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SCENE - 1
Hospital

The doctor was gone after explaining dolly condition.

Everybody was anxious to know what was happening as it had been 4 hours since dolly was inside. Soon after some time a nurse came to them.

Nurse - yha miss dolly ki family kaun h...

All in unison - ji hum...

Nurse became confused seeing a lot of people as saurav, viren,ramesh, mohan,sukku, umesh all ran towards her.

Viren - meri beti kaisi h nurse...

Saurav - dolly thik h na...

Umesh - baby kaisa h...

All of them started firing questions at her and doesnt let her speak. The ladies were watching with worried expression and nisha and kabir exchanged the knowing look.

Nibir - (screaming) AAAHHH...

Immediately the nuisance creating family turned to nibir who were smiling smugly at them.

Viren - kya hua... kuch chilla rhe ho tum dno... dikh nhi rha hm imp baat kar rhe h

Nisha - aap log baat nhi kar rhe ho... baat karne k lie samne wale ko bolne dena padta h...

Kabir too came forward and pulled umesh and sukku back who in turn pulled saurav too.

Kabir - nurse... pls btaeye dolly kaisi h ab...

Nurse looked at nisha and kabir with a smile and frowned at the other males.

Nurse - miss dolly ko baby boy hua h... ur vo abhi thik h... aap log unse mil sakte h bus unhe ward m shift kia hi ja rha h...

Saurav - to itni der se kyu nhi btaya aapne...

Nurse - (throwing daggers at him) aap bolne dete to batati na... vhi kehne aae thi... huh...

She spunned around and left while everyone thanked god for dolly and her baby's safety.



SCENE -2

Dolly was lying on the hospital bed with her eyes closed when the door of her room opened to reveal her full fledge family. She open up her eyes and saw her mother smiling at her.

Vimla - kaisi h dolly...

Dolly nodded telling all of them that she is ok as vimla kissed her forehead. Everybody wished her and congratulated her as she took her baby in her lap. Viren hugged dolly and took his grandson in his arms. Laxmi and rupan too came to dolly and hugged her followed by ramesh and mohan. Laxmi was carrying the little one in her arms when bunty her to give the baby to him.

Bunty - mummy mjhe bhi do chhota baby...

Jwala - nhi bunty mai badi hu na... mai pehle god m lungi...

Kirti - oe... tum dno se badi mai hu samjhe...

Sukku - oe... mai mama hu iska... mera turn pehle h...

Nisha - ae sukku... pehle mai...

Umesh - chup raho tum sab mai sabse bda hu na...

Aman - laddo tum bhi... mai bhi hu yha..

Kabir - are tum log lad kyu rhe ho yaar... hm sab se pehle iske papa ka no. H samjhe...

Dolly smiled at them and looked around the room filled with people but didnt saw the one she wanted to see. Her smile flattered and a slight fear gripped her. Nisha noticed the changed expression of hers.

Nisha - dolly di... tension mat lo saurav yhi h...

The elders went out of the room and sent saurav inside who was fidgeting with his fingers and had a nervous smile.

Kabir - lo bhai jiska no. Sabse pehle h vo aa gya... saurav yaar jaldi se baby ko god m le... yha sab line laga k apne no. Ka wait kar rhe h...

He signalled towards the cousins who raised their hands with cute n eager faces. Saurav chuckled and went to dolly who was holding the baby in her arms.

Dolly extended her arms towards him and looked at him expectantly. He watched the baby and dolly with a little quiziness but then took the boy in his arms. A smile spread on everyone's lips when he kissed the baby forehead.

Bunty - are ab to mera no. H na...

Everybody laughed as he whined and saurav gave the baby in his arms.

Saurav - (to dolly) tu thik h dolly?

Dolly - bilkul... tu andar kyu nhi aaya... maine socha ki...

Saurav - k mai chala gya...

Dolly nodded with moist eyes while saurav shook his head at her.

Saurav - mai kha jaunga... mai to yhi hu... bus maa ko phone kar rha tha vo aane hi wali h na...

She smiled as saurav side hugged her. They were still looking at each other when some quarreling voices disturbed them. They turned to see cousins bickering among each other with baby still in aman arms.

Saurav - oe kya halla macha rhe ho... abhi se mere bete ko dara do...

He took the baby from them and stood beside dolly.

Dolly - kyu lad rhe ho tum log...

jwalu - hm baby ka naam rakh rhe h... par koi kisi naam p agree hi nhi ho rha...

Kirti - ek idea h mere paas...

Sukku - lo ab miss blah ko idea bhi aate h...

Kirti - sukku... tere jaisa dimag mera kewal.alisha k lie hi nhi chalta samjha...

Sukku scowled at kirti as everyone laughed.
Kabir - (suspiciously) sirf suketu... kya...

Sukku - are kabir jiju... esa kuch nhi h ye kirti to paagal h...

Saurav smirked as kabir winked at nisha who was stiffling her laugh.

Aman - ohho ji tum sab ye chhodo... ur meri baat suno... hm sab naam btate h ur...

Kirti - ur jo achha lagega vo dolly di approve karegi...

Everybody cheered and agreed.

Saurav - to bunty tujhse shuru karte h...

Bunty - parth

Jwalu - daksh

Kirti - aarav

Nisha - aaron

Sukku - rehaan

Umesh - vansh

Aman - vivaan

Kabir - advik

Saurav - ahaan

Dolly looked at the parade of people who were giving her the pleading and cute looks to chose their name. She then looked at saurav who was busy with the baby. Dolly took the baby and looked at him with love.

Dolly - Ahaan... he is my ahaan...

Everybody started hooting and cheering when a nurse came in.

Nurse - keep quite... this is a hospital...

Everybody said sorry to her and pinched their ears making her smile. She gave them a last smiling warning and left.

Nisha - to dolly di... aap bhi sahi ho ha... saurav ka suggest kia hua naam select kia h...

Every body started going aww over them as dolly blushed while saurav winked at them. Jwalu and bunty stuck their tongues out at him while sukku n kirti scowled at saurav.


SCENE - 3


All were gossiping and playing with the baby ahaan when an elderly voice excused them. All turned to look at sudha who was standing at the door with a big smile on her face.

