abhigya ss: unconditional love chapter-7 updated page-7 9/6/16

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Hi...this is my first my attempt of writing a story
...I'll try my best to keep u entertained but
as I mentioned earlier this is my first attempt
so bear with me if its not upto your expectation
Characters-
Abhishek prem mehra: he is an engineer
works in mumbai and loves his childhood friend
pragya a lot

Pragya arora: soon to be pragya mehra abhi's
love interest and childhood friend lives
in small town

Ashok sinha: abhi's best buddy and a lawyer in
Mumbai

Mr.and Mrs. Arora : pragya's mom and dad and
also family friends of abhi's parents

Mr.and Mrs. Mehra: abhi's parents


Chapter :1

There is a marriage decorations going on in the arora house for the much awaited marriage of the Only daughter of the house named pragya arora...

A beautiful house is decorated with the beautiful flowers hanging all around the house with the colorful lightings made to look like "a bride soon to be married" though house is not that much big but definitely it's a nice one...There are lot of people roaming here & there some of them are the guests in the marriage and others are the workers of wedding planner checking every minute details of the marriage preparations ..

A lady is standing on the terrace of the house , observing the every activity that is taking place in her house...she is feeling like the happiest person in the world becoz she is having the sense of fulfilling her motherly duty in the most amazing way she could have imagine...she is sarla...sarla arora (mother of pragya arora),There she saw an amazingly handsome guy entering the gate of arora house with carrying heavy shopping bags in the hands ...yes, he is the same guy to whom her daughter is gonna marry , her best friend's son "abhishek prem mehra"aka abhi 😛 he is having the perfect body one could imagine to have in her life partner..that 6 feet tall body frame ,perfectly toned 6 pack abs , masculine shoulder and strong biceps ,that childish and innocent grin which appears on his face when he smiles ...gosh,he looks so 'adorable' ...sarla smiles seeing him there...

Sarla: beta, what are u doing here ??? That too today ???
Abhi: i came to give pragya her wedding dress..and to ask whether she liked it or not????
Sarla: you can give it to me ...i'll give it to her
Abhi: its ok i'll go and give it to her
Sarla:i know beta you are just using dress as an excuse to meet her...i can see how much you are eager to meet her after all she is your love but she cant meet u as she is applying mehendi and u have to actually wait to meet her so u can give it to me ang go to your house As u have preparations to do at your house too

Abhi becomes sad hearing this but then hides it behind his most charming smile that he gives and then says
Abhi: ok ,aunty as u wish ...i'll go now give this dress to her
Sarla: ya sure
She didnt fail in noticing the change in expression of abhi
due to unable to meet pragya.she understands it thats why try to cheer him up she says" dont worry she is gonna be yours forever after 2 days after that u can spend as much time with her as much u want...says teasingly...hearing that abhi smiles shyly and says "stop, pulling my legs auntyji..ok bye..

After that abhi goes to his house thinking that i'm gonna get love of my life ...just two days ,after that life gonna be so much beautiful and i'll give her all the happiness of this world after all she is gonna be my world...

Sarla is thinking and gets happy seeing the love in abhi's eyes for prags and prays to god to get this marriage done without any hurdels and mutters to herself " i hope this marriage goes well as we have thought if any problem happens in the marriage then abhi will be really shattered after all he loves pragya so dearly ..god please dont break abhi's heart.."

Precap:
doctor: he is no more miss pragya...hearing this pragya succumbles
to the floor and cries" how could u live me alone in this world, have
promised to live the whole life with me...how will i live without u now?


chapter 5
chapter 1&2
chapter 3
chapter 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahhh! I will love it. Continue... Quick! write the 1st part soon.
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Chapter -2

As abhi leaves from there,seating in his mercedes benz,while driving back to his home,a small smile forms on the corner of his lips remembering the day,when 7 years ago he first met the love of his life "pragya" in his school.

#Flashback starts#
It was the first day of abhi In this new city,his father had been transfered to this city. So,they have shifted to this city and had taken the admission in the new school named saint teres school near by his home.

