Akdha FF **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH-6 (Epilogue Updated )

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jiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Wonderful update avika...
Poor jalal first ruq, abdul n surja spoiled his romantic dinner date n after that jodha's pregnancy hormones gv him tough time... 😉
N again mirza disturb their morning kitchen romance...
Thanks for pm dear...
Update next part asap...

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Dorperle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

That was a superb Avika👏👏👏
how could u do this to poor Jalal...his own friends ne paani phair diya uski date par😭😆

first Abdul & then Mirza screwed up his surprise dinner for his lady ..
But he knows how to get her in his arms..😳
morning romance in kitchen😳 aww, beautifully written👏
and again naughty Mirza peeped in😉😆
but this time he got a thrashing look and words from Jalal😆 good one👏

Thnx for the PM

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pranjal.22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

First of all congrats for new thread
and it was superb update
loved joja confession
and ya poor jalal his romantic date was ruined...
sorry for late comment
Update soon and thanks for pm :) :)

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asgeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

nice story and really good concept. I like it a lot. jodha and jalal bonding is so good .I love it. Thanks dear for the pm.

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

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melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

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superbly written whole scan of picnic with different emotion. antaksari was very enjoyable with perfect song for each persons mood.😊 ja's choice of place according to jo's like, jalal's wish to spend more time with each other and surja +bakshi's teasing and disturbance to love birds and top of that jalal's teasing to jo and his gabber hang for whole day. finally he gave and later on jo can't bare his disappointment and lovely make which is disturb by devil sali 😆 poor couple.

Thanks for pm.

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago