Him & Her, A Maaneet Story:9,11,18,20,22,26,28,30,32,34,37****

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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Part 1.</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">It was dark. I didn't know where they were taking me. Just
be quiet' keep moving' that's all they said. Pushing me forward, guiding my
steps, I clearly had no chance but to do as they said. The blindfold was making
my nose itch. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Urgh! Captive in my own home. Feels like an adventure. Aur
so 12 vaje takk. Maas sahi kehti hai.. neend ki duniya mein khoyi rehti hu. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Arrey! Aap ho koan'! haath chod mera! Bataati hu Geet Handa
se panga lete ho! Idar aau!' I tried kicking the muscular body away, but ended
up tripping over my own salwar. Geet! Chup chaap aaja mere saath. Jaada shorr
matt machaa! It was a deep angry voice. Familiar. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ohh hahahaha Brij veerji aaap! Mai pata ni kya kya sochti
thi ke pata ni kon hai, ye aap kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe kaha leke jaa rahe ho'
All I got was silence in return. My mind was so confused. What was happening? </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Finally, he stopped walking and let go of my arms. chall
kya raha hai!!' I shouted but got no response. Veerji?' Ufff! Enough. I
brought my hands to the blindfold and yanked it down. Hain? Why is it still
dark?' I opened my eyes as wide as I could but I could see nothing. I felt like
there was nobody with me. Ok I admit... It was starting to get a little creepy
now. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I don't know where I was stood but decided to walk. Within
the first 3 steps I took, I walked into something. ouchhh' it was Maa! maaa
tum yahaa! Aap kya kar rhe ho? Bolo maa!' I was pulling at her duppata eager
for answers but all she gave me was oho Geet! Don't mess up my suit!' She
pulled away from me. I was left waving my hands franticly around the
pitch-black air. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I gave up. bass bohot ho chukka! Mai nahi kite jaa rahi,' I
huffed and sat on the cold marble floor.</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">A few seconds later I could hear whispers, nothing I could
make out, but it was intriguing me so much. I was about to break my silence
when... </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">SURPRISE!!!' The lights came on and there I saw a crowd of
people stood in front of me holding gifts, balloons, cards... and of course... the
most gorgeous looking cake I'd ever seen! </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy
Birthday dear Geet!' everyone singing in as sync as they could, with smiles so
wide across their faces. I couldn't stop grinning haha! I couldn't believe I
forgot! Daarji, the man who barely shows his teeth has so stern, today, he was
laughing, so joyous and happy! </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">One by one everyone wished me and I sat and opened my gifts.
Maa, Papa, Daarji, Chotu, Brij Veerji, Bhabi and Lucky Veerji. We can't
believe you had no idea!' Bhabi exclaimed whilst feeding me the ever so tasty
chocolate cake. Bhabi! You never hide anything from me! Itna bada raaz bhabi!!
How could you!' I joked, everyone laughed in unison. aur yeh dekho! Sab kaise
tyaar hoye ne! Maa bhabi! New suits! Veerjis you both wearing shervanis! Why
are you all so dressed up' They all exchanged glances and looked at me with
grins. Maa came over and sat beside me. because my guddiya, you've turned 21
today! It's a big number!' I pulled a face, Maa I'm a baby, your baby! I'm
never going to be old!' Again the family responded with laughter. We know your
our baby, you always will be.' With that Maa hugged me and wished me again.
Lucky Veerji holding his plate of cake ate and talked Geet we are having a
party today, to celebrate your 21</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">st</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">! that's why we are all</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"> </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">ready! Bhabi give her the new suit you brought
her... Geet tu te parriyo se bi sundhar lagegi aaj meri pyaari behn!' I was
intrigued. Aisi kya khaas baat hai veerji uss dress mein?' Bhabi stepped in
shaking her head, Arey Geet! Teri toh bolti band ho jayegi dekh k tumhaari
bhabi ki choice ki dress! Aaj toh mai apne haatho se tumko tyaar krungi sheti
sheti cake khau aur aau mere saath' </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Bhabi took me to my bedroom and sat me down infront of my
dressing table. Ik minute ruko' saying that she ran out of the room. I smiled
at myself... Bhabi to mere se jyaade exited hai hehe. She didn't even take two
minutes and she was back holding a dress box and jewelly set boxes. After
placing them elegantly onto my bed she brought me the dress box. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Passing me it I opened it. Taking off the lid my jaws
dropped. I gasped. My eyes fell upon the most beautiful suit I'd ever seen. So
white, elegant and simple... bhaabiii !! I love you bhabi!' she laughed and
jumped in excitement I knew you would love it Geet! I had it made specifically
for you, the colour, fabric, embroidery... Everything! I couldn't wait for you
to finally see it!' I looked at bhabi in awe. Her eyes were glistening like a
baby staring at candy. you're the cutest best best best bhabi ever bhabi!!' I
pounced onto her giving her the tightest hug I ever gave anyone and she did the
same.</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Go go go try it on Geet!' we both giggled and shrieked in excitement
whilst I tried it on. </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"></font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Jaldi bahar aaa Geet I can't wait any longer!' </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I took my steps towards her. It was a dramatic scene for
both of us. bhabi' I whispered... I NEVER WANT TO TAKE IT OFF!' she screamed at
me when she looked Oh My God Geeet!!! You look ... I have no words!'</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"> </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I was about to step in front of the mirror
when she yanked my arm. Don't look yet, I want to get you fully ready, phir
dekhi jaayi' I obeyed jo aapka hukam sarkaar' we both laughed and chatted away
as she did my makeup, placed my tikka, earrings and pinned my dupatta in place.
Then she allowed me to look. </font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Bhabi, I am in love right now. Thank you thank you thank
you bhabi!' she smiled at me in return admiring the piece of perfection she had
helped in creating. </font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Geet, aj ka din hai hi khaas, you had to look the part too'
I took her words lightly and scoffed, its only my birthday bhabi, USA ka
president nahi aa raha' She in return gave me a soft slap on the cheek jokingly
and uttered something under her breath. kya bhabi? You said something?' she
refused and shook her head. Geet aj sabse acche se bolna aur koi bachpana nahi
hona chahiye' I laughed and said it's my birthday bhabi main ahi shararat
karungi toh aur kon karegaa!' she gave me a stern look, I agreed there would be
no messing on, there will be people you don't know coming today, so be good' I
was confused. kon aa raha hai aaj?' but she wouldn't spill, she just left me
with the words you never know Geet, might even be the president of the USA'. I
shouted back bhabi always leaving me guessing huh!'.</font>





