#3 KHAMOSHIYAAN (Part:21A&B pg-12)(misunderstanding)1april

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So.. happily opening the thread 3 of the story.. n all credit goes to u all my lovely readers... jada kuch.. nhi khaungi.. bs itna khaugi.. keep supporting


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Khamooshiyaan


Part : 20A


Night time they both decided to spend night in store room only as manik wants that n she agreed.


They r setting on floor n manik is setting wid support of wall n nandini is lying like her head on his lap n their r entwined with eachother n they were remembering about their childhood memories on which they laughing


"Manik.. "nandini called him lovingly n manik just hmmed


"When i was so angry wid u.. n locked myself in room n u wait for me to open the door full whole night "nandini said remembering about that incident


"Jaan.. i remembered everything.. tum mujhe bhut jada naraj thi.. kyoki meine tumhre fav. Toy todh diya tha.. "Manik said smiling as he also remembered about that


Flashback


Nandini n manik playing in living room


"Nandu.. chl na hide seek khte hai.."manik suddenly said as he don't like to play with her doll he feels bore as they r girls type games


"Manik.. tumhai nhi khlna jao.. mein tu apni doll ke sth hi khelungi.."nandini said setting doll hair n he makes irritated face


"Nandu.. chl na.. yr.. mujhe sirf terhe sth khlna.. hai.."manik said folding his hand around his chest


"Haan.. toh meine.. kb mna kiya.. u can play wid me with doll.."she said showing him 32 teeth n manik smiles evily as his smally monster mind plans something


"Tu nhi chlegi.. na.."he asked angrily n she nodded


" give me my doll back"nandini roared as he snatches her doll


"Nhi dunga.. phle tumhai mere sth khlna padhega."he demanded n she make angry faces


"Okay.."she said making a sad pout


"Now give my doll back.."she said forwarding her hand n he give it immidiatly


"Chl.."manik about say something but cutted by nandini shout


"Manik... "she shouts loudly as the doll got broken when manik snatch it from nandini hand


"Chotu.. dekh yeh meine jan kr nhi kiya.."manik said in low voice as he know he have to face the worst


She start crying loudly.. taking doll in her hand


"Nandu dekh mein dad se bol kr aur mangava dunga stop crying na.."he tried to make her stop crying n nandini's mom also came


"Nandu.. kya..hua "nandini's mom asked n she showed her doll


"Mumma iss monstu ne meri fav doll thodh di.."she complained b/w her sobs n manik was standing quite with down head


"Baby.. kya.. papa aur doll leange.. ushe glti se.. tuth gye hogi.."nandini's mom said n nandini get more angry as she take manik's side


"Mumma u always take his side.. mein aap se bhi kati.. hn.."she said n ran toward her room n locked the door


"Ishita maa.. i m sorry.. meine jan ke nandu ki doll nhi thodhi.."he apologized n he called nandini's mom as ishita ma n she also love manik like her own son


"It's okay.. beta.. don't worry.. abhi gussa hai na.. thodhi dr mein mn jaegi.."ishita said lovingly


"Nhi mein ushai manva kr hi ghr jauga.."he said n ran toward her room


"Nandu.. i m sorry.. "he said knocking the door


"Monstu.. just go.. u r so.. bad.."she shouts angrily from inside


"Nhi jaunga tb tk tu bhr nhi aegi.."he said n sit there only


"Manik.. beta go home.. bhut rt ho chuki.. hai. Uska gussa shant hoga.. jaega toh.. voh khudh tumhre pass aa jaegi.."ishita said but manik nodded n whole night he slept there only


Flasback over


"Jaan.. u r crying.. uff.. nandini.. mujhe toh lgta hai ek din tum ro ro kr yha flood le aogi.."manik said in a fun way to make her smile but she didn't respond as she lost in deep thought


"Nandu.. wht happened.."manik asked now in worried tone wiping her tear


"Nthng.."she said removing her head from his lap n wiping her tear set with him


"Jaan.. look.. at me why don't u understand.. now i m there for u.. i want to share yr each n every pain ab.. tumhre hr gaam mere hai.. "he said cubbing her face n both looked deeply into eachother eyes n again silent tear fell from her eyes