Dolly - maa...

Sudha smiled and went to dolly hugging her.

Sudha - congratulations beta...

Dolly - thank u maa...

Sudha - kha h hmara pota...

Dolly gave baby ahaan to sudha who cooed sweet things in his ears.

Sudha - to dolly... kya naam rakha h tumne...

Dolly - ahaan...

Sudha - hmm... ahaan... achha naam h... saurav ne suggest kia kya...

Dolly looked at her quizzically.

Sudha - (laughing) are 2 mahine se ye ladka saari baby names ki kitaabe laakar ghar m library bna rha h... ur to ur laptop p bhi naam hi dhund rha tha... ab itti koshish k baad bhi nhi dhund paya to sab bekar nhi jaega...

Dolly looked at saurav amused who was scratching the back of his neck while all the cousins go aww over him making him blush.
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SCENE - 1
HOSPITAL

Dolly was in hospital with saurav and cousins when doctor came in to check on her and send all of them out till she examine her.

Doc - i would want to keep dolly here for today just in case anything goes wrong which shouldn't... she will be discharged tomorrow...

Saurav thanked doctor as she left telling them another few imp things.

Saurav - tum log ab ghar jao... mai yhi rhunga dolly k paas... ur kal subah...

Kabir - uski tension mat le kal subah mai aa jaunga tum dno ko lene...

Nisha - par mjhe bhi rukna h dolly di k paas... agar unhe kisi cheej ki jarurat hui to...

Umesh - ha saurav... aman ya nisha m se koi ruk jaega tere saath... teri help k lie...

Aman - ha ur waise bhi ahaan k saath khelne ka mauka bhi mil jaega...

Saurav - nhi umesh iski koi jarurat nhi h mai manage kar lunga...

Kirti - are par agar raat m if u need anything kam se kam koi ur rhega to help ho jaegi na...

Saurav - ohho ms kirti... m very capable of managing my wife ok... ur waise bhi yha kewal ek hi insaan ruk sakta h... jo ki mai hu... to no arguments and tum sab ghar jaa rhe ho samjhe...

Nisha - kya yaar saurav...

Kabir - wifey tu sad kyu ho rhi h... chalo hm ghar chal k kal dolly ur ahaan k welcome ki preparation karte h...

Jwalu - wow... ekdum sahi idea dia h kabir jiju ne... n i have a plan...

Bunty - boli gareebo ki einstein...

Jwalu smacked his head from behind.

Sukku - are use maarna band kar jwalu ur apna plan bta...

Jwalu - are btati hu pehle apne kaan to idhar lao...

Soon they made a circle and jwalu explained her plan to them.

Kabir - kya baat h jwalu... m impressed...

Jwalu - thank u jiju...

Umesh - bus ab yhi khade rhoge ki chaloge bhi...

Aman - oh ha jaldi karo kitti tyari karni h...

All of them nodded their head in agreement and went to meet dolly for the last time. After playing with ahaan and talking with dolly, everybody left except saurav who stood smiling at the wanar sena.


SCENE - 2
GH


As soon as the cousins reach their house, dadaji asked them to be assembled in the courtyard.

Sukku - ab kya kia hm lgo ne...

Kirti - sukku tu itta darta kyu h yaar... kuch nhi kia h hmne... time mila h kya kuch karne ka...

Jwalu - vo to thik h... par tum log bhool gye kya abhi abhi hmne sumit k lie ek master plan bnaya tha...

Nisha - par hmme se to kisine kuch btaya hi nhi tha ghar m...

Kabir - par maa ko to pta tha na...

Umesh - khi aunty ne phasa to nhi dia hme...

Aman - viraj bhai bhi the hmare saath... vo esa nhi hone denge...

Bunty - to aakhir hua kya h... ur hm sab ese line m kyu khade h...

They all were still whispering when dadaji cleared his throat in order to gain their attention.

Dadaji - tum lgo ki baatein ho gyi jo to mai kuch bolu...

All of them smile apologetically towards him.

Dadaji - kal shaam ko ghar m dolly ur ahaan k lie pooja h... ur jha tak mai tum lgo ko janta hu... tum log bina kuch kie to use yha laaoge nhi... to abhi bta do kya chal rha h tum lgo k dimag m...

Everyone was surprised to hear that from singham.

Nisha then came forward and explained it to the elders, soon everybody was busy in preparing for both pooja and the surprise.

Nisha was looking at the pictures they have clicked in the phone with baby ahaan and was smiling looking at them when kabir came from behind and hugged her.

Nisha - kabir... kya kar rha h yaar...

Kabir - (snuggling in her neck) pyaar kar rha hu... duffer...

Nisha - (leaning on him) kyu koi kaam nahi h kya tjhe jo pyaar karne aa gya mjhe...

Kabir - (whispering in her ears) ye to sabse imp kaam h wifey... agar mai tjhe pyaar nhi karunga to tu mjhe bhool jaegi na...

Nisha - (giggling) kyu tu koi book ka chapter h jo tjhe bhool jaungi...

Kabir - nhi... par log esa kehte h ki apni biwi ko roj pyaar jatana chahie warna vo apne hubby se bore ho jati h...

Nisha - (raising her eyebrow) achha to log kehte h islie tu mjhe pyaar karne aaya h warna nhi karta...

Kabir - (turning her to him) nope... kyu karu mai tjhe pyaar... tu to busy h na tjhe meri kya jarurat...

Nisha - (wriggling her eyebrows) achha par maine to socha tha ki tjhe pta h ki mai tjhse kitna pyaar karti hu...

Kabir - (twirling her locks) mjhe kabhi btaya hi nhi tune...

Nisha - (encircling her arms around his neck) abhi bta deti hu... mai tjhse se bhot bhot bhot pyaar karti hu... (nuzzled her nose with his)

Kabir - (tightening his grip on her waist) glad to hear that...

He leaned to kiss her when something landed on floor with a thud making them jump out of their skin but they still remained in the embrace. They turned to look at kirti who was standing with her hands at her eyes and a basket of flowers lying on the floor.

Kirti - kya tum dno bhi... heart attack doge kya lgo ko...

