FF || Khamoshiyan Gungunane Lagi || Part 1 - Page 11 || 1st March ||

fiction_writer thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Guys, me and Aditi (Aditi.KPFAN) we both decided to start a combine story on Ishra. Today evening, I just shared a concept with her and she agreed, then we both finalize the concept properly and she asked me start with a teaser.

So, here I am with the teaser. I hope you will definitely going to like this story.
Please add one of us to get pm.

Thank you.

HAPPY LEAP DAY


|| Khamoshiyan Gungunane Lagi ||

INDEX

|| Teaser - Below ||

|| Part - One ||
Edited by SRKP_FAN - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

73

Views

6.4k

Users

39

Likes

219

Frequent Posters

fiction_writer thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
|| Teaser ||


Ishita was sitting in her room, the bridal dress and jewelry was kept beside her, she caressed the dress, a hesitation, a tension was on her face, "Ishita!!.." She heard the mother's voice and in next moment she found the door open.

"Ishu.. You aren't ready yet? Groom has already arrived.. What are you doing kanna? Go and get ready.."

"No. I don't want to marry.." She suddenly declared thoughtfully.

"What? What do you mean?.."

"I can't marry hiding the big truth from him and their family. I will tell him the truth before our marriage."

"Ishu!! Don't be stubborn.. It's not a correct time to talk about this. Guests are waiting, go and get ready fast." Mr Iyer interrupted once he heard her decision.

"No appa.. Why you didn't tell them about my medical problem?"

"What is need of telling the truth now to Bhalla family and why didn't you tell the truth when you knew about it?" Mr Iyer asked.

"I didn't know anything that you have hide the news from Raman and his family."

"Ishu.. Please, you can tell them after your marriage. But kanna now please go and get change." Mr Iyer pleaded.

"Sorry amma but without telling him the truth, I am not going down."

"If you tell them the truth, your marriage will not happen." Mrs Iyer said.

"No matters." saying this, Ishita turned and dialed Raman's number through the landline.

Mr and Mrs Iyer looked on tensed...

__0__

Please share your feedback..


Edited by SRKP_FAN - 10 years ago
Rayaland thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Very nice teaser plsss update soon
sririt thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice Teaser, I hope Raman and Ishita talk. Iyers are hiding, that's wrong. Go for it Ishita, few things need to be disclosed to avoid later problem. I hope Bhallas are understanding enough especially Raman.
fiction_writer thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Very nice teaser plsss update soon

Yeah definitely. thanks...
kaa1202 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Wow! Nice concept re..
Sorry, forgot ur name 🤔
..Honeydukes.. thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
nice teaser dear
continue soon
thanx for pm
nafnaf thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Fantastic, brilliant - please continue soon !!!!
Ishita please keep your determination and tell him the truth - always best thing to do.
He will probably get angry that he was not told before!!!!!!

Now looking forward to update soon please!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!
fiction_writer thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: sririt

Nice Teaser, I hope Raman and Ishita talk. Iyers are hiding, that's wrong. Go for it Ishita, few things need to be disclosed to avoid later problem. I hope Bhallas are understanding enough especially Raman.

Thank u... Yes she should spill the beans before it gets worse..
fiction_writer thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Wow! Nice concept re..

Sorry, forgot ur name🤔

never mind.. My name is Ritika..

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Manan_Pani_fan · 5 months ago

Karan Patel to be a part of Laughter Chefs 3: report As per reports, Karan Patel is likely to be a part of Laughter Chefs season 3. The hit...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".