stood tired and lazily at the door waiting for someone to open the door but it seemed that everyone was deep asleep today. And soon they heard the click of the door, which meant that someone was here. sukku signaled Alisha to hide and he too went and hid behind the pillar. It was umesh who had opened the door yawning, he came out and stood before the door stretching his arms,

Kaun hain...??he asked in a sleepy tone.

Gabbar...hun main...!!said sukku in a strong tone gripping him from behind and used his mobile phone as a gun.

Kya..kya ...chahiyee tumhe...??asked a scared umesh.

Ye haath mujhe dede thakur...!!said sukku changing his voice.

Mere haath...mere haath ka tum kya karoge...aur main thakur nahi..umesh hun...!said umesh raising his hands up in air surrendering himself.

Nahi tu thakur hain...jiska meri bhabhi ke saath chakkar chal raha hain...!Said sukku .

Aree nahi yaar...mera sirf meri biwi ke saath chakkar chal raha hain...aur kisi ke saath nahi...said umesh about to turn to him but sukku warned him to not to, and Alisha was having a great time laughing at this.

Alisha couldn't control anymore and laughed her heart out, and which was heard by umesh and he understood what was going on, he quickly turned towards the person and found it to be sukku.

Sukku ke bachche...!!?he shouted and chased him into the house.

Bhaiyya abhi to main khud bachcha hun...!!said sukku running ahead.

Kyun kiya tune ye...??asked umesh running behind him.

Aap ka neend udaane keliyee...!he said standing behind the sofa while umesh still chased him.

tu kitnaa bhagaata hain yaar...tere bachpan ki aadat abhi tak gayi nahi...?!asked umesh sitting tired in the sofa.

Aree...bhaiya to subah subah bhaagna is good for health...!he said and sat behind while alisha also came in.

Hearing to the noises made by them, the whole family came out thinking what must have happened. And found sukku, Alisha and umesh sitting in the courtyard.

Sukku...?? Tu aagaya...?? Tune bataaya kyun nahi..??asked lakshmi.

Nahi maa...main abhi aaya nahi aane waala hun...bas bus abhi aadhe ghante me phnch jaayegi jaipur...!said sukku while everyone giggled.

Achchaa ye to bataaoo sukku bro ki aapke audition ka kya hua...??asked jwala.

Audition...he said and acted to be gloomy on hearing that word, making everyone understand that he did not get the role., while Alisha was in deep thoughts why he was doing that,

Sukku sat in the sofa looking down, while dadi said,

Kee hua beta..tu itnaa gumsum kaahe hain...aisi baatein hoti rehvee hain...dil se na lagaa...!

Haan sukku beta aise dil chota nahi karte...aisi baatein hoti rehti hain...don't worry ye role nahi to koyi aur role miljaayega tujhee...abhi to bollywood me bohot movies banne baaki hain...!said ramesh with a smile.

Papa...dil se to main tab lagaata na jab mujhe ye role nahi milti...par...he said looking at all of them gloomily but with a naughty glint in his eyes,

Par kya...??asked mohan tauji.

Par tauji mujhe to role mil gayi naa...he said without changing his facial expressions, while Alisha understood that he was acting.

Matlab main samjha nahi...!! said tauji.

Matlab ye ki mujhe ye role mil gaya...he said again changing his facial expressions to a little happy one.

Kyaaa...??all of them shouted in unison with a mix of shock, amazement and happiness in their tone.

Haan...mujhe role milgaya..he said while his family hugged him.

Alisha kept adoring the family and hoped if she had a family like this too, she could also have shared her every problem, happiness with them but the god has taken away everything from her. she kept looking at the happy family with a smile plastered on her face, when sukku called her to join the group hug and she smiled but nodded in a no, but the cousins just pulled her in. she smiled as she could feel today what the feeling is when you have a supportive family.

Scene 3

*Kirti's Office*

Samridh, Rashi and Kirti were discussing about the event when Rashi's mobile rang. Excusing ehrslef, she walked out of the rom. Kirit also stood up, but because of her high heeled sandals, almost tripped. Samridh, who was there, immediately went and held her by her waist, and their noses almost touching. They couldn't look away from each other's eyes. Finally, Samridh broke the eye contact and helped her stand straight.

Kirti-(blushing) Thanks. Samridh...main tumse...

