Simply Magic - Spell # 3 - Rizreet OS - Page 19. - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Fantasia.: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊
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Congrats on the third thread..!!very cute os!!loved it..!!
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Mayur os was very simple yet amazing!!damm loved it..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello sweets, 🤗

So it feels so strange to post an OS after about 4 years. 😲 😳, but as life goes on you tend to drift away to other things, but writing is something that always pulls you back. ❤️

So i attempted an OS on one of the beauties Indian Television every created - Rizwaan and Preet from Sony TV's Pyaar Ko Ho Jaane Do. I tried my best to do justice to them, the verdict will be yours, and also, its my take to add a bit orginality to the age old cliched dori sequences on televisions! 😆

and .. i miss Rizwaan and Preet 💔


RizReet OS
Victories & Defeats

Rizwaan reached home at exact time for a business dinner he had to go to, and hoping Preet would be ready by now, they could leave immediately and reach on time, but on entering the sitting area, the visuals were contary his expectations. Preet was casually sitting with Neeti playing a board game.


"Preet tum abhi tak beth k baatien kar rahi ho? We need to leave remember!", Rizwaan walked in shouting and Preet got startled, "kahan?"


She got up while Neeti quietly looked at the both of them.


"Mehra sahib k ghar dinner pe!',


"haye rabba .. wo aj hai? merey tu zehn main hi nai raha .. bilkul yaad nai raha .. main abhi tyaar ho k ayi", Preet rushed upstairs while neeti shouted from behind, "bhabhi shukar karo dinner aj hai aur bhaiya ne apko ik bht sharmnaak haar se bacha liya merey hathon!.", she grinned


"Neeti business dinner pe jana tha yaad hi nai raha .. main haari nahi hn samjhi! Ishan tum meri jagah khel lo na please, main jaldi se a agyi bus"


"What? main tumhari jagah nai khelon ga tum jaldi tyaar ho kar aao, ajeeb bachon wali harkatien hain ..", Rizwaan frowned while neeti stood up, "kya bhaiya! bhabhi ko atleast 15 mint tu lagen gey .. tab tak khel lo na .. waise bhi bhabhi haar rahi hai ... agr unhain koi jita sakta hai toh ap hi bus", Neeti blinked with sparkling eyes and somewhere her words struck a chord in his heart.


Usey koi jita sakta hai tu ap ho bus?


He smiled painfully and shook his head .. i am going to be the reason of every defeat of her life .. every defeat ..


"Bhaiyaaa!", Neeti shouted and coming back to the world he cleared his throat, "yea yeah .. chalo jaldi karo .. main batata hn kaise jeetety hain", and he sat down to complete the game of ludo.


"mujhe pata tha bhabhi ki haar ka sun k tu ap forun se beth jao gey khelne ..", Neti grinned while Rizwaan gauged the situation off the board, "chal chal ye baad main abi game time hai!"


**


Preet was almost done with her dressing up. she chose a black shalwar suit and everything was perfect except that the zip of her shirt got stuck near her waist, "haye rabba ab is waqt ye kaunsi musibaat par gayi hai",


She quickly adjusted her duppata and earrings and she was all ready except for the stuck zip.


"jab bhi jaldi hoti haina .. tab hi koi na koi siyaapa par jata hai .. ab kya karn iska main", she was struggling with the zip trying to pull it up when a familiar voice made her even more scared.


"Preet ready hui k nai .."


It was her angry husband's voice and he was coming upstairs. "Uff ab ye uper a raha hai main ..


"Preet ready ho gayi?', he entered the room and Preet quickly turned stood with her back against the wall while Rizwaan breathed a sigh of relief seeing her dressed up.


"good! tum ready ho gayi .. chalo jaldi se chalen"


"nai", she said supporting her against the wall more.

"nahi mtlb? Preet sab hamara wait kar rahen hain ..", he looked at her clueless.


"i know .. per tum pehle neche jao aur neeti ko bhejo uper .."


"what? Preet! is waqt tumhari aur neeti ki sisterly talk ka time nai hai .. hum late ..