On the first day of his new school,when he was going to his classroom,on its way he came across a bunch of guys who were bullying a girl standing in the centre of the group surronded by them. There were many students standing all around them but nobody was coming forward to help her get rid of them. That's when his eyes moved towards her and he sees her frightened,tensed and shocked at the turn of events taking place there and seeing her like this had made him hurt. He instantly feels an urge to go to her and rescue her from those evils. He goes to the centre of the group and warns them to let her go otherwise it would not be a good sign for them. They hadn't taken his words seriously instead they got more angry on him becoz of interrupting in their matter. That's why situation is getting worst from bad and is slipping out of hand becoz he was alone there fighting for her but they were quite a few in number but just then there comes the principal of the school at the right time and scolds them for creating chaos in school campus and orders everyone to go straight to their respective classes ,seeing the stern look given by the principal, group gets scattered which provides them timely chance of getting escaped as well. He takes pragya away from there holding her hand tightly in his grip. As he took a side a glance at her face only then he realizes that in all this hustle & bustle he hadn't noticed that how she looks like! She has the most innocent face having those beautiful big brown eyes covered by the spectacles which she wears.she was still in the shock or we could call it as trauma with the way events had turned out to be and when she came out of the trance ,she thanked him and they had a long healthy conversation on the way to their classes through which he comes to know that she was in the 9th std. In this school 2yrs.junior to him and just like him she was also new to the school. She further told that the boys who were bullying her were asking her for doing 10 rounds of the school canteen and they were from the same class he was in, hearing that he gets more angry for doing this with her. He became more happy knowing the fact that their home are just at the walking distance from each others & thus they became good friends of each other. They had started to go to & from school with each other daily. As day passes they also started to go to each others home and their family also liked them both and appreciated their friendship. Pragya's family actually really liked him and had impression that something is going between the two but when he moves out of the city for further studies in engineering field, they had put down that idea. But they were unaware of the fact that he is having different feeling regarding her becoz eventually he had fallen in love with her had over heels. But he hadn't dare to confess his feelings to her assuming that it might possibly ruin their beautiful freindship, the amazing bond they share with each other, if she isn't having those feelings in beautiful heart of hers. So,he avoided it.

After completing the school he went college for further studies out of the city and she was junior to him, so they weren't in contact for the past 5 yrs. When he came back after completing the college,he had seen her after the massive gap of 5 yrs. In this many years which he had been leaving away from her, she had been completely transferred from a teenage girl to the matured college going fun girl. When he had first seen her after 5 yrs.,she had became inormously gorgeous and sexy. She still wears those spectacle of her's which is having old fashion designed frame but the thing they hide beneath them is 2 beautiful, big brown eyes of her's which expresses her every feeling perfectly just in a flash. She is having those long curly hairs which reaches just slightly below her shoulder covering her back completely.she is having pair of thin pink lips just as smooth as rose petals, when she argues with him about silly things with her those lips it creates an instant urge inside him to capture them with that lips of his and kiss her for the eternity. She is having the beautiful nose which just fits perfectly into her pretty face. She is carrying a slender figure with the petite waist and slim legs making her look even more sexy but she hides it behind those her old fashioned dresses which she fondly called as "anarkalis" of many different colours. While shaking hand with her,just mere touch of her skin creates havoc inside him, what a smooth skin she is having! It feels like a crime to leave her hand. How can one stay away from her!!! In these many years which he had lived away from her,she had been through immense transformation and now has gain weight at appropriate places which makes her curve easily visible from upside-down to before-backwards. She has the most beautiful smile. When she laughs it feels like the treasure is falling apart through her lips. When she speaks,her voice gives immense pleasure and peace to the heart as well as to the ears on the walls of which those words collides. The way she talks make you fall instantly in the love with her. She looks so cute at the same time an extremely innocent person. She might not be the most beautiful girl of the world but for him ,she is the most beautiful and amazing creation as well as gift from the nature to him. She can easily give any top bollywood heroine a run for her money. He just prayed silently and intently to god to make her always happy and never made her cry and give all her worries to him. After that he felt even more urge to confess his feelings and make her his for eternity.

So,when her parents came up to his parents with the marriage proposal,He has agreed for it just in a flash and that day he felt like the happiest person of the world. So,from then they decided the dates for the marriage and started the preparations.
#Flashback ends#

Now, just 2 days left for the marriage as he comes to the present situation. He is feeling like the the king of some ancient kingdom who is gonna get the biggest treasure of the world for his palace for which many others are craving. Becoz he is gonna marry the love of his life in just under the 48 hrs. From now. Thinking this,as he reaches his home, he gets off the car and goes inside to get immersed into the wedding preparation.