Suddenly there was a knock on the door. It was a peon who had come to inform Kirti that Rashi wanted to meet her. Kirti excused herself and left.

Samridh looked at her retreating figure and sat on the chair.

Samridh- Kya main jo soch raha hoon, woh sacch hai? Is Kirti falling for me?(determined) Even if that's so... I won't acknowledge her feelings... Usne meri sabke saamne insult ki, how can I accept her feelings? No Samridh,chahe job hi ho, you and Kirti have no future...Humari story ussi raat khatam ho chuki thi, jis raat she rejected you... Yeh relation professional hi thikh hai...

He banged his hand on the table in frustration.

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AN by Shibu

Since I have joined the team after a month, I request you to ignore the bloopers since I am not so sure about the tracks. Hope the episode was good.


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EPI 543


WRITTEN BY NIYA AND ANNIE



Scene 1
KNH


It was late evening when she reached home, though she had left earlier in the evening but due to the traffic she went through while coming back and her not so favorable health had left her irritated and exasperated. Priyanka left her at home and immediately started back. She however in an inflammable mood, barged into the house and found that he was not there. As she walked in she heard some footsteps nearing her, she closed her eyes in frustration as she had been not in a mood to be funny or happy or romantic all the day, she knew who it was and definitely being it kabir, he came and back hugged her,
Kabirr chod mujhee...!!she said in an grave tone.
Nahii.. mann nahi kar raha...tujhe chodnee ka...he said and pulled her even closer to him and she could feel his cool breath swaying on her neck.
Kabir maine bola na please chod de...I am not in a mood...please...!she said trying to remove his hands from her waist.
Arre wifey...kal kitna daraa diyaa tha tune...abhi kaisi tabiyat hain terii..???he asked turning her to face him.
I am fine kabir...please mujhe jaane de...I have to go sleep...!!she said disinterested in his talks.
Kya hua hain nishaa..??? abhi bhi tabiyat kharaab hain kyaa...??he asked cupping her face.
Nahi ...I am fine...I am fine...please abhi pareshaan mat karr...I am too tired...!!said she faintly.
Please kuch hain problem to bataa mujhee...mujhe teri bht fikar ho rahi hain yaar...tu mujhe kuch bata bhi nahi rahi...!!he said with a line of worry on his face.
But nisha just without answering him looked down tired and frustrated. Kabir made her sit on the sofa and went down on his knees before her, while she held her head with her hand and glared at him with irritation in her eyes.
Kya hua nishaa...?? Please tell me...he said holding her hands in his.
Kabir I said na I am tired...tujhe ekk baar me samajh kyun nahi aata yaar...kyun khamakhaa mere peeche pada rehta hain...I said na jaane de mujhe...aur mujhe tang mat karr please..she said and stood up and started walking full of rage, his patience has crossed the limits now, he stood up and followed her and held her hand and pulled her towards him in anger,
Nishaaa...please...main ab bhi tujhse normally puch raha hun...please bata kya problem hain teri...kuch hua hain aaj..??he said as his patience had started fainting.
Nahi bataaungi...kuch karegaa...??she asked in anger.
Nishaa...??!ho kya gaya hain tujhee...?? Aise kyun baat kar rahi hain yaar...?? Aise baat mat karr...he asked gripping her arms tightly.
Kabir chod mujhe...she shouted and protested to get free of his grip, and pushed him hard that he stumbled back and she slapped him out of anger and irritation, leaving him angry and shocked. Anger rose up within him but he can't hurt her for that, so leaving her there alone he barged into the guest room and locked himself and started punching the wall to release his anger, and then sat down leaning to the wall. Nisha was also shocked at what she did, her tiredness had taken a toll on her and the result was this, it took her a few minutes to register what she did, she immediately went to the guest room and started banging the door telling him to open it,
Kabir...kabir..i am really sorry yaar...please open the door!...she pleaded, crying as she realized what she had done, all he was doing was for her only, he cared for her, loved her and hence had a fat amount of concern for her, but what she did.
He sat there with his legs close to his chest, hearing to her words, crying and shouting out to release his anger,
Please jaa yahan se...please mujhe baat nahi karni hain tujhsee...he shouted.
Kabirrr..please ekk baar meri baat sunlee...please...!!she kept pleading him while he wasn't listening to her.
She sat at the door for about an hour and then slowly fell asleep there itself, while kabir's sleep was nowhere near him today, he kept thinking why she did that, but soon he realized that she had been ill the previous day, and that it was his mistake that he didn't let her rest and irritated her. he felt guilty for being angry on her all this while, he slowly stood up from his place and opened the door expecting her to have left the place already , but found her sleeping leaning by the wall beside the door, he bent down before her and slowly pecked her forehead,
I am sorry...he mumbled, and picked her and took her to their room where he laid her on the bed and covered her with a quilt and laid down beside cuddling to her, wrapping his hand around her waist and his face touching her cheek, and after a few minutes she too got in tune to his arms comfortably finding a solace there.



