New ishra TS - Dil ko Teri hi tamanna - updt pt 8 on pg no 129 on 17/4 - Page 66

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali9295

Nyc Story line..


i loved it so muchh..

bt u stoped at very wrong time..

plzz be countinue soon..

can't wait ...

may be karva karela confess his love to his cheeku...

right dii?...

egarly waiting...

plzz continue soon...




Thanks a lot .
Where are you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

aww so sweet

i love the 15th gift
update soon di


Thanks tanu .
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Di...sooo cuteee teaser

Apne aap ko gift kiya...
Loved it
Continue soon
Congrats for 100 pgs


Thanks Hetvi .
Will update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends ,I m back .Here's the next update but before that I want to say sorry to Tannu aka Armor_ishra .sorry sweety I m late ,you are asking its update from last two days but I can't write .so sorry .

Part -7

Ishita turned back to confirm that what she has listened is true or her imagination.She saw raman walking in his room,before entering the room he turned and smiled widely looking to ishita as if inviting her to his room .

Ishita went to her room and informed vandu that she will be little late as Raman has called him to give her birthday gift .

At first vandu denied taking anger that she is not allowed to a boys room in night ,what will his parent think if they will spot ishra together .ishita made a sad face and sat on the bed .She was very disappointed ,her eyes got teary but before she starts crying ,vandu ran to her ,wiped her unshed tears and spoke " arey mera chutku kitna royega ,aaj me din .ok go but return soon .

Ishita immediately wiped her tears and ran to his room .He was waiting for her sitting in his couch with a box beside him ,which was neatly wrapped in a gift pack.when she entered his room ,he got up from his place and walked to her ,ishita closed her eyes feeling his proximity but to her disappointment ,he cross her and walked to door to bolt it .

Feeling what he has done ,she started feeling butterflies in her stomach .This time raman walked to her and stood in front of her ,folding his arms to his chest .ishita saw this and asked raising her eyebrows " what ".

R( smiling )- let me see and admire you thoroughly, I m trying to see you from evening but can't as mom and papa was there. You are looking so beautiful .

I( excitedly )- sachchi ,I m looking beautiful .

R- yeah ,you are looking so preety like a angel ,my angel .

She downcasted her eyes shyly ,while he was still admiring her .she was actually looking very angellic in her attire ,she was wearing the same wine colour gown which her amma bought for her ,her long hairs were open ,and was wearing small matching earrings .Today she has done lil makeup also with dark kohl ,a small matching bindi was adorning her temple .

Raman was smiling like an idiot ,checking her shamelessly. She was clutching her dress with her both hands on both the sides ,she was just waiting for him ,that he would give her gift and she can ranaway but he was lost in his world .At last she herself broke the ice and asked
" give me my gift ".

He was still lost ,ishita shook him and asked again " where is my gift ".

His trance was broken ,he asked instantly " what ,what did you say ".

I( shouting )- where is my gift.

R( teasing )- what gift ,I just called to admire you .

I- what .

R- yeah .

I- (signalling to the box)- then what is there in that box.

R( looking to the box )- arey that box ,there is a saree which mom has bought to gift to the neighbour aunty as her anniversary gift .

I( with sad pout)- you are teasing me na .

R- nope its true ,if you don't trust me ,open it and see yourself .

I- you know you are so bad ,aap bahut gande ho.

Saying so she turned to leave his room ,but cannot as he was holding her wrist .she looked at her wrist and spoke ,trying to free herself
" chodo mujhe ,I m going to my room ,akka must be waiting for me ."

R- chali jaana ,what's so hurry .

I- why should I stay here.

R- to have your gift .

I( angrily )- stop teasing me ,keep your gift with you ,I don't want any from you .you know ,you know aap duniya mein sabse bure ho .mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni .

She declared this in frustration and shrugged his hand.she again turn to leave but this time hr stopped her and spoke " achcha baba ,I m so sorry ,I was teasing you .I have got some beautiful gifts for you ".

I(excitedly)- gifts ,you got more than one gift for me ?.

R- yeah ,here they are check them .

He passed the box to her and signalled her to open it .She raised her head and seek his permission ,he blinks her eyes signalling" go on".

