MG (FF) I FEEL FOR YOU Part 15 on 76 ..May 7 - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
great update.. eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
daadi Vicky and meera planning to stop divorce
and daadi helped sam yash in their patch up
maan geet trying to convince kids on their divorce
but dia words scared neil and nia
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Posted: 9 years ago


wow lovely emotional update..te way dadi,vicky planning to bring my maaneet close but other side my maaneet decide to talk with their kids who was sad hearing them and dia ki words making my maaneet to get worry was lovely..i love te update yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update. Dadi, Vicky and Meera planning something to stop Maaneet from Divorcing. Maan is trying to talk to kids about divorce but failed. He asked Geet for help. She tried to explain them. I liked kid's reaction. Feeling sorry for kids.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely story. The kids are so cute and dadi is funny. Aww Dia doesn't want to lose her parents again. Can't wait for them to go on a vacation. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
SORRY FOR LATE UPDATES...
I am just trapped between my studies, job, and my personal life

Part 10

Maan and Geet were tensed. It was half an hour but still Dia didnt open the door. Nia sat there looking at Maaneet and their worried face. Niel was going through Geet's mobile.
Maaneet asked many times but Dia was not ready to pen the door. Can I talk to her? Niel asked them. Ya ofcourse.
Niel stood near the door. Dia open the door. The next moment door was opened Neil entered with Nia. before Maaneet could enter the room the room was shut.
will they hate us? Geet asked. her eyes were moist. Maan just couldnt see it. Maan side hugged Geet. They can never hate us. They are just afraid that divorce may snatch their relation with us.we just have to assure them that everything is same as before. Geet kept her head on Maan's shoulder.
If everything becomes same then good else I am definitly going to kill you. Maan was shocked. If kids are not happy then I will never give you divorce. Even if it means to see a broken heart everyday.
Geet you can also fall in love one day... then what?
Geet just looked at Maan and chuckled. there is none born yet who can take place above my kids. No one can ever take place in my heart whom I love more than my kids.

Inside the room,
Dia was crying bitterly with Nia. Niel's eyes was also moist. He wanted to cry but men cant cry like a girl. Niel sat near the girls. If we cry we cant think. havent you heard this lecture from chachu? Dia glared at Niel. We are going to lose..
going to not yet lost. Dia looked confused.You are elser than me only in age not with brains. We will do as dadi say.. Neil smirked. And what if plan fails? Dia asked.
If that happens then...Our custody is given to them. According to law we have rights to tell with whom we want to live. If we deny kaam ho jana chahiye.
How you know this? Dia asked. when you were wasting time crying I surfed in internet.
So do you want us to do.
for time being say sorry...bas jhutmut ka sorry...then we will make them think again about divorce and...
And chachu ki girlfriend ki band baja denge. Nia said. Both looked at Nia with a fear. Dont worry I will not say a word to mama.
Dia kissed Nia on her cheeks and Neil smiled and pulled her nose. thats my sister. I will give you best ideas for pranks.

Kids came out to see Maaneet involved in some serious talks. they only heard Geet saying "there is none born yet who can take place above my kids."
Trio looked at each other and smiled. its a mutual emotion. Dia said.. Maaneet looked at them. Nia hugged Geet while Dia said sorry to both. You too have whole right to decide about your life. we dont have any problem if you both seperate. It took lot of courage to tell this lie.
Maan just smiled and hugged Dia. Nothing is going to change between us.
But everything would change between you two..Niel said in his mind.

At abc hotel,

Yash thanks for trusting me. I love you so much Yash. Sam said crying bitterly hugging Yash. Yash too felt guilty for bringing so much problems in this relation.
I am sorry Sam.
No Yash I should be sorry.
Meera and Vicky rolled there eyes.
Sam I told you na I am sorry. Yash said in an angry tone.
I told you na it was my mistake Sam too said fuming.
Will you both just shut up. Dadi said getting irritated. I wonder what type of feelings you have for each other. Sam and Yash lowered their heads while Meera and Vicky giggled.
Dadi shall we discuss your plan? Meera asked.
I am not a fool to trust you fools. If even one small glitch in the plan Maan and Geet will get seperate. So I will only tell you about what you guys have to do. The four frowned but couldnt say a word to Dadi who can even beat Maan in hitler-giri. None wanted to be in her bad books.