Next Morning

Nisha woke up with a heavy head and found herself on the bed, she assumed that it was Kabir who bought her here and smile when she saw him sleep peacefully next to her. She was about to reach him but started feeling really uncomfortable and jumped out of the bed running towards the washroom, when she felt an urge to throw up.

As soon as she started throwing up Kabir woke up when her coughs become louder with every passing minute. He immediately rushed to the washroom and reached Nisha. He started stroking her back with his one hand and used his other hand to hold her hair in a ponytail as she puked

"Nisha, tujhe hua kya hai? he asked concerned and worried. She just nodded her head negatively as she continued coughing.

After a few minutes when she felt better and her coughs subsidised she caught hold of her head with both her hands and leaned on Kabir for support.

"Nisha, hum aaj hi doctor ke pass ja rahe hai he declared as he picked her up in bridal style taking her back to the room

"Kabir mujhe nahi jana she cribbed as she rested her head on his shoulder

"Main abh kuch nahi sune wala Nisha,bohut hogaya tera natak, hum ja rahe hai matlab hum ja rahe hai he said firmly and placed her on the bed...

Nisha just hummed in response before drifting back to sleep, Kabir covered her with the duvet and went to freshenup. He later called Viraj to inform him that Nisha won't be coming to academy today and even messaged his students about their day off for today.

Scene 2
A Restaurant

Viraj and Kaira had come for their meeting with one of the investors who had still not turned up. Kaira was lost in her thoughts while Viraj was busy noticing her. Kaira looked at him suddenly and Viraj still kept staring her

"Kya dekh rahe hai? she asked and he replied absent-mindedly

"Aapko

Kaira was surprised and little happy too but pretended to be nervous "Ji?

Viraj composed himself and replied "Yeh dekh rahe hai ki aap itne der se aise kis khayal main khoi hai ki aapki cold coffee extremely cold ho gai

He teased her and it was time for her to blush now

"Vo hum... Nisha... Nisha ke bare main soch rahe the she made an excuse hoping that Viraj would buy it

"Hume bhi Nisha ki chinta ho rahi hai, Priyanka bata rahi thi ki kal bhi unki tabiyat kuch khas theek nahi thi Viraj replied and that concern was clearly visible on his face

"Aap chinta mat kijiye, Kabir hai na unke paas unka khayal rakhne ke liye Kaira said and placed her hand on his hand, Viraj smiled and placed his other hand on top of hers and replied

"Bilkul vaise hi jaise aap thi humare paas humara khayal rakhne ke liye he replied and looked straight into her eyes, they both got lost in each other's eyes and their eye lock broke when Kaira's phone rang, she used her other hand to pick up the phone and answer the call.

"Theek hai, thank you! she kept the phone and looked at Viraj "Meeting cancel ho gai hai, unke kuch personal issues ke wajah se von ahi aa payenge

"Hmm, koi baat nahi, hum coffee khatam karke academy wapas chalte hai Viraj said as he withdrew the hand he kept on Top of hers and started sipping his coffee, Kaira too used her free hand and none bothered to leave each other's hand. They did some chit chat as the savoured their coffee.


