Culture, Values and Love (*_*)......a Manan ff PROMO on Pg-08

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Hello beautiful people,

I have been a reader for long time but now my passion for manan and their stories have inspired me to write a one.This story is a traditional one...full of values and pure ideal love.Its my first attempt in writing so please bear with me.I have never shaked my hands with a guy so don't know how it feels. So all my love description would be based on novels and other manan works as I don't have any personal experience.


Prolouge...

beta jaldi utho 7bjne wala h.
dekho 9bje tk hume wha pahuch jana h...ldke wale bhi 11 bje tk wha pahuch jaenge.
Mummy rukona kl shaam hi to hum aae h thoda daer to aur sone do please.
dekho papa aa jaenge...jldi utho
That was enough... the girl ran to washroom nd was ready in 15 minutes.
She wore a beautiful pink anarkali with black threads work.While she thinking a the boy who was coming to see her.Her younger sister Payal entered.
Payal- Nandini di,kya tum satya savitri ban rhi ho...Papaji bole hna ki picture dekhlo to kyu drama kr rhi.
Dekhona Jiju kitne handsome h.OMG
Nandini- Payal, stop calling him jiju first of all.Abhi sirf unke parents ne mujhe pasand kiya h...ushne nhi.
Aur woh krega bhi nhi.
P- Tum itna sure kaise ho...don't say ki tum already usse jaghra kr chuki ho kissi typical daily soap types.
N- Na Na...essha kuch nhi h.Maine to usse dekha bhi nhi h.Its just ki jaisa tumne bola ki wo bahut handsome h and CEO h...to rich bhi hua...Why will he marry me?
Abhi- Haan sachhi yr...wo thehra CEO + rich + handsome and tu to bs apni company ki Presentation head ho + dikhti bhi thik thak hi ho + gadhi ho + ek no. ki pessimist ho.
N-huh...She starts crying.Abhi comes and hug her...
Abhi- kya yr...tu esse kyu behave kr rhi,uske parents ne tumhe pasnd kiya hna to kya problem h...ldki faltu ka nervous mt ho smjhi...agr tujhe wo pasand na aae to mujhe bolna I will manage everything... smjhi.Chlo gaari ready h.

how is it?should I continue?

Characters - scroll down.
Ch-1 The Final Judgment -scroll down.

Ch-2 Blunder - Page 2.
Ch-3 Interview - Page 5
Ch-3B - Pg-06
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Characters

Nandini - An innocent girl who ha always studied in a girls skul and has only few friends namely Anjali and his hubby Gautum who was also is college and only male friend.She lives in Delhi along with his cousin bro Abhimanyu...who is her best friends and they share a really strong and good bond.She works as a Presentation head in a MN company. She respects her father alot and can't think about disobeying him.She has beautiful facial features and white complexion but she believed that no one can fall for her as she is not beautiful. She was brown belt in karate and Barun Sobti is her crush.

Payal- Nandini's younger own sister.A girl who lives her life to the full and is pretty and a bit more frank than her elder sis.She is a student.

Abhimanyu- Nandini's elder cousin brother. Works in Delhi.Lives with Nandu and he is single.

Manik Malhotra- Most handsome hunk.Adorable billionaire. CEO of Mannat Industries. A person who believes in true love.He never had any gf because he felt that when his girl will enter his life.He will feel for her at first glance and will marry her.He was a one woman man.Sounds strange... bt yess this billionaire was.His life was his family nd frnds.His younger sis Mukti was his life.Her mother was his best friend. He shared everything with her.

Mukti- She was a fun loving girl.Designer by profession.She was married to Dr. Abhisek who was Manik's childhood friend.

Rest characters will be introduced as required.
Guys,Buddy me if u want pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one dear pls continue soon
Pls pm
Frm next updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajirock123

Nice one dear pls continue soon

Pls pm
Frm next updates


thanks i will try as I am also very excited... Buddy me for pm
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A small introduction of Manik's Friends... then I will continue with the first chapter.

