Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 75

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai friend first of all thanks u given us double damaka. Arey y r u feeling sad. Don't its quite interesting. I liked the updates. Niranjan is going to play a big game really. He scolding shlok. Shlok think his father is pure. But he also miss his drama queen.

The conversation between Varad and Anjali is interesting. Thank god shlok heard that. He became confused. Y varad is not telling the truth to shlok. Before astha gone he would tell the truth but he didn't. Anyway shlok wants his wife's presence. Thank god he called her. She is coming. Don't make any accident or missing case. But v liked if shlok will get jealous. Anyway ur updates are superb. In a story every time good times not come. If bad things comes only it becomes a good story. Awesome update. Sai don't feel bad v r with u. V trust you very much. V know u will be bring the story a happy one. Ok v r waiting for shlok and astha meeting. Next update will be the meeting. Anyway keep rocking continue soon...

Originally posted by: Catherine06

wow,very nice, U made shlok to listen that's nice, keep it like this,very interesting ur ff.

Why u have the doubt that your ff is not worth reading, there r ppl who interestingly reading it, every day I m waiting for 6pm for ur update, for such ppl like me pl update.

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Oh my god you have given two updates

Don't feel sorry I like this track

Pls continue

Don't end this soon

Waiting for tomorrow update

Originally posted by: unniachu

Sai, please don't say like that. It's worth reading.

Everyday like me, many people are waiting. Hope u will not disappoint us.giving 2 updates is good.But don't end it suddenly.

Continue dear. Our full support will be there.

slok heard everything.that sounds good.

Continue. We all r waiting. Thanks for double updates.

Originally posted by: tk1730

Sai,

how can you even think that this not interesting anymore. No one has said that. In fact it is getting to be suspense now and I am on the edge of my seat. PLease, please do not stop but keep going. Come on everyone, please let Sai know she is wrong to think that she is not doing good. She is doing great and I wished that the story followed this way in the serial as it would have been more realistic and would not have gotten low ratings and been cancelled. I think Sai should have written the script. Please do not finish soon and I like how you are making Shlok think here and really liked him hearing everything. Please don't be disheartened and know we are here and w=eager for your updates. If you stop then there will be nothing to look forward to. I hope you re-consider and make the story long. I want to see it progress to Astha getting pregnant and Shlok taking care of her during this.

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
loved it...
finally shlok knows d truth...
nice twist...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Part 50

He doesn't know wat does that mean but he was feeling it now he want her now. He wants to know wat the hell is going in this house. Unknowingly tears flowed from his eyes. He just kept on staring the ceiling. Y is it happening to him always y do they consider him as parai. Within no time she came to him. She opened the door and saw him. He saw her and stood up and went to her and hugged her tightly. Aastha cried in his arms. Shlok "Don't ever leave me Aastha I cant be without u I m sorry I m sorry mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain." Aastha never saw him like that he was helpless and defeated. Aastha slowly made him sit on the bed and wiped his tears and asked slowly "Kya hua Shlok kyun aisa baat kar raha hain please Shlok don't be like this mujhe dar lag raha hain tumhe aise dekhthi ho." And she looked aside and cried harder. Shlok "Aastha kya ho raha hain iss ghar main mere ghar main bohut kuch ho raha please Aastha don't ever leave me." Aastha "Shlok how did u forget that promise Shlok I will be with u for entire my life." Shlok slowly came her side and kissed her cheek and said sorry and licked her there and sucked it. Aastha didn't protest. Let him have his way. Aastha just caught his shoulders. Shlok "Aastha I m sorry u know i doesn't mean a word wen I m angry then y did u leave Aastha." And tears flew away. Aastha "Shlok please don't say that u r really sensitive Shlok I didn't know that I thought u will take it easy I thought u will digest this truth but I m sorry I should have said it slowly meri galti."