Scene 3
Kirti's office

Kirti was happily doing her work when she saw a new face enter the office, her face itself was so clearly stating that she was full of self-pride and attitude. Still Kirti went to her to help her out

"Need any help? Kirti asked politely, the girl checked her out and made a face which annoyed Kirti but she plastered the smile on her face

"No thanks, mujhe tumhari koi help nahi chahiye the girl replied rudely and looked here and there

"Alright then! Kirti said and went back to resume her work. The girl took out her phone and dialled a number

"Where are you Honey-cake? she asked in an extra sweet voice which made Kirti giggle a bit. Kirti shook her head and continued her work. She heard the door of Samridh's cabin open and turned to look at him but her broke into pieces when she saw him approach the girl who threw herself forcefully on him. Her eyes already started brimming with tears but she blinked her eyes rapidly to stop them from falling as she saw Samridh pass by her seat guiding the girl towards his cabin, he did have a glance at her but she pretended to be busy in her work. She got up and went to the restroom to wash off her face to hide the tears and came back to her seat after a touch up. She knew that she couldn't let Samridh see how this new girl was affecting her.

SCENE 4: LA MONTE HIGH SCHOOL, JAIPUR.


It was the most unwanted day of every student's life, although such days don't matter for some exceptionally bright students like jwala. It was the Parent Teachers' meeting, where the performance of the student is to be discussed between the parents and teachers, but maybe it was another way to criticize students and mentally torture them, by showing their parents their performance or mischief they had done throughout the year. Jwala was in her normal mood whereas bunty was in a little wacky mood as he was having a premonition that his teacher was going to complain against him. Ramesh, lakshmi, rupan and mohan went along with them, and it was bunty's class to which they headed to first.
Haan...to iss baar to koyi complaint sunne ko nahi milegi na...??asked lakshmi glaring at bunty, while they waited for their turn to meet the teacher.
Agar complaint karee bhi...to hum kisliyee hain..??! band bajaa denge teacher ki...!!said ramesh in a low tone while bunty and jwala laughed.
Ramesh tum na...humesha iski galtiyon par parda daalte ho...kabhi to daanto...!said lakshmi.
Daantne keliye tum ho na...aur agar sab ek saath daantenge to kaise chalega..?? hain na..!!?he said supporting bunty who was quite nervous about his result.
And finally they went to meet the teacher as it was their turn, and the teacher looked at bunty curiously,
Kyun bhai..?? koyi gadbad to nahi kari na..??asked ramesh near his ear, while the teacher was busy taking out his report card from the bundle.
Papa...maine aapko bataya tha na...ye wahi new teacher hain jiske seat par mere dost ne chewing gum chipkaayi thi...aur naam mujh par aagaya tha...said bunty nervously.
Ohhh teri...matlab band hum inki nahi...ye humaari bajaane waali hain...koyi nahi beta ...koyi nahi...hum war keliye ready hain..said ramesh.
Hmm...to aap parents hain..!?asked the teacher.
Ji...we are bunty's parents!!said ramesh.
Who bunty? His name is Barun gangwal right?!she asked.
Yeahh...sorry! Bunty is what we call him at home! "said lakshmi.
Mam...wo aapke seat par chewing gum maine nahi lagaayi thi...he said stammering due to nervousness.
I know that...don't worry ... and now go back to your hume...take some rest and get prepared for your new session. said she, while lakshmi and ramesh were also happy that she had no complaint against him.
And after they were done with bunty, they headed towards jwala's class, and in the way,
Ye tune teri teacher ko kuch pila diya tha kya PTM se pehle..??asked ramesh giggling.
Hmm...to iss baar teri teacher ne koyi complaint nahi kiya...to I expect ki iss saal bhi mujhe teri complaints sunne nahi milegi...said lakshmi.
Nahi maa...I promise you aisa kuch nahi hogaa..!!he said while she smiled.
And then all of them headed towards jwala's class, and as soon as she entered into her class, her friends jumped onto her and started congratulating her, and their parents too congratulated her, while some were jealous,
Jwalu di jaao...aapki teacher aapke liye aarti ki thaal lekar ready baithi hain...said bunty and giggled.
Jwalaa...my dear, my favorite student ..come here...you have once again made me proud!said the teacher excitedly.
She went towards her teacher, and her teacher stood up and held her shoulders proudly,
This is my student...!!she said.
To hum sab kya hain..??said one of the jwala's enemy hiding at the back of the crowd.
She had topped the whole school...!!said the teacher proudly, while mohan and rupan smiled.
Bunty who was standing beside jwalu slowly mumbled,
Jwalu di...poore school me top karne ki kya zaroorat thi...class me hi karleti...abb gharwaale isi baat par meri bajaayenge...said bunty and again giggled and jwala joined him too.
She had scored 100% this year...!!Said the teacher and just when rishi arrived there, and smiled seeing what was happening.
Although this would happen every year that she would top the whole school, but this happiness was something else today, she smiled and thanked her teacher most cordially, and took her report card which seemed to her like an Olympic prize, and the other students had started having their bashings once again, and while she walked out of the crowd while her family was still busy having a talk with the teacher, rishi followed her ,
Congrats jwala..he said.
Thank you..she said with a shy smile. Tumhaara result..??she asked.
99.9! "he said with a smile.
Ohh...congrats!!she said excitedly.
Party..?!he asked.
Milegi..she said and smiled, and that's when her family came and she had to leave, it was once a again a best proud moment for her parents and family. Her family hugged her for once again making them proud, they went home where they told everyone about the new, and Alisha , kabir and nisha were also informed about jwala and bunty's results, and they were quite happy, and promised to meet them as soon as possible.