Ishita tore the wrapper of box in a jiffy and opened the box ,there were somany gifts .she picked each one by one .

1) A blue suit .
2 ) A red Top.
3) Girls fancy watch
4) Nail paint
5) liploss
6) Hair clips .
7) pack of small bindi
8) kajal .
9) Bracelet .
10) Earrings
11) blue clutch
12) a barbie slam book
13) her fav.mills and boons novel and
14) her fav.perfume.

Ishita was looking all the gifts in aww and raman was smiling looking to her excitment folding his arms up to his chest .she was checking everything when she heard him
" count them ".

Ishita raised her head and looked at him and asked " humm".

R( smile)- count them.

I- you can tell me why should I count .

R- why should I count by yourself .

Ishita made a baby face and started counting the stuffs .she counted ,those were fourteen stuffs .

I- those are fourteen .

Raman picked the box with all the stuffs and spoke " count them again".

I( making a dirty face)- arey I told you na those are fourteen .

R- arey baba count them again.

I- ( angrily)- oh ho I told you na those are fourteen ,I m notvthat weak in maths .I will not count them again .

R- count them for once may be it has been increased .

Ishita made a dirty face and started counting again .she completed her counting but those were again fourteen gifts .

I- I told you na ,those are fourteen but you never trust me .but why so many gifts ,you can give only one .

R- oh my cheeku ,you are so naive ,see its your fifteen birthday so fifteen gifts for you .

I- ok but those are only fourteen where's the fifteenth one .

R- I will count .

Raman counted and this time it was fifteen .

R- see its fifteen .

Ishita made angry face and spoke " you are a cheater ,those were fourteen,I counted twice you must have kept one more sneakly .tell me what's it and where do you hide it earlier ."

Raman passed the box to her ,she checked again and those gifts where same .

I- you are fooling me ,you always tease me .you are so bad .

Saying so she hit him in his shoulder ,he held her both the hands in both the side and spoke
" buddhu cheeku that fifteenth gift is me"

Ishitas eyes widened in shock ,she was speachless ,she stopped struggling and was looking continuesly to him .Raman called her twice but she was so shocked that she didn't responded .Raman flashed his fingers in front of her face and asked concerned " cheeku are you there ,what happened ".

Ishita came back in senses and asked " what did you say ".

Raman wounded his arms around her shoulder and spoke " I told I m your fifteenth and last gift."

I- but how can ,I mean ,how you can be my gift .

Raman sat in couch ,sat her beside him and spoke " actually when you and vandu were talking yesterday night ,mihir has listened your talks and he has already informed me that today of your birthday ."

I- that mean you knew it from yesterday itself them also you didn't wished me ,ramann you are so bad .

R- that I m ,let me complete .Actually we thought to arrange some surprise but it was so late and also we were not having anything ,not any gift ,not any cake not any decoration stuffs so I thought that ,I will give you late but some nice gifts .Then I thought that as its your fifteenth birthday ,I should give you fifteen gifts but it was my bad luck ,actually you know its month end and I was not having that much money .I couldn't take money from mom ,so I thought to buy everything by my pocket money but after that fourteenth gift ,my all money was spend ,so I thought to gift myself to you .

I- you gifted yourself to me ,what does that mean .now you will not scold me ,now you will not tease me .

Raman took her hands in his and spoke smiling
" don't make sand castles madam ,I will be same raman ,take this gift otherwise ."

I- ( scratching her head)- otherwise ,matlab .

R- cheeku was a wise rabbit but you are buddhu one ,I think I should change your name .

I- ( in a ordering tone )- you gifted yourself to me na ,so you had no right to tease me .I m your master .

R- achcha jee ,I m RKB ,its not so easy to be his master .

I- but you just told that you are my gift .

R( taking a deep breath)- chalo ,let's forget that fifteen gift thing ,here is the last gift for you .Close your eyes .

I- one more gift .

R- yes one more gift ,but it's a lifetime gift ,this is my feeling towards you ,and you are not at all forced to accept my proposal .

Till now ishita was begeaving childishly but listening to him ,she become concious .she became little nervous,her heartbeat increased ,she took a deep breath and asked with her eyes " what ".

