Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72) - Page 13

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achha😡😡
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update do pehle.. thnks baad me bolna...
usse pehle bola to baad nai karne wali me tum dono se...
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achha😡😡
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update do pehle.. thnks baad me bolna...
usse pehle bola to baad nai karne wali me tum dono se...

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Part-9 Face off Time

Ronnie : Kya!!! Kya bola tum Man...

Bhairavi : Ronnie Bhaiya... aapko itna bhi nai pata... chachi matlab chacha ki patni.. matlab sharad ki patni.. tu chinta mat kar mere bhai yeh log nai samje teri baat par me samaj gai...

Bhavana Aunty : Chakudi... wrong no h.. line dead h... Phone rakhde.. nai to sim card nikal dungi...

Bhairavi : To Barobar😛

Ronnie : Kya? Megha tumhara Chachi h... ? Matlab? Ba wo ba wo

Liza : RONNIE!! Tum aise time pe nai atak sakta man...

All doing dich dich...

Bhadresh : arey bol..

Ronnie : ba wo ... ek min man... mere saath rehne do ko English me kaise bolega...

Liza : ab tum English me bhi atakta h man... aa.. Let it be with me...

Ronnie : haan... Yeh Megha Sharad ka be with(BIWI) h.?

All looking with stern face...

Liza : RONNIE!! Abhi me tumko shoot kar denga man..Bandook lao koi.. BIWI ka b with karega tum... haan... siddha siddha Wife bol deta man...

(Bhairavi giving a stern expression here... & bhavana aunty silences her with her wrong no phone rakh de expressions.. & bhairavi does silent to barobar😛)

Ronnie : tum samjana man... bolo... Ghotala... Yeh Megha Sharad ka ... Wife h...?(asking silently to Liza is it ok now)

Hemant : haan Ronnie bhaiya.. Yeh hamari chachi hai..

Vasant- aeee gende kya bol raha h.. chup kar..

Varsha : hemant chup kar beta..

Ronnie- tum isse chup kyu karva rahe ho..tum bolo vasant ghotala ki yeh sach hai ya nahi hai..


Bhadresh - dekha baa dekha sab chup hai iska matalb yeh ladki sharad ki biwi hai.. Itne bada dhokha kiya hai inhone yeh sabke sab dhokhebaaz hai ..

Bhavna- boliye ghotala bhai ..aap sab chup kyu hai haan . sach boliye yeh ladki ka kya rishta hai sharad. Ke saath.aur haan ghumna mat ya phir yeh mat bolna ki hum toh mazzak kar rahe the

Bhadresh- baa tu inse kya puch rahi mujeh toh Ab yakin ho gaya hai ki yeh sab dhokhebaaz hai..aur mujeh toh pura yakin hai yeh log pehle masum ladkiyo ko jaal mein fasaate hai aur phir unke paas paise aur jevar chori karte hai..aur yeh log yaha Anna ko phassane aaye the..

Aur sabse bade dhokhe baaz toh yeh shri.. Shri..

Sharad anger was rising as because of him his family had to listen and they were in this situation...

Sharad- bas haan bhadresh bhaiya bas..ab ek aur shab mat bolna mere bhaiya ya mere family ke khilaf aap sab kya jaana chahte hai.. Haan ki mera aur megha ka kya ristha hai?? Toh suniye haan megha aur mera ristha Tay hua tha...Ab jaan liye na sach toh plz leave this house immediately ..aur hamare ghar ke mamale padh ne ki jaroorat nahi hai

Anna : Wat!!! Oh My God !! I don't believe this!! Sharad!!!

Bhadresh : Anna believe bhi mat kar... yeh logical ghotala to bharose k kabil hi nai tha... dekh isne ek ladki se shaddi kari h... aur use chod ke aaya h.. aura b tujhe phasana chahta tha... yeh to achha hua ki manav aa gaya aur tumhe iske pyaar me padne se bacha liya...

Manav : Bhadresh Bhaiya aap kuch bhi mat boliye... aapse kisne kaha Sharad ne Anna ko phasane ki koshish ki h..

