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Hi everyone, I am back with the finale update of my musical snapshots. Thanks for 120+ likes in previous part and ur lovely comments. I read it all but sorry couldn't answer individually.so a big thanks for it.and as evetyone wanted its next update soonish so I am updating much earlier then scheduled. So I want 150 likes in return. I think this much u all can do for me.here is the first two installment of this story.the song is tainu itna main pyaar karaan,suggested by rufana.

Teri liye duniya chod di hai

Ruhi started crying and asked-yeh mar gaye kya mumma.(did he died).

Ishita was shocked to hear ruhi's question.she hugged Raman to her heart and cried- no Raman,u can't leave me again like this.I agree that I was angry but in place of manofying me how can u leave me again.please Raman don't do this to me again.I can't live without u.will die if something happened to u.

Tainu itna main pyaar karaan
Ik pal wich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Ishita was crying bitterly when Raman's manager ,who was near by,ran to them.he snatched Raman from ishita and called the ambulance. Within few minutes ,ambulance, his security everything came and took him to hospital leaving ishru alone sitting on the road.

Ishita was too numb to react while ruhi was crying bitterly. She was shaking ishita continuously and saying- mumma mumma,let's go to the hospital.

Ishita look at ruhi blankly and trying to observe her words but all she can see ,hear and feel was ruhi's question that whether he died.and the way they took Raman away from her.

At last her trance was broken and she cried loudly screaming Raman.ruhi didn't understand what was happening but all she do was wiping her mother's tears and crying with her.

After some time ruhi said again- mumma,let's go to hospital naa.I want to see papa.

Ishita look at her and asked-papa?

Ruhi- yes ,I love him alot.so we have decided that he will be my papa.I took u here today only for this.but u didn't like him naa.OK I will tell him that he can't be my papa.but please go and see him.he got hurt so much.here ,there everywhere.she said between her hiccups.

Ishita look at ruhi and thought- my baby has recognised her papa.I don't have any right to keep her away from him.from his love and care.

Ishita wiped ruhi's tears and said- no rooh ,only he will be ur papa.u know why because he is ur papa.

Ruhi smiled between her tears and said- sachchi mumma.

Ishita- muchchi rooh.

Ruhi- rkb promise.she said pinching her neck.

Ishita joined her forehead and said- yes rkb promise, ur papa promise.let's go and save ur papa.after all we r his jkr.chotu jkr and badi jkr.(the accident wasn't massive ,ishita cried mainly hearing ruhi's words and the way they took Raman away.)

Soon they were in hospital.she knew he must be in casualty.so she went to reception to ask for rkb but before that a doctor came and said on reception- call Dr smith.its urgent.

Ishita to reception- why Dr smith.is there any cancer patient here.

Receptionist- yes actually no.he recovered from the disease but he fainted today so his manager want full check up of him.

Ishita- ohho that's pretty bad.

Rec-yes that's bad.

They were talking when Raman's manager came running and said- this is sir's previous reports and full medical history.to whom I shall give it.

Ishita look at him and said- excuse me whose medical reports.

Manager- why I will tell u.r u doc.

Ishita- yes I am.can I see the reports.

Manager thought she is the cancer specialist and gave her Raman's reports.she took the report and gone through it.she was stunned at the revealation. She look at the date when his cancer got confirmed.it was a day before they had a fight and he told her to get out of his life.realisation hit her,she was crushed on the couch.tears started running down her cheek feeling the pain he must have gone through.

Ruhi was sleeping in her arms tired of the events happening around her.she hugged ruhi's sleeping form more tightly and said- bachcha,papa was going through so much but he didn't let me know anything.he is so bad.we will not talk to him.he left us when he needed us the most.she said crying bitterly.

Ishita was sitting in the same place hugging ruhi tight when Raman came out of the cancer room after full check up.he was absolutely alright.just few bruises and little wound.his manager was supporting him.

Raman- I told u naa,I am absolutely alright.u were worried for no reason.

Manager- its my duty to be worried for u.let me take u to my ward.

Raman- no way.I am not going to the ward again.take me back to the park.I have to seek forgiveness from someone and thank her too for keeping our most previous treasure safe.

Manager- but sir u r,

Raman- no but.I wanna go.let's go. Saying so he was going when he saw ishita sitting in a corner hugging ruhi hard.she was crying silently oblivious of the world.he got worried seeing this.

Raman went to ishita and said shaking her- ishita ishita what happened. Why u r sitting here like this.is everything alright.is ruhi fine.

Ishita look at Raman emotionlessly and simply kept her head on his chest.

Ishita- take me somewhere Raman.

Raman wounded his arms around her and took her to his car.she was following him like he is her master.

Soon they were in his hotel room.he took ruhi from her arms and placed her gently on the bed.covered her properly with the quilt and kissed her forehead lovingly.

After that he goes to ishita and said holding her hand- I know ishita,I have hurt u alot.I ditched u when u needed me the most.I never thought that u could be pregnant that time.I am a bad man.I did wrong with u.but please give me a chance to rectify my mistake. Please ishita now I understood what u meant to me.please forgive me.I can't live without u and ruhi.i am ready to give up anything for u.i can leave the world for u.just give me a chance.he was go on saying but didn't want to tell her the main reason behind his behaviour coz he knew she will not forgive herself for leaving him but little he know that ishita know everything already.

