Kuch Yadein bachpan ki poem

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kuch Yadein bachpan ki , Jo us angan mein chooti thi
Inti Purani Jise , mein bhi Bhool bethi thi .


Wapis ake Deka aj , wahi sawera wahi sanj
Yadon ki gathri bhi thi wahi Dabi , mien Khola toh bikhar padi


Khoya bachpan thama gayi ,mere Ghar ko Mujhe Lauta gayi Ansu Palko pe aur Bholi muskan mere labon pe basa gayi
BR]
Kilkariyein Meri Jese ab bhi yahan gungti hain
Woh tuti Gudiya Meri Dekho ab bhi Mujhe doondhti hain

Intezar darwazein per ab bhi kabhi karti hoon , Aj phir Khelna hain papa , un toffies ko ab bhi miss karti hoon

Chalo aj phir chupti hoon ma , Tum phir doond Lena
Doond logi Na ma ? Kahin Khood na chup Jana

Teri bindi aj Meine lagayi hain
Kash Tum Dekh pati ma Teri Suman aj ghar laut Ayi hain BR]
Heya how was it?

Btw I loved how Shravan kept on nodding



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.👏
That was INCREDIBLE.

I really loved what you wrote. It's absolutely beautiful.

And yes I loved Shravan today too. He was clearly upset by her pain as well. He just wanted to console her but he also knew that she needed to have her moment and reminisce about the good ol'days.

At the end, how he went to go console her. It was so perfectly timed. And so real. Like how we behave when someone we love is really hurt, we let them speak and get their pain out, but when they reach a point where they burst out, we immediately rush to them. That's what Shravan did. And I LOVED THAT because it was kept so real and not OTT.

This show is just...❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beauty14

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wow.👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">That was INCREDIBLE.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I really loved what you wrote. It'sabsolutelybeautiful.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And yes I loved Shravan today too. He was clearly upset by her pain as well. He just wanted to console her but he also knew that she needed to have her moment and reminisce about the good ol'days.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">At the end, how he went to go console her. It was so perfectly timed. And so real. Like how we behave when someone we love is really hurt, we let them speak and get their pain out, but when they reach a point where they burst out, weimmediatelyrush to them. That's what Shravan did. And I LOVED THAT because it was kept so real and not OTT.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This show is just...❤️</font>



Ya that why I love this show
Tnx 4 replying
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u 😳

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