Ishra ss-raanjhana hua main tera#3 pt 20 on pg 126 updt on May 14 - Page 36

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

part 15

all I want to say is..
I am crying here


Sorry Sonal to make u cry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Columbus

Omg... Subbbu phase.. I think he will get killed by Raman...
Please update soon .. Waiting.. 😲


Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

😲 😲 😲

Shocking



Don't worry dolly
Everything will be fine
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

ye kya hai di...

shock p shock
maarne ka iraada hai...
itna bada shock...
update son
jaldi raman ki heroic entry
waiting...
thnx for pm😊



Thanks tannu
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RitaDivan

Hey Raksha 😊

This story is quite different, super emotional yaar & very well written šŸ‘ I always loved reading Ishra in college but this one even more unique as he is a gunda and she is a student prologue itself impressed me 😃 then started reading really loved all cute Ishra scenes 😳 at first I thought this love has very less chance of surviving cause he has a mystery past and Ishu's Amma won't agree then there is a stupid Subbu to spoil everything ... But I loved the turns the story took as they got married, he shared his worries and pain to her ... what he narrated was something which I never thought would have happened (u have a great imagination for your stories šŸ‘) ... 😲 What happened with Simmi is really bad 😭 very emotional. Hope Ishu can help her overcome such a nightmare, then something good happened which was amma accepting her love I loved the conversation between the trio then with Raman .. Very well written šŸ‘šŸ¼ I should say this too love the names Raman calls her Chotu, Bacha, Jaan ... ā¤ļø
Teaser is quite trilling hope you will update soon so we might know what's coming ... Thanks for giving us another great story šŸ˜‰
Amritha



Thanks amrita
Glad u loved the story
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Shocking teaser di

Hope raman comes there on time
Subbu is so disgusting
Continue soon



Yes its shocking hetvi
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 17

Amma was crying ,Raman side hugged her and said- don't cry amma.I promise I will never leave ur ishu alone.she is my wife, I promise I will keep her happy till my last breath and even after that.

Amma broke the hug and said kissing his temple- kanna,my ishu is very lucky to have u as her husband.

Raman- no amma,I am lucky that she is my wife.let's go outside and gave her this good news. My bachcha would be so worried.

Amma-yes my kanna and ur bachcha.let's go and give her the good news.saying so they came out of the cafe and start looking for ishita thinking she must be nearby.but she was nowhere.

At first they thought she must have gone somewhere and will come but soon they realised she is nowhere.amma started panicking thinking where is ishita.

Amma-aiyyoo murugan,kahan gayi meri ishu.Raman please find her.where is she.she started crying.

Raman- amma don't panic.I am searching for her.u sit here quietly.saying so he make her sit and start searching for her.

On the other side,ishita was crying bitterly inside a car,shouting for help but noone was there to help her.they were four goons who pulled her into a car when she was waiting outside the cafeteria.

When they saw her screaming badly, they tied a clothe on her face making her silent.she was sobbing silently.

It had been half an hour since he was searching for ishita.he was now hell worried,sweating badly and feeling restless.

Raman- where r u jaan.please come back to ur Raman.bachcha don't trouble ur Raman.he said almost crying.

He called his friends for help and start asking to the people nearby showing her pic.everyone was denying when he asked a girl about ishita.

Girl- aap Raman ho naa.(u r Raman naa).

Raman- yes but how do u know.

Girl- u don't remember me,u saved me from some boys six months back.

Raman- sorry I don't remember, can u please.

She didn't let him complete and called a boy-bhaiya,see he is the one who saved me that day from those boys.

Boy shake his hand with Raman and said- thanks a lot sir,I don't know what would happened to her if u didn't saved her.u can't even imagine what a brother will go through if something happens to his sister and he couldn't save her.

Raman said having some tears in his eyes- nobody can know it better then me.

Boy- did u say something sir.

Raman- nope,can u help me.did u saw this girl.she was wearing a red saree standing here sometime before.he asked showing her pic in his mobile.