They both chuckled and pulled away from each other.

Kirti - koi danger na ho to aankhe kholu??

Nisha - ha khol

Kirti opened her eyes and huffed at them as kabir smiled smugly at her. She picked the basket of flower and handed it to them.

Kirti - kaam karo tum dno... romance nhi...

She turned on her heels and marched towards the door. Nibir giggled as she went and kabir quickly pecked her cheeks before getting to work.


SCENE - 3
HOSPITAL


Dolly was taking a nap when saurav came back from the doctor. He looked at her sleeping feature then at the cradle placed beside her bed. Little ahaan was lying with his eyes closed. Saurav picked him cautiously in his arms and started cradling him back and forth.

Saurav - hey ahaan... open ur eyes... See ur daddy...

He cooed to the little boy while ahaan squirmed and open his brown eyes at him.

Saurav - hello little champ... how are u buddy... huh...

Little ahaan made a groggy sound. Saurav chuckled at the little bundle.

Saurav - do u see me huh buddy... so cute u r... when u will be a big boy know we will play games together...

He nuzzled his nose with ahaan earning a squeaky sound from the boy. He smiled as little ahaan put his palm on his cheek and kicked his legs.

Dolly opened her eyes to see a scene worth remembering. Saurav was still standing cradling the baby and talking to him in a sound lower than a whisper. The smile on his face was of million dollar.

Saurav turned and saw dolly looking at him with moist eyes. He went to her and sat by her side with ahaan still in his arms.

Saurav - (side hugging her) kya hua... ro kyu rhi h...

Dolly - nhi to kha ro rhi hu mai... mai to bus dekh rhi thi tu kaise baatien kar rha ahaan se...

Saurav - achha... ur dekhte dekhte teri aankh m kuch chala gya hoga kyu... tabhi ye aansu aa gye..

Dolly - (smiling through tears) ha vo hi...

Saurav chuckled and shook his head at her. He wiped her tears off and kissed her forehead.

Saurav - tu soja dolly... aaram kar samjhi...

She nodded and sighed in contentment as saurav placed ahaan in his cradle causiously.


SCENE - 4
GH


Everything was almost done by the night so nisha thought to relax in her room. Everybody else was already in their room after a whole days errands. As nisha reached her room and switched on the light, she was greeted by the room full of white and blue ballons and candles all over the place. She smiled wide and stepped in. Kabir too entered from behind and held her by her waist.

Nisha - kabir... ye sab kya h...

Kabir -ek chhotu sa surprise meri pyaari wifey k lie...

Nisha - kabir... aaj kya occasion h...

Kabir - hmmm... occasion... ha aaj meri wifey ne mjhe btaya ki vo mjhse kitna pyaar karti h to maine socha use surprise du...

Nisha grinned wide as he switched on a soft music and the two swyed through the music. They kept dancing in each others arms and stopped after an eternity.

Nisha - ab tera surprise ho gya ho to ye ballons leja k neeche saja de...

She raised her eyebrows at him while he scratched the back of his neck.

Kabir - tjhe kaise pta ye living room m lgane wale ballon h...

Nisha - ese pta h kyuki maine hi ye choose kie h ur abhi tak aadha hi space cover hua h... baaki tu jwalu ur bunty se chhupa k yha mere room m le aaya...

She smacked his head lightly and started laughing while kabir pouted.

Nisha - (sobering up) tu kitna cute h kabir...

She pinched his cheeks and hugged him tight while he grinned and hugged her back.

Nisha - i luv u...

Kabir - i luv u too...
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SCENE - 1
HOSPITAL


Saurav was sleeping on the chair when his phone rang making him wake up. He rubbed his eyes and read the message. He then looked at dolly who was almost ready to go home.

Saurav - ready???

Dolly - (taking ahaan in her arms) as i can ever be...

He smiled and they went into doctors cabin for the last examine. Saurav then called kabir who told him that he was already reaching in 10 min.


They came out and saw kabir waiting for them. Kabir smiled and side hugged dolly while saurav opened the door for her.

They were driving when kabirs phone rang and he smiled seeing the caller id.

Kabir - (handling his phone to dolly) le tere lie hi h...

Dolly looked at the caller id and smiled pushing the green button.

Dolly - hello...

Alisha - dolly di... congratulations... aap kaise ho.. thik to ho na... ur baby... baby kaisa h... aapki tarah cute h na... ur aapne naam kya rakha... ur abhi vo kya kar rha h... aapko pareshan to nhi karta na... ur...

Dolly - alisha alisha ... cools down girl... m fines... ur ahaan bhi thik h... ur abhi vo so rha h... ur mjhe bilkul pareshan nhi kia usne... tmhare saare questions k ans ho gye..

All of them giggled as alisha chuckled sheepishly.

Alisha - ha ho gye... abhi aap ghar pahunch gye...

Dolly - nhi raste m h...

Alisha - thik h ghar pahunchke mai aapko video call karungi... mjhe bhi ahaan ko dekhna h...

Dolly - ha baba... pakka jaise hi ghar pahuchungi sabse pehla kaam tjhse video calling ka hi karungi...

Alisha and dolly giggled and then bid their goodbyes.


Soon they reached GH and saurav helped dolly with ahaan. They stood at the entry steps as the door was closed. Dolly looked at kabir and saurav confused while they just shrugged and grinned at her.


SCENE - 2
GH


Dolly eyed them and opened the door to witness the loudest cheering of "CONGRATULATIONS" she has ever heard followed by cheerful hooting. She opened her eyes to look at her family members grinning wide at her. The elders of the house came forward and blessed her and baby ahaan.

Dadaji took ahaan in his arms while his eyes glistened with tears of joy. Dadiji stood by his side patting his shoulder.

Dolly stepped in gasped in surprise looking at the fully decorated house. There were white and blue baloons all over the place decorating the walls and the floor with blue fairy lights blending in to give a magical effect. In the center was placed a big canvas with pictures of new born ahaan and cousins with dolly, saurav and ahaan in center. There was a beautifully decorated cradle in center which has an outstanding wooden frame.