Tere liye duniya chod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake

Ishita who was looking at him without any expression but with moist eyes ,couldn't take it anymore .she just hug him tightly and cried loudly.he was shocked at her behaviour but he prefer to reciprocate the hug then asking anything.he too cried hugging her tight.both were crying bitterly pouring all pent up emotions.


After some minutes,

Ishita- I will not forgive u Raman.not now, but never.u cheated me Raman. U cheated me.

Raman- please ishita listen to me.

Ishita- no Raman,u listen to me.u did so bad with me.u loved me unconditionally. Did everything for me.loved me,care for me and pampered me like anything.but when it came to me,when I should take care of u.u send me far from u.why u did so Raman.answer me.

Raman- what do u mean.did u,

Ishita- yes I know. U had cancer,cancer Raman.u didn't told me anything .just send me far so that I can be happy.when u were in so much pain.my raman who was afraid of needles ,whose hand i hold when he has to take injection.u gone through so mych pain without me.hundreds of injection u must have taken without me.u were in sheer pain but send me away thinking i can be happy without u.u really thought I could be happy without u.

Raman- I thought u will die crying after my death.I thought it will be better that u hate me then crying for me.

Ishita- u really think I can ever hate u.no Raman I can never hate u.but its not ur fault but mine.u told me to go and i went away from u.never ever thought that how could ur love changed within a day.i never turn back to see how r u.and why u did this.i am so sorry raman .please punish me.

Raman- its not needed ishita.it was a bad phase of our life.its over.now we will be together always.

Ishita hugged him tight and said- u will never leave me alone naa.

Raman- where i will go leaving u alonr.after all u r my destiny.

Kuch bhi nahi hai yeh jahan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahan
Ki tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Ishita- I love u Raman.

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahi
Naa dena kabhi mujhko tu faasle
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake

Raman- I always thought u r my biggest fan,but I got my bigger fan then u..he said trying to lighten the atmosphere.

Ishita- who is ur biggest fan then me.I was ,am and will be ur biggest fan forever.noone can take my place.she said sulking.

Raman smiled between tears and said- nope ruhi is my biggest fan.my chotuest and craziest fan.

Ishita- yes she is ,ur craziest fan.but she also can't love u the way I do.she said cupping his face.

Raman look at her and found that she is looking lovingly at him.

Aankhon ki yeh hai khwahishein
Ke chehre se tere naa hate
Neendon mein meri bas Teri
Khawabon ne li hai karwate

Raman close his eyes feeling her touch and a tear fell of his eyes.ishita came near and kissed his tear.

Raman- show me how u love me more then our ruhi.

Ishita came near him and sat on his lap and started kissing him softly all over his face.

Ishita kissed his temple and said- this is for every day u spent without me and ruhi.

Then she kissed his eyes and said- this is for every tear u shed for me.

Then she kissed his nose and said- this is for every breath u took without me.

Then she kissed his cheek and said- this is for the smile which is lost due to me.

At last she kissed his lips and said- this is the compensation for every song u sang without me.saying so she took his lips in a soul searing kiss.they start chewing each other's lips hungrily.soon they were fighting for dominance.at last Raman entered her mouth relishing her flavour.he sucked her lips hungrily. Soon they broke the kiss in need of air.

Raman put his head in the crook of her neck and said- there r many more places where u can show ur love.which needs compensation for all these lost years.

Ishita hold his hand and said- I also need compensation for all these lost years.she said making him touch herself.she closes her eyes trying to feel his touch.he slowly start rubbing his hand on her back and pulled her closer. She shivered under his touch.he unzip her kurti and slid it.he started dropping wet kisses on her shoulder while she hugged him more feeling heavenly.

He picked her in his arms and took her to another room.he placed her gently on the bed and soon they were indulge in loving each other passionately. The hurt and pain of loneliness get ended by the happiness of togetherness. He started dropping open mouth kisses on her navel coming up.she open her arms and engulf him in her embrace.he kissed,sucked and loved her bosoms leisurely and she was moaning in pleasure having him in her arms after ages.after some time he entered her filling each others emptiness. Soon he was sleeping hugging her tight.she caressed his hair and gave it a finger kanghi.she kissed his forehead lovingly.

Ishita- (st)thank god that ruhi and Raman met.otherwise we will always be separated without any reason.thanks murugan for bringing me back in his arms .where I belong too.

Ke Teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Yeh duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake

Tere liye duniya chod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Yeh tu kabhi soch naa sake

That's all.it was the last part.enjoy and don't forget to leave ur lovely comments and hit like button.if I get 150 likes then I will give an epilogue of this story. So don't forget to press like button.


Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
Rkchinju thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely story Akku 😳
Beautiful written 👏
Really loved it a lot...
keep writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rkchinju

Lovely story Akku 😳
Beautiful written 👏
Really loved it a lot...
keep writing 😊


thnxx roshni di
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update di
ishita got to know d truth
both apologised to each other
n d end was nycc
waiting 4 d epilogue
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yippee me first
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome os akku😃
Loved it loads😃
Felt sad that ishra is away😭
Finally they met 😃
And they're together forever😳
Superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tanu...awesome os
Loved it so much
Interestingly written...the time line and all
Perfect Ishralicious story
cutieruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated last part of my story.have a look.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Rakshu dii
Thank god raman is f9 now
Ishita felt soo bad for dubbing his love nd leaving him alone wen he was in soo much pain
They mises each other soo much
Plz do give an epilogue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!
Beautiful update Di!
Finally IshRa are together.
Ruhi reunited them!
Loved this TS di!
Update the epilogue soon!
Waiting... :))

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