My Prince Charming important note

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Many of the readers are waiting for madhu in this story to be cast against RK...and many have objection that I am showing RK with geet...they think RK is shown as less important character and I should not post this in MB forum...I don't want to take chance with maaneet fans too...So those who didn't object if willing to read will get pm and the story is posted in

My Rishbala & Maaneet combined fanfiction in Fan fiction forum...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Totally Phenomenal Concept
I'm so intrigued by the storyline
Sameera is Geet's stepmom and she wants Geet to marry soon so that she can get the entire kingdom for herself , she choses a man that is way far elder than Geet while she herself is having a good time with the young and dashing prince .
Geet has to abide by Sameera's rule as its her father's last wish and the innocent people also depend on Geet to make right decisions so she cannot even runaway
at her birthday party she meets Prince Maan and she is immediately atrracted by his persona he too spend some time with her and made her feel very special but than to her surprise she catches Prince Maan and Sameera been intimate and now she is pained she is hurt as she really believed he was a great guy and her Prince Charming but now she had seen his true colors
the night of her engagement her best friend Rishab comes to meet her and she tells him about her life with Sameera after her fathers death .
Geet goes out to the stables and again surprising Maan is also there but now he realizes that something is wrong as Geet is angry with him but she excuses herself and when Sameera taunts her its only Maan that stops Sameera
I'm confused if Maan was with Sameera than why would he have pain in his eyes when he asked Geet what wrong had he done

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Totally Phenomenal Concept
I'm so intrigued by the storyline
Sameera is Geet's stepmom and she wants Geet to marry soon so that she can get the entire kingdom for herself , she choses a man that is way far elder than Geet while she herself is having a good time with the young and dashing prince .
Geet has to abide by Sameera's rule as its her father's last wish and the innocent people also depend on Geet to make right decisions so she cannot even runaway
at her birthday party she meets Prince Maan and she is immediately atrracted by his persona he too spend some time with her and made her feel very special but than to her surprise she catches Prince Maan and Sameera been intimate and now she is pained she is hurt as she really believed he was a great guy and her Prince Charming but now she had seen his true colors
the night of her engagement her best friend Rishab comes to meet her and she tells him about her life with Sameera after her fathers death .
Geet goes out to the stables and again surprising Maan is also there but now he realizes that something is wrong as Geet is angry with him but she excuses herself and when Sameera taunts her its only Maan that stops Sameera
I'm confused if Maan was with Sameera than why would he have pain in his eyes when he asked Geet what wrong had he done


It's just the start...there is more to come...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Nice story...hope that guy with Sameera was some duplicate or twin bro of Maan and not Maan himself..poor geet is so heartbroken...please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful updates dear, hate sameera 😡 confused about maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting...good story waiting to see what happens next..why was maan being close to sameera...thoguht he liked geet...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m not liking maan why is he behind geet when he is involved with her mother
I want geet to marry rishab
Not to fall weak in front of maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very intresting story line. It's so different from previous one. Sameera is Geet step mom. Geet parents died n Sameera is cause of Geet dad murderered. Maan came as light n desper. If Maan has feeling for Geet why he is with Sameera. Maan is with Sameera to save Geet r Maan has twin.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome...

something is missing...maan cant do dat to geet...lets just wait n watch...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intresting start.. geet dreaming about her prince charming in maan.. but her dream broken seeing sameera and maan together.. waiting for next

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