"Manik.. tumhai pta hai.. tumhre jane ke bd i lost my everything... tumhre jane ke bd mein kabhi khush ji hi nhi.. payi.. muma papa leaves me forever.. sb bolte it was me who killed my parent.. but kisne yeh nhi socha ek choti si bachi.. pr iss bt ka kitna effect padhta hoga.. jishne 10 sal mein apne parents kho diya ho.. aur upr se instead of consoling her they start blaming her manik voh bachi bhut tut gye thi.. "she said n crys holding him tightly n manik also feels like cry on listening her but he control himself for her n he wanna wht exactly happened wid her parent but he know it's not the right time to ask her about that


"Jaan.. ushi.. behkri hoe.. dari hoe ladhki... ko kiske shahre ki Jarrorat thi.. aur jb tk hum kiske humdard nhi bante tb dard humhse aur hum dard se judha nhi hote.. "manik said moving his hand on her back try to calm her down


"Manik.. mein apne past ko bhul nhi pati becoz ushmein pain ki sivha aur kuch nhi hai.. mujhe dar hai ki khi mere badluck ki karan tumhai kuch na hojae.."she said n manik got angry as she called herself badluck for him


"Shut up.."manik shout angrily holding her hand n nandini shivered on his shout


"How dare u.. called yrself badluck of me.. jbse.. tum meri jindgi vapis ae ho kuch hua mujhe nhi na.. lekin tum yaad toh hoga tumhre ek week ane se.. phle.. mujh pr kitne attacts hue thai.. tb mujhe kuch hoa.. tha.. becoz my lucky charm is not wid me.. u were not wid me.. nandini.. apne.. aap ko bura bolna band karo.. believe me tum duniya ki sabse badhi purest soul ho.. "manik said each n every line from his heart n she also lost in his word


"I will want for the time when u will yreslf share yr pain with me.. n i know that will going to come soon.. n don't worry.. i will never force u for anything.. i understand u.."he said n nandini feel so blessed to have him n she also want to share everything with him but at right time


"Thank.. u.. for understanding.. me.. "she said hugging him


After confessing their love they sleep in eachother arm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow,,,,congrats dear...👏
so happy fr u...😊
love u n ur stories...
keep smiling n keep writing...⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 20B

Now it's 5am n nandini get up becoz of Alarm


"Meine kabhi nhi socha tha tum itne achai honge.. manik.. thank u.. god for sending making manik as my soul patner today i promising one thing manik i will never leave u.. tum bolge.. tb bhi.. nhi.."she said n place a sweet kiss on his cheeks n he smiles in sleep on her touch


"Oh.. god.. 5 bjh gye. Manik ko mujhe yha se bhejna hoga.. "nandini said n setting up


"Manik.. wake up.. 5 bjh gye.. hai sb uth jaege.."nandini said pushing him but he didn't respond


"Abhi bhi bilkul khumkaran ki traha sota hai... "nandini said n a smile appear on her face n stand up


"Abhi dekhti tum kaise nhi uthai.. "she said n brings the bucket of water n throws on him


"Wht.. the.."manik get up in a jerked n she is giggling


"Kya.. hua mere.. khumkaran aur sona hai.."she asked him b/w her laugh n manik anger flews away after seeing her laughing


"Manik.."nandini said slowly as manik holding her hand n pull her n she fall on him n he take her under him


"Kya.. hua.. jaan.. abhi toh bhut masti.. ho.. rhi thi.. "he said n her eyes were close in shyness n he come closer to her lips n about to captured it


"Manik.. late.. ho rha.. hai.."she said n manik giving a peck on her lips get up


Than she open her eyes sees him no nowhere as he left from there


"Khi.. naraj toh.. nhi hogya.. tu bhi na.. nandini.."nandini scold herself


"Jaan.. kya mein kabhi tumhse naraj ho skta.. hai.. "manik said holding her hand from back


"Manik.. tumhai.. abhi jaana hoga.. u know na kisne.. dekh.. liya.. tha.."she said worriedly