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EPISODE 544

- BY ANNIE

SCENE 1: KNH

Nishaa you are sure na ki tujhe jaana hain ghar...? Agar tabiyat theek nahi hain to kyun phir...??"asked kabir concerned sitting on the bed while she sat at the dressing table getting ready.

Haan na kabir...tu fikar mat kar...i am fine...aur mujhe kuch hua bhi to tu hain na..?!"she said smiling looking at him through the mirror.

Nisha par yaar tu kuch hone ka wait bhi kyun kar rahi hain...agar tabiyat theek nahi hain to kyun zabardasti stress le rahi hain..??"he asked.

Kabir...tune jwalu aur bunty ke gifts leliye..??!"she asked diverting the matter.

Nishaaa...yaar stop diverting the matter...main kuch bol raha hun tujhse..."he replied anxiously.

To kya kabir ...chod na theek hun main...bunty aur jwalu mera wait kar rahe honge na...main unko mana kaise kardu...aur agar tune galti se bhi ghar me mere baare me kisiko bataadiya na dekhlee phir main tera kya haal karungi...!"she said warning him.

Agar tujhe kuch hogaya to...??"he asked with concern.

Kabirr...yaar phir wahi baat...maine bola na I am fine...theek hun main...itni chinta mat kiya kar meri...!!"she said while walking towards him and then cupped his face.

Theek hain phir...agar tujhe kuch hua to mujhse bhi koyi ummeed mat karna..."he said looking at her.

Kabir yaar...gussa kyun ho raha hain...?? Aur chal abb ...time pass mat kar yahan..jitni jaldi jaaynge utni jaldi waapas aayenge...aur phir aane ke baad jitna mujhe daantna hain daant lena..."she said chuckling and pecked his cheek, while he smiled.

Ye kisliye thaa...??"he asked.

Mann kiya bas..."she said and turned around to walk out, but he held her hand before she could walk, which made her turn to him again, and slowly pulling her closer he kissed on her hair and wrapped his arm around her waist, and took her out.

SCENE 2: GANGWAL HOUSE

They both along with Alisha walking behind them, had just entered into the gangwal house with the gifts in kabir's hands and also she walking with a little of his support, and she ran towards lakshmi as soon as she saw her and hugged her tightly surprising her, while he and alisha laughed on seeing her kid-like antics .

Nishuu...kabir...tumdono yahaan...aur Alisha beta..!!"lakshmi exclaimed out of happiness and amazement.

Maa...aap sab ki yaad aayi aur main aagayi...!"said nisha.

Nishu teri tabiyat to theek hain na beta...ye teri shakal itni dull kyun lag rahi hain..??"asked lakshmi out of concern.

Haan maa...main bilkul theek hun...iss duffer ke hote hue mujhe kuch thodi na ho sakta hain..."said nisha acting healthy, while he was astonished at the way she faked it, but still he managed to plaster a fake smile on his face.

Haan...wo baat to hain...ekk dum best hain kabir tere liye..."said lakshmi with a smile as he went towards her and side hugged her.

And as nisha found him glaring at her, she said,

Abb aise kya dekh raha hain tu...?? Thodi tareef kya kardi zyaada hawa me mat ud...!!"said she.

Baaki sab kahaan hain...??"he asked lakshmi.

