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Posted: 9 years ago


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Adi.. is his short name.. He is Aditya Mehra.. an upcoming writer... He gave stories and script for two daily shows earlier.. and now he is all set to write his third story...

Adi has a habit of going to a far away place and write... Nature is his inspiration... he always goes to deserted places and writes his scripts... he faces problems also.. but he never stops himself...

And now ADI is in a hill station... he booked a cottage for himself far away from the town and rested for a day and one fine morning he sat to start his script...

ADi - This time I will write a passionate love story... Umm... Male lead ka naam ... Armaan... naaa... yeh bohut baar suna hai... ummm.. Manav... nahi yeh bohut purana naam hai... Adi aise nahi.. pehle characterization karr... phir naam apne aap soojega...

Adi wrote down main attributes of his male lead...

Name ... later

Attributes... Handsome face ... Brown eyes... sharp nose... lips like stretched M... long fingers... hands and legs... Broad Chest... Six pack Abs... in simple words... GREEK GOD

















This is my OS posted on Guzre Pal with Maaneet thred... plz have a look...


Plz visit the thread and do participate and drop some comments there



Guzre Pal OS link



Guzre Pal with Maaneet Thread


Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago








Bhabhiji TQ for the Edit...🤗


Hi friends... I am know I am late... and I am not giving any excuses... kya karun.. lazy hoon🤢... jab tak mera Ipad theek nahi hota... aur meri lappy bhi budhi hogayi hain... dheere dheere chalne lagi hain aur kabhi kabhi start bhi nahi hoti... jab tak ipad ya naya lappy nahi aajata bardaash karlo... ya pray karo ki kuch nahi ho meri budhi lappy ko😆 ...plzzz..😳


Bhabhiji TQ for the Edit...🤗



Part 65

Rb thought to leave the next day only... so he went to prepare his stuff... The more he spent time in Mumbai the more he will benefited... his brother for the first time gave him a task and he wanted to be successful at any cost... He called one of his close friends... and they both decided to meet in Mumbai as strangers... and then they pretend that they clicked instantly and became friends ... he needed some one of his caliber to complete the program...

Rb packed some of his things and got some cash.. as he cannot use cards there... he pulled out his old laptop.. which he used in his early college days... he packed it too... he left his current one...

He will leave his phone also and will call his home from public booths... he will buy a new phone from Mumbai and get a new number... Rb was planning about his stay and what should be done...

Geet slept thinking of maan...

Maan slowly opened the door and entered with out making any sound... He saw Geet sleeping peacefully...

Maan - Meri neend udake tum sorahi ho Geet... not done... I will not allow you to sleep...


As maan moved his hand hit the vase and it fell down making a sound enough to wake up Geet...

Geet sat up startled... She looked around but she could see nothing... but she was sure she heard something... She got up from the bed and said - Kaun hai...

She took two steps towards Maan... Maan went into dark as possible... and Geet turned around and said again... kaun hai...

Maan leaped and held her from behind... one hand holding her from waist and one hand on he mouth avoiding her from shouting...

Maan - Mishty... Main hoon... tumhara Maan.... and he started nuzzling her neck... he planted a kiss on her exposed skin...

Geet felt herself being clay in his hands which are molding her according to his desires...

Geet kept her hand on his to remove it... buy Maan caught it and entwined their fingers... He pressed them hard making Geet more vulnerable...

Geet with a heavy voice asked... App kyun aaye Maan...


Maan - Tumhare liya Geet... Tumhare bin akele rehna mushkil lagraha hai... mujhe saas bhi nahi lena tumhare bina.... he said plainting more kisses...

Geet - Maan ... nahi... you can't do this...

Maan picked her up and made way to the bed.. he placed her on the bed and settled beside her caging her in his arms... I will do ... Geet.. main ab door nahi reh sakta... main tumhe tab tak nahi chodunga jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi kardeti... in simple words.. I am going to seduce you till you forgive me...

He pulled her on to him .. Geet was complete on maan... and He opened her dress zip on the back... He made way into her dress ... Geet moaned his name... Maan... Nooo... but Maan didn't leave her and continued his sweet torture on her...and in no time both were under the sheets discovering the hidden world...

Geet sat up suddenly panting... she looked around and found herself alone in the room .. she checked her self... she is completely dressed...

Geet - yeh sab sapna tha... yeh kaisa sapna tha... main aise kaise... babaji... kya horaha hai mujhe...

Geet sat and remembered her dream... she turned red... geet.. tub hi kaise kaise sapne dekh rahi hai... Woh bhi Maan ke saath... 😳

Geet - Maan ke saath ka kya matlab hai😡... woh sab toh wahi karenge na😳... Aaahhh... main pagal horahi hoon... babaji... yeh kya kardiya aapne apni bachi ka...

She got up and ran into wash room... and stood in front of the mirror... and her eyes widened... her lips are red and swollen... She touched them instantly... iska matlab kya hai... Kya sach mein maan aaye the... and she undressed her self quickly and looked at her self.. her body is clean... no marks...she is perfectly normal...matlab maine hi😳... she saw her lips... She turned to shower and switched it on...

Geet - Kya horaha hai mujhe... She felt his hand around herself... Nothing Jaan... kuch nahi horaha hai tumhe... You are just missing me...

She turned and saw Maan standing with her... looking with naughty eyes...mujhe itna miss karr rahi ho ... ki khud... and he touched her lips with his hand... Geet closed her eyes...

Geet opened her eyes and looked around... she is alone in the shower ... She came out wrapped in a towel and sat on the bed totally confused ... and this is how actually Maan saw her... He came to keep the present, he got for her before she got up... but the scene front of him surprised and at the same time frightened him too... Geet was fully wet and even her bandages too... she was too involved in her dream and she forgot about her bandages... Maan kept the packet on the table and ran towards her...

