MYSTERY:the raaz ( New Investigative Story )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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" The day starts normally with sooo much fun but no one knows that at the end its become abnormal. "



10...
Starting of the day;Morning...
7:00 Am



Alarm is ringing in its full swing...but it does
not effect on the sleeping person...at last alarm except its loose and stop ringing...and as usual sleeping person is still in deep slumber...
One person enters into the room while murmuring as " pata nai ye bear kitny ghory bech kar sota hai jo uthny ka nam hi nai laita...(shout angrily) uth ja daya nai tu pity ga mere hath sy "
Still no effect on sleeping daya...
Abhijeet come foward to snatch away the blanket from daya...but stop with a thought as...
Abhijeet Pov : ( lovingly ) hayeee mera baccha...kinna sohna lg raha hai...soty huy...( naughtily ) ther ja baccho...abhi teri nend ka ilaj karta hun main...
He goes inside the washroom...and fetch out a bucket full of water...with some efforts he is able to drag the bucket towards daya's bed...and emptied the whole contents of bucket over daya...
Daya : ( with a jerk ) jump over his bed...standing over his bad in haphazard manner...trying to understand the scenario...( scratching his forehead ) what happened to me...why i m wet...( seeing water around himself questioned ) is i m sleeping inside the swimming pool...??
Abhijeet ( smiling broadly ) : han bhai...hogai teri nend puri...ya aur sony ka irada hai sahab ka...( controlling his laughter seeing confused daya ) aby mere yaar itna mat soch...sehaat k lia acha nai hai teri..dimaag tu hai nai dil sy sochty hain sahab...jo thora bht hai ussy save karky rakh...bad main kaam aiga...( clear his throat with )...mainy tujhy soty main hi bath dai dia...haaahaaa...( laughing badly as can't control his laughter )
Daya ( fumbled in anger ) : shout abhijeet k bacchy...ye accha nai kia tuny...ruk abhi bata hon tujhy...
But to his luck abhijeet had already slips from the scene...while ordering as...breakfast ready hai...agar sahab kasht karky jaldi neechy ajain...tu bari kirpiya hogi sahab ki mjh masoom py...
Daya ( yawning ) : han ata hun bus 5 min...( irritated tone ) aik tu abhi tum mjhy thik sy sony bhi nai daity ho...meri bechari neend sy pata nai tumhain kia dushmani hai...
Abhijeet ( shout from kitchen ) : mjhy apki nend sy koi problem nai hai maharaj...but ravan ki dant sy zaror hai...Acp sir ny apny ladly chiranjeev ko tu kuch nai kehna hai...is bacchy ki jaan lai lainy hai...sahab tu keh daingy abhi ki waja sy dair hui hai...ab acp sahab ko kaun batai k ye polar bear adhi raat ko candy crush khel rahy thy...aur subha dair sy uthy...( huhhh )
After some time daya came down wards...while humming a tune as...
La..La..La..La
Abhijeet ( smiles ) : seeing daya coming and said aja daya...yahan table py...aloo k prathy banai hain aj tere lia...tujhy pasand hai na...first time try kia hain taste karky bata kaisy bany hain...
Daya ( watery mouth ) : tear the bite and taste it...after gulping it down from throat he said ( lovingly )...wah wah abhi maza agaya kia parathy hain...( holding abhijeet's hand ) tumhary tu magic hands chomny ka dil karta hai...( dramatically )
Abhijeet ( smiling whole heartedly ) : said sacchi...
Daya ( tweaking abhi's nose ) said mucchi...
Abhijeet ( over whelming ) : agar itny hi achy banay hain tu main bhi taste karta hon...
Daya : his eyes pop out in shock...after hearing this...
Abhijeet : with this he put a bite of pratha inside his mouth...and in next second he started coughing badly...
Daya ( recovering from shock phase ) : hurriedly gave abhi a glass of water...with " abhi tum thik ho...rubbing abhi's back ..." ( asked tensely )
Abhijeet ( managed to say ) : main thik hon daya...but tumny ye kaisy khaya...ismain tu itni mirchain hain...aur salt bhi high quantity mai hai...
Daya ( cupping abhijeet's face ) : said lovingly tumny itny piyaar sy mere lia banai thy prathy abhi k tumhary piyaar ki mithas ( sweetness ) main mera dehan spice aur salt py gaya hi nai...
Abhijeet ( a drop of tear fell from his eyes in extreme happiness ) : he said in tears...itna piyaar karta hai tu mjh sy daya...
Daya : ( removing tears from abhi's eyes ) : said uhunnn itny sy bhi kai ziada...infact infinite times...
Abhijeet : ( smiles in tears ) and hugged daya tightly with hamesha itna hi piyaar karna mjhy daya...kabhi akela mat chorna mjhy...
Daya ( assuringly ) hugging back abhi said : promise boss...hamesha tumhary pass rahunga...marny
Abhijeet ( scaredly ): put finger on his lips with shhh...daya agy kuch mat bolna plzzz...
Daya : okay baba nai bolta... but hamesha yaad rakhna bhaly hi meri body tumhary pass na ho...ye dil dharakna band kardy ( putting abhi's hand on his heart ) tb bhi main tumhary pass kisi na kisi shakal main zaror honga abhi...kabhi chand k roop main...kabhi phoolon ki mehak ( smell ) main...tumhari yadon main...un ati jati dharkanon main...aur kuch nai tu ye hawa tumhain mere hony ka ehsaas dilaigi...but dilaigi zaror...dont worry...
Abhijeet ( scaredly ) : hogaya sahab ka bhashan...( angrily ) ab sahab kaan khol k sun lain...k woh mjhy chor k kahin nai jaingy...humny sath jeeny marny ki kasmain khai hain tu bhool gaya kia...
Daya ( wrapping abhi inside his loving shell ) : said nai bhola main abhi...aur kahin nai jaraha main samjhy sharp shine...( smiles )
Abhijeet : Hmmm...( sadly )
Daya : ( pat on his own head with ) hey bhagwan phir chalo hogaya is abhi ka melo drama...( teasingly ) ab senior inspector Abhijeet ko bureau k lia late nai horaha hai kia...
Abhijeet : ( smiles a bit ) punch daya's tummy with late tu horaha hai...
Daya : ouuuchh...!! ( massaging his stomach ) with tu phir hum bureau k lia niklain abhi...
Abhijeet : ( smilingly ) bilkul niklain...
Daya : feels happy seeing his abhi happy...( in heart ) he prayed to God with...bhagwan bus hamari khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar mat lagana plzzz...( pleading )
Abhijeet ( shout ) : ab chalna nai hai kia sahab ko...
Daya : ( controlling over his emotions ) : said han aya abhi...bus 2 min...his inner guts are alarming for some thing but what...?? He can't understand...
And duo marched outside the home...