Bhadresh : bola Ghotalo ka vakil bola... ye Ojha & sons in logo ne is ladki ko dhoka diya h use chod kar yahan chhup ke baithe the.. apna gaon chod ke... par yahan bhi Anna ko dekh kar laga hoga ki yeh ladki akeli h isse phasa lete h.. aur isse bhi loot kar yahan se rafu chakkar ho jate h.. par Anna abhi tak in logo ke jhaal me phasi nahi..

Manav- aap yeh sab kya bol rahe hai bhadresh bhaiya sharad aisa nahi hai

Anna-( looking towards sharad) manav sach hi toh keh rahe bhadresh bhaiya.jhut kya kaha hai ..bolo sharad aur kitni ladkiyo ke dil ke saath khelna hai tumne, kitni masum ladikiyo ko phassaya hai tumne..bolo sharad chup kyu ho Ab..

Bhadresh- aree yeh log kya bolenge Ab sach bahaar aagaya hai aur yeh shri shri ghotala kitne bhole baneka natak karte the mein toh kehta hoon sweety Singh ko bulaao
Liza - nai nai..pehle unko bone ka mauka do warna phirse sweety Singh hum par chillayega

Manav's anger was rising with every word of colonywalas but before he could say anything... one voice came roaring stopping all of them in their places...

Megha was angry on her self as because of her today her family has to listen



Megha : (fists bowled with not just anger but also controlling her superpower of giving electric shocks as Vasant had told her not to use superpower infront of colonywale openly) JAWAB MERE VASANT BHAIYA NAI ME DUNGI...

All shocked... Bhadresh actually stumbled in his place & so much frightened by her look that wanted to rush & hid sumwhere...

Megha : (further continues) haan me Sharad ki jeevan saathi thi patni nai... humara rishta tey hua tha... haan tha.. kyunki ab who tut chuka h... saalo pehle maine Sharad se jagda karke use chod diya tha usse rishta tod diya tha. .. aur hum saath hone se pehle hi alag ho gaye the.. Who bhi meri wajah se.. Sharad ki wajah se nai.. isme uski koi galati nai thi.. Ab mera Sharad se koi rishta nai h... Sharad ne mujhe bahut manane ki koshish ki par me nai mani.. isme Sharad ki kya galti?... Meri wajah se Sharad akela ho gaya, isme Sharad ki galti? Ab Alag hone ke baad agar who apni zindagi me aage badhna chahta h to isme bhi Sharad ki galti?

Aur kya kaha aapne Sharad Charitrahin h to Anna kya h? Anna to Manav se sacha pyaar karti thi na... to Sharad ne kya usse jabardasti ki thi ki tumhe mujhse pyaar karna hi hoga.. woh Anna ki soch thi.. woh Manav ko bhula ke Sharad ki aur khichi chali gai.. Sharad h hi itna achha aur sacha.. ki koi bhi use pyaar karle... aur agar kisike hote huye dusre ko apnana ya uski aur khichao ko charitrahin kehte h to Ojha Uncle ko bhi kahiye... woh to Lajjo Aunty k hote huye bhi dusri aurato ko, apni beti ki umar ki ladkiyon par bhi doore dalte h...

Aur baat rahi meri, to in logo ke yaha aane par mujhe ehsaas hua ki me galat thi.. aur Sharad kitna achha h.. aur mujhse kitna pyaar karta h.. par maine hi use choda tha to phir kaise aati uske samne... par phir bhi itne din intezar ke baad ayi.. isliye nai ki Sharad ko phirse paa sakuu, par isliye ki Sharad ko apni yaado se aazad kar sakku... Kyunki sachha pyaar to woh hota h jo apne ass pass saath na hone par bhi hume pyaar ka ehsaas karata h..

Aur baat rahi Mere Vasant Bhaiya ki.. to inke jaisa bada bhai to kahin dekha nai hoga aapne.. Ye hi the jinhone Sharad ko sambhala jab me use chod ke chali gai thi.. aur Sharad puri tarah se tutt gaya tha... akela pad gaya tha.. inhone isse apne saath rakha taki yeh akela na pad jaye...