They look at the pic and said- yes we saw her.she was standing near the road and then a black maruti came and pulled her inside.she was struggling.we were far away ,we came running but couldn't save her.we informed to the policeman also,the one who was on duty.but he didnt showed any interest.they went in that direction.he said showing his a way.

Raman- thanks a lot.can u tell me when did this happened.

Girl- about forty minutes ago.I think u can find her if u go this way.

Raman- thanks a lot.saying so he was going when the boy said,take my bike.it will help u.

Raman took it and was going when the girl said- it was a black maruti alto number ending with 62.they mustn't have gone too far.

Raman ran taking the keys when he saw his friends coming.

Mihir-what happened bhai.where is bhabhi.

Raman- I think someone kidnapped her and if I am not wrong its subbu.I swear I will kill him if he try to touch her.u take care of amma,and bring police to the place. I will keep informing as soon as I will find them.saying so he ran to the bike.start it and ride in the direction they told.

Raman was riding the bike for half an hour,he was getting restless thinking about her.at last he saw the black maruti alto parked in a side of a road.he stopped the bike and get off the bike.he started walking on the road getting into a deserted area.it was almost empty.walking on it he found her chain which he made her wear.he got sure that he is near ishita.he started running and found some of her bangles,then after some distance her earrings. He ran on the way and found a small cottage.he ran to the cottage.

In the cottage,ishita was sitting in a corner tied with ropes,she remembered how they slapped her and her chain was thrown away from him.and they she started throwing her accessories so it will be easy for Raman to find her.

Ishita was crying silently- my chain is lost ,now what will I answer to Raman that I couldn't keep it safe.she was talking to herself when she saw subbu entering into the room .

Ishita- subbu,oh so u r the one who kidnapped me.those were ur goons.

Subbu- yes I am the one who kidnapped u.what did u thought.that u can marry any random person rejecting me and I will let u do that.Noway ,u can't reject me.

Ishita- what do u mean.what can u do now.I am already married to him.and amma will surely agree now ,seeing how u kidnapped me.

Subbu- u know what.I don't care anymore.u know what I am going to do with u.I will rape u and then I will see how ur Raman will going to react.he will also abandon u coz nobody will be interested in a garbage like u.

Ishita- u know what,my Raman is not disgusting as u.he will be with me no matter what happens. But one thing I can assure u ,that u will be a dead man if u try to even touch me forgetting raping me.actually its not ur fault ,u don't my husband yet.he is very loving for me but very dangerous for one who try to hurt me.

Subbu- OK let's see how ur so called husband will save u from my clutches. Saying so he started approaching towards her.she can see the animal in him ,she was scared to bits but she has full confidence on Raman that he will surely come to save her.

Subbu came to her and pulled her pallu in a jerk.she fold her hands to hide herself. He tore her sleeves leaving rashes on her hand.

Subbu laughed devilishly and said- now nobody can save u from me.I will ruin u.what if I can't marry u,still I can have u.saying so he approached towards her neck.

She screamed in horror- Raman.

That's the time Raman came near to the cottage.he heard her voice and ran inside the cottage in a jiffy.

His blood boils seeing the sight inside the cottage.subbu was trying to kiss her while she was sobbing and trying to push him away.but he was stronger then her.

He ran to them and clutched his collar and throw him away from ishita.Ishita saw him and hugged Raman crying bitterly.Raman responded the hug.he broke the hug and covered her properly with her pallu and hugged her again.

Raman- are u alright bachcha.he asked hugging her more into himself.while she was go on snuggling into him crying bitterly.

Ishita- Raman Raman he ...tried ...to ...she couldn't complete and hugged him again seeking his warmth.

Raman kisses her temple and said- chup bachcha.now I am here naa.nobody can touch u.

Ishita- he said he will rape me.she said crying bitterly.

Raman anger knows no boundaries hearing this.he broke the hug and went to subbu who was trying to get up.he went and punched subbu hard making him vomit blood.

Raman- rape karega,meri ishita ka rape karega (u will rape my ishita).kar ,kar ke dikha.tu bas usse choo ke dikha (just touch her once).sale jaan le lunga teri(I will kill u).saying so he kicked between his legs.subbu winced in pain.