Sab abhi terrace par baithe hue hain...chalo tum bhi...tum ko dekhkar bohot khush honge sab...!!"said lakshmi and they walked towards the terrace, with nisha and kabir following her and Alisha with lakshmi.

In the way while they walked, she felt that she would fall and clutched to his shirt, while he instantly wrapped both his hands around her in concern and patted her cheek simultaneously , he started worrying, when he noticed that there was a smile spread over her face, and as he understood her prank, he said,

Yaar nisha...are you mad or what..?? mujhe pareshaan karne me kya mazaa aata hain...??"he asked angrily while she winked at him.

Chal na abb...!!"she said sticking out her tongue at him, he knew that it wasn't a prank and that she really felt giddy, and to cover it she acted it to be a prank.

He with his hand around her waist took her to the terrace where they met everyone, and even dolly and saurav were present there. As soon as the cousins saw them, they came and hugged them tightly. Nisha and kabir gave bunty and jwala their gifts,

Wow...kya hain isme...??"asked an excited bunty, while , gift ki kya zaroorat thi..!?"was jwalu's reply.

Abb tumdono jaao...apna gift kholke dekho aur bataao ki kaise lagaa..??!"said kabir with a smile.

Kyun kabir...?? Aaj kal ghar se bohot door rehte ho ..??"asked saurav chuckling.

Kya..?? main kuch samjha nahi ..!!"said kabir.

Nahi...matlab hum jab milne aaye the tum ghar par the hi nahi...nisha ne bola tum late aaoge...?? Nishu se dar lagne lagaa hain kyaa..??"asked saurav again.

Aree haan yaar...bohot daraane lagi hain ye mujhe...raat ko jab tak main bhagwaan ko yaad na karlu...tab tak neend hi nahi aati.."he said making faces, while nisha hit him playfully on his arm.

Kabirr tu naa...chod rehne de..!!"she said irritated at him.

Okay chod diya..! chal ab daadu- daadi ke paas...!!"he said and took her pulling along.

They went to daadu-daadi and took their blessings and later on sat with everyone having some nice talk,

Nishuu...kaise chal raha hain sab kuch beta...?? Ye samose waala ladka pareshaan to nahi karta naa..??"asked viren, while everyone present there laughed.

Arree Samose waale tauji...maine samose khaana chod diya..."said kabir chuckling.

Hush...chalo achchaa hain...ab dukaan ke samoson ke upar se khatraa talaa..."said viren.

Kirti kahaan gayi..?? aaj ghar par nahi hain..??"asked nisha.

Aree nishu...usko fursat kahaan...wo event aane waala hain na...usi ke kaam me lagi hui hain..."said rupan.

Chaloo koyi baat nahi...usse phir kabhi milenge.."said nisha and stood up as she had again started feeling weak.

Kahaan jaa rahi nishu...baith jaa..!!"said ramesh .

Arre papa..wo hume baahar jaana tha..."said kabir making an excuse as he felt her losing her balance and in the correct time caught her before anyone could notice and made her stand up straight, and within a few more minutes they exited out of the house, he made her sit in the passenger's seat in the car and switched on the AC and then sat in the driver's seat rubbing his hand on her palm,

Dekh maine bola tha naa ki nahi jaate hain...?? Tujhe meri baat kabhi sunayi kyun nahi deta..??"he asked angrily as she smiled weakly closing her eyes.

Kuch hua to nahi na kabir..."she uttered faintly.

Kuch hua to nahi na..?? nisha abhi bhi..?? How could you..?? aur kya haalath karna chahti hain tu apni..??"he asked in extreme disbelief.

Kabir stop overreacting yaar..!! bas kar drama queen ...main abhi zinda hoon..."she said which immediately brought a smile on their faces as they remembered the same dialogue which kabir had said a few months ago.

Nisha yaar...main tujhse serious baatein karne ki koshish kar raha hun..aur tujhe mazaak karne ki padi hain..."he said.

Bas kar...abhi car chalaa naa...ghar chalte hain...I feel my head spinning! "said she leaning on his shoulder while he moved his head in frustration and drove back home.

SCENE 3: KIRTI'S OFFICE

Miss.chirpy !!"Summoned samriddh.

Kya hua...??"she asked out of the irritation caused by his and the girl's closeness.

Can you take a picture of mine with adaa?"he asked as she was about to leave his cabin after showing him the files.