Aur yeh kya Dhandha dhandha laga rakha h... yeh log jo bhi karte ho.. aap logo ko tang to nai karte na? aap logo ke ghar ka to nai khate na? khud aapne aap ko sambhalte h... aap log hi inke phiche pade rehte ho.. aur kya colony se bahar nikalne ki baat kar rahe h app... yeh log kahin nai jayenge..kya kar loge aap log...


Vasant : Megha beta plz shant ho jao... bolne do in logo ko.. hume to aadat h inki baate aur tane sunne ki... yeh koi pehli baar nai h beta... hum inhe apna parivar jaisa samajte h.. agar yeh log nai samajte aur hum pe shaq karte h.. to thik h... hum kuch nai kar sakte isme.. tum chup ho jao... kisiko kuch bhi bolne ne ki jarurat nai h...

Megha : Bhaiya aap itne ache h aur kisiko ulta jawab nai dete tab bhi yeh log aapke sar pe baith jate h.. ye Anna humare Hemant se kuch hi saal badi h.. aap isse itne bade h phir bhi yeh aapse tamiz se baat nai karti.. tab to koi kuch nai bolta... aur jab humara Hemant kuch galat shabd bolta h hindi me to sab use date h.. par jab Ronnie bhaiya galat bolte h to unhe koi kuch nai kehta.. kyu? Aap logo k saath hi itni naa insaafi kyu? Yeh to Achha hua ki us din mujhe Hemant ne bataya ki aap logo par yahan chori ka galat ilzaam laga h.. aur mujhse raha nai gaya aur me yaha ayi aap logo se milne.. tab pata chala yeh log aap logo ko kitna pareshan karte h... aur aap chup chap sehte h... aur agar aap se koi galati hoti h toh thik h galatiyaan kisse nai hoti..

Vasant : Megha beta maine kaha na bas karo aab... tum mujhe apna bada bhai manti hona..

Megha : haan bhaiya yeh koi puchne ki baat h..( but in mind being guilty)

Vasant : to bas chup ho jao

Vasant (to colony ppl..folding hands):Please aap log yaha se chale jaiye..muje kisi se na koi baat krni hai na koi explanation dena hai

Saying this he leaves from there

Megha:Ab agar kisi ne bhi kabhi bhi mere bade bhai ya unki family ko kuch bhi kaha to mujse bura koi nahi hoga

Manav is impressed by her..

All the colony ppl are offended n turn to leave..

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Manav is damn irritated with the colony ppl and is sitting alone in the garden as he knows that right now all the elders are having a conference against the ghotalas at Bhatt house...he is thinking of finding a way to distract the colony ppl from ghotalas


Anna when doesn't find Manav at Bhatt house comes out in search of him..on finding him lost in his thoughts she decides to talk to him to finish all the misunderstandings..


Anna:Hii Manav..tum yaha kya kar rahe ho


Manav(gets startled on hearing her voice):Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho


Anna:Manav maine bhi tumse yhi pucha..mai andar thi jab tumhe waha nahi dekha to tumhe dhundhte yaha aa gai..but tum kaha khoye hue hai


Manav(Irritated with her):tumhe isse matlab..


Anna:I don't believe this..Manav tum mujse kaise baat kr rhe ho


Manav(Clapping):Wah Anna wah..maine tumse rudely baat ki to tumhe bura laga aur jo tum din raat ghotala family ko taunt karti phirti ho uska kya..kabhi socha hai unke bare mein ke unhe kaisa lagta hoga..


Anna:wow Manav..tum ab bhi unki side le rahe ho..tumne suna nahi..Sharad ne muje dhoka dia...he cheated on me


Manav:Whatt...kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum..kya Sharad ne tumhare sath zor zabardasti kari?tumhe kidnap krk le gya aur shadi kr li?Ya phir kuch aur hua bolo..

Megha aur uska rishta tey hua tha but they broke off phir Sharad yaha aya..jab wo aya tha tab wo single tha..

Anna:Par usne mere saamne kabhi bhi Megha ka zikr nahi kia

Manav:Par kyu karta..Megha uska past thi..jise wo bhulana chahta tha..isme usne kuch galat nahi kia..

