Rivanya OS-I love you

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Posted: 9 years ago
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SCENE : Rivanya Room...

There was silence.She was silent.Staring at the walls,sitting on the bed..all she could remember was THAT Woman hands on his shoulders and back.Tears rolled down her eyes and she closed them[:'(].It hurts.Or maybe It was jealousy.But She shouldn't be.Ritik loved her and ONLY her.He has proved it so many times.He loved her with all his heart.So why was she so much in agony.It felt like she couldnt breathe.No,She was angry.She wanted to hurt THAT Woman and that too very badly.But she couldn't.She threw away the glasses and stuff on table and a piece stucked in her Hand.She took the piece out and it started bleeding.Great,She thought.Her heart is bleeding and so is her hand🄺.

Ritik just entered the room and saw her.He was taken aback at the sight.😲The room was in a mess.There were glasses on the floors and Shivanya finger had a small cut.

Ritik : Shivanya....

He saw the blood and soon went to a closet to bring a bandage.He came near her,took her hands in his and made her sit quietly.He tried to apply bandage but she stood up.

Shivanya : Main theek Ho..muje kuch nahi hua...

She was hurt and he knew that.He went near her and took her by arms and made her sit again.She protested but he didn't Let go of her.

Ritik : Agar naraz mujse Ho,to uska gussa apne hatho pe kyu nikal rahi Ho???

He applied Ointment.She groaned in pain when medicine was applied.He stopped.

Ritik : bahut dard Ho raha hai???

Shivanya : Dard to Ho raha hai ritik,par chot kitne gehri hai uska andaza nahi hai tumhe.🄺

He knew very well that she was hurt.He finished up bandaging her and got up.She stopped him by holding his wrist.

Shivanya : Tumhe wo pasand hai???

Ritik : Kaun???šŸ¤”

Shivanya: WO Mayuri... tum aur wo terrace pe...

She stood and stopped mid-sentence.She just couldn't look him in the eyes and finish what she was about to say.Because it was painful[:'(]..He sensed what she was trying to say.Suddenly he realised he needed to explain.What if she stops talking to him??No..No..Nooo

Ritik : Shivanya..jese tum soch rahi Ho wese kuch nahi hai.Wo to...

Shivanya : Wo to kya ritik???

Her anger rising.How dare THAT Woman put hands on HER RITIK...How dare SHE seducing HER RITIK...All she could see was Ritik and Mayuri dancing and smiling...Her anger knew she bounds...All the hurt and pain came rushing into words...

Shivanya : WO kya???? Muje pata hai tum mujse naraz Ho lekin ye kya baat hui ...aisa bhi koi Karta hai??? Pichle kuch Dino me tumne dhang se baat to chodo,meri taraf dekha bhi nahi hai [:'(].Tum mujse baat nahi kar rahi Ho,meri baat sun nahi rahe Ho aur upar se jab me baat karna chahti Hu to muje tum Kisi aur Ki baho me milte Ho...

She was pouring her heart out to him and crying and heaving...He just wanted to stop her pain..Her cries were hurting him more than her...

Ritik : Shivanya...

She was still babbling...In that moment,he knew what he had to do...He needed it.She needed it.

He took her by arms and placed his lips on hers.He took her by surprise and she was stunned😲...Her eyes getting huge and she opened her mouth.He poured all his heart and love and feelings into it..He kissed her with all he has got.His breath fanning her face.She closed her eyes,feeling the sensations.Her lips tingling...their breaths mixing...their heart beating loudly in unison...He slowly stopped the kiss and waited for them to slow down their breathing...šŸ˜‰

Ritik : Me Mayuri se nahi ,me tumse pyaar Karta hoon shivanya.Ladayi Hone ka matlab ye nahi Ki main Kisi aur ko tumhari jagah doonga.Tum meri biwi Ho shivanya.Me apni jindagi tumhare sath bitana chahta hoon.Mayuri tumhare age kuch nahi...ok??

Shivanya who was still reeling from the kiss: Hmmm..ok

Ritik : Ab main tumse ek sawal puchunga uska sach sach Jawab dogi muje???

Shivanya : Hmmm

Ritik : Kya tum mujse pyaar karti ho???

Shivanya : Ritik...