Cabir- A man with gr8 sense of humour. He knows Manik in and out.Married to Dr.Navya.Works as a CEO in his dad's company Cabir Textile Industries.

Navya- A sweet Indian modern girl.Manik calls her Madhubala while others call her Gulabo bcoz of her tranditional nature and overconcern.

Abhisek and Dhruv - Manik's childhood buddy.Married to Mukti and Alia respectively.Dhruv proposed Alia when they were just 17.Same day they got married as that was a holy day when a hail appeared which appears once in a century. Manik was the best man in their wedding.

Alia- Dhruv's wife.A hottie but with least common sense.Manik and Alia have a healthy flirty relationship as they both find each other hot and loves teasing Dhruv.


The Final Judgment

The room was arranged and the round table was laid.Manik was sitting there...head down surrounded by 8 familiar faces but he doesn't dared to raise his head up.
Mr.Raj Manhotra was the one to break the silence.
"Tum shaadi ko lekar serious ho.Tumhe shaadi krni h?"

Manik-Haan...obviously

Abhi- don't say u r not straight...!!

Manik- Pagl h kya...Obviously I m straight.

Mukti- Then bhai...I don't mom dad ko caste or religion se problem h.They will even agree for a foreigner.You just fix the meeting.

Manik- Koi ldki hogi tabna milwaunga...huh

Nyonika Manhotra- So beta whats the problem in meeting the girl of our choice. Your papa had first seen her in a business meeting and I also have met her.She is perfect for you.

Manik- Mom...

Cabir- Dekh Manik we know u r a very responsible citizen of our country and u don't want to increase the population. I promise no one will force u to have children bt for that why are you missing the pleasure... man

Navya- CABIR...eeere

Cabir- What Cabir??? I was just saying ki why are snatching our pleasure of dancing in ur barat and uncle auntie pleasure of having a bahu.

Manik- Look guys...how can i marry a girl whom i don't know? what if i will fall for someone else tomorrow ?

Dhruv- What if she is only ur dream girl and u will fall for her? Atleast meet her once for us.I swear no one will force u to take any decision in hurry as a decision taken in hurry is heavily paid.

Cabir-Haan we can see ur condition.

Dhruv- Yup

Alia- What did u just?? You are paying for ur decision. Wait...
She started running behind him.

Cabir- You all have your family time we are leaving.

Manik - Mukti now u also get lost.

Mukti- Sorry didn't get u...why??

Manik - We will have our family time...She starts beating Manik.
Nyonika- Bachho...we are serious.Mani beta what u hav decided.

Manik- ok mom...I will meet her but u all won't force me to say yes. Only and only if I will like her I will say yes.

Nyo- As u say my bachha.
So meeting fixed.We will leave for their place.Mukti will accompany us.Fine everything final now we all must leave.Here is her picture in this envelope.

Manik POV

whatever...I won't see it because if I won't like her I won't feel like meeting her and I don't want to judge her by a picture so lets finally meet her...Maybe she is my girl.

It was a bda wala update...so please give ur feedback. Silent readers please comment.Both praises and criticism are welcomed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept
looking forward to it
continue soon
will be waiting
---SIMRA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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If u post soon na tab bataungi aisa laga SOO plzz post soon waiting for eagerly
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Originally posted by: momy290691

If u post soon na tab bataungi aisa laga SOO plzz post soon waiting for eagerly


Exam time h...so thoda difficult h bt I will try to update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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like the concept and cs
I think nandu is under-confident or maybe more conscious
but it's not good to judge this early
so plz update the chappy soon
And ya pm me too plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandininiti

like the concept and cs
I think nandu is under-confident or maybe more conscious
but it's not good to judge this early
so plz update the chappy soon
And ya pm me too plz


hmm...the story has lot to unfold.Glad that u liked it.Will update as soon as possible. For pm buddy me

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