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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awsome os and this line -"Mein tumse har roz shaadi karna chahtha hoon swara" was the best thanks for the treat

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh oh!! This was pure bliss!!! Touching, funny, romantic.. A delightful blend!! The sindoor bharna, his declaration of love, was oh so passionate... And the punishment😉 so apt😆 Loved it!! Lots!!👏

Love,

Akshata😊

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soumi gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

delicately delightful OS
thnx for the freshness...
Love the whole thing
omg!!!!cvs kuch aisa bhi to dikha sakte the...

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

His declaration of his love - a reiteration of his vows was so profound - loved it.

Nyna

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey dear...

Awesome OS...

Cvs ne to dil he tod diya...atleast tumhara OS parh k dil ko sukoon mila...

Do write more

Talia

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nalini 🤗

I am so sorry for the late unres- struggling with various things at the moment and time seems to be in short supply! This was such a cute and lovely little mini shot. I loved the concept of SwaSan starting their literal new life so nicely and the imagery was very nicely brought about. The staring in the mirror- particularly associated with SwaSan- the mangalsutra etc and Sanskaar adoring Swara and Swara now so in love too, returning that with her utter love and regard. I also liked the mix of humour which packed in such sexiness too and created a full package. Short but very sweet and said it all so adequately! Nice work! 👏

Love,

Shruti x

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice 😊

thankyou sneha 😊

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Awsome os and this line -"Mein tumse har roz shaadi karna chahtha hoon swara" was the best thanks for the treat

thanks harshita

i would personally love them getting married everyday, an absolute treat to me.
happy that you like it😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nicely done, Nalini my dear 🤗 Romantic and moving at the same time.

The highlight for me, was how Sanskaar reiterates his vow of love, faith and togetherness to Swara. And how she feels so warm and comforted, that she is at home after all---home with her other half, her true love, her soulmate.

SwaSan's sindhoor and mangalsutra scenes always resonate with me very powerfully, and I loved the sindhoor scene here too; the way you juxtaposed Sanskaar's dialogue with his filling of Swara's maang.

Their kiss in the end was 😳

Love,

---Viji

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