Ritik : Koi Bahana nahi shivanya.Agar muje chot lagti hai to tum roti Ho,agar me tumse baat na Kari to tumhe bura lagta hai,agar me khush hota Hu to us Khushi ko me tumhari ankho me dekhta hu.Main nahi janta tumhe mere kareeb ane se kya problem hai,par me bas itna jannna chahtu Hu Ki kya tum mujse pyaar karti Ho?? Bas itna Bata do muje...kyunki main tumse bahut pyaar Karta hoon aur me nahi janta agar tum meri jindagi se chali gayi to me jee bhi paunga ya nahi...

She was stunned at his confession.She knew he loved her.All he wanted was her to tell how she felt..just know...before she could stop herself...

Shivanya : Haan

Ritik : Kya?? Kya bola tumne mene suna nahi...

He was stunned..Did he heard right????

Shivanya : Haan ritik,I love you...

He couldn't hold his excitement and hugged her highly😃...Totally like a child giddy with excitement...

Ritik. : Shivanya...shivanya...shivanya...I love you...I love you...I love youā¤ļø

She was laughing and enjoying being held in his arms and this close to him..

Shivanya : Par muje thoda waqt chahie...Main tumse pyaar krti Hu Ritik..par muje thoda aur waqt chahie ...you know...humare rishte ko age badhane ke liye...

She was blusing and he was enjoying...

Ritik : Tumhe jitna waqt chahie,lelo...muje koi Jaldi nahi...tum mujse pyaar karti Ho,mere liye itna hi khafi hai...

She smiled after so many days...Thats the effect he had on her...He just brightened her days...

He slowly came near her ears and whispered..

Ritik: Lekin me chahta hoon Ki jab me subah uthu aur raat ko sone se pehle ye teen golden words tum muje kaho daily...afterall itna time Jo hum dono ne kharab Kia hai usko compensate bhi to karna padega

She blushed...

Ritik : Wese muje nahi lagta me kabhi tumhati blusing se bore hounga...

He kissed her on cheeks and went to change his dress


Shivanya was left dumbstruck😲She remembered the kiss before and colours crept on her cheeksšŸ˜†.

p.s-its my first OS that I have ever written in my IF journey šŸ˜†
So like it ,hate it..do tell...
Sorry for the typos,its written via phone
Won't mind some constructive criticism😊


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--Sanchu-- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
its so cute ProduceršŸ¤—
kash aisa hota scene mein actually...


slippery_chilka thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
šŸ‘ Loved it though, I can't believe you are making Ritik wait even in the OS 🤣 Badi zaleem ho. 🤣
Ruthless.Slayer thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hahhaa too nice KK 🤣 🤣 Show me toh kiss milne se raha 🤣 but atleast yahan toh mila.. Well Jealous Shivanya is worth watching.. kaise jealous horahi thi becz of mayuri šŸ˜† When i was reading ur OS i totally picturised those scenes of rivanya in my head 😳 šŸ˜† KK u should write more babes 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

its so cute ProduceršŸ¤—

kash aisa hota scene mein actually...



I am Ekta...i can do anything u know šŸ˜†
HaymurS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: slippery_chilka

šŸ‘Loved it though, I can't believe you are making Ritik wait even in the OS 🤣 Badi zaleem ho. 🤣


Ab kya kare...ritik KO jis raah pe Jana hi nahi uske sapje kyu dikhane🤣
Oye be happy at least I gave a kiss scene..show me to wo bhi bhul jaošŸ˜†
HaymurS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: WhatsUpBitch

Hahhaa too nice KK 🤣 🤣 Show me toh kiss milne se raha 🤣 but atleast yahan toh mila.. Well Jealous Shivanya is worth watching.. kaise jealous horahi thi becz of mayuri šŸ˜† When i was reading ur OS i totally picturised those scenes of rivanya in my head 😳 šŸ˜† KK u should write more babes 😳


Ab Teri demand ayi hai to Puri karni padega Varna tu to peetegi meko
PaYa_Shivika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Loved it..šŸ‘...bechara ritik...os post mein bhi wait karna hoga...shiv confessed..he would be happy...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š

Chalo hug aur nok-jhok se aage bada ye rishta..šŸ˜›
HaymurS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: PaYa_Rivanya

Loved it..šŸ‘...bechara ritik...os post mein bhi wait karna hoga...shiv confessed..he would be happy...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š

Chalo hug aur nok-jhok se aage bada ye rishta..šŸ˜›


Arey wait pe mat jao,kiss pe jao...
Unke rishte KO age badhaya hai mene🤣
PaYa_Shivika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat


Arey wait pe mat jao,kiss pe jao...
Unke rishte KO age badhaya hai mene🤣


Thank you so much showing meharbani on us...taras gaye the hum ek kiss scene ke liye...šŸ˜†

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