Sorry guys busy with Some work so hadn't been able to reach the story upto the precap but precap for the next part is same as that of previous one.please like it and do write your feedback it will be more encouraging for me whether its positive or negative please comment your views and thanks for reading
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Good job. Loved it. Eager to know who is doctor talking about.
Wish to Read more right now. Continue soon.
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Thanks for the reading... It will be the turning point of the story
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I really, really like. please continue, I'm worried for the life Abhi🥱
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Chapter -3
Sarla comes inside her house , there she saw her daughter "pragya arora" seating in the middle of the hall which is beautifully decorated for the marriage that's gonna take place in time span of two days. Pragya is seating there in the center of the group as her friends forcefully trying to apply mehandi on her hand, though pragya has managed to make a smiling face in front of them , but from inside she was cursing the day when her parents emotionally blackmailed her to agree for the marriage in front of abhi's parents. But the sadness on the face of pragya isn't went unnoticed by her mom. She thought to herself that I know pragya, I'm forcing u to get married with him,as u don't love him. But his love for u is so much immense, that it will be sufficient enough for this relationship in which u both are gonna be tied up. I'm sorry beta, but as a mother, I'm obliged to take this decision for the betterment of u. I'm binded with my love for u becoz if u don't marry him and ruin your life ,then I will not be able to bear that pain in front of my eyes. I don't want u to take decisions which u will regret later in our life. So, forgive me if u can becoz I have always prayed for your well being. She gets teary eyed thinking all this, through which she is making her daughter go through.

Pragya is thinking in her mind that abhi,I considered u as one of my genuine, dearest and closest friend. But I never thought that u r having these kind of feelings for me. If I had even a slightest of doubt that u r harboring these kind of thoughts then I wouldn't have accepted ur friendship, never. You have forcefully tried to separate me from my love and for doing that sin, I will never forgive u abhishek prem mehra,never ever. Our friendship has ended the same day, when our marriage got fixed and u will never get what u want in ur life. I will never be yours, even not in the next 7 lives.

"Pragya??" "Pragya? R u listening?" Came a lady's voice breaking pragya's chain of thoughts.
Suddenly she came into the reality from her thoughts and gathers herself mentally & replies quickly "yes,sorry. My mind was occupied somewhere else"being annoyed.one of her friends tries to pull her legs saying teasingly"dream about the jiju later, u have whole life time to spend with him." This infuriated her further becoz she is fed up of all this behaving shyly and fake blushing and all this stuff. But ignoring it,she tries to blush shyly knowing very well that all eyes are on her. Then asks" what r u asking???" to the lady which replies to her quickly that "I was asking for ur would be husband's name to write on ur hand."
"Ohh" came her reply, "it's s" says pragya happily but in mere whisper so that nobody will pay attention to it but she has failed to get away from her mom's sight who is watching her every move. She became angry and came to pragya to ask what she is trying to prove by doing all this stuff. Just then pragya's phone rings, she excused herself to balcony to attend the call which is closely followed by the sarla. Sarla doesn't disturb her but stands at safe distance to hear what she is talking and to whom she is talking with the urgency ??? Hearing the name coming out of pragya's mouth, she gets very angry and annoyed at pragya's behaviour.
Pragya received the call and says" hey surrie!!"

This call is from the love of her life, it was suresh's call. She met him during her college life. He was pragya's senior and gradually they became friend,eventually it blossoms into the love and now they are madly in love. When pragya's parents came to know about it, they aren't happy becoz they doesn't like suresh, according to them he is not a good guy. So,they thought of getting pragya married before she does any mistake which she regret later in her life. Thats y they had asked abhi whether he wants to marry her? he gladly accepted it which lead to their marriage.

Suresh replies with a teasing tone"hey my darling, missing me???"

"Yes,very much...i have your name written on my hand with mehendi" says pragya excitedly.

"Wow,very nice of u...what happens if your parents comes to know about it???"enquires worriedly.

"I dont care"replies determinedly.
Hearing this sarla feels pang of hurt in her heart,the way pragya treats them nowadays its getting on her nerves. Not able to bear this conversation further, she decides to leave from there.

"Hey suresh, when are we running away from here??? I can't bear it now...look they have completed the mehandi function...i'm not gonna take part in the marriage...i'm telling u seriously..." Getting little angry with the way he is talking like its not a big matter for him.

"Baby, calm down please... we will run away tomorrow early morning...promise ok!!!"

"R u serious??? I'm so happy to hear it...finnally i'm getting freedom from this cage" tells pragya being overjoyed.

"Anything for u beautiful...i love u" declares suresh his love for her...

"Love u too, take care ..see u tomorrow" reciprocates pragya...and cuts the call while returning to the main hall.

