O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

superb place to stop Avi

Grrr

first of all sorry for being late but mera mada net always makes me suffer, I couln't stop making myself saying it before

awesome part and loved it

and overall loved the last part

eagerly waiting for next

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Chapter 9

PM sent to those who commented for chapter 8

please finish commenting if you have not done so already and then request for access.

Edited by dqno1 - 9 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Thanks for all the likes and comments

I did lose some readers in the past update 😕 but I would rather keep writing for those of you who are appreciating the effort😃

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Aaye Haaye what a timinggg

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Awesome Update 👏
"I know you hate them but try to keep an open mind please"
About this note, I would say..
Who hate them (dev-tara) 😲
You made us love them seriously 😉 😃
Loved dev-tara scene .. she's mentally disturbed after that incident.. only a woman can handle her in that state of hers I think 🥱
Maan having dreams about her.. sirf yehi yaad aaya tharki ko haha😆 😳
Cont. Soon

Edited by _SharmeenLuvsGC - 9 years ago

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Part 8

Moi enjoyed Maan's state ..he has started fantasizing Geet and is having wild dreams...😆iska aagey hoga...this fiesty side of Geet is just bang on...she doesn't get intimidated by Dadi and puts her foot down...

can't wait for the next part...

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archana roy

@ArchanaRoy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#386

sorry being late !!
I'm so juggling between my long hectic office day and my exams in week !!
am inactive till 15th march !!!

I'll comment after my exam ...

Edited by ArchanaRoy - 9 years ago

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anum fahim

@aqvum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Nice update.. Maan is able to concvinced geet to let him come with her to manali and he would help her in tara's case.. She asks him what he want she would have to do in return.. He tells her that she would have to be his P.A to help him until he's fully healed.. Geet comes to know about the death of maan's parents and is deeply upset.. Dadima is angry hearing that maan is leaving but geet is not afraid of her attitude and with maan support they are ready to leave.. In flight when geet is asleep maan cant stop watching he sleeps seeing her... N dreams about their past which make him confuse about his feelings towards geet as she is a complete stranger to him.. Waiting to read more.. Update soon.. Thanks for pm..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

Part 7

loved the way despite of him saying that Geet is part of Dadima's scheme, despite she was ready to go away, Maan could not let her go alone..
the doubt was still there, but he felt hurt and jealous with her conversation with Dev...he wanted to be the first one to be concerned about her, to have her safe...

every time NT's part aches the heart and makes eyes teary...and she can't speak, can't express her pain..is not allowing Dev or anyone to be near her..the pain from the scratches is nothing in front of the what she went through..hope with everyone's support she is healed completely, both physically and mentally and gets justice..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#389

Part 8

what had happened to Maan when the dam burst..,what was the servant going to speak..Dadima came at the wrong time stopping him from saying the truth..why did Geet did not inquire further?

hahaha MERI fiancee..it seems he loves to say that..and Dadima is stunned, that cannot do anything to stop him going with Geet...but if Maan has heard the conversation of Dadima and Geet, he should know things are not smooth between these two, and Geet is saying the truth that she is not a stooge of Dadima..

loved the depiction of the mind state of Maan, confused as if his mind is creating all the doubts but his heart knows her..in his unconscious state he knows her..

fabulous updates..

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Remyacr

@Remyacr

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#390

Part 8
Wonderful update. Loved it.
What happened to maan during the accident which was the reason for his mom and dad's death. Is it related with hi memory loss. Geet's ability to irritate dadima is wonderful. Maan's control over himself is slipping because of geet's close proximity.
Interesting teaser.
Thanks for the pm. Waiting for next part.