Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Nits83

Loved ISHRA's conversation.
Liked the sensible Raman unlike the show.
Loved how he wanted to treat Adi fairly like they treat Ananya, shravu & Ruhi.
Ishita to be blamed in the show for misguiding Adi in the beginning.
When is Shagun's entry? Please flop all her wicked plan by showing the bond of ISHRA.
How I wish all these were shown in the track.
Please update soon

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

amazing update dear

wrote it beautifully

everything is best dear

ishra romantic scenes and hugs and kisses was superb cute dear

ishra talk about adi and he said to not to do past mistake he done because of over possessiveness of adi was lovely dear

raman treat all the children equally was good dear

i love ishra discuss everything between them dear

i love praises of raman for ishu dear

hope equation changed soon to be real life couple in every sense dear

dear i have an request please give english subtitles if possible for next update dear

sorry i am lack in understanding hindi and really useful for me to review properly also please

continue soon dear

cant wait more

Originally posted by: Roohachu

Awww
Sooo nice n romantic update
Loved it loads
I loved the way both of them made understand each other about Adi
Well update soon

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

superb update dear

loved ishra convo

and i am really loving your take on this track

continue soon

thanx for pm

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Very nice update..
Loved raman's thoughts...
Raman is right ..they shud behave normally with adi ...loved the way they r discussing everything regarding adi
Cont soon

Originally posted by: sririt

Hi,

I am really sorry for late response, but i wasn't well; so didn't came here.

And coming to update/teaser

@Part Living For Each Other Part 2

Such a lovely update. I liked IshRa convo so much. It was so real

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

Nice update dr

I liked how they were thinking abt themselves..

I wish they had shown like this in the show too

but kaha hota hai ye sab show main😆..

Ishita's grave mistake was bringing Adi home & gave him false hopes otherwise Adi before only

I wish U write parts like this which ha lot more logic when compared to the show..

Cont soon dr

thnx for the pm!!!!!!!

Guys!! thanks for the wonderful comments!!!!

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He started to nuzzle her neck from a side eliciting a moan from her. Making her face him by yanking her closer with his fingers tangled in hers while his other hand supporting and pulling her to him from the back with his fingers having their own game to feel everything of her. He dropped a wet kiss onto the nape of her neck which made her pull his hair due to the unbearable pleasure she was experiencing for the first time. He then parted from her and observed the hue of red on her. Her face flushed, eyes closed as if in a trance and her hands tightly holding his hair and collar. He felt elated by the fact that his wife is in the same state of desire and love like him.

Not feeling any movement on her she opened her eyes only to lower them blushing due to the heated gaze of her husband. She dared to alter her eyes again to bore into his. She wanted to see the irrevocable love and passion of her man. But the intensity of what she has seen made her hug him tight crashing herself into him for which he smiled widely saying,

"aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai!!! Agar age bade tho me apne aap ko control nahi kar pavunga".

[ this is enough for today!! I'll not be able to control myself anymore if we continue this!!!]

She smiled against his neck shyly lowering herself onto his chest and nestling her face there listening to his now retarding heartbeats while his hands held her tightly and protectively, gently patting her back. Both of them closing their eyes completely living in the moment stayed in the silence of the midnight with the exception of their warm breaths and drumming of their hearts.

He came rushing into the room and emptied the bottle in a go. He didn't understand what is disturbing him to this extent. He had frequently seen his mom and ashok dad romance despite his presence and unmindful of his discomfort. He would mask it with some vague reason and run away which would be a laughter riot for his dad stating him as a shy being. Now, he has seen his biological father hugging his stepmom which would not cause any embarrassment as they would have thought but definitely left him scared.