Maan - Geeettt... Yeh kya pagal pan hai... tum aise kaise bhig gayi... apna bandages dekho...

Geet then looked herself... but to her surprise... Maan didn't react to her as he generally does when he sees her like this... i.e., in a towel... His concern was solely on her injuries... He ran and came with another towel and wiped her injured parts first... He slowly removed the wet bandages and cleaned the place with a cotton and disinfectant... he winced seeing the elbow injury.. it is really bad...

Maan - yeh kya hai Geet... itni laparwahi... dhyan kaha hai tumhara... infection hojata hai aise karne se... doc ne kaha na ki dhyan se rehne ke liye... we need to see a doctor... jaldi jaldi chalte hain...

Geet saw Maan... he was very concerned and with great concentration he is doing the bandages.. she thought.. kya yehi hai woh jinhone uss din mujhpe ... how come he is changed so much.....

Maan then bent and removed her hair from the back... and saw the injury there... it is healing... but the elbow injury needs doctors attention...

Maan while taking to her went to her wardrobe and pulled out a dress for her... took of the other necessary items and placed them on the bed...

Maan - tum jaldi jaldi change karlo main abhi aata hoon... tumhe zyada dard toh nahi horaha haina... main pain killer leke aata hoon... batao medicines kaha hain...

Geet nodded a no...Waha dard nahi hain maan... but yaha hain... she said pointing at her heart...

Maan stood rooted... he knew he is the reason...

Geet tuned to him and asked... Aap ne woh sab kyun kaha maan... kyun bharosa nahi hai aap ko mujh pe

Maan knew he have to reason her - Mujhe nahi pata mishty...magar yeh bhi sach haina ki yeh zaroori nahi hai ki jo baat zabaan se nikli woh dil se bhi nikli ho... kabhi kabhi dimag ke aage dil ki awaaz dab jaati hai...

Geet stared into his eyes...

Maan - mujhe tab bas angel ki chinta thi... tum nahi jaanti hum sab pe kya guzri... aur jab aunty ne woh sab kaha toh...

Geet - woh toh mujhe nahi jaanti na maan... lekin aap aise kaise keh sakte hain...

Maan - mujhe ek baat batao Mishty...kya tumhare saath aisa kabhi nahi hua... tum ne kuch kaha ho aur woh baat dil se nahi nikli ho... ya kabhi dimag ke age dil haar gaya ho...

Geet just remained silent... Maan said... abhi jawab dene ki zaroorat nahi hai geet... socho aur jawab do... abhi ke liye ready hojao... main 10 min aata hoon...

Maan left the room... but he came back... Geet tumhe help chahiye... can you do it your self...

Geet nodded.. ...I can manage...

Maan nodded and left... Geet looked at the clothes ... she felt.. she cannot wear salwar now... as they are of full hands.. Maan randonmly picked them... Geet took out a jeans and a shirt...


Maan came and saw geet in jeans and pink shirt... Geet saw a little hurt in his eyes ... she said instantly... Woh.. woh dress full hands ka tha.. I couldn't wear that now... and yeh easy hai pehen ne keliye.. isliye...


Maan nodded.. chalo.. hospital chalte hain... maine sanjay se baat ki hain...

Maan and Geet left... and Meera saw them leaving early in the morning... they didn't inform anyone as nobody was up...

When Dadi came .. she asked whether she knows where Maan and geet went... and Dadi wondered where Maan has taken Geet... with out informing anyone...




Precap - The gift




Ignore mistakes plzz😳


Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part.
waiting to know the mystery of meera's accident.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Geet dreams about maan n in confusion take shower which results wetting her wounds
Maan come to her room to give her gift
Seeing her like this maan ask her to come with him to doctor n seeing his concern geet ask first time ask maan why he accuse her like this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
kya geet samajh payegi maan ko...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet need to realize... ..
whom you love.. their words may hurt ..
but for love we should ignore that..
Liked the Dream of Geet hahaha...
poor Geet..
Phas gayi .. and
Maan shouting on getting wet ..
hehe ..
Maan tabhi bhi to chilla raha .. hai.. phir Geet gussa kyu nahi.. ho rahi..
Maan gussa hai.. because he cares... tab bhi .. aur.. ab Bhi ..
gift me kya hai...???

Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update so RB is planning how he will proceed so that no one can catch him geet is lost in maans thought when maan sneaked in geets room he wkoe her geet scared maan caught her and wouldn't leave till she forgive him he seduces her and pretty soon they r lost in each other but it's a dream geet really scared cribbing and cursing herself for it she haves a bath but imagining maan who for real saw geets bandages wet scold her his all concern was on her wounds maan trying to make him understand that it's not he dosent trust her it's just the situation that made him say which wasn't by his heart he even said to once think if she hasn't said the same thing maan took her to hospital meera saw them leave asked dadi who herself was surprised and didn't know why maan took her
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi indu
nice part ..
rb going to mumbai ..
geet missing maan badly ..she was dreaming abt him ..maan there he is helpinggeet ...taking her to doctor ..meera again saw them together ..
ab kya tamasha karegi woh
thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Maan se duri Geet ko paresan kar rahi hai
Hot dream
Maan concerned about Geet
Stupid meera
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written! Geet dreaming abt Maan! she is shocked! she goes 2 shower n Maan enters in sees her wet bandages! Maan tensed! he is worried abt her! he changes the bandages! Maaneet talk abt that day! Maan takes her to the hospital! Meera sees! update soon! Read the OS as well n commented! amazing fab OS!

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