HUMSAAYA # 5 Updated Pt-72 / Pg 129 - Page 37

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Bhabhiji TQ for the Edit...🤗


Hi friends... I am know i am late... and i am not giving any excuses... kya karun.. lazy hoon🤢... jab tak mera Ipad theek nahi hota... mujhe bardaash karlo... plzzz..😳


Part 64


Geet nodded and left...She knew what Dadi said is right... Meera is getting best treatment here... and in Amritsar.. she don't know whether her father will go aginst her Dadi and support meera... Geet thought... Geet.. Dadi sahi kehrahi hain.. papaji ne abhi tak kuch nahi kiya... meera di ka treatment toh yehi hona hain.. aur mujhe maan ki baat maanni hogi ab toh...

She entered her Room and saw a packet on her bed... She went and saw it... there is a card... and Sorry Sweetheart... Ab maaf bhi kardo...

Geet sat on the bed and opened the gift... There were flowers in the packet...

Geet wondered... Maan ne mujhe artificial flowers kyun diye... She was about to put them aside.. she saw a slip in them... She took it .. put the flowers aside and opened the paper...


She read the content... Main jaanta hoon Geet... mujhse Galati hogayi hain... aur meri yeh pehli koshish hain tumhe manane ka... isliye maine phool bheje hain... tum soch rahi hogi ki maine asli phool kyun nahi bheje... mujhe maloom hai tume Roses ke kitna pyar hai phir bhi maine yeh artificial flowers kyun diye... kyun ki yeh kabhi murjhate nahi hai Geet... maana ki inme woh khushbu aur woh ehsaas nahi hote.. lekin... yeh yeh kabhi nahi murjhayenge... mere pyar ki tarah... tum mano ya mano Geet... main tumse Pyar karta hoon aur hamesha karta rahunga...

meri ek Galati ki itni badi saza mat do Geet... ab tumhare Maan ko maaf bhi kardo ... mujhe pata hai tum abhi mujhe maaf karne ke mood mein nahi ho... lekin yeh bhi maan singh Khurana ka wada hai... saath din Geet... saath din... mein tum meri bahon mein hogi...

Aur main iski shuruwaat ek Rose dekar karr raha hoon... Bed table pe ek box hai.. usse kholo...

Geet went and found a box on the table.. she took it and opened ... She saw a beautiful white Rose.. in that... and along with that a letter was there...


Geet opened it ... Geet... this is the symbol of my love for you... and You know what white stands for... and I am sure the fragrance of my love will leave you enchanted like this rose...

Geet read the letter and sighed... she is hurt and she not going to give in now... she kept the letter aside and took the flowers... she placed them in a vase... replacing the withered flowers... and She kept the Single rose in the vase near her bed... and she could fewel the difference... she is being enchanted by its fragrance...

Geet thought... Seven Days... Even I am eager to know how will you win me back in seven days Mr. Khurana... yeh geet itni aasaani se maanne wali nahi hai...

Maan went off to the office without meeting geet.. he knew she needed time and he is ready to give her that...

Later in the evening.. at the dinner table... Maan asked Geet.. Veer .. RB and Anu to meet him in the study... Even though meera was curious... she didn't ask...she has to do something about what dadi said...

While leaving the table... Maan said - Dadi... maine Meera ka appointment leliya hain.. kal 2 baje ki hai...

Dadi - Theek hain beta.. iss baar hum jayenge meera ke saath...

Maan nodded and left...

Study ...

Geet was not ready to face Maan once again... but she didn't want disrespect him by not going...

Maan directly came to the point...

Maan - Ab ranbir yaha aagaya hai toh.. main soch raha hoon jald se jald usse Mumbai bhejun...

RB - ji bhai... I am ready...

Veer - bhai aap kya karne walew hain...

Maan - Kuch nahi.. hum Meera ke bare mein pata karna hain...

Veer - bhai woh toh detectives bhi karsakte haina...

Maan - nahi... Risk hai... agar SM ko pata chalgaya toh problem hojayegi...

Veer - toh...

Maan - maine pata kiya hai... SM ki ek beti hai... jo college mein padti hai... aur woh Geet ki cousin Rashi ke collage mein padhti hai

Geet - Raashi... No... plz... usse involve mat karo... agar kuch hogaya toh hum Chachaji ko kya jawab denge...

Maan - Kich nahi hoga geet... woh seceondary Plan hai... agar pehla plan kamyab nahi hua toh... hume raashi ko involve karna hi hoga...

Anu - Lekin bhai... Meera ka uss SM ke kya connection hai...