He realized he was scared. He was unsecured. He knew something bad would happen when he overheard his ashok dad's conversation with his brother but hadn't expected something this drastic. He had honestly told everything to his mother which she shrugged off saying he owed some misconception blind in her eagerness to get married. He saw his mom angrily peeping the photo of Ashok in her mobile. He didn't understand what to do. He didn't understand for what was his mom weeping, for her love or her discomfort away from the lifestyle she was habituated because she had been going on ranting how she would manage her standard of living.When he was in his turmoil, shagun asked him,

"adi beta!! What are you doing up at this time of night?" she asked getting up running her hand over his head.

"mom!! I was just thirsty!!! Aap?? Aap comfortable ho na??" adi asked concernedly.

[you!! Are you comfortable?]

"of course adi!! I'm fine!!", she said.

"mom!! Ham ne ishitha aunty ko misunderstand kiya!! Woh bahuth ache hain!! Unhonne aapka bahooth care kiya aur hum comfortable rehne ke liye apna kamra bhi diya!!" ,he said widening his eyes.

[mom!! we misunderstood ishitha aunty!! she is so good!! she cared alot for you and has even given her bedroom for our comfort !!]

He forgot all his hate on her in the past.Judging a person instantly forgetting and forgiving everything was a child's antic. He was a child first and then shagun's.

This has definitely infuriated shagun. Here she was thinking of replacing ishitha in raman's life using adi as her triumph card in case there is nothing left for her with ashok as he had stated. But adi was inclining towards the so called goodness in ishitha.

She would never let this happen. She needs to maintain her way of living which either raman or ashok could give. She needs a stable and luxurious life. If not ashok she wanted raman to give her all those which he is ready to give ishitha. She knows about their relationship ,she knows about their equation. She has seen it in their eyes. She knows it is difficult to affect raman, so she used his weakness adi to affect him.

"adi!!!what the hell are you talking? I thought meine socha ki tum ek matured boy ho!! But no!! You are the same!!! Tum wahi ho jho ruhi hai,raman hai, sara bhalla family hai. Yeh!! Hamme care karna support karna sirf raman aur ruhi ko paana keliye!! Yeh baat yaad rakna!!! Ab so jav !! jyada socho mat!!!",she scolded him and slept facing away from him.

[adi!! what the hell are you talking? i thought you are a matured kid!!1 but you are the same!! the same as ruhi, raman and bhalla family. she is doing all these to get raman and ruhi!! keep this in mind!! now sleep, don't think much of it!!!]

He laid down and was thinking what his mother has just told.He was thinking how far his stepmom had gone to win in the eyes of his father and sister. He was angry on her for using them to achieve her love. But he suddenly realised how much ishitha was doing for his dad. She is bearing him, who almost killed her mother. She is bearing his mother who hates her to the core. She is bearing all these only for his father and sibling. She is doing these for their love.

They are really lucky,he thought. She loves them alot and he is happy for them. Yes, its true. He is happy for his father and sister for being loved that much. He was happy that ishitha is not like ashok who would eventually throw them of his life. He even though hates his father, as his mother told ishitha was pretending to love him to impress his father clearly means his father loves him. Even his mom never denied this. So, this is true.

His father loves him. He is happy that his father is loved alot. He imagined himself also at the place of ruhi, having ishitha loving beyond limit. He immediately shrugged of the thought thinking its impossible and even though its possible he doesn't need the love of that woman whom his mother hates. But his mother loves ashok who had dumped her and hates the woman who had bought her out of the garbage. He was confused. Fatigue had made sleep overpower him.

After praying in the temple of their house, toshi wondered why the diya had not been lit today. She saw the kitchen empty and clearly indicating that morning chores hadn't been started yet. Making her way into the kitchen, she thought why ishitha hadn't been up unusual herself. But something stroked her making her smile and thank god for the lovely surprise in the morning.

Bala and vandu entered a silent bhalla house. They wondered why the house was so silent unlike daily. They were greeted by a whispering and mutely laughing family at the dining table. On asking the reason for their happiness simmi showed her hand towards the sleepy pair on couch who would have been dreaming some romantic time of theirs.

