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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
hope she lets herself fall in love again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Duumps

Amazing update.

Twinkle having fun with Kunj was so sweet.
Aww she did go on the trip ,wonder what's going to happen there?

i am updating for u to find out

Thanks😳😳

Originally posted by: Pilu05

just wish show main bhi ittni long lasting fun and sweet moment spend by TwiNj like ur story


amazing update yaar ...loved it


Isiliye to fan fics likhte/padhte hain... to wsh things that dont happn in serial😉😉😛
Thankyou so much 😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing.update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

Thanks a lot ...
😛

Originally posted by: Phycho

it was fab di!!! 👏

loved it!!! 😃
update soon plz 😳
btw tnx for PM 😊


awww thanks soo much😳

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome update. loved it <3


Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear

😊


Thanks a lot 😛

Originally posted by: i rok

Great updates...update soon...

Thank u😳

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Part Griffy

Glad Twinkle went on the tour
Looking forward to read more twinj scenes
Loved the way you explain point of view
Cont soon


aww sista u r the best 😳😳

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

hope she lets herself fall in love again


Thank u ... read ahead to know that 😛

Thanks again everyone!
😃
Edited by griffy.fz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84


Part 9

His expression changed...

And my heart was again in my stomach and I got scared again...

...

Why didn't she take my hand...

Maybe because people were looking

Oh she looks scared again...with I scared her again!!!

I took her bags and put them in front of m y seat...

Chinki gave me a rude stare and Twinkle went and sat at the place i had chosen for her...

She started looking outside the window

I went and sat behind her...

" u weren't going to come!"

She just whispered

" Chinki's mom made me"

" God bless her"

I whispered...

And I knew she smiled though I couldn't see her...

...

The bus started...

And organizers started telling this was the last tour as students we would be interns then blah blah...

I wish I cud look at him...but he was behind me

He left the seat behind me and went and stood with the organizers

As if he had heard my heart's wish

Our eyes met and like always it was magical

Antakshari started...and soon there was too much noise in the bus..

People singing at the top of their lngs

Most of the People from the back went in the front to participate

Nupr was already dancing with Sunny

People were falling on each other...as the bus was moving...

It was funny

I sat there...and i saw him struggling to make his way towards the end of the bus towards me...

Bt so many People stopped him asking him to sing dance and blah blah

And soon he came...

Before i could say a thing he sat beside me...as if he had been waiting for it...

And my heartbeats started racing at even higher speed...

' so u don't want to play antakshari?"

" naah i don't feel like" 'he said...

And then we were silent again

...

I had come to her with so much confidence now I can hardly talk with her...

Nd then the bus stopped there was a huge jerk and Twinkle was going to hit the front seat

I got scared and immediately caught her shoulder preventing her! My heartbeats were racing l!!

Some people fell and got hurt

The organizer guys were screaming at driver...for stopping

Twinkle looked at me with shocked impression

I immediately withdrew myself

" r u ok??"

Before she cud answer Chinki came and giving her killer stare which meant " how did u dare to sit beside her?"

And someone from front started calling me

I immediately got up and ran to the front

My heart was still racing...

...

The people announced there was some great problem with the bus and blah blah so for the nyt we would camp near by

I was still numb by his touch...not understanding anything...

I closed my eyes tried to breathe and his face just flashed in front of me

and suddenly fear crept in heart

" I don't want to lose u!"

That's what my heart said

And I knew there was no turning back...

I had fallen in love again...again??? why did it all feel so new??

...

Everyone got down from the bus

I had to help guys set up tents and all

It was cold so we needed bonfire

The girls sat here and there bt Twinkle was still in bus i thought i shud check on her bt she was with Chinki

I slowly got on the bus and i heard

" Twinkle kya hua..why u so lost?"

She didn't reply

Then only Sunny came from behind

" hey kunj is Chinki on the bus??"

Chinki suddenly got up she gave me a really weird stare

" Chinki have u seen my bags?? I had some camping stuff!!"

" I gave it to nishan" she screamed back

" come na and show me where it is!"

" Twinkle get up lets go"

She didn't get up

" arey i have to help Twinkle with her stuff!" Chinki said

" kunj will help na u come fast!!"

Chinki highly irritated with situation but decided to come giving me a weird stare and finally got off the bus

I walked towards her

She was so silent

I looked at her eyes were still closed for some reason i felt she had gne numb...

I spoke " Twinkle..."

She opened her eyes

I saw fear in her eyes...as if she was afraid ...

