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Chapter 22

Rahul's friends pulled him aside and accused him of not enjoying the party to its full.

Friend1~ "Kya rahul, rockstar kaisa agar apni hi party mein alag jaan nahi daali... Lagta hai iska asli rockstar roop aise bahar nahi aayega..." he signals another friend in their group.

Friend2~ "Sahi kaha. Chal bhai, asli rockstar party mein life kaise daalte hai aaj sabko dikha de!" he passed a glass of bhang milk to rahul.

Rahul tried to resist but his friends insisted and he had to drink it. Two glasses later, the effects started to show. He jumped on the stage with his four friends, took the mic, and addressed to everyone in filmy style.

Rahul~ "Friends, family... and friends! Sab logo ne itna enjoy kiya... phir bhi kuch log hai... jo party mein... parti-cipate hi nahi kar rahe hain!" pausing in between sentences.

Friends in chorus "Nahi kar rahe hain!"

Rahul~ "Main sikha ta hoon ki party mein life kaise daalte hain... Par meri ek shart hai... main akela nahi karoonga... mujhe ek partner chahiye... jisko main choose karronga... To usko mere saath... parti-cipate karna padega!"

Friends in chorus "Karna padega!"

Raj wondered what is wrong with rahul when Nikhil informed that rahul's friends had forced him to drink the milk containing bhang. Dadi-Dada ji, Sonali, Raj, Maanvi felt a little concerned for rahul but there was nothing they could do. Surely rahul will do as he wishes until the effects of bhang wears off.

Rahul~ "Mere saath..." pointing his finger and running it through the crowd, he seeked only one person and soon he found her. "Tum dogi mera saath!" pointing straight at maanvi.

Maanvi eyes widened "Main? Main dance nahi karoongi. Mujhe dance nahi aata." She shook her head.

Rahul grinned "Aaj tum to kya, tumhari jooti bhi nachegi!"

Maanvi stared at him for a moment, then turned around to try and leave but payal's group and rahul's group surrounded her. DJ plays "Manma emotion jaage re" and rahul starts dancing with his four friends who were with him on stage.

~~Goriya re choriya re (x2) //sweet dance moves by rahul and his friends
Tera jalwa dekha toh dil huaa Milkha
Badi tez bhaage re..
Manma emotion jaage re, Manma emotion jaage...(x2)

Dil jagah se hil gaya re (x2) //rahul jumps from stage, goes towards maanvi
Tukdo mein nikla re dil ka chilka //dances around her
Tune phenka khaa ke re
Manma emotion jaage re, Manma emotion jaage...(x2)

Saiyaan.. mera desi typical saiyan //pulls her in his arms and dances with her
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya
thaiya daiya daiya
Mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya, thaiya saiyan saiyan

O mere saiyaan, saiyaan saiyaan! saiyaan.. saiyaan..

Dil ki phansi hai naiyaa majdhaar mein //maanvi falls under charming spell of rahul
Sun le vistaar mein //maanvi continues to dance with him
Ho lut gaya pyaar mein
Ye toh bata de mere jazbaat ka
Itna kam rate kyun hai tere bazaar mein

Karke waada, kyun na aayi (x2)
Huaa dil ka jagrata
Halka-phulka sa dhokha kha ke
Manma emotion jaage re, Manma emotion jaage...(x2)

(Rap) //maanvi realize what she was doing
Tu jo mila mujhe mohalle ke mod pe //rahul runs back up the stage and does his cool moves
Express highway ke baaju wali road pe
Badtameez gaadi roki seeti maari
Mujhe chheda kiya mujhko ishara
Ashleel aada tedha
Dekha muda badha bola
Lakht-e-jigar mast figure
Aake idhar beth jaa
Baaju waali seat khaali, aaja beth!

Saiyaan.. mera desi typical saiyan //payal joins rahul on stage and dances
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya, thaiya daiya daiya

Mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya, thaiya saiyan saiyan thaiya~~

Crowd breaks into cheers as song ends. Dadi ji and Sonali comes to maanvi and whispers something to her. Determined, maanvi heads towards DJ and asks him to play the song "Chittiyaan kalaiyaan". She steps on the stage, wraps her pallu around her waist, and as the tune from the song begins, payal and her friends joins behind her.

~~Kalaiyaan... Kalaiyaan... //Maanvi and girls walks to the center of stage

Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke... //starts dancing
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke (x3)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de//Maanvi goes to rahul and dances around him
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho..) (x2)
(chittiyaan kalaiyan means: white wrists)

Yeah //Rahul and boys joins maanvi and girls
You're my darling angel baby
White kalaiyan drives me crazy
Shiney eyes say glitt glitt glittery
You're the light that makes me go hazy (x2)

Oh mainu chadhiya hai rang rang //rahul and maanvi romances
Main khwabaan de sang sang aaj ud'di phiran
Main saari raat ud'di phiran
Oh badle jindadi de rang dhang
Meri neendein bhi tang tang, aaj ud'di phiran
Main saari raat ud'di phiran

Mann jaa ve... gulabi chunni diva de
Mann jaa ve... colourful chudi pavaa de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho)

Ghumde phirde saare chitiyaan milgiyan
Chittiyaan kalaaiyan ve (kalaaiyan ve..)
Tere hathaan nu chumda rehnda
Kam tu lai laiyaan, oh chittiyaan ve
(oh chittiyaan ve!)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve...
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho...)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve, Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho...)~~

Performace ends and everyone applauds for them. Everyone moves on to snacks and playing with colors again. Raj meets with producers and sponsorers, who praise the party and its highlights. Raj informs them that this was all done by payal and they seemed impressed.