There was raman laying on the couch wounding his hands around ishitha who cuddled into her husband cutely and making him her bed.Gently tucking the strand of her hair she without opening her eyes felt raman and hugged him much tighter smiling widely. As if on a cue raman also grinned bringing her closer to himself if that was ever possible. She slowly opened her eyes only to be greeted by the whole family. She got shocked and realised the position she was sharing with her husband in the living room where their whole family and fuming ex-wife were having breakfast. She immediately tried to get off raman whereas her husband was pulling her still unopening his eyes. She tried to wake him up by gently shaking him with her hand only for him to kiss her hand.

"madrasan sone do yaar bande ko!!aa jav thodi der aur soyenge!!!" he said pulling her into him and trying to sleep again.

[madrasan!! Let me sleep yaar!!! Come on, lets sleep for some more time]

"raman !!chodo ... mujhe", she said frantically trying to get herself free from his arms which made the whole family laugh puffing their hands into their mouths.

[raman!!! Leave me]

He slowly opened his eyes and saw his beatiful wife on top of him with her hair tickling his cheeks and hands on his chest.

"haye!! Agar aise subah mili tho banda poora din kya kam karega yaar!! Poora ka poora nikamma hojaunga!!" he completed winking at her unmindful of audience.

[oh!! If i get to have mornings like this, how am i going to work? Ill be completely useless now!!]

But as soon as he saw his wife struggling and her eyes escaping from his he knew something was wrong and looked at the direction where some low noises were audible. Taking his distraction as advantage ishitha stood up and was looking at the ground not know what to do. He even got up ruffling his hair. This made the whole family laugh out loud.

"bhai!! Achi tarah soya na?? " asked romi in between her laughter.

[bro!! Had a sound sleep??]

" bhai!! Aap na ajse apne kamre pe hi so jana!! Woh kya hai na bachon ko jyada time apni apne kamre pe rakna mushkil hein!! Unko school bhi tho jaana hai!!" simmi joined the teasing session.

[bro!! Please sleep in your room from today because we cant stop children from coming out of their rooms and moreover they have to attend their school!!]

"arey!! Hum sirf baath kar rahe the aur madrasan beech mein mujpe so gayi!! Bohuth cute lag rahi thi isliye me usse dekhke raha aur patha nahi mera ankh kab lag gayi...!!!" he said irritatingly not realizing that this would lead to another teasing session.

[arey!! We were just talking and she slept upon me. She was so cute ,so i was staring at her and i don't know when i passed into sleep!!]

"Oh!!! CUTE ishithaji!! Bisthar comfortable tha na?? ", her sister in law teased her stressing the adjective her husband used to describe her.

[oh!! Cute ishitha!!! Was the bed comfortable??"]

"woh chod simmi di!! Suna bhai ne kya kaha sirf baath'?? huh!! Kuch aur plans the bhai??", romi used his gutter mind.

[simmi di!!! Leave it !! did you hear what bro has told -just talking'?? huh!! Did you have any other plans??]

"paratha kaafi hain ya meri tappad bhi kayega??" he signaled showing his palm.

[Is paratha enough or wanna have a slap from me??]

"Romi stop it!! Kitna ache mood me the dono,ab tum raman ka mood karab math kar!! Already ishu ke wajah se aaj ka kaam bigad jayega aur upar se tum...", Bala playfully scolded romi and everybody laughed at their expense.

[romi!! Stop it!! He was in a good mood earlier, don't spoil it!! Already his work will be unfocused because of ishu and now you also...]

"bala tum bhi.." raman trailed off unknowing what to say further.

[bala!! You have also joined...]

He then saw his wife who was blushing scarlet and a graceful smile was placed on his lips. Ishitha by now had somehow collected their blankets and pillows and ran to their bedroom. Scolding them once again he followed his wife.

Guys!!! Hope you like this part!! Next part will be of ishraru!!

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