Shlok "Aastha ab batao main Baba se bohut pyaar karta hoon mujhe kuch nahi samaj raha hain tum aisa kyun kaha." Aastha "Shlok first listen me carefully don't take it deeply Shlok u may hurt but don't hurt that much bcoz I cant see u hurt please." And she caressed his face. Shlok nodded. Aastha slowly started how she came to know his truth and how his mother broke down b4 her. She also said Varad also knows everything about it. She said that if they say to u u will be broken that's y they didn't say u Shlok they thought to say u after I came to ur life they thought I will manage or console u. Aastha "But I too feared first after yesterday we made love I thought u trusted me the most I thought u believed me so I gained some courage and said to u that's it Shlok I never want to go against Baba believe me whatever I know I said u if u still wont believe then scold me or beat me but please don't ever try to send me away from u Shlok how could u think I live without u Shlok." Shlok hugged her tightly "nahi Aastha I will never leave u whatever be the situation I want u everytime Aastha please don't leave me ever again." And he cried. Aastha buried her head in his chest and cried harder. Shlok "Aastha chup ho jao." Aastha "Shlok main abi aathi hoon Aai se baat karni hain." Shlok was thinking wat to do now wat if she is true and y it is happening y should Baba do in this way. He also went behind her without her knowledge.

Aastha went and saying Aai Aai. Anjali was enlightened to hear her voice. Anjali suddenly got up from her bed and rushed to her.

Anjali saw her and hugged her. Anjali "Aastha tum itni raat kab aai tum." Aastha "Aai aap teek hain na kuch hua tho nahi aapko chaliye ham Baba se baat karenge." Anjali "Kya baat karenge hum." Aastha said her plan to her. Anjali "teek hain Aastha lekin Shlok." Aastha "Aai Shlok maan gayi sab bata diya usko lekin I don't know he trusted me or not come lets go to Baba." Anjali "Aastha lekin Shlok tumse gussa hain na ab achanak kya hua." Aastha said everything to her and said "Aai I said Shlok mere bina nahi rah paogi ab aap chaliye." Both Anjali and Aastha went to his room. Shlok too followed them quietly. Slowly both of them entered. Anjali in bigger voice "Aastha go and say sorry to him by touching his legs how dare u to speak like that to Shlok, this is our matter who said u to interfere in our house holds matter just be calm with Shlok otherwise u need to divorce Shlok." Aastha "I m sorry Aai I didn't know Shlok would react in such way I m really sorry." Anjali "mujhe nahi apni Baba se maafi mango." Aastha nodded with fake tears and went near him and kneeled down and said "I m sorry Baba I m really sorry from today I wont interfere in ur matter mujhe Shlok ke saath rahna hain I wont say anything to him I swear please let me be with Shlok Baba please don't harm her again its not her fault she warned me, its me who neglected her warnings I m sorry I do not want to disturb my relation with Shlok ab se aap jaise kahega vaisa hi karoonga." And she touched his feet. Niranjan "Anjali sabhaash apni bahu ko itni kam samay mein bohut kuch sikhaya, Aastha aur ek baar ye galat nahi karni chahiye if u do it again if u ever try to say anything to Shlok about my truth then listen u will not only be in Shlok's life u wont be in this world." Both Anjali and Aastha shocked. Shlok was out of the world. His world bcame shatterd. Is it him talking like that. Niranjan "lekin jo kuch hua hogaya ab se iss ghar mein bilkul Anjali jaisa kahega vaisa hi karna hain if not Anjali knows wat I will do." Anjali "nahi nahi sahab I will teach her this time please forgive her." Aastha "ji Baba I wont tell anything to Shlok I promise." Niranjan "iss ghar ki bahu ka aukat sirf rasoi tak hain aur ladkiyan vaisa hi hona hain agar kuch bhi jyada hogaya na then.. ab chaliye pahli baar tum galti ki hain lekin iss galti ko main maaf tho karungi lekin u have to say sorry to Shlok u have to say everything is false." Aastha "Teek hain Baba I will do whatever u say." Niranjan "ab jayiye apna kaam karo kabhi jyada karne ki koshish ki to.." Anjali "nahi nahi sahab I will look into that I will control her aap fikar mat kijiye." Niranjan nodded and went away kicking Aastha's hand away with his leg.

