Okay truth be said I didn't want to come here, it feels so god damn final...like a final farewell only to never see anything of this Angel ever again. Seesh, I have been fraternizing with a fictional character yet again and now letting go is so painful. When I had first read the prologue, I had appreciated the tone of this story but never in my wild dreams had I thought I'd come to love it the way I am loving it now. Thank you before anything else for taking all efforts and writing it down for all of us...it would be a sheer tragedy of sorts if we wouldn't have been introduced to such amazing narrative.
Anyways enough of the mush. I loved the transition of this entire finale...from a grim gory one to the beautiful colored picture that you handed to us in the end. My mind really had stopped working the second I read Sanskaar was shot...before that one earth shattering instance I had my dose of adrenaline junk in me but that one moment and it went all down. I am a sucker for angst, I love tragic endings, I really dig incomplete love stories for some reasons but this one was too pure to have let go slipping in the oblivion. Maddy's utter helplessness, to Swara's ordeal and vindication of the Durga Prasad Maheshwari and a heart breaking loss of Gabriel, no, Swara's Sanskaar! I honestly didn't know where to place my bets...it was a whirlwind of emotions and I felt scattered...but even there you offered us moments of pure, unadulterated bliss and joy.
When Swara opened her camcorder for a final look on her man, it was bitter-sweet. It didn't feel right somehow yet was perfect. Poor Bozo to have seen Swara at her worst...she was such a hollow shell of the former happy self...damn you di! I felt so damn uneasy at that description as if "my" life had slipped out of my hands and there was nothing to hold it back and then that devastated look of hers in the cemetery! Honestly I wanted to smack that Sanskaar and maybe hack him into two for bringing that madness upon them. Blithering idiot of the highest order, utter fool and what not. Maddy was absolutely when he said his theory of light and dark was nothing short of royal pain and ear-splitting rant. I am so sure it was because his brother was out of the hospital that he kept his hands fisted to himself otherwise he would have beaten him into a pulp for making his bestie Shona go through that pain in the first place. Seriously for a guy all so bright and sharp he behaves as a lunatic when it comes to matter of the heart. Urrh!!!! I wanted to get in there and smack him hard with my Steve Madden ka joota. He deserves rotten eggs and tomatoes as well with all sort of vile arthropods and annelids being dumped over him. Gadha kahin ka!
But thank god sanity prevailed and he waited for her call, after all he is Swara's angel on speed dial!! And they met and yes! This was a happy ending...man that was intense. Well all is well that indeed ends well..or to quote Maddy here..ends being supremely fantastic and marvelous!!! The epilogue was sweet...in fact too sweet and to my utter surprise I did enjoy a completely romantic and fluffy stuff!!1 Waah...that is progress for me! Di I have no more words left with me that can do justice to what you have created but here is poem by Zindagi that I'd like to quote as it simply reminds me of this one beautiful stuff that I will hold for long!
Wo ladki tanha akeli thi...
Naa dost the uske aur naa koi saheli thi
Zindagi uski khud hi ek paheli thi
Kuch toh kashish thi usmein
Jo hame uski taraf rijhaati thi
Uski har baat dil ko bahot bhaati thi
Aaj mausam kuch iss kadar badla hai
Ussi seher mein woh ladka hai
Daastone ki maane toh uski bhi ek kahani thi
Ek ladki thi sheher mein jo uski deewani thi
Rooh se rooh ka nata tha dono ka
Zindagi aur maut toh bas bemaani thi.
Thank you once again di! I will always cherish this happy, happy ride! Thank you!
Edited by Meself - 9 years ago
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