All in unison - CONGRATULATIONS NEW MOMMY...

dolly stood there with her hands on her mouth as the grp rushed to her and took her in a grp hug. Saurav and kabir stood there still grinning when umesh called them in too.

Dolly - thank u... such a cutes surprise...

Kirti - cutes nhi cute dolly di...

Dolly - tu samaj gyi na...

All of them chuckled and seperated as dadiji started speaking.

Dadiji - chalo ab bachho dolly ne aaram karne do shaam ko pooja bhi h na...

Everybody agreed and all scattered in different directions to look after the remaining work.


SCENE - 3
EVENING


everyone was in the courtyard sitting for the pooja as it was about to begin.

Guests and relatives were coming and were greeted by viren and mohan who were recieving them. Sudha,vasu and dadiji were seated too with dadaji and ramesh while the other gangwal ladies were with dolly. Cousins were scattered here and there taking care of the last minute details.

Dolly came and sat with ahaan in her lap, in front of the holy fire as panditji started chanting the verses.

Some ladies were sitting behind dolly were passing comments at her.

One of the lady - are is dolly ka to divorce ho gya h na...

Another - ha abhi time hi kitna hua tha iski shadi ko... Itni jaldi talaak bhi ho gya... jaane kaisi ladki h...

Previous lady - itni bhi kya jaldi thi... talaak hua nhi ki saurav ko phasa lia isne...

Another - ha to apne bete k lie pita bhi to chahie hoga na... ur saurav se achha kaun milega ise...

Previous - saurav bhi to jab dekho isike aage piche ghumta rehta h...

Another - maine to suna h ki saurav ki wajah se hi talaak hua h iska...

Previous - huh... chakkar chal rha hoga in dno ka pehle se... isilie to...

Dolly who was trying to avoid them for long just lost her last string of tolerance and snapped at them.

Dolly - (standing and glaring at them) bus aunty ji... ab ur kuch nhi...

All looked at her dumbfounded as she stood there seething with anger.
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SCENE 1-
GANGWAL HOUSE


Dolly was trying to tolerate them, but it was completely getting a nuisance, they were talking what they wanted too! It was high time for dolly to stand up for herself, saurav and ahaan. That was it, their nuisance was not tolerated anymore, and dolly stood up from her seat and turned towards them and said,
Abb boliyee kya bol rahi thi aap...??" asked dolly glaring at one of those gossiping aunties.
Maine kya bola...??! Tum kis baare me baat kar rahi ho...mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaraha...!" said the woman.
Arree aunty, humse kaafi badii hain aur kaafi experienced bhi...to aapko itnaa to pata hogaa hi ki jo bolo use face bhi karoo!" interrupted nisha.
Dolly asked nisha to stop as she herself wanted to sort this matter out. Nisha tried to interrupt again and talk for dolly but kabir stopped her from doing so by placing his hand on her shoulder. And they all stood there silent while dolly resumed what she was talking.
Haan ji...to maine aapse pucha ki aap kya bol rahi thi...!" asked dolly.
Abb sachch tumhe kadwa lagee to hum kuch nahi kar sakte beta...humne to bas wahi kahaan hain jo sabko dikh raha hain aur jo hain...!" said another woman of the same gossip-group.
Waah...ye baatein bol bhi kaun raha hain...agar sachchai ki baat karu naa...to pataa chal jaayega kaun zyaada paani me hain..lekin main aisa nahi karungi...kyunki humaare ghar me ghar aaye mehmaan se baat karne ka tareeka aur logon se bartaav karne ka achche se sikhaaya gaya hain...!" said dolly.
Haan...haan beta...to humne kya bola...tum job hi kaho sachchai to abb sachchai hi hotii hain...! Ekk se divorce hua aur doosre ko phasa liyaa...aur kya pataa teraa chakkar pehlee se hi chal raha hoo saurav ke saath...tabhi ye divorce bhi hua hain...!"said the woman.
Aapko badaa pataa hain...agar doosron ke ghar se zyaada khudke ghar me jhaak ke dekhti naa...to aapka beta aaj jail me nahi hota..."said dolly.
The woman was about to hit dolly, when saurav came in between and stopped the woman from doing so.
Himmat bhi mat kijiyeegaa...! Dolly meri hone waali wife hain...aur me uske against ek bhi baat tolerate nahi karungaa...aur jahaa tak ahaan ki baat hain...wo mera beta hain...mere aur dolly ka...agar aapko kuch bolna to boliye...kyunki aap jaise muh agar ek bandh hota hain to sau khulte hain...aapko baahar jaake j bolna hain boliye...lekin hum aapke saath badtameezi nahi karenge...kyunki ye sab kabhi hume sikhaya hi nahi gaya hain..." said saurav warning the woman.
Jis jis ko jaana hain yahaan se...khushi se jaa sakta hain..."said dadaji.
The gossiping women group walked out of the house making faces, while the remaining people clapped for dosa. They adored how saurav supported dolly everytime. Nisha encircled kabir's arm and said,
Saurav kitna achchaa hain na kabirr..."said nisha smiling.
Haan...aur dolly ke liye ek dum perfect bhi hain..."said kabir caressing nisha's hair.
Tu bhi mere saath humeshaa aise hi rahegaa naa...??" Asked nisha looking into his eyes.
Nishaa agar tu humeshaa aise hi khade rehne ki baat kar rahi hain...to sorry wo main nahi kar saktaa...subah se khade khade...pair dukh gaye hain yaar mere..."said kabir making faces.
Kabirrr..."said nisha and made a gloomy face.
Aree yaar main to mazaak kar raha hun...main tujhee chodke kahaan jaa sakta hun bataa...mere aur tere beechme fevicol waala bond hain,...aur tujhe hi pata hain fevicol ka bond kitna strong hota hain..!" said kabir giggling.
Nisha finally smiled hearing to his talks. This guy had the inborn tendency to make her laugh in whatever situation, and maybe that's why he was perfect for her. she quickly placed a small kiss on his cheek without anyone noticing it, and ran away from there. While he stood there smiling like a fool.


