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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Manik is so rude to her
But nandini handled him well
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Sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 2 (b)



Whole day went like this... Nandini was taking good care of Manik.

At night she received call of Dr Aushotosh who told him that According to blood reports Manik is suffering from Pneumonia .

Nandini: Mujhe laga hi tha sir. Ok ab jab disease clear hai to treatment bhi jald hi ho jae ga.

Dr Aushu: I know Nandini and Thanks for your help.

Nandini: No Problem sir.

Nandini after ending that call took a paper and pen and write some medicine name on it.

She gave that paper to 1 servant and asked him to bring that medicine.

After this she went to Manik's room and saw that he was watching something on tv and observed that he was watching it very keenly.

When she turned her face towards Tv she got a shock... coz Manik was watching WWF wrestling with this much interest.

Nandini Blabbers while complaining to her ayiappa: Ayiooo... Ayiappa Abhi bhi is ko wrestling dekhne ki koi zarorat hai...App... app is k mind mein koi seedhi baat kyo nahi dalte haan?

Nandini looked here and there in search of control... She found it on Side table near Manik's bed.

Nandini without making any noise picked that control and turned off that Tv.

Manik turned his face in anger and looked at her...

He asked in anger: Youuu... Tum ne Tv off kyo kiya.

Nandini put her one hand on her hip and with other showed him control and said teasingly: nice choice,,, waise Mr Manik Malhotra abhi anger ki kami hai kya tum mein jo yeh sub dekh rahe ho?

Manik s anger started rising he with his angry face said: O hello ab tum mujhe batao gi k mujhe kya dekhna hai aur kya nahi...Mat bholo tum yahan sirf apni duty kar rahe ho so apni hadd mein raho.

Nandini controlled her anger on listening this she gave a complaining gaze to him... Manik when looked at her face ... for the 1st time in his life he felt guilty on his words.

Manik in his guilty state don't want to said more harsh words to her so he said with averted eyes: Plzzz jao abhi yahan se ... iss se pahle k main kuch aur ghalat bolon.

Nandini placed that control back on that table and left from there.

After she left Manik in frustration looked towards the door and thought: Y... Y I am saying all this to her... Y? (frustrated) Ahhh

Here In Nandini's Room

She sat on her bed and while thinking about Manik's behavior ,,,, she walk down on the memory lane.

Flash Back

Inter collage

Cabir:Arey chal na yaar canteen mein nai nai titliyaan intzar kar rahe hoon gi.

Mukti with excitement: haan aur naye naye gadhey bhi...

Manik : Guys I said na I don't want to go... tum log jao na...

Mukti: Aby teri problem kya hai... ragging karne se is baar tu ne hamein rok diya.aur ab fun k liye bhi tu hamare sath chalna nahi cahtha...

Alia: Ya Manik whats wrong with u?

Manik: Seriously guys ... I don't know... But this year I don't want to do such acts.

Cabir tried to solve this problem: Ok tu kuch mat kar but hamare sath to chal.

Manik reluctantly left with them.

In Canteen

When they reached near Canteen they heard the famous voice of that Jerkshad I mean harshad.

Harshad: Ahhh Baby ko bura laga but kya kare... rule is a rule darling...Ragging karni hai to karni hai.so comeon do your punishment... Just 1 kiss baby.

Girl shouted in anger: No ways (girl said this and turned towards canteen counter. Her back was towards canteen enterence)

Harshad who got angry on hearing this ... grabbed her neck with force and said: Ok then ab jo hoga os ki responsible tum hogi.

All other students were watching all this .

Girl: U jerk leave me.

Harshad ordered his friends to give him chewing gum and then laughed on his own thought.

Girl with horrified expression cried: No... leave me...

Fab 5 was listening all this from outside.

Girl: Plz help...

This cry shakes him from inside. He immediately ran inside and on exact moment grab Harshad's hand in the air.

Harshad turned his face in anger to see who have the guts to hold his hand.

Manik in anger: Leave her.

(consider it as canteen)

Harshad with bad face mockingly said: O look look Manik Malhotra sir aye haan ab isey bachane.

Fab 4 with starange eyes looked at Manik and thought: Isey kya ho gya... abhi yahan ane pe tyar nahi tha... aura b.

Manik: I said leave her.

Harshad: Ahhh itni takleef... teri GF hai kya ?

Manik without giving any other thought on this said: Haan?

On this complete silence prevails in that room.

Harshad : O O Manik Baba ki GF ... Phir to aur bhi maza aye ga.

Manik: Harshad I said leave her.Nahi to

Harshad:Nahi to kya... Manik baba apni Mama se meri complain Karen ga. Hahahahaha.

Manik in anger pulled his hand and released that girl's hairs.

Manik in anger gave a solid punch on harshad's face.

Harshad: Manikkk U ... But on same time Principal came there and shouted: Yeh kya ho raha hai yahan...

That girl when heard Principal's voice she with lowered head left from

Flashback Ends

A smile came on Nandini's face when she remembered this scene.

Her Thoughts

Bina soche Bina samjhe kitni jaldi gusey mein a jata hai... But agar 1st time pe is ka yeh gusa na hota... to... Main bhi...(she left her thought incomplete)

Nandini saw the time and after gathering her courage she again moved towards that lion's den.

When she entered in his room.she got the happiest shock of her life...

His smiling face...He was looking just like a cute kid while smiling.

She turned her face and looked at the source of that smile ... and a smile came on her own face.

She in surprise said in loud voice: Cartoons ... Manik tum cartoons dekh rahe ho.

Manik while stretching his teeth said: ab bahir to ja nahi sakta to yehi dekhon ga na.

Nandini with a smile: Good Boy... mujhe pahle pata hota k tumhe cartoon pasand han to main kafi time pahle tumhe cartoons laga deti( at the end she said while hiding her smile).

Manik with irritated face: Ha ...Ha...Haa Very Funny.

Nandini with her professional tone: Acha Manik tell me tumhe temperature k sath kahen pain to nahi ho raha?

Manik with irritated face: Ho rahe hai na ... jab se tum aye ho tab se merey sar mein bohat pain ho rahe hai.

Nandini after getting this tuant replied in same manner: Oh wooo ...wo to mujhe lagta hai tumhara by born defect hai... Main os k ilawa poch rahe hoon .plz seriously jawab do na.

Manik: No

Nandini: Ok

After this manik gets the exact medicine to cure his disease and with this medicine Nandini's care was like cherry on the cake.

Time passes like this and Manik's health getting better day by day.

Nandini daily spent her whole night in Manik's Room while performing her duty of a doc. And due to this constant care Manik started recovering very fast.

Now Nandini only gave Manik's Medicine to him in night and left to her room as he was feeling better.


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Note : very less response this time... r u people not interested anymore... plz feel free to tell me... But dont do this yaar


Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiamalhotra

Update soon...
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😊 thanks for your wait but thora time lage ga... but pakka jaldi update karti hoon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

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I want Update. .
Curious Waiting for update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
angry manik...but nandu ki care se healing...
kitna ladte hein dono..stubborn kahike..
flashback wala part was awesome...
bina dekhe manik saved nandu..
thts too cute..
wonderful update..
superb...
awesome..
gussa maat ho yaar api..
plz keep writing...
stay blessed..
waiting for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...manik is so cute.,.can't wait for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it
waiting for next
thank for pm

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