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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">***Index***</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">THREAD ONE</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Teaser</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 5</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 5.1</font>






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Chapter 5.2
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JODHA came back to sense when she felt her lips getting wet with someone others saliva . She realised that its JALAL only who was kissing her like there was no tomorrow, after a while JODHA also participated she snakes her hands around her neck whereas JALAL rounded around her waist and bring her close to him letting the remaining space to remove . After few seconds they broke the kiss when they lost for air and join their forheads . JODHA was dying in shyness her cheeks turned into red crimson color JALAL cupped her cheeks and give her a oeck on forehead and asked her to get herself ready . JODHA went to get ready, she accessorised herself with jwelleries and put dupatta on her head as newly wedded girl do . With JALAL she came to downstairs . All were already on dine waiting for newly wedded couple, when they saw JODHA and JALAL together no one was there who didn't gasped at this beautiful couple while HAMIDA smiled at her DIL .


Jalal's grandmother who was elder among all family member and punctual with her routine became hell irritate with this unpunctuality of JODHA, JODHA wishes every one then she was about to take her seat beside JALAL who already settled himself on head of the family chair get halt by listening dadi's angry voice .
Grandma: Wait you girl, who had asked you to sit . JODHA with shock on her face look at dadi she was facing this thing for the first time in her life as no one has ever speak to her like this . Grand ma continues, u don't have any manners or you forget it at your home han? Dadi scolded JODHA didn't know what to do whereas JALAL was controlling himself because he didn't want to get angry on the very first day after their wedding on his grandma .
Dadi: Did you know what is the time in your watch . At this time you always used to woke up han? JODHA was mummed she was getting angry but don't want to let her anger out on jalal's grandma . Dadi still not done with her lecture U have to follow the rules of mughal did you get it . We didn't brought you here for resting u here with some responsibilities towards this family and ... before dadi said further HAMIDA interrupt in between


HAMIDA: ammi let it be, she is new here so she needs some time to learn and don't worry I will teach her . Please forgive her today for my sake please ammi she pleaded, dadi can't resist her DIL plea so she excused JODHA . And JODHA thanked her through eyes but JALAL can feel anger in JODHA so he thought to compensate his dadi's deeds after breakfast .

After breakfast JODHA and JALAL went to their room . JODHA can't forget what happened on dine no one ever speak to her like this no one ever dare to scold her, no one ever dare to call her not by her name but by saying you girl . She can't forget dadi's scolding and getting hyper her breath started getting heavier, she was continuously fidgeting with her fingers . She thought , how dare she and by the way what was my fault she scold me unnecessarily, no no JODHA stop she is your husband's grandma she is old na so must be she get irritated and you have to respect her don't get angry on her, then she thought Ary so what she is elder she don't have right to scold in front of all family members font she understand that it was your first day after marriage may busy with your husband and you must have slept late last night and was tired then she blushes remembering their love making and morning romance then morning kiss and she gets angry . JALAL was observing her expression that were changing time to time from anger to confusion, confusion to anger than in smirk and then shyness, shyness to anger, he came to her kneel beside bird put his hands on her knees and asked her to look in his eyes . The moment JODHA look in his eyes gets lost in those captivating eyes and forget all her anger and insult .

JALAL: I know that you r angry on dadi, actually not only you but me too
JODHA looked at him and JALAL kissed her again
Precap: bodyguard returning and he was shocked when he saw JODHA but want his revenge

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Chapter 5.3

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JALAL broke the kiss and gazed at JODHA, but JODHA gets shy under his gaze she was unable to lift up her eye lashes due to shyness . JALAL lift her faces by putting his index finger under her chin so that he can see her clearly . JALAL make her face up but her lashes was still down casted, crimson red color was there on her cheeks JALAL pleaded her to look into his eyes .
JALAL: please look at me JODHA for once . Please

