My manan dreamland - my index - Page 2

Hey
Happy new year...
And congratulations for ur index...
Dis is beautiful and we do love ur work...
Really an awsm writer u r...
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Keep smiling
Stay blessed...

hey hello

Jst day before yesterday, i came across ur story, and trust me i finished reading all the threads all the 43 updates in 2 days.. u can imagine how maniacly i read it..but i wanna tell u, bahot rulaya, tumne muzhe bahot rulaya😭😭😭😭😭😭😭..means ssly my napkin was all wet bcoz of my tears..i cried a lot reading ur story, my eyes were swollen, not bcoz i m soft heartd emotional person but bcoz i could relate to your story n character u developed..

the story is mindblowing..

the plot means the way u have intriguied the story in past n present going hand in hand..marvelous..it shows ur grip on story.. superb..

the most lovely part of ur story is that the reader knows that in present manan is in hate relationship still reader could relate to their happy past along with fear that what where when went wrong and makes them think that how come the most beautiful journey of their relationship ended on hate note? u have maintained d superb suspense during whole story...its commendable..👏👏👏

what i conclude abt the story, manik was always in love with nandini even before the marriage, the way he wanted to keep her always in front of his eyes in office, his possesivity, jealousy for nandini whenever he saw her with dhruv..he always loved her. thank god alya left or else manik ko kabhi samaz meni hi nahi aata. and nandini never loved dhruv bcoz all the time manik was on her mind.. they got to married, manik tried to hate her but how come he hate her? her innocence as well as fighting nature, her not giving bhaav to him type treatment was jst enough for manik to fall for her even more n more. After marriage, he was hatredful then slowly become possessive, jealous, caring, friendly with her n then she becomes need of his to live this life..with nandini, as she accepted him as her husband at the time of their unwanted marriage only, she was never hatredful towards him thats why she didn't mind when frst time they slept each other in one bed cuddeling each other..she was jst reciprocating his feelings and making him more and more addictive for her..they became friendly then lovers. but misunderstandings uff manik n his anger made them suffered.. but 1 thing was amazing, that they couldnt stopped loving each other even when they were back to their hatred..love love love was everywhere..finally manik realized his mistakes but plz don't give him lifelong punishment..i know the ending will b happy but still...

Few things that i loved in story...

nandinis hilarious self talk and manan ka sarcasm

nandinis pj n the way they made manik laugh

manik ka dogphobia n smurfy ki date

their frst craziest day out n the way nandu made him pushup n he was dying to be proved as her husband by her😆😆😆

manan make out...i love love love it..it was most sensual n really hot hot hot..(no matter what samaj seva grl comments abt it, i loved it n it was everything but vulgare..looking forward for more such beautiful make out update...no i m not gutter mind but i loved the way u penned it👏👏👏👏...)

the way manik loves to do everything publicly their kiss n finally apology...

list is long i wll stop here..

i loved ur story whole heartedly..plz don't end it soon..make manik heal nandini...plz let him take effort for her the way she took jst after their marriage..plz don't end..

and i would like to suggest u that plz if possible, keep the emotional pov of both manan n writer short. bcoz in last few updates, there was less action drama n lot more emotional stuff that was actually skipped by me..keep it short. jst a suggestion take it if u like otherwise leave it..i m gonna read n love ur story till d end..

And let me tell u i m an ardent n loyal reader of ur another amazing story, one night stand with stranger..i love it but u havnt udated it since so long..plz update it too n plz plz plz pm me the next updates of Devils bride too..

love u