SCENE - 2
Soon, the program ended, and all the family was seated in the courtyard. And Ahaan was sleeping peacefully in dolly's lap. They all were having a discussion about dosa's future. Sudha who was sitting beside dolly spoke up,
Aakhirr aise logon ka muh hum kab tak band karwaate rahenge...hum jitnee muh bund karenge...utnee aur khulengee.." said sudha.
Baat to tum sahi keh rahi ho sudhaa beta...lekin aisee log mauke ka faayda uthaane me kabhi nahi chookte...!"said singham.
Jii uncle jii...issliyee main chaahti hun ki jitni jaldi ho sake utnii jaldii...main dolly ko apne ghar ki bahu banana chaahti hun! " said sudha smiling.
Aap shaayad sahi keh rahi hain sudhaa jii...humee dolly aur saurav ki shaadi jald se jald karaani chaahiyee..."said viren.
Sudhaa looked at saurav signaling him to ask dolly about this, saurav nodded his head and walked towards dolly, and knelt down before her, and said,
Dolly, although ye sawaal maine tujhse pehle bhi puchaa tha...parr ekk aur baar puchletaa hun...kya tu mujhse shaadi karne keliye aur mujhe jhelnee keliyee ready hain...??" he asked and giggled.
She looked down at ahaan who was smiling seeing his mother, thought for a while and said,
Kyun baby...papa ko haan boldee...??" She asked looking at the little ahaan.
While he smiled making noises, everyone there smiled looking at ahaan.dolly looked up at saurav's questioning face,
Kya bola baby ne..??" he asked touching ahaan's nose and making him laugh.
Baby ne bola ki papa ko haan kardoo...!" said dolly while the youngsters in the house hooted on this, and the elders clapped.
To theek hain abb...jald se jald shaadi ki taiyyariyaan shuru kartee hain uncle ji...main pandit ji ko aaj hi bulwa lungi...aur baat karlungi iss bare me..."said sudha.
Jaise tum kahoo beta...!" said singham.
There was happiness spread everywhere in the house today. Lakshmi brought s big box of sweets, and sudha fed dolly a piece out of it. Everyone was so happy today, the elders left for their work when samriddh entered into the house with a big bouquet in his hand, and walked towards the group. Others present there were happy seeing him, but kirti was irritated by his presence,
Tumhe kisnee bulaaya yahaan...???" she asked directly on his face.
Tumse matlab...??" said samriddh.
Arre...ladoo mat isko maine yahaan bulaaya hain..."said saurav.
Aur aisa kyun kiya tune ..??" asked kirti.
Main uska business partner hun...tum kaun hoti ho beechme aane waali..?" asked samriddh.
Bas...bas...rukoo ab! Shaant raho..!wo mujhse aur dolly se milne aaya hain..!" said saurav.
Whatever" said kirti and walked away in irritation, while samridhh went to dolly along with saurav and gave her the bouquet and congratulated them. He smiled seeing Ahaan, who too was smiling on seeing him.
Sorry wo main late hogaya tha saurav, traffic jam me phas gaya tha...warna me pooja sahi time par attend karletaa...I am really, really sorry for that!" said samriddh apologizing.
Arree...sorry mat bolo yaar...hojaata hain kabhi kabhi...! You shouldn't say sorry for such small things!" said saurav with a smile.
Okay...sorry for saying sorry then" said samriddh and giggled.
They talked for a while regarding their business matter, and after sometime he left due to busy schedule and the others had their gala time on the terrace and played with ahaan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SCENE - 1
GH (TERRACE)

Everyone was gossiping, sitting on the terrace except kabir as he went to see off viraj and vasu. After sometime, kirti went to her room as she gets an urgent call from office while sukku and umesh were called by dadaji. Aman went downstairs to help the ladies. Jwala and bunty too ran inside after receiving a call from rishi that he is on his way to meet ahaan. Nisha sat there with dolly and saurav while ahaan played in dolly arm.

Nisha was talking to saurav while he was half listening to her and was stealing glances towards dolly. Nisha noticed that soon and thought to give them some privacy.

Nisha - dolly di... lao ab sab chale gye h na to mai ahaan k sath khelungi warna koi mjhe use god m bhi nhi lene deta...

She pouted making a cute face as dolly chuckled seeing her. She then gave ahaan to nisha. Nisha stood on her feet with ahaan still in her arms and headed to her room giving them some time to spend alone.

She walked in her room and started playing with baby ahaan. Nisha started cuddling him and made cute noises at him and ahaan smiled at his maasi.

Nisha - ahaan baby... lie here for a sec maasi is coming...

She made him lie in the center and went to change her clothes in jiffy. After a minute or so ahaan started crying and she ran towards him. Nisha picked ahaan in her arms close to her heart and started rocking him back and forth eventually cooing sweet things in his ears.

Kabir who was going back to terrace passed by nisha room and stood there witnessing the sight. A serene smile stretched on his lips.

Nisha was still cradling ahaan when two warm pairs of familiar arms wrap themselves around them. Nisha smiled inhaling in his scent and lean on him.

Nisha - maa ur sir chale gye?

Kabir - ha... kuch bolu??

Nisha - ha bol... puch kyu rha h...

Kabir - kuch nhi... ese hi... tu ahaan k sath pta h kaisi lag rhi h...

Nisha - kaisi lag rhi hu...

Kabir - ekdum homely... seedhi sadhi... pyaari si new mother... lag hi nhi rha ki tu meri ladaku, chillane wali... mjhe baat baat p maarne wali... dangerous wifey h...

He chuckled as nisha threw a deadly glare at him over her shoulder.

Nisha - tu kitna k h kabir...

Kabir - tu bhi to kitni j h nisha...

Nisha - kabir... abhi to ahaan h mere paas warna itna marti na tujhe...

Kabir - control wifey... baby ko jagaegi kya...

Nisha looked at ahaan who was sleeping in his arms and smiled.

Kabir - waise achha h ahaan k sath tu achhe se practice kar le...

Nisha - practice... kis baat ki practice...

Kabir - kyu jab hmare 12 bachhe honge to unhe sambhalne k lie to practice chahie na... ab dekh ahaan ko sambhalte smbhalte tu sab kuch seekh hi jaegi fir atleast mjhe to pareshan nhi karegi na...

