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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is the first os of this song os thon.thanks Pooja di for giving me this chance.the song was suggested by nidu.thanks nidu for giving me chance to write on ur favourite song.

Wajah tum ho

Everyone in the auditorium applaud aloud for welcoming the most famous and everyone's favourite singer,RKB.

Everyone was shouting in happiness seeing him near when he start singing in his magical voice.

Kaise kahoon ishq mere tere
Kitna hoon betaab main
Aankhon se aankhen mila ke
Chura loon tere khawb main

Tere saaye hai saath mein
Yaara jis jagah tum ho

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho

Every voice came to a halt hearing his magical yet heart wrenching voice.anybody can feel his pain through his voice.every eyes get moist hearing his voice.

Very soon the live performance got over and Raman came back to his vanity.fans came near his vanity to get a glimpse of him but his bodyguards didn't allowed anyone to meet him.he sat on the floor crying his heart out as he was missing her alot,her love and care.

Raman Kumar bhalla, a famous singer .loved by one and everyone .he is full of attitude ,he is a ruthless man.everyone think he is like that coz he is successful but only few knows thay deep inside he is a shattered man.and he is shattered coz his love,his ishita left him five years ago.

He was buried in his pain ,when someone knocked the door.Raman raised his head and ask,who's it.

It was his PR manager- sir its me.sir we r getting late.we have to leave for Spain.there a concert is arranged for u.we have to leave asap.

Raman wiped his tears and said- I am coming.

Very soon ,he is on the plane to go to Spain.after sitting in the plane all he could think was her.her innocent face,her cute antics,her smile and her teary eyes when she was going away from him but he was such a jerk that he didn't bother to stop her and now he is all alone after getting so much name and fame.

Raman- (st)I know ishita,I did wrong to u.but please come back .its so difficult to live without u.now I understood what u mean to me.today I am standing on the top but alone. Please come back. Thinking so he close his eyes remembering the time they were together.

Flashback

At that time Raman was a new singer and he was slowly establishing himself in this new world.his voice was loved and appreciated by one and all.one day he was going for a concert .many were applauding but not for him but for the main singer.raman gave them a smile thinking one day they will applause for him and was going when a girl shouted,RKB. I love u .

He stop in mid hearing that voice.he turned and saw a girl in early twenties standing on a car and cheering for him.she was wearing a pink tee with black Capri.he smiled at her and gave her a flying kiss.she jumped and acted to catch it.and put it near her heart.he smiled and went inside the auditorium.

Soon he was in concert,main singer was someone else, Raman was just a supporting one but that girl was shouting just for him .Raman smiled seeing her cute antics while the main singer pissed off.

After finishing concert everyone ran to the main singer for his autograph but that girl came to Raman and hugged him tight.and kissed all over his face.

Ishita- hi rkb ,its a pleasure meeting u.I am ishita ,I just love ur voice and u too.I am ur biggest fan.ekdum pagal wali.my room is full of ur posters.big one,very big one.she was going on blabbering while Raman was complete lost in her .her beauty,her innocence.the way which she was admiring him.

His trance was broken when she shook him and said- can I get ur number.pleez pleez.she said almost pleading.

Raman smiled and gave her his number.she was so happy.she hugged him again and ran after kissing him again.Raman stand there ruffling his hair like an idiot.

Soon they start talking, then dating.very soon they fell in love with each other,but Raman was not proposing her.she was waiting for his confession but Raman was sad coz he was not getting established in his career.ishita was with him every time.whenever he got disheartened by the response of people ,she use to motivate him.love him beyond everything.she was a great support system for him.slowly he started getting the success he deserves.

Once there was a concert in Bangalore,where he took her along with him.he took her to the party arranged by the sponsors. She was wearing a pink net saree with open hair and looking ravishing. Everyone was looking at her holding their breath including Raman.observing everyone's gaze he felt possessive and jealous.ishita was enjoying his possessiveness and thought to make him confess.soon couples were invited to dance.

She started dancing with a man leaving Raman.just when Raman pulled her and start dancing with her.

Ishita- what r u doing Raman.

Raman- what r u doing Ishita.dancing with another man.when u r just mine.

Ishita- what,what did u said.

Raman grabbed her waist and said pulling her closer - yes ishita.u r mine just mine.I love u alot.

Ishita- I love u too.let's go from here.I am not feeling good here.

Raman- let's go.saying so they went back bidding adieu to the sponsors.

