Ishra ss-mera yaar hai rab warga,last pt on pg 89 added on Feb 14 - Page 53

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Valentines day part 2

Raman was hugging her from back.he rubbed his lips on her back and said- happy valentines day Ginni.I love u.

Ishita smiled hearing his words.she was about to turn when he said- don't turn ,surprise is not over yet.saying a he made her wear a sleek diamond studded necklace.

She tried to touch it ,when he said- let me show u.saying so he scooped her in his arms and take her in front of the mirror.

Raman- now see,how's it.

Ishita saw and touched it.

Ishita- its so beautiful gappu.but it wasn't needed.

Raman- of course I know that u don't need these accessories for looking beautiful. But I thought to make this piece of jewellery beautiful by making u wear them.

Ishita blushed at his words.

Raman- now don't blush or I will not able to concentrate on my work.

Ishita- work?

Raman- yes,I have to do many work today.and the first one is,

Ishita- first one is?she asked excitedly.

Raman sat on the bed and make her sit on his lap and said- and the first one is to say sorry to u.

Ishita- sorry ? For what.

Raman- because I took u between those idiots.

Ishita- no need to say sorry gappu.I know it wasn't ur fault.forget about it.tell me the other works u have to do.

Raman- secondly I have to ,

Ishita- u have to?

Raman- I have to,he said teasingly.

Ishita- tell me naa,she said like a small kid.

Raman smiled and said- I have to propose u.

Ishita- u wanna propose me only.u promised me something yesterday.she said cutely.

Raman- ohho,my desperate Ginni.wait naa.

Ishita smiled like a kid excited for her candy.

Ishita- OK OK I am waiting.

Raman- first close ur eyes.

Ishita- aankhen bandh karni padegi(had to close my eyes)

Raman- propose hona hai naa(u wanna get proposed naa)

She nodded in yes.

Raman- then close ur eyes.

She nodded and closed her eyes.after sometime.

Raman- open ur eyes.

Ishita- no ,I will not.first close ur eyes, then after much time open ur eyes.r we going to play this all night.

Raman- just shut up ur mouth or I will make u shut up.

Ishita- really,u will shut up me.how.she said smiling.

Raman- muh mein tape lagaa ke(by applying tape on ur mouth)

Ishita- how unromantic u r gappu.she complained cutely.

Raman smiled and said- OK open ur eyes.

She open her eyes slowly, only to see a bunch of red flowers in his hand.she smiled seeing them.

Ishita- for me?

Raman- of course.saying so he gave those to them.

She smelled them and smiled.

Raman- waise toh gulab kai rang ke hote hai aur uske kai matlab hote hai.par aaj main tumhe sirf ek hi baat kehna chahta hoon.I love u Ginni.so these red roses for u(there r many colours of roses but I gave these red one coz I wanna say only one thing today ,I love u.)

She smiled hearing his words.

Raman gave her so many chocolates and said- these r for u .all these chocolates for u,that I wanna gift u always.but don't eat them alone ,share it with me.or u may also become gappu.

Ishita kissed his nose and said- oh my golgappu is always after chocolates. Wish I would be also one of them.then u can always think about me.

Raman smiled at her words flashing his dimples.

Ishita- don't smile or I will close this propose ceremony of urs and eat u raw my choco pie.

Raman- wait my proposal is left.

Ishita- waiting .finish this soon.

Raman- OK these r Teddy's for u.from the smallest I got to the bigger one.all for u.he said showing her a heap of Teddys.

Ishita- omg,so many teddys.I think my own house will be full of gifts soon.then I don't have any place to sit other then ur lap.saying so she sit in his lap.

Raman- gifts r still,

She didn't let him complete and said- see u have given me gifts for rose day,chocolate day and teddy day.now I will gift to for the remaining days.

Raman- OK,go on.

Ishita- first it was propose day,so I love u gappu,my personal golgappa .I love u a lot.secondly it was promise day,so I promise u that I will never ever leave u alone like before.I will never hurt u and will always love u.she said kissing his hand.

He kissed her forehead lovingly hearing her declaration.

Ishita- and for hug day,I wanna give u hug full of love,trust and loyalty. She said taking him in a bone crushing hug.he hugged her back.

Ishita- and for kiss day,I wanna kiss u senselessly till I am breathless. Saying so she take his lips in a passionate kiss.he smiled and started responding to the kiss with equal passion.soon they were kissing each other hungrily demanding entry in each others mouth.at last Raman entered her mouth marking his victory.their slow and gentle kiss turned into a raw and passionate one.they broke at last in need of air.

Ishita- and for this valentine and for every valentine which r yet to come,I want that u ,

Raman- I wanna make u mine.he said in between.

She hugged him tight and said huskily- make me urs.saying so she close her eyes clinging on him.

He smiled and scoop her in his arms taking her to bed.