9...
In Quallis :
8:30 Am



Daya ( occupied the driving seat while turning on the radio )...
abhijeet ( angrily ) : abey yaar daya band karna is radio ko...aik tu pehly hi late hain aur tu driving py concentrate karny k bajai radio sun raha hai...
Daya ( dramatically ) : bhai sahab ap bhool rahy hain k mumbai k sb sy best driver is waqt apky sath baithy huy hain...aur car drive karahy hain...( raising collars )...dont worry hum apko 9:00 am tk bureau puhancha daiga...abhi ap music ka anand uthain...aur is thandi hawa ko mehsoos karain...and get lost in this air...( feeling the cool breeze ) with this he spread his one hand in air and with one hand he control the starring...
Abhijeet : ( afraidly ) acha bus bus bht hogai teri natunki ab driving pe concentrate kar...ziada hero giri mat dikha...mjhy pata hai ye bear natunki no # 1 hai...( lovingly )
Daya : ( proudly ) kia karain boss apna tu kuch aisa hi hai ( grins badly )
Abhijeet : ( loudly ) huhhh...
Daya : ( winking ) kun boss jealous hmm...( try to smell ) daikho abhi tumhary pass sy jalny ki smell bhi arahi hai...
Abhijeet : ( shockingly ) main aur jealous tumsy daya...what a joke...??...( thinking something while eyeing daya ) said mischievously...haan tumhari tummy sy ho sakta hun main jealous...
Daya ( shockingly ) : what meri tummy sy jealousy...( shout ) nooo...aik tu pehly hi kum hogai hai meri tummy ( sadly )...ab main issy aur nai kho sakta...( crying fakely )
Before Abhijeet say something their quallis entered inside the bureau car parking...and the duo for a time being postponed their this cute fight...


8...
At Bureau...
9:00 am



Duo with their full shine and jalwa entered inside the bureau...
Team saw duo coming so greeted them as : Good Morning abhijeet Sir & Daya Sir...
Duo ( smilingly greeted with ) : Good Morning all...
Daya ( loudly ) : a dare devil smile came on his lips and eyes having spark of naughtiness...said " freddy tumhain pata hai aj tumhary abhijeet sir ny alu k parathy banai thy breakfast main...tumny taste karna hai kia..."
Abhijeet : expressions are like mar gai...pov : ye daya bhi na meri leg pulling ka koi mauqa hath sy nai jany daita...subha ka badla raha hai ye mota bear...( jerking his head ) aur jagao abhi jagty huy sher ko...huhhh...( irritatedly )
Freddy : wow sir alu k prathy mjhy bht pasand hai...aur woh bhi abhijeet sir k hath k...main zaror khaunga...
Abhijeet : his eyes pleading to daya as nooo plzzz ...dont make them eat those alu k parathy...
Daya : his eyes are saying like " daikha abhi mjh sy panga lainy ki saza...pani dala tha na mere upar subha subha ab daikho mera revenge..."



Flashback


before coming out from the house completely... Daya hurriedly stuffed 3-4 paratha's inside lunch box... To execute his plan and take revenge from abhi...


FLASHBACK ENDS


To abhijeet's bad luck same time Dr tarika enters inside the bureau...
Daya ( with dare devil smile ) : invite her as " ao tarika tum bhi a jao aur abhi ki cooking skills taste karo..."
Abhijeet : like go and bang his head on strongest wall of the bureau...
Daya : enjoying abhijeet's situation... opened the lunch box...
Team tear the bite of paratha and kept it inside their mouths...
Abhijeet: his eyes literally pop out from his orbits...
Daya : is hell laughing holding his stomach seeing abhijeet condition...
Team started coughing...
Abhijeet & daya : hurriedly gave them a glass of water...
After a while team settles...
Purvi : Omg Sir itni high quantity main spice aur salt...ab samjh aya sir itna gussa kun karty hain...
Pankaj : han sahi kaha purvi...teekha kha kha k sir bhi teekhy hogai hain...
Freddy : ( smilingly ) sir main apko meri wife k hath k parathy khikaunga...& before freddy's wife-nama started tarika interrupt him as...
Tarika : ( teasingly ) Sachi abhijeet tumhari cooking skills bht achi hain...I m impressed...
Abhijeet ( shyly ) : kia ap bhi tarika jee...full be-izziti karahi hain...woh bhi sbky samny...( guilty tone )
All started laughing badly...
Pankaj ( whispering in freddy's ear as ) : Sir ye dr tarika ko kia hogaya hai...in parathon sy impressed...( pointing towards alu k parathy )
Freddy : ( irritatedly ) arry budhu pankaj dr tarika abhijeet sir ka dil rakh rahi hain...
Pankaj ( winking ) : ohooo...
Every one become silent with a jerk...after hearing voice as...
Voice : kia horaha ye sb...( strict tone )

7
Acp's Entery...
10:00 am

All become silent with serious faces...
Acp ( teasingly ) : kia hua mere aty hi sbko sanp ( snake ) kun songh ( smell ) gaya...abhi mere anay sy pehly sb hans rahy thy...mere aty hi sbki hansi gayab...( strictly )
Voice ( arosed from the bureau entrance ) : as Pardyuman tum gabar singh wali entery marogy tu mere bechary in bacchon ki hansi tu gayab honi hi hai...huhhh...
Acp ( murmurs ) : lo bus iski hi kami thi...agaya jalti py teel ( oil ) chirakny...
Dr salunkhey : ( teasingly ) kuch kaha tumny pardyuman...meri tareef main...
Team try hard in hiding their smiles...while enjoying their oldie duo fight...
Acp : ( grumbling ) nai main itni bari gustakhi kaisy karsakta hun apki shaan main dr salunkhey...( to team ) aur tum log kun khary khary dant nikal rahy ho...( strictly ) jao jaky kaam karo...( pointing towards dr salunkhey ) iska tu chalo hi rehta hai 24 ghanty...
Dr Salunkhey ( angrily ) kia chalo rehta hai mera Pardyuman...han...
Team : nodes silently ( still suppressing their laughters )
Acp : kuch nai...tu bata yahan kun aya tha...
Dr salunkhey : ( angrily ) main wo ye file dainy aya tha...( turning serious ) Boss manoj ki post martam report agai hai...
Acp ( seriously ) : salunkhey postmatam report main kia aya hai...
Team : also become alert...
Dr salunkhey ( stubbornly ) : main nai bata raha...main gussa hon...
Acp : ( like bang his head on the near by wall ) said irritatedly...daikha daikha iska phiry sy shuru hogay...
Dr salunkhey ( frowning ) : kia shuru hogaya mera pardyuman han...
Acp : natunki aur kia...( irritatedly )
Dr salunkhey ( angrily ) : huhhh...
Abhijeet ( interrupting in b/w ouldie duo fight ) : said arry salunkhey sir...( whispering in his ear ) Acp sir ka tu apko pata hai buddhy hogai hain...islia jald gussa hojaty hain...ap tu jawan hai na abhi...( mischievously )
Acp : glared abhi...as get what abhijeet say in salunkhey ears...
abhi through eyes signal him to be calm...
A naughty smiles appears on dr salunkhey face... which abhijeet accepted it as green signal said as...
Abhijeet : ( buttering ) dr sahab ap na apny gyan main sy kuch hamain bhi batadi jiya...plzzz...ap tu maha gyani ho na...
Acp ( in heart ) : huhhh...maha gyani...
Dr salunkhey : acha bus bus...( whispering in abhijeet's ears as ) ziada tareef mat karo meri Pardyman jealous feel karny lagy ga ( winking abhi )...ruko batata hon...( loudly ) postmartam report k mutabbiq manoj ko 2 golian lagi hain...
Dr tarika : ( continued ) aik goli jo shoulder py lagi...qareeb 180 degree k angel sy chalai gai hai...aur ye goli 0.02mm callibre ki hai
Abhijeet ( with serious face ) : i see...yani khooni manoj ki hieght ka hi hai...
Tarika ( smiles and said ) : exactly abhijeet...and jo bullet shell apko crime scene pr sy mila hai wo is shoulder sy nikli bullet sy match hota...
Daya : aur dosri bullet uska kuch pata chala hai...ya dono golian aik hi gun sy chalai gain hain...
dr salunkhey : nai daya dono bullets same gun sy nai chalai gai hain...dosra bullet wound shoulder k bullet wound sy thora chota hai...
Daya : ( confusingly ) matlab...
Dr tarika : matlab ye k ye dosri bullet sniper riffle sy chalai gai hai...qareeb 45 degree k angle...
Abhijeet : ( excitedly ) wah tarika jee...
Dr salunkhey and acp glared abhi...
Dr tarika : smiles shyly...
Abhijeet : grins badly...
Acp : ( meaningfully ) matlab as pass ki building sy...
Dr salunkhey : yes boss...kisi ny manoj pr pechy sy 45 degree k angle sy goli chalai hai...
Acp ( ordering ) : crime scene k ass pass ka area aur buildings achy sy chan maro...kuch tu zaror milyga... ( moving his hand in his style )
Team : nodes with yes sir...and left for crime spot...


6
At crime spot...
11:00 am



Abhijeet : manoj yahan khara tha...samny sy usy ki ny goli mari...( ordering ) pankaj manoj ki jaga pr khary ho...aur purvi tum manoj ( pankaj ) pr 180 degree sy nishana sadho...(pankaj and purvi obeyed)...aur jo bullet manoj ki back py lagi thi uska angle 45 degree hai...( passing infra red light in 45 degree angle )...uska matlab khooni woh us samny waly building k 6th malay py khara tha...us khirki py...chalo wahan chal k daikhty hain...( marching towards the building )
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls lines and paras mey thora space de ke likho warna parne mey dfculty ho rahi hey sweety
will read the total stry wen free
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

Pls lines and paras mey thora space de ke likho warna parne mey dfculty ho rahi hey sweety
will read the total stry wen free
thnks fr pm


Okay cutie 😳
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well done guria👏👏
abhi half he na
Wesey Abhi daya ka starting scene bilkul husband wife wala nahi ho gaya😉
Hamarey abhi itney bhi domestic nahi hein😳
Maza aaya
magar Aditya ji ko biryani ziyada achi banani aati he in real
Aur teekha to mein bhi bohot teiz khati hoon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kousar-Aditya

Well done guria👏👏

abhi half he na
Wesey Abhi daya ka starting scene bilkul husband wife wala nahi ho gaya😉
Hamarey abhi itney bhi domestic nahi hein😳
Maza aaya
magar Aditya ji ko biryani ziyada achi banani aati he in real
Aur teekha to mein bhi bohot teiz khati hoon😊


Thank you api 🤗
Aisa tu mainy socha hee ni api
Awww next story main paka aditya jee biryani banain gy 😉 😉
Api fikar not 😛
Sacchi but ap tu bht sweet ho 😆
Thanks for liking the story api 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At building...
11:30 am



After entering inside the building...team inquire about any suspicious person or move in the building from guard after telling him that they are from cid and investigating a murder case...

Guard : maa qasam sahab jee main duty pr hi tha...sara time...koi bhi admi bara box laiky building mai nai aya...

Abhijeet : agar sniper gun ka case box koi building k andar lai kar nai aya tu phir sniper riffle sy bullet kaisy chali...( suddenly some thing hit his mind ) he ask as tum kisi kaam sy thori dair k lia bahir gai thy...ya building ka koi back door hai kia...

Guard : main tu kisi kaam sy bahir nai gaya...lkn haan building ka pichla gate hai jis py har waqt tala laga hua hota hai...

Abhijeet : ( shockingly ) pichla gate hai.. chalo hamain dikhao...and they proceed towards the back door...( ordering pankaj and purvi ) tum ass pass zara achi tarah sy check karo daikho kuch milta hai kia...

Purvi & Pankaj : nodes as yes sir...

Abhijeet : examining the surroundings...ye jaga sunsaan hai...lgta hai koi ata jata nai hai yahan...and he touched the lock for examination...but the gate is not locked...( angrily ) call guard with tum to keh rahy thy k ispy tala laga hua hota hai...but ye gate tu khula hua hai...wo riffle yahan sy building k andar gai hai...

Guard ( shivering ) : mainy kuch nai kia hai sahab...
Purvi : notices a chewing gum wrapper on road...she calls sir...
Abhijeet : approaching towards purvi with han kuch mila kia...

Purvi : sir ye wrapper mila hai...shayad khooni ka ho...

Abhijeet : hosakta hai purvi...evidence bag main dal lo issy...ab salunkhey sir hi hamari kuch madad karsakty hain...( to guard ) chalo hamain 6th malay ka road side ki taraf wala flat dikhao...

Pankaj : sir us side sy kuch nai mila hai...

Guard : sahab wo flat tu kbsy khali para hai...

Abhijeet ( with fiery eyes ) : khali pary flat sy koi khoon karky chala jata hai aur tum keh rahy ho kuch nai pata kaisy...ye kaisy hosakta hai...chabi kis ky paas hoti hai is taly ki...

Guard : ( crying ) maa qasam sahab mjhy kuch nai pata... is taly ki chabi manoj sir k pass hoti hai...wo is building k secretary hain...unky pass hi hoti hain sari keys...

All ( shockingly ) : manoj sahab k pass...

Pankaj : showed guard the pic of manoj with yehi manoj sahab hain tumhary...

Guard : jee sahab but inhain kia hua hai ...

Purvi : kisi ny inka khoon kardia hai...

Guard : become shocked with kia...

Abhijeet : manoj isi building main rehta hai kia...

Guard jee sahab : 1 malay py...ravin sir k sath...

Purvi : ravin sir kon...

Guard : jee ravin sir aur manoj achy dost hain...dono aik sath hi 1 malay py flat no 4 main rehty hain...

Abhijeet : is waqt tumhary ravin sir kahan hai...

Guard : Sir wo 2 days sy apny ghar nai lauty...manoj sir ki tarah...

Abhijeet : tum logon ko shak nai hua dono iss tarah do din sy wapis nai ai tu...

Guard : nai sahab dono kabhi kabhar is tarah achanak chaly jaty thy...phir wapis ajaty thy...islia shak nai hua...

Abhijeet :acha hamain unka ghar dikhao...
Purvi : sir kahin ravin ny tu nai mara manoj ko...aur khud bhag gaya...

Abhijeet ; hony ko tu purvi ye bhi hosakta hai k ravin bhi manoj ki tarah...he left the sentence incomplete...
Soon they reach to the flat of manoj & ravin...abhijeet with pen knife opened the door with some efforts...as they enter inside the house and start their searching they become soo much shocked...some thing cold like ice roll down from their spines...



4...
CID BUREAU



Abhijeet ( angrily ) : sachin kuch pata chalaye ravin ka...kia karta hai...kisi gang k sath iska ya manoj ka koi connection hai kia... Kuch bhi...choti sy..choti cheez bhi qeemti hai hamary lia... ( to purvi ) purvi call records nikal wai ravin k...last location kahan ki hai ravin k mobile ki...

Sachin : ni sir manoj ya ravin ka background k baray main kuch bhi ni pata chala... Saray documents jo hamain unky ghar sy milain hain wo nakli hain...unki photos hamary criminal data base main majood ni hain... Kuch hath ni aya sir...

Abhijeet : ( in anger ) bang his hand hard on bureau centre table with damn it... ( murmurs ) time ni hai hamary pass aur kuch hath ni araha... SHIT.!!

Purvi : sir mainy mobile company walon ko bola hai ravin aur manoj k records bhajny ka wo bus FAX karty hee hongy hamain...

Abhijeet ( tensely ) : hmm

( same time fax machine beep alert them )

Purvi :take out the paper from FAX machine and forward it towards abhijeet...

Abhijeet ( keenly ) :reviewing the list said nikhil zara marker daina...

Nikhil : ( fastly ) pass the marker to abhijeet...

Abhijeet :highlighting some numbers on the list... Said purvi check karo ye kiska number hai...

Purvi : yes sir...

Abhijeet :writing important aspects of the case...as..." 2 din pehly hamain aik body jo k manoj ki hai...ussy 2 golian mari gain aik 180 sy aur dosri 45 sy...usky hee building k road side area py... Usi din sy ravin bhi gayab hai...aur usky phone ki last location XYZ jungle show karahi hain... Akhri call jo manoj ko aya wo...

Purvi : Akhri call jo manoj ko aya wo ravin k number sy aya...marny sy theek aik ghanta pehly...aur dusra anjan number kisi PCO ka hai...

Abhijeet : aur phir ravin ka phone bhi switched off...hamain uss jungle main jaky daikhna hoga... Ye koi bari sazish lgti...

( suddenly abhijeet phone rang )

Abhijeet : ( tensely ) jee salunkhey sir...( listen something from other side ) said achaa Sir hum abhi aty...( cut the call ) and said ( to all ) lgta hai koi bari lead mili hai salunkhey sahab ko lab bulaya hai...( to purvi ) daya ko phone karo aur bolo khabri sy milky dosri team ko laiky XYZ jungle ko search kary... Daikhy ravin ka koi surag milta kia...

Purvi : nodes...

( Abhijeet with nikhil and pankaj marched towards forensic labs )


3...
1:00Am
AT FORENSIC LAB



Dr salunkhey : testing some papers...fully indulge in it...

Abhijeet : salunkhey sahab itni jaldi main kun bulaya apny... Kuch bara hath laga kia...

Salunkhey sir : aao abhijeet aao... Aur ye kia aty k sath itny saary sawal... Khair ye daikho...ye Jo paper ap logon ko uss flat sy mila tha ye koi aam paper ni hai...

Abhijeet : Ainnn...aam paper ni hai matlab...saaf saaf bataiya na sir... Kia ap bhi...

Salunkhey sir : ye blue print hai aik bomb reactor ka jiska half ap logon ko wahan ravin aur manoj k ghar sy mila... Ye bomb reactor bht hee powerful aur khatarnak hai... Agar ghalat hathon main par gaya tu kuch bhi hosakta...

Every one :becomes shocked with kiaaa...

Abhijeet : aur kuch milaa apko iss blue print aur baki papers sy...
Dr salunkhey :ni baki saary papers blank hain...jo ap logon ko milai wahan sy...

Abhijeet ( rubbing cornerof his lips ) : ohhh I see... Baki ka adha blue print wo kahan hai... ( thinking hard )



2...
3:00Am
AT XYZ JUNGLE



Daya : jungle k Charon aur phel jao...compass rakhna SB apny apny sath... Chapa chapa chan maro jungle ka...daikho kuch milta hai kia... Kuch mily tu Bluetooth k through inform karna...

( and all team spread inside the jungle in four directions...searching every bit of the jungle...suddenly purvi eyes caught something )

Purvi : ( On Bluetooth ) sir idhar ( looks at compass ) and said west 65 degree py aik ghaar hai mere left py... Ap idhar ajaiya...

Daya :OK hum arahy...tb tk saaf dharn rehna samjhi... ( to team ) tum log bhi uss taraf ajao...

All : yes sir...

( after some time shattered team gather infront of the mysterious house in the mid of jungle )

All with alert position and aligned gun starts walking slowly slowly towards the house which is made of mud and straws...

Daya : ( signaled ) nikhilto go behind the house and checked...with sachin and he himself enters into the house from front...

( after entering into the house they become shocked )

Ravin is lying on the floor fully dipped in his own blood

Daya :checked his pulse and said zinda hai...nikhil ambulance bulao jaldi...

Sachin : ran to fetch water from the pot lying in one corner of the room

Nikhil : started calling for ambulance...

Purvi :started checking ravin's jeans pocket...

Daya : sprinkles some water on ravin's face... Patting his cheeks...

Ravin : gains some conscious mumbled mjhy mat maro...

Daya : ghabrao mat hum CID sy hain...

Ravin ; cid... ( murmurs ) sahab bachalo...

Daya ( confusingly ) : kissy bachalo ravin... Bomb reactor k blue print ka adha hissa kahan hai...

Ravin : mere pass tha ( with difficulty speaks )

Daya : tha matlab ab kahan hai wo blue print...

Ravin : ( mumbled ) lai gaya raghu... ( died )

Sachin : checked his pulse and said sir ye tu mar gaya...

Daya : magar haan hamara kaam kargaya...

Nikhil : enters with Sir ambulance agai hai...

Daya ( sadly ) : ab koi faida nikhil...ravin Mar chuka hai...

Purvi :Sir mainy puri body check karli magar kuch bhi ni mila... Na I'd card aur na rashan card ...na gari ki chabi aur na license...ghaw bullet ka...

Daya : hmm...nikhil body ko forensic lab bhijwado
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
dear, right now i am very busy

i'll read your story whenever i'll get time😊

thnk u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Mistic_Morning

dear, right now i am very busy

i'll read your story whenever i'll get time😊

thnk u


Okay Misti di 😳
No problem 😊
Thank you 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Just read this...

I just can't imagine Abhijeet pouring a bucket of water on Daya's head to wake him up. 😆

Poor Daya..

Then the alu paratha thing...poor Abhi! But Abhijeet is allergic to alu, you know...😆


The case is incomplete, so waiting for the continuation.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: visrom

Just read this...

<font>I just can't imagine Abhijeet pouring a bucket of water on Daya's head to wake him up. 😆</font>

<font>Poor Daya..</font>

<font>Then the alu paratha thing...poor Abhi!</font>
But Abhijeet is allergic to alu, you know...😆


The case is incomplete, so waiting for the continuation.


Awww di 😳
Koi ni ap Gobi k parathy imagine karlo 😉 😉
Yeah di I will complete the case soon 😊
Thank you 😳

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