Nisha looked at him with her jaw dropped.

Nisha - kabir... tu meri help bhi nhi karaega... kitta k h tu...

Kabir - achha to tjhe is baat se prblm h ki mai teri help nhi karunga... par is baat se nhi ki hmare 12 bachhe honge... huh kyu wifey kya irada h...

Nisha blushed but tried to fight it and manage to fake a scowl at him.

Nisha - tjhe maarne ka irada h kabir... abhi ruk...

With this she turned and put ahaan on the bed while she grabbed a pillow and started thrashing kabir.


SCENE - 2
Gh (kirti room)

Kirti came into her room after attending a call from office stating her event was stalled due to some reasons and was in a foul mood.

She was pacing in her room groaning with frustration and decided to call rashi.

Rashi - hey kirti... how u doing

Kirti - m fine... i got the call just an hour ago...

Rashi - oh so finally the news reached to u...

Kirti - yeah... what is this all about... we are ready to walk on the ramp and at last moment... what the hell has happened...

Rashi - calm down kirti... i will tell u... our sponsors has dragged themselves out of the project at the last moment... without a valid reason... thats why the event has been stalled.

Kirti - but we are almost ready.. all the outfits,models all are ready even the promotion was about to start... what is their prblm...

Rashi - i dont know kirti... n i fear our hard work will go down the drain if we didnt find a sponsor soon... we will lose our models too if we didn't used the dates... the house name is too on stalk...

Kirti - i know...

Rashi - dont lose hope kirti... we will do something about it soon... ok...

Kirti - yeah... we will...

Rashi - now rest... u are at leave so dont stress urself and enjoy dolly wedding... m here i will handle...

Kirti - hmmm.. but keep me posted about it...

Rashi - surely will... now i have to go... bye...

Kirti - bye...

She hanged up and lie still on her bed staring at the ceiling with a blank expression.

SCENE - 3
DOLLY ROOM


Dolly was sitting by ahaan side when three heads poked themselves at her door.

Rishi - dolly di mai ander aau???

Dolly smiled at the kids and nodded.

Jwalu - dolly di rishi ko ahaan se milna h...

She pushed rishi a few feet forward as he squirmed in his place. Dolly laughed softly and patted a place beside her on the bed. Rishi smiled nervously and sat by her side as she picked ahaan in her arms and gave him in rishi lap. Rishi held him protectively and touched him with cautious.

Rishi - maine pehli baar itna chhota baby dekha h...

He said as ahaan grapsed his finger in his palm and he chuckled.

Jwalu - maine bhi... ur ab to mai ise roj dekhungi... ur roj iske saath khelungi...

Rishi - (turning to dolly) mai bhi roj aa sakta hu ahaan k sath khelne???

Dolly chuckled and said yes. Rishi gave her a wide grin and stuck his tongue out at jwala who did same to him but giggled later.
Bunty - mai bhi khelunga... ur kal to holi h na kal hm ahaan k sath holi khelenge...

Jwalu - bunty ahaan abhi bhot chhota h uske sath hm holi nhi khel sakte samjha...

Bunty - to kya hua rishi bhaiya k sath to khel sakte h na... rishi bhaiya kal aap aaoge mere sath holi khelne...

Rishi - (grinning) ha jarur aaunga... waise bhi maine kabhi holi nhi kheli... mjhe bhi dekhna h tum log kaise holi khelte ho...

Jwalu smiled at him softly.

Jwalu - bhot maza aaega tmhe rishi... hm sab bhot masti karte h ur maa ur taiji ur chachi milke itti saari mithai banate h na... yummm... maza aata h...

Rishi chuckled seeing her like this while bunty rolled his eyes at her.

Bunty - chalo na rishi bhaiya chal k colours lke aate h... ur pichkari bhi...

Rishi nodded in a yes and dolly took ahaan back from him as the three went out of the room running after each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago

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-By Annie


SCENE 1 - HOLI EVENT

Everyone was gathered in the HOLI SAMAROH or which also can be called the Holi event of the colony in which the Gangwal family lived in. The youngsters of the Gangwal family were present there secretly loaded with water guns, colors and water balloons as every year, and the Rathore family youngsters were yet to arrive.

Tujhee kya lagtaa hain saurav...nisha aur kabir abhi tak kyun nahi aaye honge..??"asked sukku.

Pehli holi hain...kahin private holi khel rahe honge...!"said saurav and both burst into laughter.

Why are you both laughings like this..??"asked dolly.

Dolly di...laughings nahi laughing!"said kirti.

Haan wahi...wahi...!"said dolly...abb ye to batao tum dono has kyun rahe thee..??"she continued.

Hum guess kar rahe the ki nisha aur kabir abhi taka aye kyun nahi honge...!"said saurav, and they both started laughing again.

Tum dono ne abhi se bhang peeli hain kya...jo aise paagalon ki tarah has rahe hoo...!"said kirti.

Yaar vaisee...nishu bro aur kabir jiju abhi taka aye kyun nahii..??"asked jwalu.

Kahin private holi manaa rahe honge aur kya...waise bhi doosri shaadi ke baad first holi hain...!"said sukku and all of them burst out laughing.

Dekhnaa dekhnaa abhi pehle se hi holi khel ke aayenge dono...!"said umesh.

SCENE 2- KNH

Nishaaa...nishaaa..."kabir was taking her name for the umpteenth time, but she had locked herself in the washroom.

Dekhh kabirr main baahar nahi aane waali...tujhe jo karna hain karle..."she said shouting from the washroom.

Nishaa main ye darwaza tod ke andar ghus jaaunga...yaar baahar aajana...thoda sa hi color lagaunga...zyadaa bilkul nahi..."said kabir.

Tujhee jo karna hain karlee..main baahar nahi aane waali..."said nisha.

Theek hain ...matt aa baahar...main jaa raha hun holi event me akele...wahaa kitni saari beautiful ladkiyan hongi...unhi ko colour lagaaunga..tujhe nahii!"said kabir and acted as if he was going.

Haan...theek hain jaa...unhi ke saath holi khel...mujhe bhi nahi khelnaa tere saath koyi holi..!"said nisha.