"Uff Ishaan .. kabhi chup kar k meri baat suno gey? maine kaha na Neeti ko bhejo main 2 minute main ayi bus"


"Neeti kuku k sath walk pe gayi hai .. abi merey samne .. nai a sakti wo Preet .. tum ..


"acha tu Trisha ya Badi mummy ko bhejo phir ..


"Seriously Preet!", Rizwaan was now completely loosing it, "Mujhe nai pata badi mummy aur trisha kahan hain .. trisha tu abi office se bhi nai ayi hai shaiyed .. i seriously am unable to understand k problem kya hai .. tum is waqt ye


"merey dress ki zip band nai ho rahi!",she said it in a spree and looked sideways biting her lip.


Rizwaan was taken a back for a moment, "ye .. is dress ki?jo phena hai wo?", he asked totally confused and preet looked back at him, "nai .. jo tailor k pass para haina uski .. ofcourse is dress ki", she glared at him and that was where it hit Rizwaan that why was she standing with her back resting against the wall.


He looked sideways and realized in what awkward situation had his excessive inisting of knowing the problem had landed him into, and not knowing what else to do, he just started scolding Preet. "ik tu mujhe tumahre dresses ki samjh nai ati .. kyun phenti ho wo sab jo handle nai hota .. kabhi sari phen leti ho, kabhi wo sharara ..ab ye dress phen liya hai . mtlb kya masla hai tum hare kaprpon k sath ..", he spoke hurriedly

"Very good .. aur danton mujhe ta k hum aur late hn .. tum ..


"Mohan merey liye banana milk shake le aaooo"


Just then they heard Neeti's loud voice and Preet breathed a sigh of relief, "Neeti a gayi ! ab please jao gari start karo aur neeti ko uper bhejoo!", she looked at him pleadingly and as if granted a freedom Rizwaan rushed out of the room


**

He was sitting in the car and Preet was here within exact 5 minutes, "chalo chalo chalen .. sab set ho gaya", she sat in the car taking a deep breath


"finally!", Rizwaan said as he pressed the accelerator, and he avoided looking at her still feeling the awkwardness from the zip conversation between them, without realising that Preet was far over it and was looking at him with an endearing smile.


"kya hai .. aisey kya dekh rai ho?", Rizwaan stole a look at her frowning.


"Kuch nai .. neeti bata rahi thi tum ne mujhe game jeetwa di", she smiled still constantly looking at him and Rizwaan fumbled, "haan wo tum itna time laga rahi thi tyaar hone main, maine aisey hi thori si khel li .. aur kitna kharab khelti ho tum .. ludo bhi kheni nai ati tumhain .. wo tu maine ik do ache moves kiye tu game asaani se turn ho gayi", he said quickly taking an unnecessary turn while Preet nodded and looked staright, trying to control her smile .. he was just always there to make her win.


Edited by Fantasia. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Superb kinza Jaan! Aap dil jigar jaan sab Le lo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kinzu... Kya bolu main?? such a sweet conversation between the two! I was grinning and grinning. That cheeky plus awkward side of Preet, the serious plus awkward side of Rizwaan, Aur upar se you have also added the RizReet relationship dynamics so beautifully. 👏



Rizwaanism and his Preetism.. Uff! ❤️



Aur Neeti toh Neeti hai.. 😆 Joker and BhaiyaBhabhi bhakt.. 😆 Thanks Kinzu for taking us back to those moments.. So well written 🤗



Edited by Loveforlife - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ur OS made me feel RizReet's loving moment once again! Loved it ❤️
Rizu thought he'll be the reason of her every defeat😭
Aww! At the end both win! Here, Preet won coz of Rizu. & in PKHJD Rizu won coz of Preet. <3
Write more & revive RizReet Kinzaa🤗
Edited by AS-Rifi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg Kinzuuu.. Yaar tumne toh mujhe riz preet land Mein bhej Diya phirse.. Haaye rabbbaaa..i miss them so much.. Thanks for this treat kinzaaa.. Do keep writing.. I was grinning e to e while reading this.. Thank you thank you thank you.. Aap dil lo bas ab toh.. [L]

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