Song OS thon #2/2 Epilogues by Divanru on pg 144 on 19/5

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#371

@cuteruhi

Superb OS Di

Loved it

U wrote Raman's guilt very beautifully

Raman ki insecurity hamesha usse le doobati h

Like ishu's character

She is strong fighter with beautiful heart

But Raman why didn't you trust her yaar

Want read next part ASAP di

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#372

@devyani bagla

Awesome story

Just because of one misunderstanding they got separated and suffered alot

Waiting for their meeting

Update soon

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Their first kiss,
MU and separation
Nice update

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Pari

@pammi108

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

:) ooh god ...@devyani bagla: very well discribed the emotions...wonderfull job"

Amzing& lovely story:)👏

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#375

@devyani bagla

Awesome story

Just because of one misunderstanding they got separated and suffered alot

Waiting for their meeting

Update soon

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divyaruhi

@divyaruhi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#376

@cutie ruhi di

sweet and lovely update di

i really felt bad for ishu
she suffered a lot

and now raman is feeling for her
he couldn't come out of his insecurity

and that effect fell on ishita

thanks for pm di
please update soon di

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

fantastic update dear

superb

amazing

excellent

fabulous update dear

no words to explain dear

i am more than happy dear

love it so much dear

if possible give subtitles from next part dear please its my humble request dear

toshiji and mihir is too good well understanding raman dear

love raman more in this update he is more than cute dear

his jealous towards his papa was cute dear

ishra first kiss was superb

raman miss ishu so much was lovely dear

because of one smile raman got slap and ishu move away from him too bad but lovely dear

separation make their love so strong

eagerly waiting for ishra face off dear

continue soon dear

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Divanru

@Divanru

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#378

NOTE

First of all thankyou somuch friends for liking and commenting on my OS "Boond Boond".I m thanking you all together ,hope you don't mind .

Secondly I had asked you that I m going to end this thon and most of you didn't replyed so I m ending it .The OS below is almost last OS of this thread but the closing OS will also be written by Raksha aka cutieruhi .

If you want some changes do respond .

Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago

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Divanru

@Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Hello friends I m back with another OS .its based on song "zahnaseeb" suggested by "shri1091".

TUJHE CHAHOON BETHASAH ZAHNASEEB

Ishita iyer the finance manager of PSR industries was waiting for his colleague cum friend Raman Kumar bhall who was Accounts manager of same company ,though their departments are different but still they are good friends .They were of almost same age ,same designation and also were appointed at the sane time and their departments are also connected so they share a very special bond ,avery deep friendship ,actually more than friendship .They like each other but no one was ready to mouth their feelings .Their most of the leisure times are spend together ,they use to share their sorrow ,happiness everything .

Today ishita was waiting patiently as her friend has gone to buy new car .Their car ,yeah their car ,actually they live in different house in different places and also they were newly appointed so they don't have that much savings but raman didn't like the fact that ishita travel alone in buses and autos ,he had his bike but riding a bike 19-20 km daily was too much and also it was not so comfortable as car .So ishra decided that they will buy a car of their ,both of them will give equal moneu for it and will be equal owner of car .

Ishita was having some important work in office so she can't go along with raman to take the delivery of their car.Ishita was so excited but raman was taking ages in coming .

It was five at evening ishita was cursing raman making faces ,but her face lit up when she saw raman coming driving their new car .she jumped in excitement like a kid .Soon raman stopped the ignition and cane out from the car but before he can reach her she ran to him and hugged him ,he was also so happy ,he immediately picked her up and twril her around and take two three round .

I( laughing aloud )- Raman leave me I will fall .

R- no madrasan to day I m so happy ,chalo let's go for a long drive ,then we will have dinner at that famous shere -e- Punjab dhaba and then will return in late night .

I- ok ,just wait I m coming in a while .

Ishita went inside ,grabbed her belongings and ran out .Both of them settled in their seat .

R- ok madam ready ,should I start .

I- chala na ,aise bhaav kya kha rahe ho jaise ki plane uddane wale ho.

R- ( smiling fully )- its more like a plane for us madam ,our first car ,that to with our own money .

I- soon we will buy many more cars .

R( making faces )- many cars ,what will you do with many cars ,travel agency kholni hai kya .

I( hitting him)- dhat ,raman you are so bad .Now drive or I will push you out and we drive by myself .

Raman smiled fully and start the ignition.soon they were roaming aimlessly in the roads of Delhi .Both were so happy ,glancing each other time to time actually stealing glances on each other sneakly .

Zehnaseeb zehanaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zahnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habee
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehanasib

Soon they stopped in a petrol pump ,raman got up from the car and said" ishita you stay here Iand get petrol i m just coming in a while."

I- where are you going leaving me alone .

R- nowhere just coming actually I m very hungry and thirsty too ,so I m going to check if I get something ."

I- okk ,you go .

Ishita was done with taking petrol and was waiting for raman but he was taking time ,ishita looked here and there and saw she was only one customer in there and all the workers were free so everybody was staring at her .she felt bad with their stares ,she tried to do something in her mobile to ignore them.