Raj~ "Please enjoy yourselves, I need to attend to my other guests as well."

Producer1~ "Please, go ahead. Thank you for inviting us. This is a wonderful family party. Makes us feel like home, we do like such personal gestures every once a while."

Raj~ "Thank you. Please continue. I'll be back after attending my other guests."

Raj leaves to attend other guests while producers discuss about extending their album with additional premium content that would be great to promote and increase the demand for new albums.

Avanti was sulking around rahul and maanvi as usual, waiting to find an opportunity to jump between them. Rahul maanvi and payal were receiving lot of praises from the guests, needless that rahul may not remember some of it as he was still under bhang's effect.

Sonali comes to them "Maanvi, rahul ko thoda rest karna chahiye. Usko bhang chadi hui hai aur tum bhi thodi thaki hui lag rahi ho. Why don't you both go and take rest, I will send Chotu with snacks to your room."

Payal~ "Mausi ji, you are right. Me and Nikhil will escort them and be back soon."

With Sonali's permission, payal and Nikhil escorts them back to their room. Payal notices someone lurking around rahul since the start of the party which she didn't like. Payal asks Nikhil to go ahead; she will join in a second.

Payal walks towards Avanti and confronts her "Hi. Sorry I didn't get your name. Who are you?"

Avanti~ "Hi. You don't know me?" in surprised tone. "I m Avanti Talwar, Nisha's best friend. She invited me. I m sort of a family member to sabarwals, that is why little surprised that you don't know me."

Payal~ "Ah, I have heard about you. Nice to meet you."

Avanti~ "Nice to meet you too payal. The party is really nice, everyone is so impressed!"

Payal~ "Seems to me that you didn't like my party."

Avanti~ "What? I love your party. It is absolutely great!" fakes smile.

Payal~ "Really? Then how come you are here and not out there? Whole party I noticed you following around rahul and try to talk to him when he was alone. I know you are his ex. But he is happily married to the person he loves, so why would his ex stalk him around after what happened between you and him. Any woman with self-respect would get over the person who left them on the wedding day to marry someone else. But not you, how very curious."

Payal's words pressed the right points which brought the true face of evil Avanti up front.

Avanti~ "How dare you!? Tum hoti kaun ho mere personal matters mein bolne wali? Mere aur rahul ke beech mein kya hua kya nahi, tumhe kya pata. Rahul abhi bhi mere liye feel karta hai and I know it! Uss maanvi ne rahul ko fasaya hai, mujhse cheena hai! Main apne rahul ko maanvi ke changul se bachaungi!" she lets her rage and obsession towards rahul out in front of payal.

Payal~ "I m a people person and I know a sick psycho person when I see one. Tum rahul ki pasand kabhi ho hi nahi sakti. Main apne bhai ko bahaut ache se jaanti hoon aur wo sirf maanvi se pyaar karta hai. Tum unn fan girls mein se ho jo kisi superstar ko leke itni obsessive ho jaati hain aur ye sochne lagti hai ki wo sirf unse pyaar karta hai. There are nice psychiatrists who can treat people like you." Talking to her in perfect calm manner.

Avanti~ "Tumne mujhe pagal kaha?! Tum jaanti nahi ho ki main kaun hoon. Mere aur rahul ke beech mein jo bhi aayega main usko chodungi nahi. You wait and watch! Avanti Talwar ki insult karne wale ka main kya karti hoon." She threatens payal and leaves.

Payal smiles as she knows how to deal with evil psychopaths like her. Payal heads back to rahul maanvi's room to check up on them before re-joining the party.


Edited by sweetcathy29 - 9 years ago
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Hey cathy wat a beautiful episode👏👏...was busy with my studies so could not be online...read all ur 3 chps in one go just loved it😃😃...payal answer to avanti was mind-blowing👏👏...
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Posted: 9 years ago
That is exact advice someone need to give Avanti.
Another great update. Now a days i am more eagerly wait for your and sagi's update than the episode.
👏
Edited by aban1 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolarchu

Hey cathy wat a beautiful episode👏👏...was busy with my studies so could not be online...read all ur 3 chps in one go just loved it😃😃...payal answer to avanti was mind-blowing👏👏...

I had trouble trying to paint payal as calm minded person
that can teach avanti her place
sure I had to think it through
as my hate for avanti character easily overwhelms my emotions while writing
😕
glad u liked it
😳
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Originally posted by: aban1

That is exact advice someone need to give Avanti.

Another great update. Now a days i am more eagerly wait for your and sagi's update than the episode.
👏

I wait for sagi's update as well
and wait for the time I set to post next chapters of my FF as well
thank you for taking time to read my FF
I try to keep it to the original idea of music based love story
hope I do it justice
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Posted: 9 years ago
haaayyyeee boys v/s girls wala dance was awesome...i loved their moments on chitthiya kalaiyyaan ve...could feel the romance


i loved rahul's dioalogue

aaaj tum toh kya tumhari jooti bhi nachegi LOL
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BRAVO payal outrightedly insulted the bitch

way to go payal

avanti will hate her for a long time to come lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. ..
Loved the entire chapter. ..
Thanks for pm dear. ...
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

BRAVO payal outrightedly insulted the bitch

way to go payal

avanti will hate her for a long time to come lol

avanti may hate payal but she hates maanvi little bit more
avanti nisha shaleen are all out to get payal first
since she is spoiling all their plans
but will they succeed
or will payal have help in showing them their right place
😆😃

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