Do I look like a photographer to you..?!"she asked.

You need not react like that, he is just asking! If you can't ...just get lost miss.whatever...!"said the girl nearing samriddh.

Listen you...! I am not talking to you...!"said kirti irritated by her closeness to samriddh.

Ahh...attitude!! Keep it with yourself..?! you know who I am..??"said the girl.

Certainly, not!"replied kirti fed up of her, while samriddh was having fun seeing the both fight.

Excuse me! May I know what is happening here..??"asked samriddh interrupting in between.

Shut up...!!"shouted kirti and adaa in unison.

He closed his mouth using both his hands immediately evidencing their fight and kirti's jealousy. He was having a great time seeing them.

Mind you! Do you even know who you are talking too..??"asked adaa.

And why should I know that..??"she asked.

You should know it! And you should know some manners to talk to your show sponsor's would be! Or you might have to face the consequences dearie! "said adaa and kirti's world just stopped after what she heard. She looked at samriddh breaking into unnoticeable tears, and immediately barged off his cabin throwing the files on the floor.

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WRITTEN BY - SHIBU


*Scene 1*
*Kirti's office*


Kirti was sitting in her cabin, remembering Adaa and Samridh's closeness. She was feeling frustrated, but had no means to express her emotions. Rubbing her forehead, she tried to calm herself down. She picked the glass of water that on the table and drank its contents in one gulp. She kept the glass back on the table and sighed. She looked at an envelope and opened it. It was Samridh's pictures, much to her annoyance. Angrily, she threw the envelope in the air. Someone knocked the door, so she mentally calmed herslef and said,Come in It was Rashi.
Rashi- You ok?
Kirti-(faking calmness) Mujhe kya hona hai? Have a seat.
Raashi looked ta her doubtedly and then settled down.
Kirti- Bolo, kya baat hai?
Raashi Boss chahte hai ki Adaa humare show ki...
Kirti-(annoyed) Ab yeh Adaa kahan se aayi beech mein?
Raashi- I don't know... Par I guess Samridh wants Adaa to be he showstopper along with him, and since he is the sponser, we can't go against his wish...
Kirti-(angry) What the Hell!
Raashi-(trying to calm her down) Calm down Kirti...
Kirti- What calm down! Smaridh bas apni manmaani kar raha hai...This is too much...
Raashi-(sad) We can't do anything yaar...Main bhi uss Adaa ko humari showstopper nahi banana chahti,but we have no option..
Kirti-Yes, we have an option, usse dhakke maar ke yahaan se nikaal do..
Raashi-(understanding the reason for her anger) Oh, now I get it... Is someone Jealous of Adaa?
Kirti-(angry) Jealous! How blah! Uss Adaa ki bacchi se 100 times better hoon main... Aur agar tumhare bad news khatam ho gaye ho, toh, please leave me alone...
Raashi- Fine, I'll go... Par apne gusse pe control rakho... Take care...
She left the cabin.
Kirti- Hell! Ab mujhe uss Adaa ki bakwaas adaon ko jhelna padega... I have to tolerate her and design her outfits for the event? No ways...Par koi aur option bhi toh nahi hai..Oof!