At night kids had a chat with dadi. Dadi told her plan. It was true she trusted kids more than others. I know you three are upset. No dadi..we WERE upset.. not now. this divorce can never happen. Neil said with confidence. But I can fnd some flaw in your plan. Dadi looked at Neil's gesture. He was actualy copying Maan's gestures. And whats that? Dadi asked. Pranks... Dadi was like what rubbish?..
yes dadi Niel is right. If we dont do any prank on Sam aunty then chachu can easily find something fishy... they know us in and out. Dia said. Dadi smiled at them...you are just amazing. Only your physical appearance is like Dev and Naina else you are just a new versions of Maan. Shrewed.. KC is safe in your hands.
Niel gave a 500 volt smile. Dia and Nia just smiled but Dia's smile was fake. It had a fear in her mind. Dadi could see it. Everything will be back to normal soon Dia.
Hope so... Dia said


In maaneet's room,

Geet was sleeping with Nia. Dia and Niel wanted to sleep with dadi. She too thought it was better. Maan was having a peg sitting at balcony. Only Geet's word rang in his ears..there is none born yet who can take place above my kids. No one can ever take place in my heart whom I love more than my kids.
He felt a mixed emotion. A pinch of jealousy added with two spoons of satisfaction in a large bowl filled with a question why a divorce.
He felt jealousy on the way Geet loved kids more than anyone else. Satisfaction for what was again a question. was it an assurance that Geet's second marriage will never happen. In that case divorce was an unwanted thing. But who can predict future may she fall i love one day. Maan was totally confused. He stopped thinking about it and called it a night.

Next day morning,

Nia, Dia and Niel were having breakfast. It was special as rarely they got to eat BF, lunch or dinner with Maan. Nia sat besides Geet not concentrating on her food. She just knew they would go for vaccation. She was thrilled and waiting for her di and bhai to ask about it to Maan. but when none were saying. She asked herself. I want to go for vacation. Maaneet looked at Nia puzzled. Dia took it as a chance. Not only Nia we too want to spend sometime away from house with CM and chachu ALONE. like a family Family means kids, and Mom asnd Dad..you know like couples..with their kids .
Dia said emphasising on each word. Maaneet looked at eachother. They were not against vacation but word couples was embarrassing them.
Maan thought for a minute. May this vacation be some last memories with Geet. He didnt wait for Geet's reply. He accepted. kids said the place too. Dadi booked tickets for next day.
Geet was too thrilled by the word vacation. she loved travelling. She made arrangements for her FH and packed her and kids stuff. Maan handed over his work to Adi and
ordered Nakul to pack his bag.

Next: new entry 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update 👍🏼
Neil too smart
Geet told maan no one can take place in her heart other than kids
Yash n sam together now
Dadi started her plan
Maaneet on vacation with kids
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Sam and yash got together
Now the kids gonna help Dadi in uniting Maaneet
Maan felt jealous on kids
He unknowingly fall for geet but refusing to accept it
Now waiting for the vacation
Who is the new entry?
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Kids are sharp nd Neil is smart boy
Who gave condolence to his sister nd his plan on the way
Finally sam nd yash are together
Hope this vacation bring maaneet closer to each other nd they come to knuw abt their feelings toward each other
Edited by Geet88 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update what an incredible kids they have a plan to stop the divorce they will do as dadi had planned here maan was consoling geet but for geet her kids will always come first yash and Sam made up dadi had a plan Sam will help them in getting geet and maan together kids also decided to fake that they r ready dadi tells them the plan they so intelligent just like maan they have to prank sam or maan will know dadi so proud of them maan in thought if what geet said he was jealous of his own kids but also satisfied kids decide to go on vacation maan agrees as this might be the last time he will spend with geet

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