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Errantnomad thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
"She took EVERYTHING as a rejection, he realized, two weeks after Nivi was born

THAT lesson stayed"


Though This was in reference to the mother in II feeling hurt that one of the boys was ok with not being fed her milk and the other one still continued the feed the above lines immediately came into my mind from the Foochar update " naughty and firstly" which came right after a present one ' first of many things ' and when I read that I immediately made a mental note wondering if this was in reference to the first fight they had after Nivi's birth..

Well ! II threw everything under the sunin the ring to goad him into a fight. And the match turned ugly.
She kept throwing punches, Manny , right arm jab... Tan ... Left arm Jab, one jab in the stomach with Bala and eventually she attacked him in the chest with her allegaince and trust in Dad, his Most vulnerable spot and successfully she managed to push him to get his guard down. So his defence and guard down , he pushed her to a corner with a Mr. iyer Appa punch and delivered the final decisive single punch under her chin with a " the way I address my parent or the fact that I don't address him is NOYB". Clean knockout punch or a whiplash that left her stinging.

She couldn't stop her tongue from rolling and now for sometime this Noyb rejection will have her tongue rolled in reverse inwardly folded.

Will be interesting to see how they go about it now but That she took everything as a rejection , is this the rejection? . Was this the lesson learnt and that stayed with him?

And Nisha, what to say about the fight... Pinnite, kalakitte, konnute nee( belted, smacked and killed it). The lead up and the punches were damn good. Relished every word of the update .

How can I not mention that I am in absolute awe of the title.

Though it was centered around Bala the arrow that hit him hard was her complete trust in the man called Dad.
And yes the dude has never deliberately enforced her allegiance towards him but in this whole thing does wonder if his Dad talk her out of it. And this he sees a defection.

The child in him expects the kind of allegiance that his mother Savita bhalla had in him from his wife but the most important thing here is mother and wife cannot replace one another , they can at best only complement each other.

Awesome Nisha. You absolutely killed it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kalpana 👏
NeelAsma, where is your insight on this update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Change

It didnt end there... nope



... he had put Nivi in the sun room crib, II lost count of how many were there in all
Which ever room Nivi slept in there was a crib made and ready to receive her tiny body.


"Your personal insecurities shone through, through your rabid defense of your Athim" he said too pissed to let it go as is

"This has nothing to do with my insecurities" she shouted "YOU are the one who cant let go" (of the grief of losing your mother tragically) she cried, again stinging from his balcony insult

"Ofcourse it does... it nags you, the fact that Bala is not taking your transition to a different (he MEANT wealthy) life kindly" he hit the nail on the head

She went pale, at getting caught

"If by different you mean, he is jealous of your wealth, then thats just great, so u DO believe he is beneath you" II said her eyes glinting with sadness and tears

"We are talking about HIM" he said walking up to her

"So u can rub it in... and tell me how affluent you are" she waved a finger choked with sobs

"For ONE f**kING REASON... YOU asked me if I pissed him off" "U began this nonsense" he warned

"So? What did u tell him? The house is SO big, we dont hear Nivi cry despite having her baby monitor hooked to the central sound?" II goaded him

He pinned her on the wall... details came second to theme for her, he knew that... but such eye-popping broadsides?

"Umm... no" he said breathing on her neck.. it felt like a whiff of fire.. it was a burning hot April night, the
central airconditioning was blasting full force, she was sweating, from post partum and anger.

She had made up her mind... Bhallas were jerks. Or had Bala fed her that pile of steaming crap?


"Did he give u lessons?" he asked smiling cruelly "On how to indulge in your sick fantasy? (of hating the wealthy?) he pulverized her

"Hes the kindest MOST caring man... he goes above and beyond for everyone... its pathetic you would think he envies your wealth" she said... drained

"Your collective insecurity about an imagined circumstance causes you to make such vicious attacks" he said calmly
Her husband was a dreadful messenger, carrying a startlingly honest message, the authenticity of it so deep, it was hard for her to stomach it.

"Your INDIVIDUAL insecurity about your situation with your Dad causes you to tell your wife to mind her f**king business" she mocked...meeting him straight in the eye



She shut her eyes crying a river

He teetered between compassion and fury

There was a BABY now... f**king two and a half weeks old and here they were... in SQUARE ONE!!!
She looked like she had lost a bunch of weight too... her collar bones causing sunken pits at the base of her neck
She smelled like baby powder/lotion and umm... baby's food...that she carried on her🤢

He groaned... in self deprecating amusement... he couldnt imagine life without her, nevermind the smell of breast milk😆


YOU WANTED A GIRL!! U GOT WHAT YOU WANTED
WHY DO U NEED ME NOW DA?
I GET IT!
I GET IT!!!
OFCOURSE I SHUD MIND MY OWN BUSINESS.

IF I AM GONE IN THE MORNING
U WOULD GIVE HER A BOTTLE
YEP!
THAT would be the only change...😭
as she firmly boarded the post partum depression bus in that one stroke of realization... that she wasnt needed or wanted any more😲


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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeh kuch zyada nahi ho gaya ???????
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Posted: 9 years ago
I want sahan wale buttery updates...
Please dedo Nisha!!

Iss pagal aurat ne dimag ka dahi banake choda hai
Kuch shanti chahiye life mein ab
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dude your biggest baby is Ii. No doubt. I guess it's again dude who will have to apologise.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Phir se padha maine usske bhari dialogues samajne ke liye
Kuch faida nahi hua
Ya toh iska dialogue kam karo
Ya phir angrezi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ayyada!! Already the tethered seam is beginning to split and my my!! both are are going full flow , not holding back and hitting the ball out of the park.

Dude, bas tum enough II ! Enough II Bolthe rehena. Wahi kaafi hai ! Uske aage kuch mat bolna. Wonly that suits you. LOL. Waise Balcony se utkar kyun aaye... Oh this is fun !! It's like she has woken a sleeping giant in him.

And II's libido is starting to kick in folks 😃 .

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ayyoyo dude it's not about Athim or anything else she just needs your attention and care
As usual Awesome update Nisha thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it twice to get some aspect of it 😉

It was a blow of words with the absence of emotion other than love and compassion.

She lost weight 😭 how much did she have to lose? Maybe she lent some of the weight to his angel 😛

He couldn't imagine life without her, ofcourse he could not 😳 ❤️

They have created a flesh of their flesh already yet they are ready to as ever to draw their battle lines and sink their claws into each other's flesh in no time. And that's what is the essence of the lean guy and slender woman.

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