There was no reply for a few seconds, so she thought that he had really gone to the event. She slowly opened the door, and walked out of the washroom, when kabir caught her in his embrace from behind.

Abb kahaan bhaag ke jaayegi ...colour to main tujhe lagaa ke hi rahungaa...subah jo tunee kiyaa uska punishment to milegaa hi tujhee..."he said and covered all her face with red colour.

*FLASHBACK*

Kabir was peacefully sleeping, while nisha was trying to wake him up...and finally when she was unsuccessful, she brought a big bucket of water and dissolved permanent colors into it and threw it on him, and he woke up and sat on the bed with a startle, and found her laughing holding her stomach. And since then he had held the grudge of punishing her and since then she had been hiding in the washroom.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

kabirr...chod mujhee abhi ke abhii...warna main chilla dungi..."said nisha protesting in his grip.

Aur tujhe bachaanee aayega kaun...??"asked kabir raising his eyebrows and loosening his grip on her.

Mujhee kisiki zaroorat nahi hain...khudko bachaane keliye...main khudko bachaa sakti hun..."she said turning towards him.

Achchaa...itni asaani se to nahi bachegii tu...pehli holi hain humaari..."said kabir in a husky tone and started nearing her and soon pinned her to the wall, and blocked her ways of escaping from him.

Correction...pehli nahi hain...doosri hain!"she said in a whisper .

Yeahh...right!" he said and giggled. He was nearing her dangerously, and she was drowned in his hazel brown orbs which were making her crazy. Their lips were just a few inches apart, when someone knocked on the already opened door.

Bhaiyuu...bhabhi..."said the person standing at the door closing her eyes.

Alishaaa..."said nibir together and looked towards the door, to find Alisha standing there closing her eyes.

Alishaa tu kab aayi..??"said nibir and went to her and hugged her.

Tabhi jab aap dono...hmm hmm...anyways, happy holiii...!"said Alisha giggling and applied both of them some color.

Happy holi to you too alishaa..."said nisha and applied her some color too and kabir too did the same.

Alishaa...to tum jaao...aur apna saamaan andar rakhkhe ready ho jaao...color war keliye...holi event me chalte hain...!"said kabir and Alisha did as said.

As soon as Alisha left the place, kabir caught nisha again, and said,

To kahaan the hum...??"he asked raising his eyebrows.

Yahin to the...aur kahaan the...!"said nisha cleverly.

He glared at her on her reply to his question.

Nishaa...yaar mood kharaab mat karr...subah subah main tere saath flirt karne ki koshish kar raha hun aur tu hain ki...aise kar rahi hain...isse achcha main holi event me hi ladkiyon ke saath khel lunga holi...tere saath nahi khelni mujhe ..."he said showing his tongue.

As he said that, she pushed him away from her and said,

Theek hain...jo karna hain karr...phir mujhse kuch expect mat karr...aur mere saath holi khelne ka tu sochna bhi mat ab too!" said nisha.

Theek hain ...theek hain...nahi khelunga tere saath holi..."he said and she turned towards the door to walk out, but he said something again which made her smile,

Lekin tu mujhee zaroor yaad karegi...aur jaise hi tu mujhe yaad karegii...main tere saamne prakat hojaaunga...yaad hain na tujhe ye shaayad maine pehle bhi bola thaa..!"he said with a smirk and she smiled.

She walked out of the room..And he again said something and that too loudly,'

Terii hasee mujhse nahi chhup saktii jaan...!"

Soon, they went to the Rathore house, where vasu had already left for the gangwal house, and viraj joined their gang and kaira too. The five left for the holi event.

SCENE 3 - HOLI EVENT

As they entered the event, they went towards the gangwals, and all of them wished each other. Sukku was extremely surprised as well as happy on seeing Alisha.

Dolly di...aap ahaan ko kahaan chodke aagaye..??"asked nisha.

Wo nishaa...ahaan ghar parr hain...maa aur chachi ne kahaan tha ki aaj keliye wo unka dhyaan rakhengi...aur zabardasti mujhe yahaan bhej diyaa..!"said dolly.

Chaloo achcha hain...aap bhi enjoy karoo...parr zyaada stress mat lenaa..!"said nisha

Haan...haan...tu meri fikar mat karr...aur enjoy kar holi koo...!"said dolly.

Main to enjoy karlungii...aapka kya plan hain...???"nisha asked.

Mera plan chod...tu jaa dekh kabir tujhee kaise ghoor raha hain..."said dolly pointing at kabir who was staring nisha.

Nisha smirked and walked the other way. And that's when samriddh entered the place. And started talking with dolly and saurav when kirti came there and on seeing samriddh again, she got irked and started shouting on saurav.

Yaar samriddh yahaan akelaa hain...so maine use bhi bula liya...abb itna bhi bura behave mat kar yaar...!"said saurav.

Okay...fine! tujhe jo karna hain kar...main jaa rahi hun yahan see...!"said kirti.

Yaar...chod na usko...tu usko dekh hi matt...aise soch ki wo exist hi nahi karta..!"said saurav.

Theek hain tujhee jo karna hain kar...main jaa rahi hun baaki sab ke paas!"said kirti and walked away.

The whole gang got together at a place and started playing Holi...they were enjoying this get together to the fullest. Nisha was ignoring Kabir as much as she could, while kabir was busy trying to attract her to him as much as possible.

kabir walked towards a group of girls making Nisha jealous, but it didn't bother her as she walked towards a group of boys and started talking to them, which irked kabir. But, he behaved as if he had no effect of this trick and seeing his behavior irked her, she gulped down a big glass of bhang, then another, and ended up after drinking three full glasses of it. She was no more in her senses, and kabir failed to notice this.

She looked at kabir from a distance, who was busy talking to other girls. So, she walked back to the group of boys. She was not able to stand straight due to the effect of the sedatives in the bhang. She went and stood beside a guy, keeping her hand on his shoulder,

Ekxxchusee mee...!"she said like an alcoholic.

Yess...!"said one of those guys .

Can you...helllpp me...??"she asked.

How can we help you...??"asked the guy.

You sheee there...a guy..with thoss gals...! I want to make him jealousss...!"she said pointing at kabir who was looking somewhere else.

