Rishabala OS : Sweet Talk (Completed)

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Awweee!! New story from Lazy!!
i am so happy!! 😃😃

Res!!😉
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Beautiful story, Lazy di...
Loved it...
Haha... Only Rishbala's talk were sweet... But the girls talk were so dirty!😆 They were😛 so crazy & so eager to know abt Madhu's sex life... Lol... & madhu was such an innocent baby... Blurted out everything with a blush...
Why this trishna was feeling so awkward & embarrassed?? What if he was her brother?? If he was someone else she surely would have joined sweety & Ria in teasing madhu right? So she was not fair here... Besides if madhu didnt say also its understood nah? Whatelse a newly wedded couple will do other than romancing.? Well apart from hugging & kissing on forehead they didn't do anything much to be embarrassed of ...those were just sweet cute loving gestures... But trishna gave rk so much pissing off glares lol... Trishna was so childish & that was proved when she tried to climb up on rk & sit on top of his head when they when out for ice cream night... Lol... That part was super cute & funny... Madhu fighting to trishna saying her rishu was so fun... Lol...husbands can be fun baby... But not brothers... They want their sisters to be safe bcos they know abt boys intentions... Lol
Haha... Rk demanding to see madhu when he returns home might find silly & being over possessive but i really loved that part so much... He wants to get boosted by seeing his wife's smile when he comes home after a tiring day... He even told her so patiently but still she committed the same mistake again & again frustrating him lol ...but glad she gave him a valid reason of helping his sister study for her exams... Uff! At least trishna cleared her papers after creating so much trouble in rishbala's life... Lol... I was getting worriee when i read abt the transfer & hoping they should not get separated which might further lead to more problems & like i wished she wisely choose her hubby & resigned her job...
Aww... In the heat of the moment she got little frustrated & accused her hubby... Poor rk got hurt... But he very calmly handled her... Loved the scene where she sits in kitchen & eats ice cream while crying... She was so hurt for hurting her love... She couldnt even face him... That scene was really touching... I love whenever your rk calls his madhu ..."baby or love" aww... My heart melts hearing him call her like that... Wish i was in madhu's place... Lol
Oops!! I forgot to mention my most fav. scene... Where rk goes in reach of madhu in trishna's room & when she pretends sleeping he lifts her over his shoulder & brings her back to his room & warnimg her next he wont come for her & will sleep alone... Lol... But i doubt his threat... He can never sleep without his biwi in his arms... Lol
Overall it was an amazing story with lots of cute sweet moments... Right from the proposal, their phone calls & messages, rk's sudden love declaration at mid night...then marriage... Then friends banter... Rk's irritation...madhu's job issues... Finally all is well at the end with a honeymood trip! Truly brilliant... Only u can write so sweet & cute stories lazy dear...
Thanks for the pm & for this lovely os...
Waiting for ur other works!
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Res. I've caught behind u two lazy di n Sudha di
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👏 AWESOME AMAZING LOVELY CUTE BEAUTIFUL...v v nice story n to think u had kept it for sooo looong waiting for the next part pl...if u r pm ing pl do pm me...always await ur stories...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for your new os di awesome story bahut long wala tha lekin sweet wala story the relation between husband and wife after marriage dono ka ek dusra ko samjhana ek dusra ka liya kya good hai ya bad hai wo decide karna ma help karna and rootana manana ek dusra ko apna life share karna marig ka baad ek rishta ko strong karta hai aur madhu and trishna aur uska friend are badmash company par sweet hai.. Waiting for your new concept and other story...
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WOW!!! What a beautifull story.. loved it so much, cute, Romantic and funny at the same time...

Lol Madhu is too innocent yaar she was talking about how Rk kissed her on forehead or their SR.. He.. He.. Poor Trishna she feels too embarrassed hearing Rishbala Naughty nights... God!! Ria and Sweety are too curious to know what happens between these two.

The story was excellently penned down... Thanks for the PM... Loved you OS... After so long you wrote an os..
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Unresed my comment on pg. 1..
Pls check it dear...
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Sweet crazy os.
Madhu's friends were naughty. Trishna climbing on rk was hilarious. Rk carrying madhu to their room like sack of potatoes made me spit water. But rishbala were a cute pair. Rk wanting to see madhu first after coming home and madhu choosing rk over job was simply adorable. In fact their little banters were sweet. Lovely os. Keep writing.

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