By listening his plea she can't resist her to look in those captivating eyes, JALAL was astound when their eyes met . He saw pure love in her eyes for him while caressing her hairs JALAL missed her crimson cheeks making her skin more flushed he then get up from floor and make her also stand to hug her . They hugged eachother passionately and till 5 minutes but were in each other embrace forgetting about the world only listening their heartbeats. JALAL broke the hug and looked at JODHA with confusion and asked her

JALAL: JODHA I gifted you something on our pre-wedding rituals didn't you get it or you forgot about it because I haven't saw you wearing that yesterday night? Jodhs blushes when JALAL mentioned about yesterday night by remembering the night events and love making, JALAL smiled at her but again asked the same question: tell me na JODHA! Doesn't you like my gift I mean you ... he was unable to find the words because he feels that may be JODHA didn't like his gift again he asked like a desperate child: I asked BAKSHI to give that you, and when I asked her after returning from your house she said that you got it that gift but you will unwrap it at night, didn't you unwrapped that gift . Is that gift is still at your home wrapped as it as . Tell me na JODHA tell me...


JODHA felt guilty for not wearing his gift but how can she wear so many jewelleries at one time , her MIL asked her to wear heavy jewelleries and she don't want to dissapoint her by not wearing so she wore those jewellery on which her MIL asked for but her JALAL got upset when he saw her without those jewellery that he gifted her . JODHA felt really bad when JALAL said may be you didn't like that gift and he blamed himself for not knowing her taste and likings . JODHA cursed her for not wearing the gift that was gifted by him, she cursed her when JALAL called himself good for nothing She took a moment to think but she got a great idea so without answering him she went to cupboard and opened it took one small box from it then came back to JALAL, she extend her hand towards JALAL and JALAL looked at her confusingly .

JODHA: aise kya dekh rhe hain aap? Open it na ...
JALAL picked the box from jodha's hand and opened it up he saw beautiful tie pin in it . JODHA asked him to wear it, JALAL looked at her ad if she has gone mad he asked her
JALAL: how can I wear it at home its a tie pin I will wear it in any party, then something click in his mind he said that he will wear it at reception party in evening this brings smile on jodha's face she cupped jalal's face in her tiny hands and said

JODHA: you know you r sweetest husband in the world I LOVE YOU and gets shy but continue her words and its true i didnt like your gift this time went numbed seeing his expression jodha said instead of that I love your gift in fact u know my likes without asking me you know me inside out you r the best husband JALAL . Don't call yourself good for nothing . You r the best, you ... r ... the best husband in the world . But the reason I didn't wear your gift was that ammi asked me to wear heavy jewellery as new bride does so if I wore that also it must be hidden in these jewlleeies na that's y I didn't wear but . But I swear, I love your gift so stop blaming yourself it kills me .

JALAL as being a silent spectator he felt elated when JODHA calls him best husband of the world and when he blames him how much it affects it, she loved his gift . He like the way JODHA explain her situation to him she font want his mother to get upset so she did what her mil told her . He thought that JODHA is really innocent and kind hearted . After all this the love and respect for JODHA in jalal's heart increased more .
JALAL: he smiled at her, no problem JODHA ... I m thankful to you that you think like this you respect my mother's feeling as your mother's feeling . Thank you for explaining me JODHA and you r best and beautiful wife in the world I love you too again he hugged her but he broke the hug and said by the way where is that gift hope you didn't forget at khan villa
JODHA giggled and again went to cupboard bring the box that was gifted by JALAL she sat in front of mirror and started removing her heavy jewellery when she was done with that she wore those jewellery gifted by JALAL and then she came to JALAL asked him
JALAL: how its it looking now? Hmm...
JALAL: while looking at JODHA, mashallah ... u r looking stunning breath taking as if goddess of beauty itself came on earth . JODHA blushes at this statement and hugged JALAL . Both of them smiling in each other embrace.
Precap: reception party and bodyguard.
Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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why do you res and res...and res,,..and res again...
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why do you res and res...and res,,..and res again...

he he actually I reserved it for chapters which I will posted soon

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