Raman went to his cupboard and brought a little pink teddy ,who was holding a small red heart and I love you was written in it .He handed it to ishita and spoke ,sincerity was visible in his voice " ishita I know I tease you a lot ,I always scold you ,I always stop you to talk to boys ,I always scold you when you wear short cloths but you know reason behind all this ."

I shook her head negatively .

He sat on his knees and spoke caressing her cheeks " it's because I care for you ,its because I want you to be safe ,its because I consider you as mine ,its because I like you and above all its because I love you a lot .

Listening to this ishita closed her eyes as if she was waiting for this to listen and after listening his confession she is feeling contended.Raman was confused with her behaviour he held her hand ,she also kept her hand on his and held it tightly .Raman was not getting anything ,so he spoke again " ishita its not necessary that you should say yes ,i know its very tender age for all this ,but its also true that its my last year in Delhi and after completing my +2 I will go somewhere else for my further studies and then we will not get that much time to spend together. So before I go I want to spend some quality time with you that's why I rushed my confession but its truly up to you that ,you accept or deny it .

Ishita was mum ,just listening to him ,looking to him ,feeling his sincerity .

R( again)- cheeku for god sake speak something.atleadt deny but speak something .

I- ( taking a deep breath)- Raman I don't know weather ,its love or what but its very true that I too like you very much .you are right ours is a very tender age for this all but still ,I want to spend those beautiful moments with you like other couples ,like akka and bala Anna .

R- so that mean you are accepting my confession .

Ishita nodded ,raman felt so happy and then spoke without any hesitation " I love you ishita ."

But ishita didn't say anything ,she was trying to say but before she can say something raman stopped her and spoke " take your own time cheeku ,now go its very late, vandu must be waiting for you ".

Ishita nodded like a obedient kid and was leaving when he called her back.she turned ,he walked to her and pecked her temple and gave the gift box to her ,mouthing a good night .


That's all for noe friends ,hope you people like this part .I m not rushing these things oftenly happens in teenage ,hope you all will understand me .enjoy reading and do comment .don't forget to hit like buttons



Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pata hai jaise maine Subah PM dekha
I was Like this

Firstly Dont be sorry Di.
I know U were busy
but u know na I m very Demanding Sis of yours...
afterall its my Haq...😉
Let it be...
u know what this is my one of the Fav ones
and phir aapk teaser dene k baad omg...
isko bolte hai jale pe namak chidakna😆
pehle hi itna craze and phir itna teasing teaser...
so sorry inn do dino main naak main dum kar rakha tha maine...😛
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so a big ,,...nhi..issse bhi bada...nhi sabsa bada wala Thankyou...
ypdate karne k liye Nd mere demand pure karne k liye😛
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COming to the update
Haye kya update tha...
Finally...Damn!! Finally he confessed
my reaction was


kitne line quote karoo...i bet sabse achha comment mera hi hoga...
Raman was just admiring her
nd that authority which he shown by repeating MY ANGEL was lovely
ishu to abhi se Blushing Blushing...😳
awww...ishu gusssa ho gyi...
raman bhi na kitna tease karta .hai...
i love 15th😳
(dont be jealous Ishu😉)
meri Buddhu ishita..i should say dhakkan ishu
hmm bus tease karna or scold karna hi dikhta
so ishu wanted to become his master
but RKB kisi ki nhi sunta or should i say sirf uski cheeku ki sunta hai
nd that raman wali line
"cheeku was wise raabbit, but u r budhhu one ,i think i should change ur name"
bechara Raman
but phir Ishu ko samaj aa hi gya...behaving like a tubelight but i loved it
proposal ka reaction to pehle hi bata diya...
hmm..nd that last gesture of Raman on kisisng on her temple..was nice
i like it
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overall update

hmm..now update soon..Nd big Thanks for the PM
and for updating soon!!!!!





Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

unress it soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 4
haaye... teenage love... beautiful thing... lekin hadd mein 😉

super awesome part

ishu is hadd... sachhi.yaar...

maharani nautanki hai pori
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends updated new part .enjoy reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unres..
Awesome...
Ishu just a drama queen...
Just to see raman she cried to get permision from vandu...
Raman finally confessed homis feelings to her...
She too afcepted his confession...
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update so much
Raman confession was so genuine
But u update really late.😡
Plzzz update more often this is
Waiting for next pat

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