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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raam he breathed in
Raaam...
death drew his last breath out.
His queens sat in silence
As they felt his life ebb
He lay on the cold floor
Not by his side his sons four.
Finally finding peace
From what he had feared most
In perfumed oils his soul waited
The queens beside him sat in a shroud of white
Ayodhya too waited
Will the son be ready to be crowned
Or will his soul to be tormented and pained?


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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏Jaya very emotional. He is at peace now which Ayodhya is not going to get any time soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

👏Jaya very emotional. He is at peace now which Ayodhya is not going to get any time soon.


Thank u geena❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another beautiful piece 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jayashree, this is heart wrenching! Dasharath's death is the most saddest of all in the epic. U have penned it so beautifully.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Jayashree, this is heart wrenching! Dasharath's death is the most saddest of all in the epic. U have penned it so beautifully.👏

Thank you Anu. Dalip was simply superb❤️
Going to miss him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U penned it wonderfully Jaya...
Dalip ji played a wonderful pain-struck Dashrath...hats off to him for such impactful performance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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King Dasharath died with Ram in his lips and heart😭 poignantly written Jaya⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

👏Jaya very emotional. He is at peace now which Ayodhya is not going to get any time soon.


wonderful contrast u showed👏..wat a sad phase for Ayodhyawasis...their King finally rested in peace but leaving behind all of them to bear the pain and sorrow..already they were extremely sad on exile of their dear heir- Rama, and now the demise of their lovable king has multiplied their sorrow ..😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Attu harini tvmylove thank u all girls❤️

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