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Posted: 9 years ago
woowww plsss continueee thisss storyy!
I really wannt to know how and when they will meet..some awesome emotional cum romantic reunion!

And this Songg! HAillaaa! <3 <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome one ramya
The moment she sang for him and wore his gifted saree was best
Loved it totally
A very cute love story baby
Amazing it was
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey friends

Firstly I am not back on this forum; I just came to keep my promise to few of my friends on forum.

I had committed long back to Pooja di, Ashmi , Anisha that I will write for this song OSthon.

Hope you all like it

Thank you pooja di for sending pm on my behalf


Sapna

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A person often meets his fate on the road he took to avoid it. Raman and Ishita were meant to be together, it was their fate. How hard they tried not to fell for each other but it was like whole universe was conspiring and wanted them to be together. People say man can control his destiny but not his fate. Destiny is like an opportunity where you could turn right or left but fate is a one way street. We can fight with our destiny, but our fate is sealed, so was theirs.

Raman Kumar Bhalla 28 years old, CEO of PSR industries was the most eligible bachelor in town. He was every girl dream. But due to a failed relationship in his college with his ex girlfriend Shagun he lost faith in love. Her betrayal made him ruthless and hard hearted. Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla wanted him to get over this and move on in his life. After a weeklong of emotional blackmailing, he finally agreed to get married to a girl of his parent's choice.

On the other hand, Ishita Iyer was a Tamilian Brahmin belonging to a very conservative family. Her parents wanted her to get married at the young age of 23 years. She was in final year of BDS and wanted to continue her education, live her life as a free bird but it was not possible in her orthodox family. With no other option she accepted first proposal which came for her. Iyer's and Bhalla's were close friends as both had worked in same office. They wanted their children to settle together as they were perfect for each other.

Little did they both knew, before marriage when they met discussed each other problem and finally both agreed for marriage but their parents didn't knew it was marriage of agreement. Raman and Ishita accepted this marriage on the condition that none will interfere in other's life. According to law, they need to stay together for 6 months, after that they will part away with mutual consent. Thus Ishita could continue her education away from her family while Raman would also fulfill his parents wish.

But god had planned something else for them. Slowly equation between them changed. From strangers they became friends then companion and at last lovers. It was something they had no control over. Slowly they started depending on each other, becoming other confidante. Their day starts and ends with each other talk. You find love where you least expect, same happened with them.

Lafzon se jo tha pare , Khaalipan ko jo bhare

that, which was beyond words, which filled the emptiness,


Kuchh to tha tere mere darmiyaan, Rishte ko kya mod doon

something was there between you and me.. what turn should I give to this relation,


Naata yeh ab tod doon, Ya phir yoon hi chhod doon, darmiyaaan

should I break this relation, or should I leave it, in between-


Benaam rishta wo.. Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan, darmiyan

that nameless relationship, which makes (you and me) restless,
which cannot be described (in words),


5 months into marriage, one such day, like their daily routine Ishita was making breakfast for him.

R - Ishita yar ... Jaldi I'm getting late. Whats taking so long.

I - Arre baba ... 5 more mins

R- You are saying this from last 10 mins. What are you making?

Ishita came with a dish in her hands.

I - Hold your breath. Here I present Aloo ke Paranthe made by me.

She said raising her hands in air

R - Oh baap re ... Aloo ke Parathe. God save me today.

I - What did you say

R - Nothing . Let me taste.

She sat next to him waiting for him to reply but he was eating silently. Deep inside, he was relishing the flavor of paranthe but maintained a stern look on his face.

When he didn't spoke anything for long she broke the silence.

I - So how's it

R - Hmm

I - What hmm... kuch bolo toh

R - Theek hai
He was enjoying teasing her.

I - Theek bas ... Raman I made this with so hard work and you are saying theek

R - Hard work Really

I - How mean... Haslo Haslo
Few days more.. Then I won't be there.. Tab haste rehna akele akele

She stood up to leave when he pulled her and she landed in his lap. She was sitting with cute pout.

I - Kya .. Let me go

R - Kyun

I - Kyunki ek din toh mujhe jana hai

There was a sudden silence. They shared a deep eye lock thats when her phone rang and she stood up to receive it.


Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan..*

in between, in between..
there was something in between you and me..


Oh it's a special feeling


These moments between us


How will I live without you



Few days later, Raman returned from office and found his whole house empty. Mr. and Mrs. along with Romi Simmi had gone for late night matinee show while Ishita was stuck in some emergency. Ishita entered their house around 9 in night and found whole house dark. She headed to their room and saw Raman lying on bed with closed eyes. He had not even changed.

