IshRa OS || Crave - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Atii 😳 😳 OMFG HOW DID YOU DO THAT? You wrote that in record breaking speed and WOW, you did such a freaking good job out of it ☺️ You gave everything we would crave to see. Longing, jealousy, sassy stuff, and all that our SATWIK IshRa never feel or do.

FIRST OF ALL , I LOVE how you incorporated the beauty spots over and over I HAD TO SAY THAT. 😆😳

Your way of subtly but very firmly clarifying our common hate for the dracula and Raman's annoyance at her was a treat to read.

What I loved most apart from the amazingly hot scene you wrote ( which I will get to ) was the conversation IshRa had. I love how Ishita came in confidently and acted like another person, and not like Ishita who wouldn't want to hurt Raman. It seemed like she instigated so that Raman would say something to irk and shut Ashok up for good. AND THAT DIALOGUE BETWEEN THEM WAS BANG ON.😎

And the best part is of course when she's pulled inside a corner by GREEN Raman waiting to claim her. I am in awe of how well you've clearly put out how territorial IshRa are for each other. How their possessiveness is the first sign of how much they love each other. In very few words between them, they vent the frustration to each other and then got to expressing it.

I am not someone who writes a lot of passionate moments, but I've ready many people's work and it's a hard feat to write such moments with such subtlety that even when you write lust, mentioning that it is lust, it comes across as soulful and palpable love.

You are an amazing writer, brilliant at composing communication and repartee...and your subtle way of putting forth the essence of what you want to say through the piece you wrote is impeccable Atii. I wish you write a lot more regularly.

🤗 Thanks for the mention and for this wonderful read.

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123

lovly dear.

Originally posted by: fSharm

Amazing yar...

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Omgf Atti simply brilliant ..
Raw, intense, passionate... Wow loved it
Their mini rendezvous was hot .. Tastefully written with little flirtations ...without going overboard . Him asking her to wear short dresses ... 14 beauty spots Now that was a killer .. You exceeded Monica ..
The yearning part was so good ..beautifully explained
The best the entire os just based on segments .. Wow hats off to you . You are a brilliant writer

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Hawwt

Awesome os...loved

Ishralicious

The yearning...the way he answered back and their mini rendezvous with each other...just perfect

Brilliantly written

Too good

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Atiii... That was HOT. 😳 when I read your discussion about office romance .. with Krishy and Anju never thought you will come up with this but really loved this OS. 😳 ishra awww loved there emotions.. there feelings.. there desire for each other beautifully described Atiii 👏

Great job hope you come up with more such write up's it will be treat for ishra fans .. once again great job Atiii 🤗