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<font face="Calibri" size="3">Chupchupsi!</font>




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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi lovely title! Is this chapter 1??? please post cs! congrats on the new story! Fab start! wonderfully written! Geet's family arranged a surprise bday party 4 her! she turned 21! Geet overwhelmed! Geet n her bhabhi share a wonderful bond! her bhabhi gt an outfit 4 her! Geet looking gorgeous! her bhabhi wrans her 2 behave n Geet questions her! her bhabhi teases her! update soon. pls do pm me! thanks 👏😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Vibrant and Fantastic Start

Its Geet's 21st her family surprises her yet there seems to be some hidden misery her Bhabhi gets her dressed up all looking beautiful and also tells her that people are coming
waiting now to see what is happening

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg.. Beautiful start yaar.. Geets bday, lovely family but lovely family is hiding a lovely secret.. Hmmm cont soon hun..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part...
geet's family celebrating her bday ...everyone is excited .geet's bhabi helped geet to look like a pari 😳 I think something going to happn in this party ...or someone going to come ? 😉
waiting for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start geets birthday all surprised her hope its maan who is coming plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story!!!
Superb start..loved the way Handa Family surprised Geet
Love Geet and her bhabhi's bond
Is Maan coming to see Get???
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Lovely start with geet fly giving a big surprise for her birthday... Can't wait for next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dramtic start
Lovely

Wants to read more

Do pm me dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Feel free to give me suggestions on upcoming drama I would appreciate it!
Glad you all are enjoying it so far!
Kisses xx

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