She guessing something wrong with him; sat next to him and touched his forehead. Sensing someone near him, he immediately opened his eyes.

R - Ishita . Tum kab aayi

Ishita ignored his words - What happened to you.

R - I m fine. Just feeling a little tired.

I - I can see that.
She opened drawer from their side table and took out thermometer.

I - Open your mouth

R - Ishita it's not needed.

I - I am not asking you. Just open your mouth.

He opened his mouth. They were waiting for the reading while he was looking at her with cute pout but her eyes were only fixed on thermometer. He smiled at her concern for him.

The moment it beeped she carefully took it out and read it. It was 101.5

I - See it yourself. Its 101.5 and what were u saying. I m fine it's not needed. Now just sit here I m coming in few minutes

He chuckled seeing her in full JKR mode. She left after helping him change and tucking him well in bed. Sometime later she came back with Khichdi and fresh juice for him.

She was feeding him while he was making facing eating it. He wanted to refuse but then he realized it was of no use arguing with her then. Later she wiped his mouth with napkin and gave him medicine. He lied while she pressed his head massaging his temples giving him much needed comfort and relaxation.

R - Bas Ishita I m fine Relax now. You have come from clinic too.

I - Shut up and sleep. You never take care of yourself. Always work and work. How many times I have you to take rest. But no, you work as if you will complete all of it in one day.

R - Bas Bas JKR. Itna bhi khayaal mat rakho ki tumhari aadat ho jaye.

He spoke casually and closed his eyes smiling. Ishita was looking at him sleeping trying to understand what he spoke minutes back.

Aankhon mein tere saaye
Chahoon to ho na paaye

Your shadows (are there) in my eyes,
Even if I want, there cannot be


Yaadon se teri faasla haye
Jaake bhi tu na jaaye

distance from your memories..
even after going you don't go,

Something has changed between them with the period of time, probably the realization of emptiness in their life without other. Unknowingly they have filled the vacuum in their relationship with care, concern, friendship or LOVE. Still something was missing what we say assurance, commitment and security in a relationship.


Thehra tu dil mein haaye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala

even after going you don't go,
you stay in my heart


Kyun yaad karta hoon
Mit-ta hoon banta hoon
Mujhko tu laayi yeh kahaan

becoming a wish, why?
why do I remember you,
I end and I be again,
where have you brought me...

Life is so unpredictable. It takes turn suddenly, unexpectedly. We all want to control our life, our existence. In some way we are in and some way we are not. Both were bound in a relationship without their own will. Like other couples they got married with some conditions. But unlike others, their conditions were different. Couples marry and take sacred vows of being each other support throughout their life. But in their marriage conditions were there but it was for own self. Both married for their own selfish reasons.

Benaam rishta woh..
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan darmiyaan


Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmiaan Darmeian
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Hard for us to say
It was so hard for us to say
Can't close a day by day
But Then the world's got me in way

Sometimes we need to be apart to understand just how much we truly love each other. The same think worked for them. Time actually played cupid in for them. 6 months into marriage finally the day of separation came.

Raman returned from office and saw her packing her stuff in suitcase.

R - Hey kya ho raha hai. Yeh packing. Where are you going.

I - Ap bhul gaye . Kal humari shaadi ho 6 mahine ho jayege

He was blank for a minute and turned- Haan Main bhul gaya. So kal you will be free.

They were standing near, with their back facing each other.

I - Haan Kal sab khatam ho jayega. She took a pause and spoke again Raman Mummyji..

R- Don't worry about them . I will handle everything.

I - Hmm

R - Tum packing karlo. Main abhi aata hoon

With that he excused himself, went inside the washroom locked the door and broke down.

R (himself) - Go Ishita. I won't stop you. If you are happy being away from me then I won't become a hindrance.

On the other hand

I - I am going Raman, away from you. Now there won't be any burden on your life.


Both were crying remembering their beautiful memories together.

Chalte thay jinpe hum-tum , Raaste woh saare hain gum

on which you and me walked, all those paths are missing,


Ab kaise dhoondein manzilein, Raatein hain jaise maatam

how to find the destination now..nights are like mourning..


Aate hain din bhi gumsum, Roothi hain saari mehfilein

days also come sadly..all the gatherings are silent..