So what do you want us to do...??"he asked nearing her, while the other guys were passing evil smile.

The guy started nearing her dangerously, he slid his hand through her waist and she didn't like it at all. She tried taking his hand off her, but he was trying to force himself on her.

Hatoo...hatoo.."she said while protesting. Main kabiraa ko bataa dungii...!"she continued.

Wo yahaa hogaa to bataaogi naa...wo to gaya yahaan se...!"said the guy.aur ab tum humaare saath chaloo.."said the guy taking her with him.

Mujhe kabir ke paas jaana hain...!"she said.

Haan...hum usi ke paas leke jaayenge naa...chalo humaare saath!"said he.

Plomishh...??"she asked

Haan...promise!"said he and took her out of the place.

Kabir was searching for nisha as she was nowhere to be found, he went to a stall within the place, and showed nisha's photo in his phone to the owner of the stall,

Bhaiyya aapne ise kahin dekha hain...??"asked kabir.

Haan abhi aayi thi yahaa...aur teen glass bhang peeliya...aur yahaan kuch ladke khadee thee, unhi se kuch baate kar rahi thi...!"said the stall owner.

Now, kabir was really worried about her, he knew what happens to her after she consumes alcoholic stuff, and that too she was with those boys, he started searching her everywhere, and finally found a gang of boys who were trying to force themselves on a girl. He least expected nisha to be that, but his expectations were wronged when he saw nisha's bracelet lying there. He slowly walked towards them, still not expecting it to be nisha, nisha was trying really hard to get them off, she pushed a guy and he fell on the ground. Nisha saw kabir who was standing at a distance completely shocked,

Aagaya melaa hero!" she said sitting on the car deck and cupping her face.

He was almost on the verge of crying, and on noticing this nisha said,

Aee...ye baingan jaisa muh kyun banaa raha hain...?? Aake fighting karr naa...aur apni basantii ko chudwaale"she said laughing.

Come on veeru,...come on...maarde iss gabbar aur usske cheloo ko..!"said nisha still laughing due to the effect of bhang.

One of the guys walked towards kabir and raised his hand to hit him, but was made to fall on the floor by a strong punch by kabir.

Tum paanch...aur wo ekk... bohot nainsaafi hai...oopss ye to gabbar ki dialogue thi...maine kyun boli??"she said and giggled.

Soon , kabir finished off all those guys, and went to nisha who was sitting on the car deck.

Nishaa...neeche utar...!"he said angrily.

Tu pehle I love you bol naa...phir I am all yoursss...!"she said like a kid.

Nishaa ...maine bola neeche aa...!"he said.

Nahii...pehlee mela hero mujhe I love you bolegaa..."she said.

He said nothing further, he just stood folding his hands before her angrily.

Aaee...tu achaanak binaa haathon waala thakur kaise ban gayaa...??"she said pouting, but he didn't reply.

Okay..."she said and acted as if she was going to get off the car, but instead of doing that, she stood up on the car and said,

Gaaon waalon...suicide...gaao waalo suicide...aaj iss veeru ne mujhee kahin ka nahi chodaa...pataa nahi kya kya kiya isnee mere saath...aur ye mujhee I lub you bhi nahi bol raha abb...abb main apna ye muh kisko dikhaaungi...??haaee bhagwaan...!" she said melodramatically grabbing everyone's attention. And soon the cousins arrived there too, along with viraj, kaira and saurav.

Yee inko kya hogaya...??" asked viraj.

Ye aise upar chadke chilla kyun rahi hain...??"asked kaira.

Teen glass bhang chadhaa liya hain madam ne..aur abb sholay-sholay khel rahi hain!"said kabir in anger.

Kabir explained them the whole situation, as how she was trapped with those guys and stuff.

Shhh..."said nisha silencing everyone.

Gaaonwaalo...koyi iss veeru ko samjhaao ki ye bole ki mujhsee pyaar karta hain...warna mera kya hoga rey kaaliya...??"said nisha gloomily.

A huge crowd gathered the place, and one from the crowd started shouting,

Arree...bhaisahab...boldijiye na I love you...warna basanti apnaa muh kisko dikhaayegi...?"

Nishuu bro...neeche aao naa...!"said jwala.

Pehlee iss veeru ko bolo I love you bole...then I will come..."she said like a drunkard.

Jiju boldoo na nishu bro ko I love you...ekk baar...ur apna gussa baadme dikhaalenaa..."said kirti.

Haan chotee...wahaa se girke lag gayi too...??"said viraj.

Achchaa ...okay..okay...! bolta hun...! Nishaa I love you!" said kabir.

Kyaa...ye nisha kaun hain...?? Gaaowaalo iss veeru ka kisi nisha ke saath chakkar chal raha hain...! Haaee bhagwaan...!" said nisha.

I mean..basantii I love you...!"said kabir.

Sukku secretly recorded the whole scene in his phone, so that he could tease nisha later.

Sachchiii...??"she asked.

Haan...!"said kabir.

Then catch me...here I come..!" said nisha and jumped on kabir like a kid, and kabir catched her in his strong arms.

Aww...melaa herooo...!"said nisha and fainted due to the effect of bhang.

SCENE 4- GANGWAL HOUSE

After the event was over, they all went to gangwal house, where the situation was entertaining too. They were having fun, eating and cracking jokes. As the youngsters entered into the house, they were welcomed by the elders, and on seeing nisha, they asked,

Ye nisha ko kya hua ???ye theek to hain naa...??"asked they.

Ye to theek hain...parr main theek nahi hun...khaa khaa ke kitnii bhaari hogayii hain ye...almost aadhe ghante se maine isko uthaa rakhkha hain..."said kabir, main isko andar letaake aata hun...aap iss vanar sena se pucho kya hua tha..."said kabir and took her into the room and laid her down on the bed.

While sukku showed them the video he made, and explained all of them the situation. They all had a hearty laugh over it as well as were overwrought. The day was spent in the house enjoying, and as nisha woke up after the effect she was teased with the video, and kabir was a little angry on her, which soon vanished into the thin air. And the day had some moments of family, some moments of love, some moments of romance.


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