ISHRA OS : LOVE IN LONELINESS || part 1 pg 2 march 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

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INTRO : PG 1

part 1

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suhaaana

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I am sorry , diya but please try to understand me , I .. I don't remember anything.. Nothing about myself.. Who I am , why I am here.. From where I had come from , please I can be your friend but I can't commit myself to something that my heart and mind doesn't agree with..

He said with a finality.. Her face turned pale with the words that came out of his mouth.. She couldn't say anything as he walked away leaving her alone , shattered and helpless..

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Why don't you take care of yourself cookie.. He is not coming back to you.. He is gone forever cookie.. Please listen to me , he won't come back cookie.. You need rest cookie , you need time for us.. For this.. He held her hand and made her feel her unborn but she was still like she was..
No emotions , no tears..
Her heart was not able to believe that he is gone.. He has left her alone.. He left his love forever..

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This is a very short OS/SS
M nt sure..

And I will continue it if this will get good response..

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suhaaana

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character sketch

Raman kumar bhalla : 28 year old , business tycoon.. he is the business shark to the world but now he is only having some faded memories..

ishita Raman kumar bhalla : 21 year old , wife of Raman and expecting their first child , but now her life is full of loneliness

diya rathode : a fashion designer and a friend and Savior of Raman .

abimanyu rajput : best friend of ishita , he loved his cookie once but now he is only a friend to his cookie after she got married to Raman

rest will be introduced in story

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rufana

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Posted: 10 years ago

interesting intro Suhaana

raman has lost his memory!

continue it...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting

Continue soon

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suhaaana

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Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

very interesting story dear continu and pm me.

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suhaishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123
very interesting story dear continu and pm me.

thank you deepika

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suhaishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

part 1

diya see where are you driving... aditya said while she was driving and was drunk.. she had been partying with her friends for the successful event that finally she managed and now they , she and her friend aditya were heeding towards her home..aditya wanted diya safe but she never understood what he wanted... diya would have been in a mess if at the correct time aditya wouldn't have cautioned her.. the car halted and he came out and rushed to see a man almost dead..he was bleeding from his head , diya came and she looked at the condition.. she panicked and cried saying...

i didn't do this adi.. no that's not me.. she held his hand and tried to take him with her but aditya snapped her hand.. she was already drunk beyond limits and tried to instill some brain in aditya..

adi lets go..why are you here ..just come..we will be trapped for god sake come with me..

how can you say this diya.. the man would die if he wouldn't be given any aid..just shut and leave if you want and don't try to preach me..

diya was getting frustrated seeing her best friend going against her for a complete stranger , she didn't see that the person in front of her will die if their didn't took him sooner.. all she was worried was about her reputation and media..she knew that if this news would come out and in any way she would be linked to this man , then that would be very bad for her career...

that's not my problem , i am not responsible adi.. just leave from here..

you are undoubtedly selfish diya..just go from here..saying so aditya tried to help the man but he was not able to..he needed help..on seeing that her friend wont leave him she helped him.. though she was already tipsy but she still tried and somehow both of them .. diya was against him as this could indulged them in the legal matters they didnt knew the person but seeing his outlook and personality , one thing they knew that he belonged to a good family..

aditya was driving while diya was sitting at the back with him..

check his mobile or anything that could give us any information about him diya..diya knew that now since she was doing all this she will have to..she softly held the person in her arms and tried to search in his pockets but nothing could be found..

there is nothing adi..how can he doesn't have even his wallet...what would have happened ?

leave that diya he needs medical attention first..

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it was after six hours , aditya looked at diya she was sleeping with her head supported by the wall.. the surgery was going on and aditya was still there.. the doctor came after the long hours of surgery..

how is he doctor... ? asked an anxious aditya..

Mr shekhawat we have operated on him , but cant say anything right now , there was excessive bleeding and most of the part of his brain is affected.. these twenty hours will say if he would survive or not..

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meanwhile in other part of Delhi...

ishita was pacing in the hall , she had been waiting all night for her husband but he was not reachable..she was getting scared. her heart was pacing very fast and she didn't knew how to calm down.. raman never did this..this was the first time in the two years of their marriage that raman was late and on the top he was not reachable..

mrs bhalla came and saw that her daughter in law was looking restless and as soon as ishita saw toshiji ..she hugged her tight and cried letting out her worries..

mummyji..raman isn't at home.. he is not picking up his call..even office staff doesnt know about his whereabouts.. she cried , the tears that she was holding were finally flowing ..toshiji lead a crying ishita to the couch and made her sit..

ishita.. let me wake up bhalla ji.. don't cry puttar , raman must be busy somewhere and let him come we will take his class.. how dare he make my bahu cry.. she said wiping ishita's tears and went to wake up her husband...

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that's for part 1

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