IshRa TS - As Long As I Have You - COMPLETED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey everyone! Am back once again with a TS! This one is one the current jail track! It will be centered around IshRa while there are also bits of the court case in it as well The plot behind this is a huge credit to Janani (Janani_Divan). She wanted me to write something on the current track, hence this TS. I am posting a very small prologue below and hope you all will like it!

Prologue - Below
Shot 1 - Page 7
Shot 2 - Page 12
Shot 3A - Page 16
Shot 3B - Page 21


||~❤️As Long As I Have You❤️~||


Prologue

The cold stone floor and wall pierced her back as she got up from her restless sleep. She hadn't expected prison to be a paradise, in fact she had started to get used to the numbing pains in her body from cramming into the cell with many others and she would quietly eat the unhygienic food provided since she had no choice. Ishita Raman Bhalla sighed before got up in the pitch dark and walked over to the small earthen pot to get a drink of water as she knew where it was placed even though the cell was like a deep black cave. Slowly making her way back to her sleeping spot, she was careful not to step on her cellmates since she knew where they slept in the month she had been in the prison...

A whole month without her family. Without her Ruhi and her Adi...and the most painful separation in the entire month was having to live with her Raman.

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He got off the cold hardwood floor of their bedroom as pain ran up his back. Getting up to get some water, he went to the night table and looked over at the plate of food Neelu had left in his room. The simple dal and rice had been emptied by him while every other delicacy had been left untouched since it seemed to have no taste unless he knew his Ishita would also be able to enjoy the same food at home. He noticed the painkiller placed on plate as well, but shook his head upon seeing it. No one could understand that the physical pain and exhaustion he felt was nothing compared to the pain he felt being away from her.

It had been a whole month he had spent without his madrasan, his lifeline, his love...his Ishita.

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Hope you all will like it and leave your feedback! Will be looking forward to it! PMs are a bit late for this TS and will be sent out later!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh this sounds so good! I can't wait for you to continue!
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I love it yaar
Please continue soon
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Nice prologue Yaar
Lvd it
Sach mein I cried😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for presenting this ts prabh baby.
thanks for accepting my request baby.

coming to prologue.
it is interesting and im excited to read part 1 , i want to read more,how you pen down this.

the way you portray ishra pain is beautiful.
its paining too.

And dnt give credit to me baby.it is your goodness to accept my request.and i know how much i irritate you...he he he
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Congrats Prabh for new Story . It going to be very emotional one I will prepare for handkerchief .hooe you not make ipus cry for Bucket other will have flood in Jaanu place. Thanks Jaanu to convince Prabh for new story.🤗🤗
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Really nice...can't wait to read more...update soon!
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Waiting desperately... Please do start this really soon
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Hi Prabh,
Looks interesting and emotional

Thanks for the pm
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congratulations for d new one
d prologue is just amazing
continue soon

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