Soon ishra were in their room.he pulled her to himself and start dancing.
Kya jaane tu mere iraade
Le jaaunga main saansein chura ke
Dil keh raha hai
Gunaahgar banjaa
Bada chain hai inn
Gunaahon se aage

Main ghumshuda si raat hoon
Meri khushnuma subah tum ho

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho

They were dancing passionately and locked their lips in a passionate kiss.they kissed each other hungrily and soon they were in bed drown in their passionate love.

Soon Ishita shift in his house and they start leaving together.Raman was getting successful and his behaviour start changing towards ishita.he started taking her for granted.every time she tell about spending time together he deny saying that he is busy.

Ishita started getting affected by his indifference. Raman started getting angry every time she talk to him about getting married.

One day,

Ishita- Raman,my parents want to see me settled.they r searching groom for me.before they finalize anyone for me.let's go and meet them.

Raman came closer and said- come on Ishita.we r so young .this is not a time to get marry.he said kissing her shoulder.

Ishita- please Raman.this is high time u have to get serious about our relationship. We r living together.did u know what it means.if my parents will come to know about this.they will be shattered.let's get married before things go out of our hand.she said holding his hand.

Raman shrugged off her hand and said- stop ur rubbish about marriage.I am not going to marry anytime soon.my career is just started .let me enjoy this phase of my life.I don't want any burden on me now.

Ishita- what do u mean,am I a burden on u.

Raman- its not like that.

Ishita- then what is it.tell me Raman,just tell me what do u mean.I want answer ,r we going to get married or not.

Raman-see ishita,I can't marry u.I am getting so much fan .mainly girls,if I marry now.my craze will lessen.my career is most important for me.

Ishita- and what about me Raman.she said with tears.

Raman- career rahega toh bahut ishita milegi,career nahi raha toh tum bhi chod kar chali jaogi.(many girls will come if I have a career).

Ishita- bahut saari ishita.I am just one out of many.she said crying bitterly.

Raman- uff stop it.I can't take this crap.

Ishita- I am crap.yes I am a crap only who loved a crap like u.I hate u Raman.I hate u.

Raman- if u hate me then just go away.I don't need u.I am successful, the most popular singer RKB.I don't need anyone.I can live with my success.he said smiling.

Ishita- u really want me to go.if I went naa,I will never come back.

Raman- just get out.leave my house now.

Ishita went from his house crying bitterly.

Flashback end

Raman was sobbing silently remembering her.

Raman- I am sorry ishita.I behaved so rudely with u.I never wanted that but I had to do that.coz I was dying due to blood cancer.when I was so sure about dying all I could think was .so i broke ur heart to save u.but my bad luck.I got saved.now I have name,fame,money, life but not my love. Kaash main tumhe dhoondh pata.(wish I could find u),please come back to ur Raman.coz I couldn't live without u jaan.

Hai yeh nasha
Yaa hai zeher
Iss pyaar ko hum
Kya naam dein

Barson adhuri hai ik dastaan
Aaja isse aaj anjaam dein

Somewhere in the other side of world,

A lady was busy in doing her work when her attention went to the TV which is providing news for the day.

The biggest news of the day is the famous singer ,RKB,is coming to our city for his concert.the people r going crazy to welcome him.and his pic was showing along with the news.

She caressed his pic on the screen,tears made way down her cheek seeing him after ages.

Tumhe bhooloun toh kaise main
Meri pehli khata tum ho

Main jo jee rahi hoon
Wajah tum ho

That's all for now.I know its incomplete.will complete it if I get good responses. And the song will be milke bhi hum naa mile,suggested by shri.please try to like and comment today only coz tomorrow another writer will update her os.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Correction in my name
it's Akriti
n do tell me d song on which i have to write d OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pankhuri di has already written an os on it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Thankyou pooja di n raksha di for adding me as writer
wud luv to read n write OS here
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: akriti154


pankhuri di has already written an os on it


So what,I will write my own not her story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Some songs i wud suggest are
tu jaane na (ajab prem ki gazab kahani)
phir le aaya dil (barfi)
tum se hi (jab we met)
ek din teri rahon me (naqab)

Tujhe bhula diya (anjaana anjaani)
Tujhe yaad na meri aayi (kuch kuch hota hai )
tere liye(veer zaara)
darmiyaan (jodi breakers)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi



So what,I will write my own not her story.


of course wud luv to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
hey...pooja di ...very nyc idea...
i would love read this many os...
haha...its really a treat...
i ll think of the song and will unres it soon if i got some songs for the writers...😊
tell me the dates plz

Hosh walo ko khabar of jagjit singh is also nyc...if anybody would write on that?
Edited by tan001 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Can i suggest di...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Tum hi ho.
On request of Nida..
Pooja will post...😛

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