"Okay.. relax.. i m going.. aur haan.. ab plz.. mujhe tension mt dena.. phone pick krle.. na.."manik said before leaving n she smiles as how much he worried for her


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Nandini come outside after taking bath n mukti come into her room


"Angel.. toh.. kya.. kya.. tere..aur jeeju.. ke.. beech.."mukti said teasingly to her


"Mukti.. stop.. it.. "nandini said making her side come toward mirror n start combing her hair


Mukti about say something but Sanjeeta n Ram comes inside


"Gud.. mrng.. my.. daughters.."ram said loving hugging mukti n nandini together


"Gud Mrng.. dad.."both said together hugging him back


Than they wish sanjeeta also


"Beta.. hum dono.. mandir ja rhai.. hai.. tum dono.. breakfast kr lena.."Sanjeeta said before leaving n they both nodded


They left n nandini also about to go but mukti stopped her by holding her hand n said "tu.. kha.. ja rhi.. hai.. abhi.. tune.. mujhe bhut kuch btana.. hai.."


"Mukti.. kya.. btana.. hai.."nandini said now while arranging her bed


"Ki.. kl.. rt kya kya hua.."mukti said now setting on bed


"Mukti tere.. ja mind ja rhai vaisa kuch nhi.. hua.. okay.. "nandini said n mukti looked get up n stares her


"Seriously.. kuch.. nhi.. hua.."mukti asked her in disbelief

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"Mukti shut up.."nandini said angrily n mukti n nandini both laugh

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"Angel.. i m sorry.. again.. mein.. tumhai.. ek bar phir misunderstood kiya.."mukti apologise while they having their breakfast


"Mukti.. it's okay.. "she said n mukti hugged her


"I love.. u.. Angel.. "mukti said happily..


"Angel.. i m going out.. mein thodhi der mein aa.. jao.. gi.."mukti said getting up from breakfast table n her face was glowing n nandini never seen mukti so happy


"Kya.. bt hai.. mukti.. u know tumhra face aaj.. kitna.. glow.. kr rha hai.. akhir bt kya hai.."nandini said n mukti blushes

"Omg u r blushing.. mukti.. bta na.. kon hai "nandini said


"Angel i wanna tell u but abhi nhi.. i will tell u.. myself when the right time comes.."mukti said n nandini smiles


"I m so.. happy.. for u.."she said while hugging her


Mukti left to meet Cabir happily
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After sometime nandini watching tv n she got shocked that news


"Iss.. admi.. ko.. dunde.. pr 1lakh ka inam.. iss adami ka naam guru btaya ja rhai.. jo apne aap ko ek bhut badha criminal smjhta hai.."news reporter said n she immidaitly comes to know manik is behind all this


"Manik wht have u done.. "she said worriedly Palming her face n than get up immediately called him


"Manik.. tum thik ho na.. yeh tumhne kya kiya u know na.. guru bhut powerfull hai voh kuch bhi kr sakta hai.. "nandini said all this in one go as soon as manik picked up the call


"Jaan.. relax.. i m Alright aur voh kuch nhi krta believe me.. aur mein milkr tumhai sb btauga.."manik said n nandini closing her eyes make herself calm


"Manik.. mujhe bhut dr lg rha hai.. khi tumhre iss act vjha se.. "nandini said worriedly on phone while talking manik


"Jaan.. relax.. i m sure kuch nhi hoga.. aur don't worry i m perfectly f9.."manik said he try to calm her down


"Manik.. u don't know.. voh.."nandini about say something more but manik cutted her


"Jaan.. aaj hum sbko sb bata denge aur mujhe tumhai kuch btana hai.."manik said n she remain silent for some sec.