When sarla sees pragya coming inside from balcony smiling, which makes her even more angry. So,she goes to pragya to confront her and she takes her to one of the corner of the room.
"What's this nonsense pragya???" Says sarla with the greeting teeth and red face with the anger pointing towards the s written on her hand.
"What, ma????" Asks pragya faking the innocence like she has no idea what sarla is referring to.
"This, the s written on ur hand. What do u wanna prove doing this? I will never let u marry him. Rub it off ur hand"says sarla with commanding face.Pragya denies doing so.
Sarla wipes it off forcefully from her hand and writes A on it.
Pragya smiled sarcastically and says " u can wipe it off from my hand, but u will never be able to remove it from my heart. I will always be his.And how does it matter? I'm ultimately doing what u want, I'm going to marry abhi. So, what's the need of creating this scene!!! U can marry me to him but I will never accept him as my husband. U r destroying his life as well as my by doing so."expresses pragya her views coldly but determinedly. Realizing that talking her is like banging your head on the wall, sarla leaves from there furiously.

Next day morning -

In the morning, at 5 am someone is going out from the arora house covering her face under the veil carrying a hand bag having important belongings. After getting out from the house, she goes to a bike standing at the safe distance from her house and sits behind on it. She turns out to be pragya. Then both Suresh & pragya leaves from their to spend rest of their lives away from the city. According to them,the best thing in the interest of their life, is to run away from this marriage and built their own world somewhere else , miles away from here.
BUT DESTINY HAS SOME OTHER IDEAS.

As they are traveling to Delhi through Jaipur highway, pragya asks Suresh"surrie, what have u planned for our staying in Delhi? Where we gonna stay?"
Suresh replies casually"I haven't thought about it pragya, till now. We will see through it once we reach there."
Pragya screams worriedly"what? Have u gone nuts?? What does it mean that u haven't thought about it?? Are we gonna roam around city like this??"
Suresh replies as a matter of fact " y r u getting hyper prags??? I told u na.we will see it once we reach there. Its OK baby."
Pragya freaked out hearing this"u haven't planned anything?? You aren't having any job nor having any place to stay and made me run away from the marriage, just like that!!!"
Suresh gets little bit hurt with the way pragya is talking but still replies" it's OK.I promise, I will take care of it. Now,please make ur mood better."
Pragya nodded in agreement. Just then his bike stops with a sudden jolt. He checks his bike and informs pragya that it has some problem related to engine. They have to call mechanic. It will take time. So, he asks her for some tea and breakfast from the road side dhaba, pointing to the dhaba on the dhaba situated on the other side of the road.
They goes there to pass the time till this problem gets sorted out. Mechanic is checking the bike. After turning it into the working condition, he called Suresh to check it once, if its OK or not. Suresh excused himself from pragya while she is busy in enjoying the tea. Just then she heard a loud sound coming from her behind of a truck hitting someone with a thud and she heard a loud scream. As she turns around to see the person, she finds a familiar figure lying there in the pull of blood. She feels like her whole has been turned upside down in just a couple of seconds. She stands shattered & rooted to her place, not knowing what to do. She comes to the senses hearing the screams people around her calling for help and running in a worry. She runs to the suresh and asks him to open his eyes. But there is no movement happening in his body.just then someone came from behind, held her from her elbow taking her away from him and send him to the near by hospital. There is no stopping of tears running down from her eyes. She felt lonely although she is standing in the middle of the crowd. Only support for her has left her becoz she herself has left her family behind in the morning. And now here suresh is in critical condition. She is fearing for the worst. She hurriedly reached the hospital and stood outside the operation theater , praying for his wellbeing, Not knowing what to do other than that. She is reminiscing all the moments she had spend with him in these lovely days, their love and god knows what else. She is having the fear of losing someone so close, so much early on in her life.she sees doctor coming out of the OT, who is attending the suresh.
She asks horrifiedly" how is he doctor????"
Doctor replies in an apologizing tone"I'm sorry miss. He is no more."
Hearing this pragya succumbles to the floor and cries her heart out" how could u do this to me? how could u live me alone in this cruel world suresh, how could u??? U had promised to live the whole life with me...how will I survive without u?? Tell me how? I will never forgive u for leaving me like this, never ever. Although u have left me alone and gone far away from my reach but remember one thing, I will never stop loving u. I always loved u and I will.It's my promise"declares pragya her love for him with the tear stricken face.

OK . it's enough for now.
to be continued
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Originally posted by: olushka2924

I really, really like. please continue, I'm worried for the life Abhi🥱

thanks dear. I hope your worries for abhi's life will be vanished after reading this chapter 3.
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

Good job. Loved it. Eager to know who is doctor talking about.

Wish to Read more right now. Continue soon.

I'm so glad u loved it I have updated the next chapter let me know how is it After reading
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This is Great. Continue soon.

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