She was busy in her mobile ,when she heard knock ,she raised her head and saw it was raman .ishita opened the door ,Raman entered the car and spoke teasingly " do you wanna die".

I- what do you mean .

R- ish ,you have closed all the door and glasses ,even AC is also off ,aren't you feeling suffocated.

I(angrily) - where were you ,itna time koi lagata hai .

R- arey hold on madam ,tum to chadhi hi jaa rahi ho .

I- you were not coming ,all the people including manager and workers are starring at me like they hadn't seen a girl ,above all I don't know how to switch on this AC and you are teasing me .

R( sincerely)- I m so sorry sweety ,actually the water was not cold and that man went somewhere to get chilled water and was taking ages to come back .that's why I was late .aur batao kis kus be tumhe ghoora hai unke daanth tod me aata hoon .( now tell which person was starring at you ,I will break their teeth's )

I(smiling ) - no need to do that ,just don't go leaving me .

R- ok as you say .ab chale.

Ishita nodded and both both drove away from there .

Tere sang beete her lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Is kadar hum dono ka bandhna ek raaz hai

Hua ameer, dil gareeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zahnaseeb

Both drove towards the dhaba to have their dinner ,it was about 15km away ,after a drive of just 5-7 km ,the weather became rainy .Raman saw this and spoke ruffling his hairs " shit ishita ,its about to rain we should go back ."

I( making a dirty face )- are you out of mind raman ,we should enjoy in the weather not go back .

Saying so she came out from the car and spoke " Raman you park the car here itself we will walk ".

R- no ways I m not mad like you ,moreover I don't like this rain .got that .

Ishita showed him her tongue and started walking on road and he was following her driving slowly .soon it started raining ,and ishita started dancing in the rain .Raman saw that ,his eyes widened in shock witnessing that she is actually dancing on the road .

R( scolding her )- ishita come in yaar ,koi dekhega to kya kahega .

I- let them see I m enjoying my life .

Saying so she continued her jumping and dancing

Lena dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujhse mujhe kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ki shahar mein
yaara sab intazaam hai

After walking some more she saw a bhutta vendor ,who was closing his stall due to rain ,she ran to him and asked for a bhutta ,he had just roasted one ,he passed it to her ,she asked for one more but he was having only one .she paid for it and ran to raman .ishita passed that to raman ,he denied noticing that she had only one .

Ishita made a baby face and told " you don't like any on my choices ".

R- nothing like that ,its only that you have only one .

I- so what we will share this like we shared this car .

R- ok I will ,but you get inside then .

I- nope I will not but you will come out .

Saying so she dragged him out ,both were struggling ,he was going inside she was pulling him outside the car .In this process he was also drenched .looking to his half drenched condition at last he came out thinking that he cannot win his madasan.She pulled him ,both ran and stood under a huge tree and started eating from the single bhutta .

Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile ghum ki khud chale
Yaara tere mere kharche mein
donon ka hi ek daam hai

After they were done with eating butta ,he told her to get in the car ,she shook her head in negatively and spoke" I will get in only one condition"

R- bolo .

I- you have to dance with me .

R- ishita I m not mad like you ,you dance alone in this rain ,i m going .

Saying so he started walking towards the car when she ran and hugged him from behind ,raman closed his eyes feeling her sudden touch that to this intimate one .she make him turn to her and kept her hand on his should and his hand on her waist ,she held his another hand and started dancing with the rythem of rain .He was looking to her without blinking his eyes ,while ishita was enjoying each and everything ,this rain ,their dance and their proximity .

Ishita saw direct in his eyes ,shared a beautiful eye lock .Ishita closed her eyes tiptoed and pressed her lips on his and started chewing his lower lip gently ,soon he also started responding and took the charge ,they kissed each other hungrily and parted in need of air .After parting raman pulled her in him and spoke " ishita as we have shared this car ,can we share our life too."

Ishita looked at him in disbelief and spoke surprisingly" Raman you ate actually proposing me ".

Raman nodded .

I- omg I thought I will get old without your proposal .

R- I was waiting for suitable time to confess my love .actually you know I had just started my job ,don't have much resources so I was waiting for the time ,when I can fulfill your all demands .

Ishita cupped his face and spoke" raman I love you and will be happy with you ,situation doesn't matters .moreover we both earn that much that we can lead a good life

Saying so she hugged him again ,he also hugged her back and spoke " chalo jab confession ho hi gaya hai to bolo shadi kab karogi".

I- that our parent will decide ,but for now I love you ,love you ,love you .

- I love you too jaan ,but what if our parents didn't agree .

I- we will see then ,now let me live this .i m enjoying this phase and ket me enjoy .we will elop if they didn't agree ,ok.

Raman nodded smilingly and again pulled her for a passionate kiss .

Hona likha tha yoon hi jo hua
Ya hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya

Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb..
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehanaseeb zehnaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zahnaseeb

Hua ameer, dil gareeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb

Zehnasib zahanaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha
Tujhe chahoon betahasha
Zehanseeb

THE END

Thats all for now friends .Hope you like this OS.people I m sending 160+ pms and getting only 110+ likes in my OSs why .I want more.Enjoy reading and do comment .don't forget to hit like buttons

EPILOGUE

Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago