Meri Duniya - Pa-1/Pg 1 - Back to Mumbai

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'll continue my other fan-fic tomorrow after school with this one too; if people liked it or else I won't continue it....

Meri Duniya Mein

Meri Duniya is about these main girls Kasturi, Kripa, Afreen, and Sameera who faces' all sort of problems after their marriage; starting from day one. (Here is a better view of the title song of my fan-fic; so enjoy it).

http://media.putfile.com/Meri-Duniya-

PS: Please let me know if I should continue or not and enjoy the video for this fan-fic....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome video kashish..cant wait to read this ff...but how are you going to keep up with 4 fan fictions at once..... anyways good luck dear 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 promo
do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing promo
looks really good
cant wait 4 the first part
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will be up soon as I download Kasturi November 1st to make the video song...so maybe by tomorrow
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds really cool 😛 😛 do continue 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry for the delay but here is the first look at Meri Duniya part one. (To understand Robbie and KAsturi's relationship you must watch the video clip to understand the scene). Here I go .....

Meri Duniya

Part ~ One

Written by Chor Ki Kashish

Bright sun roses at Mumbai City, while it was dark in the city of Edmonton, when a young girl running inside the terminal to catch her flight to London, than from there she was to meet up her sister Afreen and her boyfriend. Soon as she found her seat inside the plane and it was beside her ex-boyfriend Vishnu who she hates the most after he cheated on her with her step-sister Maya. Maya is her step-sister who she never consider family because of her she loss her real dad when she was five years old. In brackets, (Maya is Prerna and Mr. Bajaj's daughter after Prerna's first husband's death and after that day on they never cared about us). (we will learn more about Maya later on…so enjoy the moments until than) ;( back to the story), she tried to switch her seat with anyone, but the plane was already houseful so she had to sit there for 12hours and tolerate him.

-London-

Kabir woke up early in the morning to make Afreen her breakfast so she doesn't get late for her flight to Mumbai. But Kabir was upset because he won't be able to see her for three years because he was going America after three days when Afreen reaches Mumbai and gives him a call saying she reached Mumbai safe and sound. In another room across from the kitchen; Afreen got up and started checking her mails and read the one from her sister Sameera who is a Flight Left-handed and part of a special team called HAWAKS. Afreen smiled at the letter than relied back by saying she was coming home after six years, but me and Kripa won't go home right away because we are planning to come and see you than leave for home and if you are allowed to come along than we will leave after our mission Sam. Well got to go now so take care, love you.

-Back to the flight-

Kripa sat there with tears in her eyes because her ex-boyfriend yelled out her biggest secret that she hid from her best friend Riva who is also going Mumbai to see her parents than going back to Calgary; afterwards she might move in with her boyfriend Sunny who I hate the most because he is my ex-boyfriend's brother. …maybe I might be wrong about Sunny but noting changes between me and his brother Vishnu. Three more hours than I'll be in London my birth place…yes I was born in London but when I was only a baby we moved back to India because Dad was facing some business crisis that held to his death., (but sometimes I wonder if Dad was murderer… maybe I'm just over-reacting about this…) anyways….I never understood my mother for marrying her ex-boyfriend Mr. Bajaj after Dad's chauth… Since that day on I really never cared about my mother because of her I loss my father, but nothing changes between me and my sisters and brother. Well originally I have one brother named Yuvaraj and two sisters Afreen and Sameera; all of us are connected by our pain and that is losing our father….sometimes I never miss Dad because I have PM Uncle who came into our lives, when I was roughly around six or seven he came into our lives and changed the meaning of life; without him I wouldn't be the person I am today. Because of his support and love he gave me the strength to stand up for my rights to live as a free bird like my latest boyfriend Prithvi. Me, and Prithvi have something special connection that keeps us together, but sometimes I wonder if Prithvi is the right person to give up my virginity or there is someone special who I am waiting for….because I already dated three guys in total first one was Summit, but I was never happy with him than came along Vishnu who I loved but he played with my emotions and now it's Prithvi who I met in Edmonton during his conferences at my friends work area since that day on we have been dating, but sometimes I don't feel satisfied with him because I am waiting for my prince charming…………………….

"Hey Kripa, what are you writing for past nine hours?"

Kripa annoyed: Vishnu, what's your problem in what I do? I mean to say whenever I am doing something or talking with any hot guys you always have problem with it.

Vishnu: Look Kripa I don't love you anymore, but I care for you…so…I…was…wondering….if…I…could…play…with…you're…bra-stra p?"

Kripa burning with anger: Are you gone nuts asking me if you could play with my bra-strap….are nuts?