Aur kis dhoke ki baat kr rhi ho tum..aise to mai bhi tumhe keh skta hun k tum muje dhoka de rhi thi..kehti thi ke mujse pyar krti thi par pura waqt Sharad ke sath bitati thi..abhi tak tumne mere aur Sharad ke sawalo ka jawab nahi dia..ohh m sorry ab to Sharad "Available" hi nahi hai coz Megha aa gai hai haina..to tumhe to majburan mere paas ana padega..tch tch tch..poor Anna..ye kya hua

Anna(Totally angry):Manav u r crossing your limits now

Manav:Nahi Anna maine koi limits cross nahi ki..limits to tumne cross ki baar baar Sharad ki ghotala family ki insult kar ke..u should stop it before its too late

Anna:I don't believe this..muje abhi tak samaj nahi aya ke tum baar baar unki side kyu lete ho..akhir lagte kya hain wo log tumhare...kya tumhare rishtedar hain?kia kya hai unhone tumhare liye?

Manav:Kya hum sirf unhi ki side lete hain Anna jinke sath humara koi rishta hota hai?kuch rishte dil se bante hain jo ke tum nahi samjhogi..

N haan u are asking me ke ghotalas ne kya kiya hai mere liye ... Kash mein tumhe samjha patah ki kya kiya hai unhone mere liye... Par tum samjh nai paaogi kyuki samajhne ke liye apne dost par bharosa hona chahiye ..lekin tumhe kaha hai..na mujpe na Sharad pe.. I m sorry Anna ke mein samjha tha ki mein tumhe ache jaanta hoon par no.. Mein abhi tak tumhe jaan hi nayi paaya

Saying this Manav leaves from there leaving an angry Anna behind
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Authors Note:
Hello everyone..a bigg hugg from mine n krishus side🤗..we both would love to thank you all for all the love and appreciation you all have given us..we both love reading your comments and it gives us happiness that our ss is being liked😃


Precap:
On ice-cold's special request we are including precap.😳
Okay soo u all are really excited to know what megha has done right..okay okay we will not let u wait..we will tell u...but at the end of ss😆just kidding..u all will get to know it soon..stay tuned..😉


N what will happen if the whole truth comes out in front on Manav?how will he react?n will he help Sharad realise the truth?how will Sharad react to the actual reality??

N what will happen to Anna-Manav if a new entry comes to rock this rockety-rickety boat??😆aha..twist in the tale haan...

But for all that you all will have to wait..now enough of my talks enjoy reading..will be waiting for your lovely comments😳
Edited by .anjali. - 9 years ago
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superb update👏👏
well done anju-krishu..
loved it..
well i wil b fair...
so no comments on 1st half.. apart frm bhadresh😡😡😡
anna🤢
loved manav's each & every word to anna.. she deserved this...
okk she was shocked & hurt knowing abt megha.. but this doesnt mean she can say anything...
hope manav gets a better girl than anna.. who is better than anna in all aspects...
i agree anna is a nice girl.. but her attitude & ego is such that makes us hate her...
so proud of u writers to make manav say this to anna.. as cvs to yeah kabhi dikhayenge nai...
but wat did megha do that sharad is so much angry on her.. & stil not so much angry on anna...??

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another wonderful update 👏
Coming to the update, uff this grl Anna.. she doesn't deserve our shanav both are too good for her 😡 thank god manav made her smell some coffee otherwise she sound so delusional
And this colony walas are 😡 😡 smjhate kya h yh khud ko
And kya mast reply dia h minto ne 😉 bolti band sbki. I like it 😆

Thanks 4 d precap waiting 4 next update 😳 this ss is ❤️
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Awesome updates dear 😃 Thanks hiyu for sending this story link to me 😆 Would love to read more 😳 Amazingly written Whats ur name dear writer ?
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Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome updates dear 😃 Thanks hiyu for sending this story link to me 😆 Would love to read more 😳 Amazingly written Whats ur name dear writer ?

there r two writers as this is collaboration.. krish & anjali..
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