"Ma.."she about to call his name but stoped by seeing one person


"Tum.. "nandini said n the person snatches the phone from her hand n throw it


"Nandini.. hello.. kon vha.. nandini..."manik shouts from the other side as he got hell worried n than he again tried her call but now it's coming switched off


"Khi.. meine yeh sb krke glti toh nhi krdi nhi mein apni nandini ko kuch nhi hone dunga.."manik thinks n left from house


"Hello.. mukti.. where kya.n tum ghr pr ho.. aur nandini kaisi.. hai"manik dailed mukti no. While driving the car a soon as she picked manik brust out with question


"Manik.. relax.. aur btao bt kya hai.."mukti said n manik take a long breath n tell her about his weirdness


"Manik.. aisa kuch nhi hoga tumhne jo kiya bilkul thik kiya hai.. mein bhi ghr hi ja.. rhi hn nandini bilkul thik.. hogi.."mukti try to relax him but herself by listening him she got so much worried n turns the car to come back home


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"Navya tum yha.. "nandini said as the phone who snatched the from her hand is navya n she angrily throws her phone


"Tum toh humhai bhul hi gye thi.. Mumbai ane badh.. lekin hum kaise bhul skte.. hai..na phone na koe sandhesh "she said dramatically


"I m sorry.. navya actually.. i got so busy.."nandini about say something but navya hugged her


"Buddhu don't need to say sorry i know wht u r going through.."navya said n nandini about to ask wht she is talking about but she herself start telling


"Manik.. ki.. engagement.. mukti ke sth ho rhi hai na.. nandini tum kb tk apni sari kushiyan kurban kr dogi.. uske liye jisko tumhri kadhr tk nhi hai.."navya said breaking the hug n she misunderstood everything n she hates mukti allot n nandini is nodding


"Navya.. aisa.. kuch nhi hai.."nandini try to explain her but she stopped her


"Nandini humhai kuch nhi suna.. humhre yha ane ki ek hi vjha hai.. tumhai tumhre pyaar se milna.. hai.. aur mukti witch ko hum chodhege.. nhi.."navya said n the door opened suddenly n mukti comes inside n hugged nandini without noticing navya


"Oh.. angel.. u.. okay.. na.. pta hai tune mujhe aur manik ko kitna dhara diya.. tha.."mukti said n nandini got confused wht she is talking about


"Mukti stop acting.. "Navya shouts n mukti break the hug n see her


"Navya.. tum yha.. "mukti said n navya looked at her angrily as she is thinking mukti didn't changed n she is snatching nandini love from her


"Haan.. hum yha.. aur hum tumhra ghatiya sa plan hai na voh kabhi pura nhi hone denge.."navya said angrily n mukti looked at her with questing looks


Before all this confusion solved manik comes inside n hugged nandini tightly


"Thank.. god.. nandu u r okay.. "Manik said hugging her more n more tight n navya n mukti amazed to see manik cares toward nandini


"Ma..nik.."nandini called him very difficultly as he hugged her so tightly


After breaking the hug nandini about say something but before that without bothering about the surroundings manik sealed her lips n start sucking n chewing cubbing her face n soon she also responded fisting her hand in his hair n she also lost in kiss n forgot that 2 more person r present there in the room


Mukti is smiling n navya palmed her eyes dramatically n they both witnessed their unconditional love for eachother which beyond anything which didn't bother about anything..



So.. here is next part promo ne dara kr rkh diya tha.. but the person is navya.. n guy.. lots of twist r coming.. but don't worry.. no manan separation n many secrets r hidden which will revealed soon.. so stay tune with the story..

Love Mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update dear

Thank God it's navya hum log to daar hi gaye the ki kahi guru hi na aaya ho

Loved it
Waiting for the next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread

Amazing update
Loved it
Thank god nandu is safe
Manan cute moments
Awesome update
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all Congo me hack for new thread...
U deserve it👏
Wow awesome update...
Manan were soo cute and adorable...
Manik is soo understanding...
Nandu is soo happy to hv him...
So manik placed a bait for guru to come out...
Mukti and manik were soo scared for Nandu...
So navya sis here...
Manik jst came and hugged her and kissed her without caring...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
liked the store room part very much...
n thank god,its navya...
after reading promo,,i got worried to think about guru...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...lets see what will guru's step against manik's plan...
tysm fr the superb update...continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update vry vry vry happy continue soon plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update!!
Loved manan old memories!
Beaytifully written!
And congrats on a new thread!!!
You deserve many more
Eagerly waiting for next
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon.
Take care😳😃

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