Itna satao na, yoon yaad aao na, Ban jaaye aansoon hi zubaan

don't trouble so much, don't come to my memory, in such a way that tears only become my language..

Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho naa sake jo bayaan darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan

Somewhere in Mumbai, Ishita was sitting in balcony lost in her thoughts when she heard his voice from behind.

R - Taare gin rahi ho

She closed her eyes, a tear dropped from her eye. She smiled wiping her tear. Taking a deep breath she turned. They looked at each other after 3 long days.

R - Tumne jawab nahi diya. Taare gin rahi ho

I - Raman. You here

R - Kyun aren't you happy to see me.

They were taking small steps towards each other.

I -Kaise ho

R - Great.

Ishita looked down - Good

R - So. Aj clinic nahi gayi

I - Woh I had no appointment today

R - Oh finally sabko pata chal gaya that your degree is fake.

I almost whispered - Raman Ap batiye What will you have.

She turned to make something for him but actually she wanted to hide her tears, tears of happiness seeing him after 3 days or tears of pain that he is happy without her, when he heard something.

R - Tum

I - Kya kahan

R - I want you

He took a step and closed the minimal distance between them cupping her face - Yes I want you in my life. Itni shanti raas nahi aati mujhe. In teen dino mein ek baat ka ehsaas ho gaya that my life is empty without you. Tumhara subah uthte hi lecture dena, meri wardrobe mein un kapde ki than, woh tasteless drumstick ka swaad, baat baat mein jhaadna, Meri puri family ko apni taraf karke mujhe akela kar dena, woh tumhara argument, kabhi apni galti na manna, sab miss karta hoon.

I - Sab kuch kahogi lekin jo main sunna chahti hoon woh nahi

R - What should I say? That I want you to eat my brain for rest to my life, not this but in next birth too. I want to eat burned parathe , hear your lecture each day because actually they are like music to my ears. Each day I want to love you more, today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow. I don't know why we fight or argue, it doesn't make me love you less but it does make me realize how much I truly love you. You make my soul sing and my heart beat faster and you put a silly smile on my face. I want the world to know you are mine. You are the most precious treasure of my life. I can't let you go. I love you. I love you more than my life. Will you be mine forever and ever.

She was awestruck by his proposal and was looking at him with teary eyes. She only nodded her head.

I - Yes... Yes I want to be in your arms. I wanna be with you. I want to live my whole life with you. Raman I love you a lot.

He hugged her tighter and kissed her hairs while she closed her eyes taking that feeling inside her, feeling of belonging to your soul mate.

Next moment, he lifted her in his arms.

I - Raman what are you doing

R - Sealing our relationship with my love.

Carrying her in his arms, he moved inside, drowning themselves in their own world of love, ardency, passion and ultimate gratification.

Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Haaye..
Darmeyaan Darmiyan
Darmiyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh toh tha tere mere darmiyaan



Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
unres

firstly thank you so much for writing
n sorry for being so late in commenting

os was just fab
simple n beautiful love story
it started with a contract
a contract of convenience of 6 months
but both fall in love
n the time flies
both don't want to get separated but thy got thinking about other one
but can live only for 3 days
n then that confession
it was soo dreamy
loved it
Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Ramya ,sorry dear I m late .
Coming to os ,it was awesome .
Ishra were friends from childhood .
MREs bhalla was servent but still iyers treat them well as family members .

Though bhalkas were poor but still iyers don't have any problem with ishra relationship as raman was a good boy
Ishita return from London after two.years and didn't recognized raman as she has decided it as his punishment for not having any contact in these two years .
At last she herself proposed him on her birthday in front of all the people .
It was beautiful os dear .
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Sapna ,first of all thankyou somuch for writing this OS beside being away from forum .
Coming to OS ,it was amazing .
Ishra marriage with a contract that they will leave each other after six months as both of them wanted to be free bird.
They entered in the marriage as strangers then their equation changes and they became friends and them they started loving each other .
But sticking to their decision ishita left his house after the six month was over .
And they again met after 3 days and his confession was just dreamy .
It was beyond awesome .
Lovely OS.
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeee me 1st
Totally loved it
Raman nd ishita end up falling in love wid each other Totally
Song was well suited for d story
In three days dey realise dat dey can't live without each other at all
The confession was sooo adorable
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome n superb story
totally love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful stry Sapna they both married for their convenience on their terms but they ended by faking in love with each other itzz such a sweet stry full of positivity cute moments loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
finally
ishra fell for each other

and thank god!!!!!!!!!!!
raman took the first step

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