Aapke pyaar mein hum sawarne lage
Dekh ke aapko hum nikharne lage
Iss qadar aapse humko mohabbat hui
Toot ke baajuyon mein bikharne lage

Aapke pyaar mein hum sawarne lage

He placed her gently on the bed and came on her.he started caressing her body softly ,she shivered under his touch.she pulled him ,he started kissing her senselessly exploring each and every curve of her.she close her eyes in sheer pleasure pulling him more into herself. Very slowly he unbuttoned her shirt and took it out.and started dropping wet kisses on her shoulder, neck going down.she poke her nails in his skin .soon their all clothes were scattered on floor while they were busy in their world of passion.

Rup ki aanch se tan pighal jayega
Aag lag jayegi mann machal jayega
Yeh lab Zara takraye Jo
Dilbar ke hoonth se
Chingariyaan udane lagi shabnam ki chot se
Jism se rooh mein hum utarne lage

Aapke pyaar mein hum sawarne lage

At last he entered in her marking her as his forever and slept on her,cuddling into her.

Next morning,he open his eyes when sunrise start peeping in the room between the curtains.he open his eyes only to see her sleeping in his embrace peacefully. He smiled and kissed her forehead.she stir in her sleep and snuggle more into him.

Raman- Ginni,

Ishita- hmm,she said with closed eyes.

Raman- I love u.

She open her eyes and said- I love u too gappu.thanks for coming into my life and loving me so much.I was so alone without u.she said kissing his cheek.

Raman came closer and said huskily in her ears- u kissed at the wrong place Ginni.he said pointing to his lips.she smiled and claimed his lips again.they were kissing each other when his phone rang .he first ignored it and continued with his business but when it started ringing again and again,he picked it in a jiffy and asked-what happened .

Simmi- bhai come home soon,there is an emergency and bring bhabhi also.

Raman got alert hearing the tension in her voice.

Raman- simmi ,is everything alright.

Simmi- I will tell u.first come home soon.and bring bhabhi also.

Raman- OK,saying so he hung the call.

Soon they were in bhalla mansion.Raman was wearing a white crisp shirt with black trouser while she was wearing a white anarkali suit which he gifted her.her hair was open,she was wearing small diamond studded earrings matching with the necklace he gifted her.they were looking perfect together.

Ishra entered the house and was shocked to see his family along with her.his maa and papa.her grandpa,grandma,amma and appa.

Ishita- amma appa u r here.

Raman- maa papa ,u guys here ,all of a sudden.

Appa- we have to come.since we came to know about ur affair with this Punjabi boy.did u forget ur tradition and culture.

Ishra look at each other.

Ishita- I love him appa.she said with tears.

Raman goes to her and side hugged her.

Mr bhalla- Raman,don't u have shame.we r here only.

Raman- we hadn't done any mistake.we love each other just way too much.

Mr bhalla- I don't care a damn about ur few days love.

Raman- this love is not of few days or few months papa.this love is as old as me.I love her from the day I understood what love means.she is my Ginni papa.my Ginni.

Mrs bhalla- and what about u.she asked looking at ishita.

Ishita- I too love him alot.can't leave without him.

Mrs bhalla- but u r the one naa who hurt my son.then how can I rely on u now.may be u r trying to trap him for his money.

Raman- maa what,

Mr bhalla interrupt and said- let ur mom talk.

Ishita- I love him,I did so for a reason.

Mrs bhalla- and can I know the reason.

Ishita- I can't tell u.I promised him.

Mrs bhalla- oh,toh someone is more important then Raman.then how can u tell that u love him alot.

Raman- maa,she can't tell coz she has taken my promise and she can't break that.

Mrs bhalla- u really think we r fools.just spill the beans or just get lost.

Amma-enough of ur insult ,just go from here.

Ishita cried- amma please don't take me away from him.gappu gappu please don't let me go.

Raman ran to her and pulled her to himself in a jerk.he hugged her tight,she hugged him back.

Raman- maa ,papa.I love her and knows if she is not telling the truth,she must have some reason.and my love is strong enough that I don't wanna know anything.she is mine.I will not let anyone touch her.he said hugging her tight.she was hiding herself in his embrace.

Then they heard someone clapping.ishra look at the direction and found his grandpa standing and clapping.

Raman's grandpa- maan gaya main tum dono ki mohabbat ko.ek yeh ladki hai jisme apni kasam nahi todi aur dusra tu jisse iss par rab se jyada bharosa hai.(I salute u guys.she didn't break her promise and u trust her like anything)

Ishita goes to him and touch his feet .he make her stand and kissed her forehead. While Raman was watching this with confused eyes.everyone was smiling at him while ishita has tears in her eyes.

Raman- I am not getting anything.

Raman's grandpa- I was the one whom she promised.I was the one who told her to be rude to u so that u can go away from her.

