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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it, so sweet wish she could tell him her fears
Originally posted by: priyanvs
another awesome update dear
loved ithope twinkle accepts kunj soonand abt riya pls clear it sooncan't see them sad
Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing update Griffy
You explained their feelings beautifullyLooking forward to the next part
Amazing update. Loved it.
Hope everything gets settled soon.
Continue soon plz.
Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
awesome update dear
Great updatee...loving the moments between the two...
It was amazing di!!! 😳
loved it !!! 😃plz continue soon cnt wait!!! 😊btw tnx for PM 😛
Amazing update.
Wish Twinkle can share her fears with Kunj.Thank you for the pmWaiting for your next update.
amazing update yaar
thanks 4 pm
Note : As put by Sherni_jerry... this part starts dramatically and ends on an adorable note 😳😳 (Thanks Sherni)
Part 11
" I thought u were my friend Twinkle!!"
A tear dropped from his eyes..
He had never expected her to do what she had done...
Not only propose she had forgotten how important this friendship was to him
Why Twinkle why ?..
He even wondered today..
High school - a place where we just take things way too seriously... And then we say later it was a simpler life...
Even though he and Riya broke up a year after... and he did find the love of his life in Gunjan...he could never mend things with Twinkle...
He did want to talk to her...
But she having feelings for him...didn't allow him to...and today was her b'day..
Every year he would pick up the phone and decide to wish her and break the ice...
After all she was her best friend and no one was able to replace her
She had left a hole in his heart...
He made himself believe that Twinkle would have gotten over her feelings and wanted to be only friends again
But something kept stopping him
And every time he saw her number on his phone...his parting with Twinkle flashed in front of his eyes
The way she broke down ...
The way he left her like that
Yes a guy and girl could be friends if only u knew where to draw the line
Twinkle crossed it...but Dhruv would never
She was his one and only best friend
And in spite of everything after 5 years he still felt the same...
But today something urged him to click on the dial button...
Something told him it was time...and he finally pressed the dial button
...
Twinkle's phone rang...
Somewhere she wished it was Kunj...
Somewhere she was waiting for his call...
And it was her b'day!
Few yrs back there was only one guy who would call exactly at 12...
It was Dhruv but not anymore...
But an unknown number flashed on her cell
She picked up...maybe he was calling from another number...Twinkle thought hopefully
"hello...who is this?"
"hello...pehchaana?"
And it all stopped for a moment
It wasn't Kunj...
It was the voice which was embedded in her memory...
All those calls spent on trying to study together on phone...all those problem hearing and solving sessions...which would lead nowhere ..and every time she felt like crying...she would call to very same person..."DHRUV...?"
"chalo shukr hai pehchaani to"
"tumne ...----kai---"
Her voice started breaking
"happy b'day Twinkle...sorry itne saalon se i couldn't..."
"hw did u get my number??"
"jitna bhi badal lo..i have my sources"
They shared an easy laugh...
And then silence again...
It was hard...to believe that the guy she could talk limitless to ...she couldn't find even few words...
She had never confronted him after that day
She never talked to him after that..she didn't even try to .. some stories had met its end..
And neither he called or tried in anyway..
"thanxx" .. That's all she managed to say...
"I am sorry Twinkle...I know I over reacted..."
"noo---- Dhruv---"
"stop stammering... I m not a stranger.."
The old tone of Dhruv was back
And suddenly it felt as if those 5 years had disappeared ..
The awkwardness was gone
What she had with Dhruv was true friendship..
She knew it after few yrs that she had messed it up...
And all pain was washed away...in just few moments...
They continued talking
It was 1 am...now...
"I am sorry Dhruv for everything..."
"That was the thousand time u said that...and I am sorry tooo"
"u r the only best friend i had and i ruined it"
"i could have called before...but i let it get ruined"
"i am just glad we cleared everything...thanxxx for calling..."
"ufff...so much formality...milo mjhe tum...will beat u up..."
Somewhere Twinkle smiled...
She finally got the friend she had lost all these years and somewhere she knew that what she felt for Kunj was definitively love...
"hey u there"
" yh me here...Dhruv..."
"happy b'day once again ...gift kya chahiye"
" u already gave me the best i could get"
"u shud sleep...doctor!"
"u shud tooo"
"goodnyt... Dhruv..."
"gudnyt...Twinkle"
As Twinkle kept the phone...
Sill trying to recollect what had happened...
It was as if all her wounds had disappeared...
All her pain washed away...
And suddenly her phone beeped
1 msg received
She opened it
"hi...Kunj here.. Happy b'day...may god bless you gnyt"
It was already the best b'day ever...and it had just started
She slept peacefully...unlike the other nights
She knew if things had got mended with Dhruv...which she had never imagined would...
Everything else will also fall into place...
If she and Kunj were meant to be together they would be...
...
Kunj paced up and down...
Unlike Twinkle...he didn't have any reason to sleep...
He wanted to tell her his feelings.. wanted to be by her side...
But the way she had got scared forced him not to...
What was she afraid of?...
As the night passed Kunj couldn't get any sleep..
He was used to it by now...
After the tour Kunj and Twinkle had hardly talked...
He kept wondering but had no answers to any questions running in his mind.
...
Twinkle got up with a smile...
She knew it would be a great day...
Dhruv's call had just made things easier
She felt lighter at heart...
And the only person on her mind...was ...Kunj...
...
Twinkle Twinkle...
That's all he thought...
He looked at her reply for his msg..
"hi...thanxx a lot!!..god bless u too..gdnyt :)"
He smiled...he wanted to see her ...
He got ready for college...
...
"hi Chinki"
"hey Twinkle...i called u at nyt but the call was on waiting for so long and then i dozed off...by the way who called?"
"oh actually..."
"Kunj?????"
"no nooo! Dhruv called"
Chinki's expression went from shock to blank to shock again
She was at loss of words
Twinkle explained everything to Chinki
But Chinki was still at shock...
They headed to class
Kunj sat at the back bench...
He gave one of his killer smiles...
Twinkle so wanted to go and sit beside him ...but always something stopped...
But today she felt as if she was cut loose from something she had been tied to..
Chinki caught her hand and they both went and sat in front of Kunj...
Kunj's face lightened even more...
Twinkle fell deep into her thoughts...
Some times there are things we wait for but somewhere we always feel that it's never gonna happen and when they do finally...the feeling can't be put in words
It was as if a heavy weight had been lifted off her heart..
She never thought the pain she had been carrying all these would be washed away in one night and the world will be a different place again..
as if in a second she had woken up from a long painful dream... and her savior was just right behind her...
she turned and again looked at Kunj and as if he was listening to her heart ..he looked up from his desk and gave her a smile that said it all...
and Twinkle's heart skipped a beat and she knew she was heading towards her happy ending...
...
I really hope you all liked it.
Thanks again for the wonderful comments
Next part is going to be longer😃😳
Cheers
Griffy
Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
That was such a dramtic to such an adorable update. i really loved it. i really wabt to read more like now. hope you update soon 😳
thank u so much. i am looking forward to it. its awesome to read when two people are new in love. All the feels <3 gosh you are giving me goosebumps alreadyOriginally posted by: griffy.fz
you explained the part so adequately.. I feel like putting it as a note in the start😃aww I will update asap I promise!😳thank u😃