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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkytekwani

interesting concept bachaaa...




Thank you Di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehalokwani200

nice concept

and confusing too
waiting update soon
do pm me




Thank you Sneha for you comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mgvd

it's a very different concept..
eager to read it..update soon



Thanxieee... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi buddies...😊

How many of you are angry on me for not updating???? Do not be angry buddies you all know my situation right??? BDW right now I am travelling so I thought of utilizing this time in doing some good task so I wrote this update and present to you all... 😊😊 (You know I updated it in bus... I am such a crazy na????) BDW Am I said I missed you all?????

No I did not owww that's really bad of me okay so BUDDIES I MISSED YOU ALL... And Jalpa, Aish, Moni di, Pinky di and Hina I missed you all so so so so much and Rivanah I do not miss you... Because we are meeting daily so and yeah this update is dedicate to you Jalpa, Aish, Moni di, Pinky di, Hina and Rivanah... 😊

Okay enough of this all now see surprise below... (Hehe 😃 surprise though I told you that I am presenting update...)

SHOT ONE

Since few days Taani keep herself lock in her room and she keep herself busy in sketching. After sketching she will write random thought which will come in her mind and then will stick that sketch on her room's wall.

If anyone from family member excluding Swayam will try to communicate to her she will either burst out her anger on that person or will just leave from there without replying anything and in case of Swayam she'll give only short one. And this behavior of her is now getting on every one's nerve but they try best to avoid being angry on her as they know her childhood best friend Vishesh whom she proposed have rejected her which have broken her heart so she is behaving like that.

But one morning Jayshree loose her control on her anger as she asked Taani to join them for breakfast but she refused saying she'll have it her later in her room and due to motherly care and concern Jayshree bring breakfast dish in her room and

Jayshree: Taani beta see I've made your favorite aloo paratha eat this beta...

Taani: (Busy in sketching) hmmm...

Jayshree: Beta eat this now please...

Taani: What maa???? I am no more a kid I'll eat whenever I feel like eating right now I am not hungry and even why you showing of your care for me I know you only like too feed Bhai...

After hearing this from Taani first Jayshree stunned because never ever none of family member have treated Taani in different way as they do not believe in gender discrimination but soon Taani's current situation come into her mind and she understood that she is blabbering such rubbish just because she is not in mood so she think of pacifying her mood and she come to Taani and take her sketch book and pencil from her hand she keep it on bed and then she caresses Taani's hair and take a morsel of aloo paratha and speak

Jayshree: Aww that make my princess angry... Sorry Princess now today I'll make my princess eats her breakfast.


By saying so she tries to feed Taani but this touch wrong nerve of Taani and she lash out her anger she jerk Jayshree's hand which is in front of her lips and she took dish from Jayshree's hand and throw on floor and broken into small small pieces and this act of Taani correctly touch Jayshree's anger so directly slapped Taani hard on her chick and goes out from there while saying

Jayshree: I want this room spotless clean within twenty minutes which means even no rubbish sketches on wall.

After Jayshree leave from there Taani angrily remove each and every sketches from wall and torn them and later she hurriedly in anger tries to clean surface but at last a piece of glass pierce her leg which cause her pain but she choose to keep mum and after cleaning room she went down and come in front of Swayam and speak

Taani: Bhai I am going out... (But in loud tone so other person too can heard)

After completing her sentence she leaves from there before anyone can ask her anything and while living hall she bang living hall's door as hard as she can taking out her anger on door.

Taani left from home and started walking on random path after a while she stop and see her surrounding and she realize that she is standing in bus stop and she do not have any one near to burst out her anger and this is irritating her after a while she see empty place on bus and randomly she wrote on it

"Thinking back to old memories and wishing you could change the past... 😭"

Unaware of fact that a random thought of her on bus going to change her life she leave from there to another place where she can find peace of mind...

So buddies this one is first shot... Howz it???? Hope you all like it????

Please do leave your feedback whether positive or negative... And last but not least do not forget to hit like...

Argh again I forget ...

I forget to mention that next shot will be dedicated to first commenter and last commenter... Please you all do not forget to hit like and comment...

Edited by Princess_Pri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Wow awsm update taano Asia beahave kyu
Kar rhi hain nice next update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awesome update..
taani is angry..
update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Interesting start
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
wow really awesum.whats instored for taani.tani&vishesh&rejection.TYSM for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Aww priyu baby sis even i am missing u so very much ... but hope u r doing well n

Thank u so much for dedicating this part to me 🤗 .. u r really sweetheart sis
Coming to d story ...
Story is just sooo interesting n so is taani'S character ..
Loved the plot and shot 1 ..
Its really nice yaar 👏
⭐️

Taani proposed vishesh n he rejected ...he dont even deserve her ..
M sure rey will mend taani'S broken heart...

Taani's character is amazing ..
Though i didnt like her behaviour at first but then after understanding her pov n her pain
She has all ryt to get angry
She seems to be lost in her own world
I know u will justify her acts in the upcoming udates .. .i will wait 4 tht

But its really nice n so interesting ...
She sketch n write her thoughts .. amazing ...
I loved what she wrote on d bus ..
It seems so interesting story

please UPDATE ASAP..
I Really want to read it ..
😳

Love u a lot my sweet dear sis
Take care
Keep smiling always 😊
Miss u a lot priyu ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Woowww thanks alot for dedicating shot to me...
Yu r d best yu know yu very well know how to make things turn on yur side and how to make melt heart so My heart is melted now and yu r forgiven...
I missed yur update so so so so so much so I did dat all drama and even as per.my opinion yu need a lil break... So I am happy dat yu r trying follow my advices...
Come to update as usual yu rock gal just amazing each and every word are amazing...
Either it Taani's broken heart gal behaviour or spoiled child behaviour or a blaming gal all r good...
Though Jayshree's aka Taani's ma's behaviour is amazing the way she tries to pamper her,console her and moreover she teach her LESSON that ti on needed time is amazing...
And Vishesh do I need to say any thing regarding him he is brainless idiot jerk who lost a gem by rejecting Taani...
Swayam's part is too less I miss Taayam's bonding which yu'd described in other stories...
Like to read next part with Taayam's bonding...
Argh I forget to mention dat thanks for pm and yeah I am waiting for REY's entry...
Update next part soon...
Love yu so so so so much gonna miss yu as yu are not here...

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