Nibir Ts- May I !!!!!!! [epilogue updated] COMPLETE

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Guyz I know holi is gone but I am going to give you all a holi gift in the form of Ts😛. Yeh Ts pehle hi mil jata but my adarniya best freind have done some K panti in these holi days😡 so guyz do read if you liked it then press like button and I wishing you all a belated happy holi 😆and ha I know tittle ajeeb sa hai but last point par aisa hi hota hai😉

NIBIR-TS
MAY I !!!!!!!
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A boy of 20 was standing with his 4 friends.He was in shirt and jeans.

boy 1- Kabir yaar bol kar toh dekh ho skta hai ha bolde
boy 2 - aur na bhi
boy 3- tu chupkar swami mai bolta hu Kabir ki bol dal wait mat kar nhi toh phir tu hesitate karta reh jayega aur useh koi aur propose kardega
boy 4- shi keh rha hai tu karan kabir tu bolde ha aur na ki tension mat kar itna nervous hone ki jaroorat nhi hai
kabir- baat toh tum log sahi keh rhe ho par mujeh nhi pta ki mai useh kaiseh propose kru,kaiseh khu that I love her mujeh toh itna bhi pta nhi hai ki even like me or not love toh bohot door ki baat hai
boy 4- wahi toh pta krna hai hum sabh tujeh Holi tak ka time deh rhe hai agar tume nhi bola toh hum nisha ko jakr btayenge hi sath mai poore college mai bhi...
Kabir cutting him off
kabir- ha ha mai samajh gya
suddenly she appeared to him as he was standing at one of the step of stair. He lost his senses when he look towards her she was looking fabulous in a sweet crop top landing on her stomach and in denim jeans.

Tujhse hi to mili hai rahat
Tu hi to meri hai chahat
Tujhse hi to judi zindagi
Teri yaadein hain kuch adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa...


He was totally lost in her beauty she looked towards him and gave him breathe taking smile. She stand in front him with a cute smile
nisha- hi kabir hi boys
they all said Hi to her but kabir was in another world. She smiled on him
nisha- hi kabir
kabir again won't reply her his one of the friend shook him and he came back to his senses and give a silly smile to them. Nisha started to laugh on him while he gave embarrassed look...

Hmmm..
Tujhe apna bana loon
Tujhe tujh se chura loon
Tujhe khud mein chhupa loon, Sahiba!
Ik mujh pe karam ho
Tu hi mera sanam ho
Teri mujh pe nazar ho, Sahiba!
Hmmm... aa aa...

He again lost his senses on her lovely melodious laugh while his friend whispered in his ears "not again kabir waiseh hi voh tujh par has rhi hai" he again came back to his senses as she stopped laughing and again wished him hi and this time he also reply her. She asked them to leave for lecture as it was 9:00am they nodded. They all were about to leave with her at that time one of the kabir's friend whispered to everyone except kabir and nisha to wont move with them.Nisha asked them that why they are not moving so they reply her that they all have some imp to discuss so she and kabir left they will come after some min later while these all things happening kabir was admiring her...

Mar main jaaunga, reh na paaun
Gham judai ka seh na paaun
Aye tujhe pyaar ka vaasta
Teri yaadein hai kuchh adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Raat ke chaand tale
Aagosh mein meri tu aa

they both left for lecture at that time nisha's one of the friend come towards them she hold nisha's hand and said her to come with her as something imp she want to tell her while dragging her somewhere. Nisha faced to kabir and mouthed sorry to him while he gave her its ok wala look...

Baahon mein le lo mujhe
Zara sapno mein apne basa

Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa...

She gave him a flying kiss in order to say him thank you and soon disappear from there while kabir loved her these cute antics and smiled brightly whole way.
They attend lecture and again boys group start their chat on kabir and nisha love story
kabir- guyz mujh seh nhi ho payega
boy 3- ok we all are ready to tell everybody swami go and call nisha
Swami nodded and was about to left at that time kabir hold swami's hand
kabir-ok ok I will try swami plz sit
boy 3- that's my kabir now just go sirf holi tak ka hi time hai tere pass jo ki kal hai
kabir took a deep breath and leave from there. He tried umpteenth times to propose her but each time he failed.

AT NIGHT IN KABIR'S ROOM

kabir- kabire tu kya karega kal , kal holi hai aur any how you have to propose her
he was roaming here and there in tensed mode at that time a lady of 50 knocked on his room. He look at that direction and give a tensed smile.

kabir- mom ap yha
mom- ha vo hum apke liye khana lekar aye the kyunki aj apne khana nhi khaya kya baat hai ap itne tensed kyu hai
Kabir-kuch nhi mom bas aiseh hi
mom-kabir apko pta haina ki ap humseh kuch nhi chupa skte toh phir kyu itni koshisheh krte hai
kabir smiled sheepishly and make her sit on couch and he himself satiable on a bin bag
kabir- mom ab mai apko kya btavu
mom- yhi ki ap itne tensed kyu hai
kabir-mom voh na ek ladki hai humare college mai aur ushka naam nisha hai aur
mom (completing his sentence)-and you love her and wanna propose her
kabir(shockingly)-mom apko kaiseh pta
mom-beta mai ek boy ki mom hu ladki ka naam sunte hi maine tumhara face dekhliya tha itni badi smile apke face par kabhi kabhi hi ati hai
kabir blushed while mom laughed on him
mom- kabir beta itna pareshan mat ho useh pyar seh apne dil ki baat bta keh dena baki sab ushpar chod dena
kabir look towards his mom in confused look while she assured that everything will be fine...

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TASYAM thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks kritika 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start to ur ts
Aw Kabir is trying to propose to Nisha
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Lovely start to ur ts

Aw Kabir is trying to propose to Nisha


Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start ansh 👏
Loved it
I hope nisha also loves kabir 😳
Update soon



Holi chala gaya hai toh isse jaldi jaldi update kar ok 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome start ansh 👏
Loved it
I hope nisha also loves kabir 😳
Update soon



Holi chala gaya hai toh isse jaldi jaldi update kar ok 😉



aww thanku not bhaiyu

Holi chala gya I know ishliyeh socha ki update na kru aur yeh sab ush gadhe kabir ki wajah seh huva hai aur jaha tak update ki baat hai vo kaal mil jayega 😉
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Originally posted by: TASYAM



aww thanku not bhaiyu

Holi chala gya I know ishliyeh socha ki update na kru aur yeh sab ush gadhe kabir ki wajah seh huva hai aur jaha tak update ki baat hai vo kaal mil jayega 😉


Vo kabir bhi tera bhai hai kya 😉
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky


Vo kabir bhi tera bhai hai kya 😉


nope my best freind 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tumne nhi bulaya par phir bhi hum chale aye ;)
awesome start meri writer
do update soon
aur agar nhi kiya toh tere ghar par akr story sunkar javunga nhi toh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TASYAM


nope my best freind 😃


Best friend ya kuch aur 😉

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