Vishnu: Kripa relax … I was just joking around….

Kripa: Joking around! I hate jokes like that understood!

Vishnu: Yes Ma'am

Kripa just ignored him and started writing into her journal again about her badness experiment never she went through just few second ago with her ex.

-Flight landed in London-

Kripa gets out of the flight with her friend Riva, Riva looked excited to see London for the first time even Kripa was excited to be at her homeland only for few hours than leaving for Mumbai with her sister Afreen, but she was also dying to meet her soon to be Juju for the first time. Kripa found her sister standing in the concern with her boyfriend Kabir.

"Hi Didi" said by Kripa (Running into Afreen's arm)

Afreen turns around with excitement and hugs Kripa while Kabir admire sister-love with a smile.

"Oh! Huh! Kripa meet Kabir my boyfriend" Said by Afreen

Kripa (shakes her hand with Kabir): Nice to meet you Juju

Afreen: Juju?

Kabir also like Juju

Kripa: Of course Juju because if Didi is planning to get married to you that automatically makes you my Juju. (Afreen was blushing like hell, Kripa enjoyed each moment until she saw her boyfriend Prithvi getting out of a plane; Kripa excused herself and went running into Prithvi's arm. Prithvi also twirled her than hugged her with shock Kripa also hugged him back than broke apart by the announcement made for the arrival.

Kripa: Prithvi it was nice meeting you again

Prithvi: Same here

Kripa: What are you doing here?

Prithvi: Kripa, you know that I am a event manger show I'm here with two of my rock stars Robbie and Angad.

Kripa: That's nice, so all the best for your show than see you in Mumbai…bye

Prithvi: Bye

Kripa was leaving when Prithvi grabbed her hand and pulled her back into his arm saying to check her email cause, I send you a romantic poem. Kripa was turning red when Prithvi kissed her checks while her friend Riva started laughing her head off.

-Indian Air Base-

Every looked tried from their training from six-am to six-pm, this was their only break to fresh-up or have a light snack. Sameera was sitting beside Tanvi when Smarat comes in yelling at Sameera "Sam, how many times I told you not to call me rat-boy?"

Confused Sameera: What are you talking about?

Smarat: Sam last night you forgot to long-off from my laptop so I read your mail to Addy.

Sameera opened her month wide as she can than started yelling at Smarat for reading her mail afterward she went and sat in a concern.

Smarat: Sorry Sam

Sameera: It's okay but don't don that next time

Smarat: I won't

Sameera was about to leave when Smarat told her she had a mail from her sister Afreen without hearing the rest she wet running off to Smarat's room but unaware that Abhi was inside Smarat's room taking a shower….

-Waving goodbye to Kripa/on the plane-

Prithvi gave Kripa a last kiss on her forehead than waved goodbye to her soon as she cross the terminal a hot dashing young man comes out saying "Yoyo…lover boy, who was that hot sexy girl you just kissed?"

Prithvi: Shut up Robbie (Before Prithvi can finish his statement another dashing guy comes out with girls running toward him but he also asked Prithvi the same question "who was that sexy girl in black?"

Prithvi: Can you guys let me finish up my sentence

"Of course man" Said by Robbie

Prithvi: She's my girlfriend Kripa and we have been dating for past few months when I went to Edmonton for a conference. Understood!

Robbie: That's so sweet Prithvi

Again Prithvi was cut-off by the dashing guy "Prithvi by any chance if you break up with your girlfriend send her to me for a night?"

Prithvi smacked him on the head: Angad…she isn't any ordinarily girl; she is a different type of girl who believes in long term commitment. Understood Angad…

Angad: Whatever man

Angad walks out with a smirk on his face that soon or later he will have her in his arm before Prithvi even sleeps with her. Robbie was also walking behind Angad and remembered his marriage with his beloved girlfriend Kasturi who was married to Yuvaraj eight years ago. (Here is a sweet video of Robbie remembering Kasturi; just click on the link to view it). (Video Clip - http://media.putfile.com/Robbie-and-Kasturis-wedding-) "Robbie Sir, I hope you have a fantastic show" (The camera freeze on Kasturi's face).

Enjoy the part!

Will Kasturi reveal her turth intention in marrying Robbie Sir?

What will happen in the London Show?

Stay tune to find out.....




Edited by Chor-Ki-Kashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part dear but im lost towards the end......was kasturi married to robbie or yuvraj....????? anyways great part as always 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome part 👏 that was great!!!! continue soon<33 btw they took off ur kasturi and robbie video 😭 😭 😭 i really wanted to see it.

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