" what happened??"

She didn't say anything

I started picking up her bags

She was still silent ...

Bt she got up

" wait give me something" she spoke suddenly as if she was back

She tried taking something from my hands and i lost balance and fell behind

She tried to stop and we fell on the seats behind

And we were as close as ever

I looked into her eyes

I wanted to say i love u at that very moment ...

And suddenly my phone rang...

She immediately stood up straight

I took out my cell it was Riya

" hello Riya whats up??"

Her expression changed as i looked at her...

And she ran from the bus...

" Riya i will talk later"

I ran behind her not undrestanding anything bt she was already with Chinki

Chinki looked at me...she looked confused too

...

Yes i knew i had fallen again...how could I?

I had almost gone in a trance thinking..

Believing I can have him

Riya ...Dhruv...all came to me

I remembered my promise i know i couldn't change my feelings bt i didn't need to follow them

Today or tomorrow Riya will tell him and then what??

...

I helped everyone with the tents and helped with bonfire trying to find answers as Twinkle sat in her tent with Chinki...

As i tried to distract myself...I was constantly lost in thoughts...

The guys started calling everyone out of tents as the bonfire was set

People were in joyous mood I saw all of them smiling and laughing and all i wanted to see her smile...

She came out too with Chinki...

She looked at me ...and gave me a smile...

...

I cried for the last half hour in front of Chinki

She hugged me like a sister and she knew i didn't need to say a thing to explain how i felt...

She understood...

And she said

" if it is love then it will work...no matter what Twinkle"

I looked at her shocked

She was the one who had been telling me to not ..she knew about Dhruv..she knew kunj would come to know everything thru Riya...and still she...i didn't understand

" Twinkle...i know what love is and if it's true then it will work...i know i had been stopping u...bt i have seen how he looks at u...how he cares for u...its different he's not Dhruv and if it's all meant to be then u have to give it a chance...only if u want to...i wont force u either way"

I looked at her...

She was right...it all felt right

Being with him felt right...being so close to him felt right...his touch felt right...then what was stopping me...

And suddenly Sunny came

He asked us to come out

As i came out i saw him standing there and our eyes met and automatically i smiled...

...

Oh her smile worked like a magic I forgot everything and just kept looking at her

She sometimes looked back

People started singing dancing and what not

Then only Sunny came with my guitar and sang a song and dedicated to Chinki

As Chinki blushed and looked extremely happy I saw Twinkle lost again...

...

We all sat around the bonfire

We were all great friends...Dhruv...Riya...gunjan...tony...and I

And Dhruv took the guitar and sang for Riya...

I knew how jealous and hurt I felt but I always dreamed that someday when he would love me back like i did ..he would do this for me...not knowing just a few days later i will lose him forever...

...

Still lost in thoughts i heard Kunj's voice he was going to sing a song

People asked to whom does he dedicate this to

And he spoke to someone very special and suddenly our eyes met and i knew...

And somewhere again my heart skipped a beat...

He started singing...

...

I looked at her and i remembered an old song which i loved...

Mera dil bhi kitna paagal hai...ye pyaar to tumse karta hai

Per samne jab tum aate ho...

Kuch bhi kehne se darta hai

Oo mere sajan sajan

I could see her blushing she was looking down..i tried not to focus at her as maybe it would embarrass her and i carried on with the song..to me i was just declaring my love for her...

I know it would take time for her to accept... bt i knew we were meant to be...

Mere sajan sajan sajan mere sajan

Ktna isko samjhata hun

Kitna isko behlata hun

Nadaan hai kuch na samjhta hai

Din raat yeh aahein bharta hai...

Mera dil bhi kitna paagal hai...ye pyaar to tumse karta hai

Per samne jab tum aate ho...

Kuch bhi kehne se darta hai

Oo mere sajan sajan...

And he stopped

I looked at him...and again my heart skipped a beat...

...

Please do read and comment

Thanks

Griffy







Edited by griffy.fz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Amazing update loved it.
Twinkle has finally realised tht she loves Kunj . Hope Kunj helps her to to get over her past.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
aww such a beautiful update <3 so adorable. loved it <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
So many emotions
thank you for the pms
update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
awesome update yaar


specially the song perfectly match


thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Beautiful update.
Well written.Happy Twinkle has realized her love for Kunj.
Waiting to see what happens next.
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Duumps - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
WOW today's update ws magical di 😳
loved it !!! 😃👏
btw tnx for PM 😊

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