Maan - wahi toh pata karna hai Anu... jab main usse Mumbai mein mila toh woh papaji ko dhmaki di... aur tabhi mujhe shaq hua ki Kahi na kahi Sm involved hai ... meera ka accident.. ya murder attempt mein... ab RB jayega aur poori baat pata karega...

RB - ji bhai.. par hum usse approach kaise karenge...

Maan - uske lye hume uski co mein jaana hoga... tabhi uski personal aur professional life ke bare mein pata chalega...

RB - ok.. par kaise...

Maan - next month ek semin ar jaisa kuch hai... naye softwares ka kuch hai... woh sab tum dekhlo... bas tum usme participate karo... aur kaise bhi SM ke nazar tum pe panda chahiye...

RB was startled... Bhai... yeh kya mazak hai... ek mahine mein software... impossible hai...

Maan - mujhe pata hai... isliye maine soch liya hai... maine hamare co ke liye ek software delevelop karaya hai... tum usse waha present karo... kuch changes karke...

RB - lekin its not ethical...

Maan - abhi keliye woh sab side pe rakho... aur nahi toh tum kuhd apna software develeop karo waha present karne ke liye...

RB - nahi... Main khud karunga... maine aur mere dost ne collage days mein kuch develop kiya tha.. ussi ko ready karunga...

Maan - jo bhi karo... but SM ki nazar tumpe padh na chahiye

RB - ok... aur uske baad...

Maan - Kuch nahi... mujhe information dete raho...

RB - kab jana hai...

Maan - Do teen din mein...

Veer - Lekin tini jaldi kyun...

Maan - kyun ki isse meera ke office pe bhi jana hai... uske friends aur collegues se baat karne ke liye.,... Aur yeh akele nahi jayega...

Rb - par mere saath kaun aayega...

Maan - Raashi... Geet baat karegi... tum do waha jaaoge aur thode thode info nikaloge...

RB - Uske saath... bilkul nahi...

Geet and Anu giggled seeing RB's expression...

Geet - uska bhi yehi reaction hoga...

Anu - Geet.. yaad hai Rashi ne kya naam rakha RB ko...

Geet and Anu said at the same time KADWA KARELA... and stated laughing...

RB groaned aur woh kya hai... Chip chipi Bhindi... dekha nahi kaise bhai aur bhahi se chipak rahi thi...

And everyone started laughing...

Anu - Veer bhai.. you should have see them... kaise ladte the dono...

Veer - you should have recored it Anu...

Anu still laughing... next time for sure bhai...

Maan saw geet laughing after the stress full days... He promised himself... I will make sure this happiness never leaves your face Geet...

RB tried to divert the topic... toh bhai mujhe kya karna hoga...

Maan - tum aur Rashi milke meera ke work place pe jao... kuch info nikalao.. kaho ki tum uske family friends ho aur apni GF ke liye usse dress banana hai... kuch bhi... but mujhe info chahiye... uske frinds ke bare mein... uska work ke bare mein.. uske foes ke bare mein... sab kuch...

Rm - hmmm... but hai agar family frindd kaha aur woh log mujhe hi ulta uske bare mein poocha toh

Maan - umm.. haa.. yeh hosakta hai... kuch bhi kaho... kuch bhi karo but mujhe information chhiye...

Geet - Maan aapne Di ki call list managayi thi... woh aagayi...

Maan - haa... usme kuch khas nahi hai... bas ek no hai jo shaadi ke kuch time pehle ki hai.. international...

Geet - international... par kaun hosakta hai... aapne pata lagaya kiska no hai...

Maan - haa.. lekin hamara kisi kaam ka nahi hai... woh airport ke public phone se kiya gaya no hai...

Geet - Kaha ki hai...

Maan - London... hethrew airport ki hai...

Geet - oh... ab kya karna hai...

Maan - ab bas RB kuch information nikale toh kuch samajh mein aayega...

Geet - kya aapko lagta hai ki yeh SM ka hi kaam hai...


Maan - mujhe nahi pata geet... mera bas shaq hai...uski baton se aisa laga...

Anu - bhai agar hum Meera ko Mumbai leke jaaye toh... shayad usse kuch yaad aaye...

Maan - nahi Anu... Meera pe already ek baar attack hochuka hai... hum risk nahi lesakte...