*Scene 2*

* La Monte High School *


Jwala, Bunty and Laxmi were walking in the corridor of the school, when Bunty,by mistake, banged into his teacher.
Bunty-(guilty) Sorry Mam...
Laxmi-(to Bunty) Dhyaan kahan rehte hai tera? (to the teacher) Sorry Mam, galti ho gayi...
Teacher- Its ok, par Mam, kisi bacche se itni galtiyan kaise ho sakti hai?
Laxmi- (confused) Matlab?
Rishi called Jwala, so she excused herself and went.
Teacher- Apka beta itna pareshaan karta hai, class ke time sirf pranks sujhtae hai isse... This disturbs the atmosphere of the class... aur padhai? Padhai se toh yeh koso door hai...
Laxmi- Mam, he is trying to change his attitude towards studies...
Teacher-(intruppting her) I know, par aap hi batayiye, kaunsa teacher aapke bete ke pranks ko tolerate kar sakti hai? After all we all are humans..
Laxmi- I am sorry Mam, I assure you ki iss saal aapko koi problem nahi hogi...
Teacher- I hope so...
She went away. Laxmi looked at Bunty angrily.
Laxmi- (angry)yeh kya tha Bunty? Pehle din hi complaint... I was hoping ki aisa kuch naa ho... Main tang aa gayi hoon tumse, har din koi nayi complaint, har din taane... Yeh sab mujhse ab aur nahi bardaasht hota... Ek baat tum samajh lo Bunty, aagese, I don't want to hear complaints about you, get it?
Bunty- (sad) Ok Maa...
Laxmi- Ab apni class mein jaao...
The whole day, Bunty thought about his result and morning scolding. This was usual for him, but today, for some reason, Laxmi's scolding had hurt him. He didn't want to go home, so directly went to Nisha and Kabir's house.
Kabir was thinking about Nisha's ill health when the door bell rang. He opened the door, and smiled.
Kabir- (faking excitement) Arrey saale sahab, aaj Jiju ke gahr kaise aana hua?
Bunt didn't speak, but hugged him and started crying. Kabir was confused.
Kabir- (concerned) Kya hua bacche? RO kyun rahe ho?
Bunty-(still hugging him) Main bahut bura hoon...Maa ko bahut pareshaan akrta hoon...
Kabir broke the hug, wiped his tears and made him sit on the sofa. Bunty was still crying. He gave him some water. In a few minutes Bunty relaxed.
Bunty- Jiju, kya main yahaan kuch der reh sakta hoon?
Kabir- Haan ofcourse... bas main ghar pe phone karke bata deta hoon, ok... Bunty nodded. Kabir called Laxmi and told her that Bunty was with him. She asked him to drop Bunty home early and he agreed. He hanged the call.
Kabir-Bunty, cricket khelega?
Bunty-(sadly) mann nahi hai Jiju...
Kabir- Arrey chal naa yaar, tu jeeta, toh mera new bat tera...
Bunty faked a smile and nodded. Soon, the two played cricket, trying to ignore their emotional turmoil.


*Scene 3*

*Kirti's office*


Kirti was waiting for Samridh to come and check the designs, when she heard a girl scream, "Ouch! She rushed outside to see Adaa sitting on the floor, massaging her right leg and shooting angry loos at the peon.
Adaa- (screaming) What the hell! Aakhein hai yaa button...Dekh nahi sakte kya?
Samridh walked in and looked at the scared poen and the yelling Adaa.
Samridh- Kya hua jaan?
Adaa- This idiot... Usne mujhe dhakka diya...
Peon-(scared) Galti se Sir...
Samridh signed him to go through his eyes. He held Adaa's hand and helped her stand straight. Kirti looked at his hand and felt jealous.
Samridh- Come on Jaan, bewajah gussa kyun karti ho tum? Insaan hai, galti ho jaati hai...
Kirti- (to herslef) Meri galtiyan toh maaf nahi karta,, rude person...
Samridh-(to Adaa) You ok?
Adaa- baby, mere leg mein bahut dard ho raha hai, I can't even walk...Help naa...
Samridh nodded and picked her in his arms. The files in Kirti's hand fell down with a thud, gaining everyone's attention.
Samridh- Kaam pe dhyaan dijiye, Ms. Chirpy...
He walked in his cabin, and soon, ordered the peon to get an ointment.
Kirti-(annoyed, softly) Behave toh aise akr rahi hai, jaise tang tutake haath mein aayi ho... Idiot, Gadhi, Bandariya, Arrogant witch...
Raashi, who was standing next to her giggled
Raashi- I heard you...
Kirti- (to her) Dkeho, mujhe pareshaan mat karo...
She went back to her cabin, and Raashi followed her.
Raashi- Because Samridh aur Adaa ki closeness setum already annoyed ho... Come one Kirti, pyaar mein its normal to be jealous...
Kirti-(angry) Tumhe bada pata hai pyaar ke vaare mein... Oh ofcourse pata hpga, sicne Samrdih tumhara best friend ahi, aur woh toh Love Guru hai, nahi?
Raashi- Kirti, everyone noticed your jealously outside... Control yourself...apne pyaar ko public banayegi kya?
Kirti sighed and sat on the hair.
Kirti- This is getting way more screwed up Raashi... this Adaa is creating problems for me... Samridh aur uski closeness, I just can't take it... Ugh!
She banged her hands on the table in frustration.

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