Aastha wiped her tears and sighed to Anjali. Anjali nodded her head in relief. Anjali "arei wa Aastha tum bhi kuch kam nahi hain bohut achche actress hain." Aastha "aap se hi tho sikha hain na." Anjali "lekin Aastha ab Shlok se kya kahogi." Shlok went away seeing Niranjan coming towards him. He went to his room quietly. He didn't understand wat he should do now. Now he understood his father was not a god he is a bloody devil under the mask. Tears flowing in his eyes. He entered into his room suddenly. Niranjan followed him. Niranjan came into his room and said "Shlok I m proud of u beta for bringing her back." Shlok nodded deadly. Niranjan "kya hua beta kuch pareshan lag rahe hain." Shlok controlled his anger "nahi main Aastha ke bare main soch rahe hain wo aise kaise kah sakte aapke bare main I m sorry baba I asked her to say sorry to u." Niranjan "Haan beta wo abi aai she was mistaken Shlok I can see her face pagal ladki hain wo I think some one said against me to her wo tho choti si bachi hain na sab aise hi sach samajthi hain she said sorry to me don't worry Shlok now she known her mistake galti sab se hota hain beta now u also realise her mistake and forgive her ok." Shlok "ji Baba." Niranjan "Shlok tumhe kuch kahna hain kya." Shlok controlled his anger and fist "nahi." Niranjan "Sabhash mere bache I m proud of u hamesha aise hi rahna." And he hugged him. Shlok didn't return his hug. Niranjan went away while Aastha was coming to his room. Niranjan saw her and said "Dyaan rakhna main kya kaha." Aastha "Ji Baba aap jaisa kahega vaisa hi hoga main Shlok ke saath nahi chodunga iskeliye chahe kuch bhi karna padega main tayar hoon." Niranjan "Sabhash meri bachche be like this everytime don't ever cross ur limits." Aastha nodded by looking down in yes. Niranjan went away feeling secured. He also praised Anjali for controlling her but warned that this should never happen again.

Aastha slowly enterd her room. She saw his back towards her. He was looking outside the window. Slowly tears started from his eyes. Aastha slowly came to him and placed hand on his shoulder. He suddenly turned and hugged her tightly. Shlok in his cries "Kyun Aastha kyun ho raha hain mere saath aisa kyun kiya Baba ne ye sab kya galat kiya main ne sirf pyaar kiya tha jin jin log se pyaar kiya wo log mujhe dokha diya kyun Aastha main itni bura insaan hain kya." Aastha started crying, she cant see him broken. She broke the hug and caught his face in her tiny hands and make him look at her. Aastha "Shlok pehle meri baat achche se suno tum bura insaan nahi ho samjhe aap. Aap bure insaan nahi hain sirf ye duniya aisa hain bas apni aankhe khol ke dekhna hain chahe kuch bhi hojaye main tumhare saath hoon main tumhe kabhi dokha nahi doonga main tumhe dukh nahi dekh sakti hoon Shlok aur dekho u got world's best mother she sacrificed her self respect for u people." Shlok continued in broken state "vahi tho main nahi dekh paya kyun Aastha kyun nahi bataya wo ab tak kya main parai hain kya un logo ko." Aastha put her hands on his mouth "aise kaise soch sakte hain Shlok aap aap iss ghar ki gem ho u r very sensitive Shlok really very sensitive than I imagined don't worry ab sab teek hoga ham hain ab Aai ke saath. Aap chup hojayiye Shlok ab kya karna chahti ho." Shlok rubbed his tears and said "nahi Aastha I wont leave him like this he will suffer for wat he did." Aastha "nahi Shlok u should not think like that wo tumhari Baba hain aur aap dekho ek na ek din wo sudar jayenge Shlok." Shlok "aur kitni saal Aastha 30 yrs Aai was bearing him for just our sake nahi main usko aise nahi karne doongi I will find Tai and we will leave this house I cant be here a second more please Aastha meri baath manlo." Aastha "Shlok I don't want like this first we will make him understand Shlok I think he will understand." Shlok "nahi Aastha main Aai ko aur ek second bhi uske saath nahi rehne doongi please Aastha the minute we find Tai I will make her understand how Baba is and we will go from here." Aastha saw him defeatedly and thought he is also right how many years can she bear it.

Part 51