Veer - main waha ke manager ko call karta hoon ki waha ke hamara guest house ready karde...rb ke liye

Maan - nooo... RB waha nahi rahega... main nahi chahta ki woh SM kisis bhi tarah RB ko trace kare... RB thode din hotel mein rahega.. aur phir koi studio apartment lelega... RB waha jaake kisi ko bhio bhul ke bhi yeh mat batana kit um Ranbir Khurana ho... waha ke logo ko yehi batana kit um ek Computer engineer ho aur apni co start karne aaye ho... bas isse aage kuch nahi... family ke bare mein bhi nahi... kaho koi nahi hai... you are only son and ur parents are no more and left only with one Dadi... who is in ur native village... bas...

RB - theek hai bhai main sambhal loonga... lekin bhai certicates maangenge toh...

Maan - woh sab ready hai... maine duplicate banwaya hai...tumhare hi certificates hai bas naam badal diya aur college bhi... bas yeh dekho ki koi waha jaake enquiry na kare... Vikranth Suri naam hai tumhara Mumbai mein... adat daal lo...

RB - aapne naam bhi select kardiya... kya bhai ... apna naam toh main khud choose nahi karpaaya.. kam se kam yeh naam toh mujhe slect karne dete...

Geet and Anu laughes at his cribbing...

Veer - RB... tu bohut bada aur risky kaam karne jaaraha hai.. sambhalke rehna...

Veer - tu ghar milne ke baad phone kaar... main brij ko bhejunga... woh waha se aayega directly toh koi shaq bhi nahi karega... kehna ki teri Dadi ne bheja hai...

RB - what.. Brij paaji.. nooo...

Veer -yes... i will not take for a no... woh tera har kaam karega... ghar ke kaam... tujhe sambhalega.. aur body guard bhi banega tera... tujhe dekhne wala koi toh hona chahiye na...

Maan - veer sahi kehraha hai... Brij waha aayega... bas...

RB - theek hai... ab dono ne decide kiya toh main kya kar sakta hoon... lekin y brij paaji...

Geet - yeh Brij kaun hai...

Anu - Brij chaudary hamare village ke hain... hoshiyar pur ke... waha ke farms sab dekhte hain... aur unka khud ka akhada bhi hai... very tough man... bohut loyal hai... they are seeing our farms for generations... dadaji ke dad ke time se... bohut ache hain... ( I know Brij aur Ache🤢... antonyms hai🤣... but aur koi naam sujha hi nahi.. 😆he he)




Will try to update the nest part soon...(dont take this as a promise😆)



Over to You...




So what will Maan do... Will geet Give in 7 days😳





Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-






Updating.. Here ...😳




Thank You I'm Waiting 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Indu😆
Nice Update
chalo Geet ke dimag me dadi ki baat ghus gayi aur usne jaane ki zid chhod di...Hummaya😛

Maan's effort to manofying Geet have started

Haila

7 din?

kahin aisa to nahin ki Maan valentine week mana raha hai Geet ko manaane ke saath ssath😆😆
par mujhe bas ek baat ka darr hai ki kahin tu iss ek week ko sachhi wale next valentines tak na leke jaaye kyunki jis speed se tu updates deti hai uss se to aisa hi lagta hai😆😆😆

Maan is planning to trap SM ..he is having a doubt that he has some connections to Meera... let see if he is able to reach him or not..He is planting RB after him.. and asked RB to take help of Rashi..

Hey bhagwaan🤢

kya keenge ye dono..Kadwa kaela and chichuipi bhindi🤣

Brij yahaan kuchh naye andaaz me aane wala hai kya??

achcha ek baat maan..
dekh ab Geet se bol ki jyda bhav na khaaye aur chupchaap Maan ko maaf kar de


Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Maan will manofy geet in seven days
Love to see how maan will manofy geet

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Nice update dear Mann told that he monify her in seven days but geet have to give him hard time in his anger he talk what ever came in its not good
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update I m sure 7 din pehla hi geet apne hathiyar dal degi waiting for the next
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Superb update
Maan promise himself that in 7 days geet will be with him
Also set the plan to trap sm to know about me era's past
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update

Now who is this SM but he is probably connected somehow to Meera
lets see how RB gets all his information .
Maan seeing Geet laughing and promises himself to make sure that happiness graces her face
Maan has started with his mission he wants his wife to forgive him but he also promises her within seven days she will be in his arms and I'm sure he will get it right too .
It true a marriage is not a bed filled with roses rather every struggle and fight should bring the couple closer forgiveness should be part of that for a healthy marriage but I also do think before forgiveness is granted the person should really work hard to earn it so he never makes the same mistake again

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update...so glad maan has started his mission manofy geet...and a great first step and a promise to have geet in his arms by 7 days...lets see msk it is not so easy ; geet will give you a tough fight and you have to go all out...
loved how much they are planning together to help meera...hope she realizes it once she gets her memories back..

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