Raman was shocked at the revelation while ishita was crying bitterly. Toshi ji hugged her tight.

Raman- why u did so Dada ji.

Mr bhalla- because we want u to go to LA to pursue ur studies and u were not ready to go leaving her alone.

Raman's dadaji- so I requested her to help me in sending u to LA.she loves u a lot puttar. She hurt u for ur betterment and on my order.and when simmi told me that u have found ur Ginni.I came here and called her family too.

He goes to ishita and caressed her hair lovingly. She was sobbing silently.

Raman's grandpa- I know puttar I hurt u alot.u have gone through alot just because of me.I can't return u ur lost years but can return u ur gappu.this time forever.

Ishita look at him confused.

He smiled and said- u guys r getting engaged in the evening.

Ishita smiled between her tears.

Raman's grandpa- can u forgive me puttar.

Ishita nodded in yes.he hugged her warmly.he broke the hug and said- toshi ,take her inside and start the preparations for the evening.

Everyone was very happy but the happiest among them all were ishra.they were looking for an opportunity to meet each other in private.but couldn't.

Soon it was evening,ishita got ready in a beautiful pink lahenga while Raman was looking dashing as ever in his blue sherwani. Everyone was very happy to see them together.

Their mothers make them exchange the rings while their fathers were too happy for their children.

Ishita make him wear the ring and vice versa.they look at each other and share an intense eye lock.

Soon everyone was busy ,so Raman pulled her to a lone corner and before she can asked anything,he took her in a bone crushing hug.she too hug him back.

After sometimes, he broke the hug and said- u did everything for me and I misunderstood u.I am sorry.

Ishita- its OK gappu.we r now one.so no sorry no thanks.only u love me and I love u.saying so she took his lips.they were about to deepen the kiss when simmi announced that ishra is going to perform a dance for them.

Raman was annoyed by this but soon they were on the stage performing the dance performance.

Dhoop se nikal ke
Chaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya

Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh dua
Rang de mohe gerua
Raanjhe ke dil hai dua
Rang de tu mohe gerua

At last they hug each other tightly never to let go.all clapped for this heavenly couple.

That's all.here I finished this mohabbat ka safar.u all know naa what u have to do.give me long comments and hit like button to make it 100 all over again.


Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So nice update update update di
I love ishra bonding
They can sense each other problem
I love the way they protect each other
WO pagal ho gayi thi use swimming pool mein dekhkar
And same thing happened with raman when he saw her in problem
Wo to maar hi deta Ricky ko
This ricky and shagun disgusting
Raman was feeling guilty for all this
Then his surprise
I love it totally
So beautifully written update
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
extremely beautiful

raman and ishita celebrated
all the valentine's week
again on valentine's day

they are so cute

i am extremely terrified
reading iyers and bhallas talk

finally
everything came out

excellent ending

thanks for pm
Edited by detha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
both d updatea were fantastic
just loved them
gappu n ginni r made for each other
they both know each other too well
n both r too protective towards each other
they r madly in love
n that pathetic people
shogun n ricky
both got what they deserved
loved how raman proposes her
it was too gud gesture
soo ginni did this fr him only
thtz true love
n raman trusts her unditionally dii itz a beautifully written story
loved it sooo much
Edited by anisha960 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mai kitni late ho gai...

So sorry... 😭

It was Just Beautiful & Perfect End... 😊

Raman gave so many surprises...first Proposal then diamond necklace...& then his unconditional love...

You again fulfilled my wish...They celebrated all days together again...

& Theie romance...just awesome...

Raman- of course I know that u don't need these accessories for looking beautiful. But I thought to make this piece of jewellery beautiful by making u wear them.

Aakhir Owner Raman RJ Ishq ke sath reh kar uss ke jaisi cheesy lines sikh hi gaya...

IshRa's parents were there...

Mr & Mrs Bhalla was talking so rudely with Ishita...but Raman was there for her...

Yeah...I was right...I was right...I was right...

He was Raman's Grandpa...I was right...

He did that due to Raman's studies & Ishita was also with him...

IshRa were passed in their unique love test...Ishita by not telling him truth...& Raman by accepting Ishita without knowing truth...


I loved the whole update...

So family planned surprise Engagement...so sweet...

& Story ended with IshRa's dance...realy lovely ending...


Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated next part ,have a look.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both Updates R Fantastic Dear
Thnks For this Wonderful Romantic Story on Valentine
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it love whole ss on valentines week thank u so much flr this beautiful ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow dii
Best valentines week fiction read
U made our week
Loved to see ishra love
Plz plz plz update ur oder ss also soon dii
Waiting for many of dem
Edited by agm1998 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update both of them shared d days and gifted each other themselves loved it and den so d reason is out now ishita did dos for Raman as his grandpa asked her to do dat and atlast they are happy and engaged now lovely story with a lovely end thnks for writing dis raksha

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