HUMNAWA ss ISHRA / under construction

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Posted: 10 years ago
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We have a limited lifespan aur socha jaaye toh isse bhi hum bas yunhi kharch kardete hain doosron ka sochte sochte. I'm trying to explore something hatke with this one. Hope I'm appreciated; thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue

"Ishu tum jaanti ho naa how dear you are to me?"

"Raman?"

"Ishita tum chali jao yahan se. Ab aur bardaash nahi hota mujhse, please!"

"Mera pyaar itna kamzor nahi hai Raman!!"

Ishita had entered Raman's life like a fresh breath of air. He was lifeless. Empty at heart. She made him a happier person but life's burdens took a toll on their love & relationship.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing prologue dear

love it dear

i have an request dear please add English subtitles if possible

i am somewhat lack in understanding hindi dear

congrats for wonderful story dear

when you update please pm me

eagerly waiting dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plx na yr
Write whole na
Waiting..
N pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its amezng dear and very nice starting continue soon and plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123

its amezng dear and very nice starting continue soon and plz pm me when u update.



Thank you ...

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