Twinj FF || Jiya Re || Chapter 1 Pg 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys exams over and I'm so so so happy 😃
Here goes the ff I promised... Most of you won't remembers.
Its dedicated to each and every member who keeps the forum alive and writers who write their tremendous stories.
Love you all...
<font size="4">PROLOGUE</font>

<font size="3">"mumma ...mumma...wheres my tiffin, mumma school jaana hai" pihu's voice.echoed the whole taneja house. " aa rahi hoon jaan...wait a min" twinkle sarna sorry taneja replied. "ther u go" twinkle replied. Pihu kissed her mom and her maasi mahi bye. " see u mumma and maasi" Pihu said and left for school.</font>
<font size="3">"Di I have to Leave For office... will see u later. I'll tell Aaron to cancel ur schedule today since ur so unwell...and no ifs and buts di...just listen to me" mahi sternly said to twinkle.</font>
<font size="3">"ok meri maa...i won't go to the office today but I guess you have to go somewhere out of California today?" twinkle said.
" yes di, wo actually I had to go to vegas for an important. meeting... u know how the corporate world works right!! see u in the evening and no office...not even at home...u get that!" mahi said.</font>
<font size="3">"haa theek hai...u concentrate on ur project" twinkle said hugging mahi.</font>
<font size="3">It was afternoon and Pihu arrived. she was really sad and twinkle was worried seeing her like that. " Pihu baby what happened why are u so gloomy??? " twinkle asked Pihu. soon pihu started crying and said "mumma aaj phir uss bad boy ne mujhe dad ke naam pe tease kiya...kaha ki i don't have a dad..mammma where is dad?" Pihu's innocent question pierced daggers in twinkle's heart. A lump formed in her throat. " such a notorious kid..all of you are five years old and children can be so nasty at this age??? i don't believe it!!! u don't worry baby I'll teach him a lesson " twinkle said ignoring her daughter's question. " mamma where's dad?...i want a dad plzz ask him to meet me" Pihu asked with teary eyes. now twinkle was torn between her duty as a mother and to aid her broken heart, tears were brimming in both of their eyes. "beta i told u dad won't come. he doesn't. know about u and he doesn't. talk to me...there are so many children without their dad and hasn't your mammma given you t</font>
<font size="3">the love of both mom.and dad?" little Pihu couldn't fully understand what her mother.was trying. to say... but she knew that it upsetted her mother.
so she said " mummma u don't worry i will be ur good girl"</font>
<font size="3">twinkle couldn't handle the pain and as soon as Pihu left she ran to her bedroom... crouched in a corner pulling her legs to her chest and started weeping incoherently. Pihu listened this from outside and understood its her father again... she was rather a little to mature for a five year old. Insidw the bedroom twinkle started hiccupping due to her constant crying for hours. Suddenly she opened a drawer and pulled out a loving photo of two people looking at each other with immense love. " kunj why did you do this...why did you do this to me...i loved u so much with my everything and u ruined everything... didn't u love me...</font>
<font size="3">didn't you trust me..." she started crying again. " i hate you kunj sarna...i hate you so so much...arrey u could've just cared for ur daughter... but u don't need to I'm enough for her" she stared at the man with hateful eyes but kept the photo frame safely instead of breaking it away.</font>
<font size="3">"di di where are u..." mahi called upon her sister and twinkle hurriedly dried away her tears and emerged in front of her. " oh mahi ur back...how was ur meeting.. oh its stupid for me to ask...ur always good" twinkle faked a smile at her.</font>
<font size="3">mahi looked at her with worried eyes. twinkle couldn't handle it anymore and burst out crying. she hugged mahi " mahi usse aisa.nahi karna chahiye tha...mujhe chodo apni beti ke baare mein socha hota...main kabhi maaf nahi karungi usse...kabhi nahi".</font>
<font size="3">mahi cupped twinkle face and said "di uss aadmi ke bare mein mat socho...i swear main usse tumhare aur Pihu ke saath aisa karne ke liye kabhi nahi maaf karungi...chalo di kuch kha.lo...he.was past and past doesn't come back" mahi took twinkle to dinner but one thing mahi didn't know that the past was coming to face them and ask for answers and give answers of the unsaid questions.</font>



Done plzz tell me how's it...it's. My first ff. Will love to read what u guys think...
Waiting :)
Love,
Ananya ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
very interesting
mast hai yaar
loved the prologue👏👏👏

pihu and twinkle's bonding is so cute
what happened to kunj ??????😲😲

update soon
😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting 😃
Continue soon and p.m. me whenever done plz 😉
Liked the start 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yrrr tum sab kyu mujhe rulane lage ho.. 😭
Btw very nice...
Maza aa gya prolouge padh kar.. jaldi jaldi update haan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
interesting
congo on finishing exam. hope u top :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear
thanks for updating
it is interesting
who is twinkle's husband ?
so continue soon plz ..plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it ananya
This was a super start
Kunj and twinkle are separated it seems
Would love to know why
Twinkle's pain made me cry
And pihu is so cute
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Amazing start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: WRITJTA

very interesting

mast hai yaar
loved the prologue👏👏👏

pihu and twinkle's bonding is so cute
what happened to kunj ??????😲😲

update soon
😳


Thank you and about kunj...I guess that's what the story is all about you'll know soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

<font color="#ff0000">Sounds interesting😃</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Continue soon and p.m. me whenever done plz😉</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Liked the start😳</font>



Thank u and I definitely will :)

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