Raman start kicking him mercilessly between his legs ,lost in his anger,like he can see those monsters in subbu, who raped simmi.the frustration was pouring on him.

Raman was just beating him black and blue,saying again and again- u wanna rape her,u wanna rape her.

Amma came with Raman's friend's and police.seeing ishita's condition, she went to ishita and hugged her tightly.Ishita hugged amma tightly and said- he wanna rape me amma.u chosed him for me.she said crying bitterly.

Amma pat her back and said- I am sorry kanna.I was so wrong.

Police went to Raman,to arrest subbu.but Raman was go on kicking him.subbu was fainted due to the continuous beating.

Police- leave him.we r here to arrest him.

Police were trying to stop Raman but he was nowhere listening, he was go on beating subbu.everyone tried to pull him but he jerked everyone and start beating him again.

Ishita saw this and shouted- Raman,woh mar jayega(he will die).

Raman look at her,she nodded and fainted.he saw this and ran to her before she fell on the ground.he hold her in neck of time.

Raman shake her and said- ishita ishita,wake up bachcha.

He was shaking her but she wasn't responding. He hugged her tight and said- wake up babu.kya hua tumhe ,utho naa.he said almost crying.

Mihir-bhai,we will see here.u take bhabhi to hospital. Take my car.

Raman scooped ishita in his arms and soon he was on the way to hospital along with amma.while Raman's friend were in police station filing a complaint against subbu.

In the hospital,Raman was pacing to and fro worriedly while doctors were checking her inside.

Amma was just seeing his love and concern for ishita.at last she went to him and said- she will be OK Raman.

Raman look at amma and hugged her tight.

Raman- I couldn't save her amma.I couldn't save her.I am not a good husband.

Amma-u r the best Raman.u saved her.she is alright.she said patting his back.

They were talking when doctor came out of the room.they rush to the doc and asked-how is she.what happened to her.

Doc- she is fine. She fainted due to shock and low bp.I gave her medicine.she is fine now.u can go and meet her.

Raman was going inside ,but stop in mid and said- amma,let's go inside.

Amma-no kanna,u go.u both need each other most this time.I will not interfere.

Raman- but ,don't u wanna meet her.ask her ,is she alright.

Amma-if u r with her.I don't have to ask about her being good or not.I know she will be OK with u.

Raman smiled and ran inside the room,seeing her laying on the bed.Raman look at her,she look at him.they share an intense eye lock.a tear fell from her eyes. Raman ran to her and said-dont cry bachcha. I am here only.

Ishita- I lost ur chain Raman.she said crying.

Raman take out the chain from his pocket and make her wear that.she smiled seeing it and asked-where u get this.

Raman- found it when I was searching for me.u can never loose it coz it is just for u.saying so he hugged her tight while she rest her head on his chest.he kissed her forehead lovingly, she close her eyes feeling contented.

Amma saw them from the window and sent a silent prayer to her murugan to keep them happy always.

That's all for now.enjoy and don't forget to leave ur lovely comments and hit like button.will wait for it.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Subbu that man...yuck 🤢 ...such mentality...eeeks...Hope he get well deserved punishment...

Thank god ishita is fine...She did good throwing things Raman can search her...

They say good work always pay...Raman work also helped him and that man helped him for saving ishu...i just feel bad always after hearing about Simmi...so saddening...

Amma finally realise how good Raman is for ishu...

Cant wait for happy moments...

Update soon!!!!!!
Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated next part,have a look.
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urghh dis kamina subbu...
chala gaya apni jaan se...
i said before only k he is going to pay fr hiz deeds...nd wahi hua...
great k he beat him so much k wo wahi behosh ho gaya...😃

nd RKB k achhe karmo ka phal use mila..grat k dat boy nd girl saw ishu...
nd simmi...šŸ˜”
hope ishu will soon mk her all right...
waiting fr dis track to come here in ur story...
want to see RKB happy happy..
baby ne bahot kuch face kiya hai apne life me..
he deserve d best...
hope will see him happy soon
Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago

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